写作提升练(三) 读后续写1阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。(2022·浙江衢州二中5月模拟)Itwasthelate1930s,andthingsweretough.MumhadahardtimeraisingusonherowninoursmallcommunityofNewWestminster,BC.MydadhaddrownedinPittLake,fiveyearsago.Lookingback,IrealizewhatMumwentthroughsendinguskidstoschool.Everymorningshewouldtuckanewpieceofcardboardinourshoes,becauseoursoles(鞋底)werewornout.Whenwegothome,Mumwouldhave“Frenchtoast”readyforus.Constantmovingwastypicalformyfamilyinthosetimes.Rentwas25dollarsamonth,butMumcouldn’tpayit,andweknewwewouldbeevictedrightafterChristmasonthefirstofJanuary. Christmaswasapproaching,andwewereentitledtoatwenty-five-dollarChristmasfundfromsocialservices.Theinspectorcametoourhouse,andsearcheditfromtoptobottomtobesurewedidn’thaveanyfoodhiddenaway.Whenhedidn’tfindany,heissuedthechequetoMum.Mumsaidthatinsteadofbuyingfood,shewouldusethe25dollarstopaybackrent,assuringusallofaroofoverourheadsforalittlewhilelonger.ShetoldusthentherewouldbenothingforChristmas. UnknowntoMum,IhadbeensellingChristmastree,shovelingsnow,anddoingoddjobstoearnenoughmoneytobuyanewpairofboots.Bootsthatweren’tpatched,bootswithnocardboardinthesoles.IknewexactlywhichbootsIwanted.Theywereten-inchTopGenuinePierreParisandtheyhadapriceof23dollars.Well,thebigdaycameontheafternoonofChristmasEve.Iwasexcited,asIhurrieduptheroadtotheshoestore,butonthewayInoticedahousewithChristmaslightsanddecorations.ItwasthenIrealizedatourhouse,wehadnolights,nodecorations,noranymoneyforChristmasgoodies.IknewthatwewouldhavenoturkeyorhamforChristmas,andIfeltsad.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:AsIcontinuedwalkingIbegantoreconsidermyplan. 4\n Paragraph2:Withgreatexcitementandtearsinmyeyes,Iknockedonthedoor. 2(2022·浙江金华江南中学第二学期期中考试)Afarmergrewsomevegetablesinhisgarden.Onedayhiswifewasillandhehadnomoney.Hehadtosellsomecabbagesandcarrotsinthemarket.Thenextmorninghetooktwobasketsofvegetablestothetown.Butitwasraininghardthatafternoonandtherewerefewpeopleinthestreet.Whenhisvegetablesweresoldout,itwasdark.Heboughtsomemedicineandhurriedtohisvillage.Onhiswayhomehesawapersonlyingonthesnow.Heplacedhisbasketsonthegroundandwasgoingtohelpthepersontogetup.Atthattimehefounditwasadeadmanandtherewasmuchbloodonhisbody.Hewassoafraidthatheranawayquickly,withouttakingthebasketswithhim. Thenextafternoonthefarmerwassenttothepolicestation.Havingshownthebaskets,anofficerasked:“Aretheseyours?”“Yes,sir.”thefarmeransweredtimidly(胆怯地).“Haveyoukilledtheman?”“No,no,sir.”thefarmersaidinahurry.“Whendidyouseethedeadman?”“Aboutsevenlastevening.”“Didyouseewhokilledtheman?”“No,Sir.”Theofficerbroughtoutaknifeandasked,“Haveyouseenityet?”“No,Sir.”Theofficerbecameangryandtoldthepolicementobeathimupandsendhimintoprison.Theofficerwantedtotrapthefarmerintotheconfession(供认),butthefarmerdidn’tadmithewasthemurderer. 注意:1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右;4\n2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为二段,每段的开头语已经为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Theofficerwassoangrythatheaskedthepolicemantobeathimupagain. Paragraph2:Thefarmerwaslucky.Afewdayslater, 参考答案写作提升练(三) 读后续写1Paragraph1:AsIcontinuedwalkingIbegantoreconsidermyplan.Iwasfeelingastrangesenseofguilt.HereIwasgoingtobuyanewpairofbootswhilemymotherwashomeintears.Shewouldbetryingtoexplaintouswhytherewerenopresents.Acrossthestreetfromthebusstopwasabiggrocerystore.Irealizedthat25dollarsIhadworkedsohardforwentalongwaytowardslights,decorationsandaturkey.Afterfinishingshopping,Iwenthome. 4\nParagraph2:Withgreatexcitementandtearsinmyeyes,Iknockedonthedoor.Icouldhardlywaittoseemymother’sface!WhenMumopenedthedoor,someofthegroceriesfellinsideontothefloor,andshejuststoodthere,dumbfounded.Holdingbackthetears,Isaid,“MerryChristmas!”ThatdayIgotenoughhugsandkissesfromMum.2Paragraph1:Theofficerwassoangrythatheaskedthepolicemantobeathimupagain.Thefarmerwasveryafraid.Hethoughthewouldbesentencedtodeathbykillingpeople,buthedidn’t.Hewasinnocent.Hemusttellpeoplethetruth,butnoonecouldhearhisvoice.Hehopedthatsomeonecouldcomeandsavehim.Paragraph2:Thefarmerwaslucky.Afewdayslater,ayoungmancametothepolicestationwithalotofjournalists,sayingthathesawthemurderer.Itwasthepoliceofficerwhokilledthemanonthesnow!Hesawthepoliceofficeusedaknifekillingthemanlateintheevening.Hewassofrightenedandranaway.Buttheyoungmanthoughtthefarmerwasinnocent.Sohetookthegreatcouragetoexposetherealcriminal.Aftertheinvestigation,theyoungmanwasright.Thepoliceofficerwassentintoprisonandthepolicemanwhobeatupthefarmerwasfired,andthebraveyoungmanwasregardedastheherobythevillagers. 4
