读后续写11.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ItwasarainyNovembermorning.OvercomewithangerIknewifIdidn’tleavethehousesoonIwouldlosemytemperwithmyhusband,Joe.Asraincamedowninsheets,Joeofferedtotakemetowork.Istruggledintomyjacket,seizedmybagandteachingplansandignoredhim.Heinsistedandreachedforhisboots.Ilookedatthepilesofnewspapersandthedirtydishessillonthetable.“Don’tyouhaveenoughtodo?Icantakecareofmyself.”Istormedout,notevenkissinghimgood-bye.Joeshoutedaftermenottotaketheshortcut.JoeandIhadbeeneagerlylookingforwardtoourretirementwhenaheartattackthatpastspringforcedhimtoleavehisjobearlierthanwehadplanned.AsthemedicalbillsmountedwerealizedIwouldhavetocontinueworkingfull-timewhileJoestayedhomeandtookoverthehousework.Thenewarrangementwasadisaster.Exhaustedafteradayoffullwork,allIwantedwasahothome-cookedmealandagoodnight’ssleep.However,whatgreetedmeatthetablewasamicrowavepackage.Sometimeshewouldserveoatmeal（燕麦）forseveralnightsinarow.OnenightwhenIdraggedmyselftobed,IwasterrifiedtodiscoverJoehadturnedourwhitesheetsblue.Hetoldmehehadfoundouthowtosaveonwater,soapandelectricity.Hepattedhisbluetrousersandannouncedproudlywashingeverythingtogetherwasjustthesecret.Tenminuteslater,ignoringJoeswarning,Iturnedoffthemainroute.Ithoughtithadn’trainedenoughtofloodtheroad,butasIroundedthecornerwaterrushedacrossmypath.Afterafewfeet,thecargotstuck.Iopenedthedoorandwaterpouredin.Ihurriedlyclosedthedoor.Icouldn’triskwalkinginthis.Almost20minutespassed.Thecarbegantoshake.IgotfrightenedtodeathwhenIheardthreelonghonks（喇叭声）.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；14
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Lookingovermyshoulder,Istaredintotheflashinglightsofatruck.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IscreamedatJoethatIcouldn’tmakeit.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Lookingovermyshoulder,Istaredintotheflashinglightsofatruck.ItwasJoe!Icouldn’thelpburstingintotears.Joeshoutedtomenottobefrightened.ThenhethrewathickropesothatIcouldhangontoitandwalkstraighttowardhim.Iopenedthedoor,grabbeditandinchedout.However,asuddenfallleftmeintherushingwater.Istruggledtomyfeet,onlytofindabranchblockingthewayrightinfrontofme.IscreamedthatIcouldn’tmakeit.Joe,however,remainedcalm!HeurgedmetotakeonestepatatimeandassuredmeIcouldmakeit.ImovedforwardslowlyandcautiouslybeforeIfellintohisarms.Sobbingagainsthischest,IapologizedthatIshouldn’thavetakentheshortcut.Joepattedmesayinghisprimaryconcernwasmysafety.OnlythendidIrealizeJoeactuallyunderstoodhowtotakecareofmedespitehistroublewiththehousework.【写作分析】这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲叙了十一月的一个早晨，下着大雨，作者的丈夫Joe叮嘱作者不要抄近路去上班，而作者没有听丈夫的话，还是走了近路，结果车被困在了积满雨水的道路上。14
1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“我回过头，盯着一辆卡车闪烁的灯光。”可知，第一段可描写作者发现是丈夫来解救自己，以及丈夫解救作者的经过，最后作者被一根树枝拦住了。②由第二段首句内容“我尖叫着说我过去不了。”可知，第二段可描写作者的丈夫是如何鼓励作者克服了困难的，最后作者意识到丈夫其实懂得如何照顾自己，尽管他做家务很麻烦。2.续写线索：回头看到灯光——丈夫开车救援——鼓励——成功解救——感悟3.词汇激活行为类①大喊：shoutatsb./cryout/callout②抓住：getholdof/catchholdof/seize/clench/grab③鼓励：encourage/urge/inspire④哭泣：weep/sob/cry⑤道歉：apologize/makeanapology/saysorryfor情绪类①感谢：showappreciation/showgratitude/begrateful②积极：positiveattitude/actpositively【范文点评】[高分句型1]ThenhethrewathickropesothatIcouldhangontoitandwalkstraighttowardhim.(运用了sothat引导的目的状语从句)[高分句型2]OnlythendidIrealizeJoeactuallyunderstoodhowtotakecareofmedespitehistroublewiththehousework.