写作提升练(三)读后续写1阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Itwasthelate1930s,andthingsweretough.MumhadahardtimeraisingusonherowninoursmallcommunityofNewWestminster,BC.MydadhaddrownedinPittLake,fiveyearsago.Lookingback,IrealizewhatMumwentthroughsendinguskidstoschool.Everymorningshewouldtuckanewpieceofcardboardinourshoes,becauseoursoles(鞋底)werewornout.Whenwegothome,Mumwouldhave“Frenchtoast”readyforus.Constantmovingwastypicalformyfamilyinthosetimes.Rentwas25dollarsamonth,butMumcouldn’tpayit,andweknewwewouldbeevictedrightafterChristmasonthefirstofJanuary. Christmaswasapproaching,andwewereentitledtoatwenty-five-dollarChristmasfundfromsocialservices.Theinspectorcametoourhouse,andsearcheditfromtoptobottomtobesurewedidn’thaveanyfoodhiddenaway.Whenhedidn’tfindany,heissuedthechequetoMum.Mumsaidthatinsteadofbuyingfood,shewouldusethe25dollarstopaybackrent,assuringusallofaroofoverourheadsforalittlewhilelonger.ShetoldusthentherewouldbenothingforChristmas. UnknowntoMum,IhadbeensellingChristmastree,shovelingsnow,anddoingoddjobstoearnenoughmoneytobuyanewpairofboots.Bootsthatweren’tpatched,bootswithnocardboardinthesoles.IknewexactlywhichbootsIwanted.Theywereten-inchTopGenuinePierreParisandtheyhadapriceof23dollars.Well,thebigdaycameontheafternoonofChristmasEve.Iwasexcited,asIhurrieduptheroadtotheshoestore,butonthewayInoticedahousewithChristmaslightsanddecorations.ItwasthenIrealizedatourhouse,wehadnolights,nodecorations,noranymoneyforChristmasgoodies.IknewthatwewouldhavenoturkeyorhamforChristmas,andIfeltsad.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:AsIcontinuedwalkingIbegantoreconsidermyplan.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4\n__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Withgreatexcitementandtearsinmyeyes,Iknockedonthedoor.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2(2022·浙江新高考研究联盟第二次联考)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Mymotherwasasupporterofphysicalpunishment,butforallhertalkingshehasneverspanked(打屁股)mysiblingsandmeonlyonce.Insteadshefoundwaysofpunishmentthatleftamorelastingmemorythangivingusaspanking.OneofthemostmemorableoftheseoccasionsoccurredwhenIwasfour.Intheearly70’smymotherattendedcollegeduringthedayandIwasindaycare.OnedayatdaycareIwatchedanextremelytiredmotherattempttopickupherdaughter.Thelittlegirlasked,“Momma,arewegoingtoMcDonald’sfordinner?”Themotherreplied,“Honey,nottonight.Mommahastorunafewerrands(差事)andthenwehavetogohomeandcookdinnerforDaddy.”“ButIwannago.”“Susie,Isaidnottonight.Maybe,ifyouareagoodgirl,wecangotomorrow.”Susieimmediatelydroppedtothefloor,kickingandscreaming,“IwanttogotoMcDonald’s.”Noamountofpleading(恳求)orscoldinghermothertriedstoppedSusie’stantrum(发脾气).Finallyhermothergavein,“Okay,Susie,let’sgotoMcDonald’s.”Susiestoppedyellingandsmiling.Shegrabbedhermother’shandandtheyleft.TosayIwasamazedwouldbeinaccurate;IwasdelightedthatanythingIwantedcouldbehadbythrowingatantrum. ThatdaymymotherpickedmeupearlyfromdaycarebecauseweweregoingtoastoretopurchasesomeChristmasitems.Iwasexcitedbythelightsanddecorations,andaswewalkedthroughthetoysectiononthewaytothecounter,IsawatoyIhadtohave.Itwasawhiteandredtelephonewhosebellsrangasitwaspulledalongonastring.LookinglovinglyupatmymotherIasked,“Mama,canIhavethattelephone?”Shereplied,“Baby,notnow,butifyouareagoodgirl,maybeSantawillbringittoyou.”“ButMama,Iwantthattelephonerightnow.”Hereyesnarrowedandherhandtightenedonmine.“Becky,youcan’thavethattelephonetoday,butifyoumisbehave,youcanhaveaspanking.”注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:BynowwewerestandinginthelongHolidaylinetopaythebill,andIfigureditwasagoodchance._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:4\n“Mama,stop.Mama,getup,”Itearfullypleaded._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4\n写作提升练(三) 读后续写1Paragraph1:AsIcontinuedwalkingIbegantoreconsidermyplan.Iwasfeelingastrangesenseofguilt.HereIwasgoingtobuyanewpairofbootswhilemymotherwashomeintears.Shewouldbetryingtoexplaintouswhytherewerenopresents.Acrossthestreetfromthebusstopwasabiggrocerystore.Irealizedthat25dollarsIhadworkedsohardforwentalongwaytowardslights,decorationsandaturkey.Afterfinishingshopping,Iwenthome. Paragraph2:Withgreatexcitementandtearsinmyeyes,Iknockedonthedoor.Icouldhardlywaittoseemymother’sface!WhenMumopenedthedoor,someofthegroceriesfellinsideontothefloor,andshejuststoodthere,dumbfounded.Holdingbackthetears,Isaid,“MerryChristmas!”ThatdayIgotenoughhugsandkissesfromMum.2Paragraph1:BynowwewerestandinginthelongHolidaylinetopaythebill,andIfigureditwasagoodchance.Ilaydownonthegroundandbeganscreaming,“Iwantthattelephone,”overandoveragain.WearyChristmasshopperslookedasmymothercalmlysaid,“Becky,youhadbettergetupbythecountofthreeorelse.One...Two...Three.”Nothing.Iwasstillinfulltantrum.Sothenshelaydownbesidemeonthefloor,andbegankickingandscreaming,“Iwantanewcar.Iwantanewhouse.Iwantsomejewelry.Iwant...”Shocked,Istoodup.Paragraph2:“Mama,stop.Mama,getup,”Itearfullypleaded.Shestood,andbrushedherselfoff.Atfirststunned,theotherswaitinginlinebegantoclap,andbeforeIknewittheywerecheeringandlaughingandpattingmymotheronherback.Sheblushedandtookalittlebowandthenextthirtyminutesinlinewaspuremiseryformeasvariousparentsleavingthestore,shaketheirheadsatmeandsaywithasmile,“Yourmomgotyougood.Ibetyou’llnevertrythatagain.”AndIdidn’t,becauseitleftalastingmentalpicturemoreeffectivethananyphysicalmark.4
