写作提升练(四) 读后续写1阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。(2022·11浙江)AVacationwithMyMotherIhadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwithsurpriseandamusements,allbecauseofmymother—loving,sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe’deverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe’dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler’schecksMomhadforgotten.DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:“Youstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookout(放哨)whileIgo,andI’llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:“Honey,wherearethekids?”“What?!Oh,Gosh...Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.”Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren’tabouttotakeanychances.Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn’twefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections(反对).Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorstep,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldasasniceassheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus. 4\n Paragraph2:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway. 2阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Jack,aclerkatthelocalbank,waswanderingaloneonthestreet.Itwasacold,silentwinternight.HismindwasonhiswifeLinda,whohadbeeninacaraccidenttwomonthsagoandwasnowlyinginahospitalbed,waitingformoremoneyforheroperation.Jackhadsoldeverythinghehad,andhehadtriedhisbesttoborrowmoneyfromallthepopleandbankshecould.Buttherealworldiscruel.Alargeamountofmoneywasstillneeded.ToJack,itwouldmeanagreatdealofsufferingtoseehiswifediewithoutanyhelp.“Ihaveonlyoneoptionleft,”Jacksaidtohimself.Thenhewenttothebank,hisworkplace,again.Forseveraldays,heobservedthebankandplannedatheft.Thennextday,hewenttoworkasusual.Everythingseemednormal:hejokedwithhisworkmatesandhelpedhisclientsashealwaysdid.Butnoonenoticedthathehadbroughtabiggersuitcasetowork,insteadofthesmallonehealwayscarried.At5:00pm,thebankclosed,andtheclerksandtheguardshadallgonehome.However,atthatmoment,Jackwasinthebathroom,andtheguardsdidn’tnoticehim,ofcourse.Whenthenoisescomingfromthestreetwerereplacedbysilenceandeverythingturneddark,Jackcameoutfromthebathroom.Hefirstcutthelinesofthealarmsandmonitorswithtoolsfromhisnewsuitcase.Hewasalltoofamiliarwiththeequipmentsincehehadbeenworkingtherefor8yearsandhadbeenstudyingthesecuritysystemforthepast30days.Usingaspecialkeyandsomeothertools,hetheneasilyopenedthedoorsofthesafes.Thebank’ssecuritysystemwasn’tverygood,whichallowedJacktotakealotofmoney.Severalminuteslater,Jackleftthebankwithaheavybagfilledwithmoney. 4\n注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:AfterJackhadbeengonefromthebankforawhile,thealarmsbegantoring. Paragraph2:Butthemostunluckymanwasthemanagerofthebank,anoldman. 参考答案写作提升练(四) 读后续写1Paragraph1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Butthenwewerehalfanhourawayfromthehotel,wherethetentwasleftbehind.Dadrecommendedbuyinganewone,whileMominsistedonourgoingbacktofetchit,saying“Forgetfulpeoplelikememaylosethingsrepeatedly,soit’sunwisetogiveupthetent.”Finally,wegotbackthetentandhittheroadagain.IfMomhadn’tbeenthatabsent-minded,itwouldhavesavedusthetroubleofgoingbackagainandagain.Paragraph2:4\nWedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Oneday,towardsevening,wefoundagreatcampingsiteatthefootofahighmountain.DavidandIhelpedDadputupthetent,andMomwasbusypreparingsupper.Whenthesettingsuncastanorangelightoverthemountains,thetentwassetupandthemealwasready.Sittingaroundthecampfire,wetalkedandlaughed.EverytimewementionedthefunnyincidentsofthejourneyapleasantsmilewouldspreadoverMom’sface.2Paragraph1:AfterJackhadbeengonefromthebankforawhile,thealarmsbegantoring.Thepolicearrivedatthebankveryquickly,onlytofindnoonethere.Thenextdaywasareallyspecialdayforthetown,whichwasfilledwithnewspapersandTVreporterscoveringthestrangetheft.Theclerksatthebankwerebusydiscussingthecase,ofcourse,includingJack.Thepolicecouldonlypromisetocatchthethievesassoonaspossible,eventhoughnoclueshadbeenfoundyet. Paragraph2:Butthemostunluckymanwasthemanagerofthebank,anoldman.Heseemedtobetheonlypersontoblameandwasremovedfromhisposition.Atlast,withenoughmoneyforheroperation,Jack’swifewassaved.However,Jackfeltguiltyaboutthemanagerofthebank.Hecouldnotforgetwhathehaddonetotheoldman.Hisguiltdeepenedastimewentby.Finally,heturnedhimselfintothepoliceandacceptedhispunishment.4