（运用了“only+副词”置于句首的倒装句。）22.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Jennystaredatthestorewindowlongingly.TherewasnothinginthisworldthatshewantedmorethanaHappyHannahdollandallthatcurrentlyseparatedherfromthehottestdolloftheholidayseasonwasathinpieceofglassandS29.95plustax.Unfortunately,Jennydidn’tevenhavethe95cents,sosheletoutadeepsighandcontinuedwalkinghome.Suddenly,apinkrectangle(矩形)inthesnowcaughthereye.Jennywalkedoverandrealizeditwasaleatherwallet.Sheremoveditfromthesnow,andopenedthe14
wallettofindathickpileoffoldedgreenbillsandtwoplasticcards.OnewasacreditcardandtheotheranID.JennystaredattheoldwomaninherIDphoto.ThewomanhadabeautifulsmilethatremindedJennyofhergrandma.Jennysighedandthensheputthewalletintoherpurse.Sheturnedaroundandwalkedinthedirectionfromwhichshecame.Jenny’sheartbeatquicklyassheenteredthestore.Shehadlongdreamedaboutthismoment,butsomethingdidn’tfeelrightaboutitAssheapproachedaneatpileofHappyHannahdolls,shepushedawayherfeelings.ShegraspedoneHappyHannahdolly.AsJennyapproachedtheregister,theHappyHannahShowthemesongbeganplaying.Itwashermobilepone.ItwashergrandmaInonehandsheheldtheHappyHannahdollandintheothersheheldthephoneonwhichhergrandmawascalling.Jenny’sheartwasfiledwithloveandappreciationasshethoughtofhersweetoldgrandmaSheputthedolldownandpickedupthephonecall.“HiGrandma?I’mgoingtobealittlebitlatetonight.I’vegottodropsomethingoff...Yeah,itwasgood...OK...Alright...Iloveyoutoo.”Jennyleftthestoreandwalkedthroughthemeltingsnowallthewaytotheothersideofthetown.Shethoughofhergrandmaassherangthebellat301WestStreet.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1:Thewomanwhoansweredthedoorhadbeencryingrecentlyandlookedupsetandanxious.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Thewomantookthewalletsmilingly.14
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Thewomanwhoansweredthedoorhadbeencryingrecentlyandlookedupsetandanxious.“AreyouMrs.Green?”Jennyaskedpolitely,recognizingherfromtheIDcardinstantly.Mrs.Greennoddedinconfusionandlethercomein.“Madam,didyoulosesomething?”Jennycontinuedandaskedsomenecessaryquestions.“Ilostmywalletwiththemoneytobuygiftsforsomepoorchildren.”Theoldladyblurtedoutatlast,hereyesroundinginsurpriseandsparklingwithhope.Overcomewithguilt,Jennyfeltherfaceburningandhandedthewallettoher.ThankGod,shewouldhavedisappointedthosekids.Thewomantookthewalletsmilingly.SheheldittoherchesttightlyandthenhuggedJenny,tearsstreamingdownherface.“Youaretherealangel.Nooneknowswhatthewalletmeanstothechildren.”Shesobbedingratitude.Jenny’ssoftheartwastouchedbecausehergrandmaoftencalledherangel.Thatnight,shedartedacrossthestreet,thecreakingofsnowechoingintheair.HoweagershewastotellhergrandmathattodayshegotapresentmoremeaningfulthanHannahdoll-Shewasarealangel!【写作分析】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了Jenny一直想买洋娃娃，但是她的钱不够，一天在路上捡到了一个钱包，本来想要拿着里面的钱买洋娃娃的，但是正准备去付钱时，祖母的电话打来了，她选择了不买，把钱归还了失主。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“开门的那个女人最近一直在哭，看起来既沮丧又焦虑。”可知，第一段可描写Jenny找到失主后，询问了相关信息确认钱包的主人，开门的女人描述了钱包里钱的用处。Jenny把钱包还给女人的同时感觉愧疚。②由第二段首句内容“女人微笑着接过钱包。”可知，第二段可描写Jenny归还钱包后，女14
人赞扬了Jenny的行为。听了女人对她的赞扬后，Jenny被感动了。此时Jenny想到奶奶说的话，她多么想把这个消息告诉奶奶。2.续写线索：失主开门—询问——还钱包——女士惊讶——女士感谢——赞扬——感动——告诉奶奶这个故事3.词汇激活：行为类认出：recognize/identify递给：hand/pass拿出：takeout/bringout接受：accept/receive情绪类惊讶的：surprised/amazed/astonished感激的：grateful/thankful【范文点评】[高分句型1]Theoldladyblurtedoutatlast,hereyesroundinginsurpriseandsparklingwithhope.（独立主格结构）[高分句型2]Nooneknowswhatthewalletmeanstothechildren.（what引导的从句为宾语从句）33.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Longlongagoinatown,anewly-electedmayorwasdeterminedtodosomethingeffectivetomakethetownbetterthanbefore.Themayorwasacutelyawarethathisgoalshouldbeachievednotonlybylawsbutalsomoralsaswell.Hewasafirmbelieverofthethoughtthatnothinggoodcouldcometoatownwhosepeopleonlycomplainedandexpectedotherstosolvetheirownproblems!Oneday,anewideasuddenlystruckhim.Earlyonemorning,themayordressedhimselfupandwenttoavillagenearby.Hesecretlyplacedalargestoneinthemiddleofthemainstreetandhidagoldcoinunderthestone.Theinstanteverypreparationwasdone,hehidhimselfbehind14
ahugemapletreeandwatchedclosely,wonderingwhatwouldhappenbeforelong.Thefirstpersondownthestreetwasamilkmanwithhiscart.Hetooknonoticeofitandthecartviolentlycrashedintothestone,spillingthemilkeverywhere.“Whatfoolputthisstonehere?”heshoutedloudly.Hepickedhimselfupandangrilywentaway.Afterawhile,agroupofwomencamealong,eachbalancingapotofwateronherheadandpayingnoattentiontotheroad.Onewomantrippedoverthestoneandherwaterpotwentcrashingtotheground.Shepickedherselfupandlimpedawayintears.Neithershenorherfriendsthoughtaboutmovingthestoneoutoftheroad.Themayorwatchedalldayasmanypeoplepassingtoandfrocomplainedaboutthestonebuthefoundnobodymakinganattempttomoveitandhavetheroadclearedoftheobstacle.Themayorwasdisappointedandevenindespair.“Istherenooneinthisvillagewhofeelsanyresponsibilitytokeeptheirneighborsfromharm?”注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Justthen,themayorsawayounggirlcomingalong.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Atthatmoment,themayorsteppedoutfrombehindthetree.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】14
Justthen,themayorsawayounggirlcomingalong.Shewasfromapoorfamilyandhadworkedallday,worn-out.Whenseeingthestone,shethought,“It’sadangertowhoevercomesdownthestreetafterdark.Ishouldmoveitoutoftheway!”Thinasshewas,shepushedthestonewithallhermightandfinallymadeit.Turninground,shesawthegoldcoinswherethestonehadbeen.Rootedtothespotwithsurprise,shewaswonderingwhosegolditwas.Atthatmoment,themayorsteppedoutfrombehindthetree.“Sir,”shesaid,“Isthisgoldyours?Ifnot,wesurelymustfindtheowner!”Hereplied,“Mydear,thegoldisminebutnowit’syours,becauseit’syouthathaslearnedthelessonIwanttoteachmypeople.”Thestorywentaboutsoon.Theadultspassingearlierfeltashamedandguiltyabouttheirirresponsibility.Fromthenon,thepeopleinthistownbecamemoreresponsibleandcaringforeachother.Ofcourse,onegoodturndeservesanother.Yearslater,thewholetowntookonacompletelynewoutlook.【写作分析】本文以事件发展为线索展开，讲述了一位新当选的市长为了让市民道德水平提高，设置了一道测试：放了一块石头在路中间，并自己躲在一旁现察。来来往往的人很多，但他们都是在抱怨而没有挪走石头，这让市长很失望。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“正在这时，市长看到一个女孩走了过来。”可知，通过上文对送奶工和滑倒女人的描述，所以作为对比，第一段可描写这个女孩应该是一个善良有责任心的人，她不会对挡路石视而不见，因此可以描写她搬走石头，搬石头时发现了什么。②由第二段首句内容“就在那时，市长从树后走了出来。”可知，第二段可描写市长表扬这个女孩，并且号召村民向她学习。2.续写线索：看见石头——思考——搬石头——发现金子——市长解释——故事流传——村民反思3.词汇激活行为类①看见：spot/witness/observe②搬石头：movethestone/carrythestoneway③解释：explain/makeclear/interpret/reply14
情绪类①思考：thinkdeeply/reflecton②愧疚：beashamedof/takeshameononeself【范文点评】[高分句型1]Thinasshewas,shepushedthestonewithallhermightandfinallymadeit.（运用了as引导的让步状语从句）[高分句型2]Turninground,shesawthegoldcoinswherethestonehadbeen.（运用了现在分词短语作状语以及where引导的地点状语从句）44.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Onespringmorningmanyyearsago,IhadbeensearchingforgoldalongCohoCreekonsoutheasternAlaska’sKupreanofIsland,andasIemergedfromaforestofspruce(云杉)andhemlocktree,Ifrozeinmytracks.Nomorethan20pacesinthebog(沼泽)wasahugeAlaskantimberwolf-caughtinoneofTrapperGeorge’straps.OldGeorgehaddiedthepreviousweekofaheartattack,sothewolfwaslucky.Confusedandfrightenedatmyapproach,thewolfbackedaway.ThenInoticedsomethingelse:Itwasafemale,andherteatswerefullofmilk.Somewheretherewasadenofhungrypups(小狼)waitingfortheirmother.Fromherappearance,Iguessedthatshehadbeentrappedonlyafewdays.Thatmeantherpupswereprobablystillalive.ButIsuspectedthatifItriedtoreleasethewolf,shewouldturnaggressiveandtrytotearmetopieces.SoIdecidedtosearchforherpupsinsteadandbegantolookfortracksthatmightleadmetoherden.Fortunately,therewerestillafewremainingofsnow.Afterseveralmoments,Ispottedpups’marksonatrail.Thetracksledahalfmilethroughtheforest,thenupaslopecoveredwithmanyrocks.Ifinallyspottedthedenatthebaseofanenormousspruce,Therewasn’tasoundinside.Wolfpupsareshyandcautious,andIdidn’thavemuchhopeofinvitingthemoutside,ButIhadtotry.SoIbeganimitatingthehigh-pitched(声音很尖锐的)soundofamotherwolfcallingheryoung.Noresponse.Afewmomentslater,14
afterItriedanothercall,fourtinypupsappeared.Theycouldn’thavebeenmorethanafewweeksold.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1:Iextendedmyhands.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Withheryoungtoprotect,shewasbecomingaggressive.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Iextendedmyhands.Theytentativelysuckedatmyfingers.Perhapshungerhadhelpedovercometheirnaturalfear.Thenonebyone,Iplacedtheminafurbagandheadedbackdowntheslope.Whenthemotherwolfspottedme,shestoodupright.Possiblypickingupthesmellofheryoung,sheletoutahigh-pitched,plaintivewhine.Ireleasedthepups,andtheyracedtoher.Withinseconds,theyweresuckingatherbelly.Withheryoungtoprotect,shewasbecomingaggressive.Whatnext?Iwondered.Sotenderwerethepupsthatitwasimpossibleforthemtosurvivewithoutmother’sprotection.Hence,Ihadtoreleaseher.Ifetchedanironbar.UsingarockasthesupportingpointIunlockedthechain.Aftergainingfreedom,shehowledatmewith14
herheadlowshowinggratitude.Watchingthemotherandherpupsdisappearintheforest,Iletoutasighofrelief.【写作分析】这是一篇记叙文。本文讲述作者在多年前的一个春天的早上，在沿着CohoCreek淘金的时候，遇到了一只被困在猎人陷阱里的还在哺乳期的母狼，于是循着踪迹找到幼崽并把幼崽送到被困的母狼身边的故事。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“我伸开双手。”可知，第一段可描写作者把小狼送回母狼身边的经过。②由第二段首句内容“身边有了要保护的幼崽，它开始变得有攻击性。”可知，第二段可描写作者把小狼带到母狼身边之后的场景，作者犹豫是否要救它们出陷阱，以及最后的结果。2.续写线索：唤出——放回——救出——感谢——感受3.词汇激活行为类①放进：place…in…/put…in…②注意到：takenoticeof/payattentionto③释放：release/free/liberate情绪类①感谢：showgratitude/begrateful②放松：feelrelaxed/feelatease【范文点评】[高分句型1]Possiblypickingupthesmellofheryoung,sheletoutahigh-pitched,plaintivewhine.（现在分词作状语）[高分句型2]Watchingthemotherandherpupsdisappearintheforest,Iletoutasighofrelief.（现在分词作状语）55.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。SeptemberismostbeautifulinStrathroy,wherepeoplewholeheartedlyenjoythesimplepleasuresoflifeandnature.Rolandwasnoexception.HewasamagnificentGermanShepherd(德国牧羊犬),alittlelazyandover-weightthough.Helovedtodozeinthebackyard.Heyawnedand14
stretchedhisbodyasheheardtheslowlyapproachingfootstepsofMrs.Proudfoot.“Comehaveyourlunchdear!”saidMrs.Proudfootwithherusualfondnessforhimandhewaggedhistailaffectionatelyinreturn.Rolandwaslickingthelastpieceofmeatinhisplatewhenthedoorbellburstintomusic.Mrs.Proudfoothurriedtoanswerthedoor.Rolandstoodalertbyherside.“GoodnoonMrs.Proudfoot”.ItwasSam,herteenageneighbor.“My!My!Youlookpale!Whathappened?”askedMrs.Proudfootwithgenuineworry.Sheimmediatelywavedhiminandclosedthedoorbehind.Mrs.Proudfootwasalonelywidow,butwaswelllovedinherneighborhoodespeciallybykids,thoughshehadnokidstocallherown.Onceencouraged,Samdisclosedhisdilemma.“MyfriendBarrylostararebookofschoollibrary.Itcosts150dollars,buthehasonly55dollarsandhispoorparentscan’taffordtopaytherest.Barryisworkingparttimebutthat’sfarfromenough.”Withadramaticsighhecontinued,“Ifhedidn’trefundthelossbeforetheendofterm,hewillbedismissedfromfinalexams.Thatwillruinhisfuture!Ihavetohelphim,whateverittakes.Heismybestfriend.”“Don’tworry,Sammy.Youwantmetopay…”,butMrs.Proudfootwasinterrupted.“No,No,Mrs.Proudfoot.ThisisnotwhatIcameherefor.I’llworkforyou.Wouldyoufavormetowalkyourdogplease?For2dollarsaday.”Helookedupwithbeggingeyes.Mrs.Proudfootclappedherhandsinagreement,“Thatcan’tbebetter!I’vebeenworriedaboutRolandlately.Hedoesneedsomeexercise!It’sniceofyoutomakesuchanoffer.”Samthankedheroverandover,“Iwillstarttomorrowmorning.”注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1:Samarrivedveryearlythenextmorning.14
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Amonthlater,Mrs.ProudfootwasdelightedtofindRolandfitandenergetic.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Samarrivedveryearlythenextmorning.SeeingRolandlazilybathedinmildsunshinewitheyesnarrowedintoaline,Samdartedtowardshim,armswidelyopened.Givinghimalazyglimpse,Rolandpolitelywaggedhistailandthenturnedhisheadaway,fallingsoundasleepagain.Desperatelybrainstorming,SamgotapieceofdeliciousbonefromMrs.Proudfoot.Luredbythetastysmell,Rolandswiftlybouncedupandjumpedatthebone,followingSamout.Inthisway,thefirstdaywassmoothlyfinished.Daybyday,SamwasdelightedtofindRolandgraduallybecomewillingandeagertohaveawalkoutside.Amonthlater,Mrs.ProudfootwasdelightedtofindRolandfitandenergetic.EnjoyingthepleasuretoroamalongthecountryroadwithRoland,Samalsoharvestedalotfromtherelaxingtime.Eventuallyoneday,SamwasexcitedtotellMrs.Proudfoot,“BarryandIhaveearnedenoughmoney.Thankyou,Mrs.Proudfoot!ButcanIcontinuewalkingRolandforyou?Forfree!”Radiantly,Mrs.Proudfootnodded.Receivingapositiveanswer,SamwaswildwithjoyandRoland,wagginghistailmerrily,asifintoxicated.Sometimesonlyalittlekindnesscanignitesomethingshining,makingtheworldmorebeautifulandharmonious.【写作分析】14
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了山姆的朋友巴里不小心弄丢了图书馆里一本珍贵的书。为了帮助好友凑钱买书，山姆决定向普劳德福特女士请求帮助她遛狗换取报酬。原先懒惰又超重的狗，也因此变得精力充沛并且苗条了。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“山姆第二天很早就到了。”可知，第一段可描写山姆遛狗的经过。②由第二段首句内容“一个月之后，普劳德福特女士很高兴地发现罗兰瘦了，并且充满活力。”可知，第二段可描写山姆成功地通过劳动获得了报酬，并且请求免费帮普劳德福特女士继续遛狗。2.续写线索：狗的表现——引诱狗狗出门——狗的改变——完成任务——主动请求继续遛狗——主题升华3.词汇激活行为类①找食物：getapieceofdeliciousbone/askacanofmeat②收获：harvestalot/benefitalot情绪类①高兴、惊讶：wasdelightedtofind/wassurprisedtofind②欢乐：waswildwithjoy/wasmorethanhappy【范文点评】[高分句型1]SeeingRolandlazilybathedinmildsunshinewitheyesnarrowedintoaline,Samdartedtowardshim,armswidelyopened.（现在分词作状语和独立主格结构）[高分句型2]Receivingapositiveanswer,SamwaswildwithjoyandRoland,wagginghistailmerrily,asifintoxicated.（现在分词作状语）14
