【备战2022】高考英语 5年高考真题精选与最新模拟 专题17 短文改错

【备战2022】高考英语5年高考真题精选与最新模拟专题17短文改错【2022高考真题精选】（2022·课标全国卷）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。IlearnedearlyinlifethatIhadtobemorepatientandlittleaggressive.FromthetimeIwasaboutfouruntilIwasaboutsix,Idestroyedeachofmytoy.Iwashappywhenthetoysworked,butwhenthingsdidwrong,Igotangryandbrokeit.Forawhileparentsboughtmenewtoys.Butbeforelongtheybegantoseewhichwashappening.WhenItearapartmyfifthbirthdaytoytrain,myfathersaid,“That'sit.Nomoretoystoyou.”Mypunishmentlastedayear.Meanwhile,IfoundoutthatwithmorepatienceImustmakemytoystolast.Myattitudechangedfromthenon.【解析】IlearnedearlyinlifethatIhadtobemorepatientandlittlaggressive.FromthetimeIwasaboutfouruntilIwasaboutsix,Idestroyedeachofmyto.Iwashappywhenthetoysworked,butwhenthingsdi　wrong,Igotangryandbrokei.Forawhileparentsboughtmenewtoys.Butbeforelongtheybegantoseewhicwashappening.WhenIteaapartmyfifthbirthdaytoytrain,myfathersaid,“That'sit.Nomoretoystyou.”Mypunishmentlastedayear.Meanwhile,IfoundoutthatwithmorepatienceImusmakemytoysto'last.Myattitudechangedfromthenon.1.little→less　考查副词的用法。根据句意：我不得不多一些耐心而少一些挑衅性。此处less修饰形容词。2.toy→toys　考查名词的单复数形式。根据eachof35\n可知，应该是“我”的玩具中的每一个，故用复数形式toys。3.did→went或者did后加go　考查固定短语的表达法。解题关键：掌握短语gowrong意为：出错。9.must→could/might　考查情态动词。根据句意：拥有更多的耐心，“我”就可能使玩具使用得更久。10.去掉last前的to　考查不定式作宾语补足语。解题关键：makesb/sthdo，此处make作“使”解，其后接不带to的不定式作宾补。（2022·浙江卷）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Twoyearsbefore,ItraveledtoBrazilandIrentedforacar.Unfortunate,Ihadanaccidentandhitanothercar,andIneededtostayinahospitalforatleasttwoweek.Icalledmyparents,soIdidnottellthemwhathadhappened.IknewthattheywillbeworriedaboutmyselfbecauseIwassofartheraway,andthatmymotherwouldnotsleepifsheknew.Therefore,ItoldtheminterestedstoriesandhowIwasenjoyingBrazil.Asaresult,nobodyknewtruth.Istillthinkthatitwastherightthingtodo.【答案】Twoyearsbefor，ItraveledtoBrazilandIrentedfor'acar.Unfortunat，Ihadanaccidentandhitanothercar,andIneededtostayinahospital35\nforatleasttwowee.Icalledmyparents,sIdidnottellthemwhathadhappened.IknewthattheywilbeworriedaboutmyselbecauseIwassofartheaway,andthatmymotherwouldnotsleepifsheknew.Therefore,ItoldtheminterestestoriesandhowIwasenjoyingBrazil.Asaresult,nobodyknewtruth.Istillthinkthatitwastherightthingtodo.（2022·陕西卷）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线(__)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。MyfatherandIstayedattheSouthLakeHotelforaweekwhenwevisitBeijinglastmonth.Itisinthedowntownarea,butitiseasytogotoanywherefromthehotelbypublictransport.Welivedinacomfortablydoubleroomwithabigbath.WhatIlikedbestwerethefreehighspeedInternetconnectionintheroom.Icheckedmyemailmessageseveryday.IalsosharedformyfriendsmanyphotostakinginBeijing.Thefoodwaswonderfulwithreasonableprices,andweenjoyedseverallocaldish.ItissuchgreathotelthatIwouldrecommendittoanyfriendofmewhoisgoingtoBeijing.35\nItissuchgreathotelthatIwouldrecommendittoanyfriendofmwhoisgoingtoBeijing.8．dish→dishes　由several修饰，名词应用复数。9．such后加a　such修饰的hotel是可数名词单数，需加不定冠词a。10．me→mine　双重所有格的构成是“of＋名词性物主代词或名词所有格”。（2022·辽宁卷）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。DearDiana，Thankyouforthelovelydaywehavewithyou.ItwassokindforyoutoletusbringAnne'sfriend,Gina.Unfortunate,theonlyproblemwasthejourneyhome.Therehadbeenaterribleaccidentonthehighwayand,foraresult,therewasalonglineoftrafficforatleastsixmile.Intheend,wedrovetoaservicestationandwaitedthereunlesstheroadwasclear.InthecarparkhereGinanearlygotknockedoverascardroveoutfartooquicklyfrombehindalorry.TheyfinallydroppedGinaoffatherparents'andmadeourownwaytohome.【解析】DearDiana，Thankyouforthelovelydaywehavwithyou.Itwassokindfoyoutolet35\nusbringAnne'sfriend,Gina.Unfortunat，theonlyproblemwasthejourneyhome.Therehadbeenaterribleaccidentonthehighwayand,foaresult,therewasalonglineoftrafficforatleastsixmil.Intheend,wedrovetoaservicestationandwaitedthereunlestheroadwasclear.InthecarparkherGinanearlygotknockedoverascardroveoutfartooquicklyfrombehindalorry.ThefinallydroppedGinaoffatherparents'andmadeourownwayto'home.【2022·四川卷】此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。DearMom，Mother’sDayiscoming.I’msorrythatIamabroad66．________andcan’tsendyourflowers，soI’mwritingtoyou.67．________Mom，IknowIhaveneverexpressedmythanktoyou68．________35\nbefore.Butontoday，atthisspecialtime，Ijustwanttotell69．________youloudly：Iloveyou，Mom!Thankyousomuchbynot70．________onlygivingmelife,butalsoteachmehowtobeagood71．________person.Thankyouforallyouhaddoneforme.Mom，though72．________Imayoftensayit,Idoloveyou.Nobodycantakeyour73．________partinmyheart.WheneverIam，Iwillalwaysloveyou.74．________Hopeyougoodhealthandmuchhappinesseveryday!75．________Yourlittlegirl，Jennifer73.may后加not。考查句意衔接。句意为：妈妈，虽然我可能没有经常说，但我确实很爱你。74.Whenever改为Wherever。考查连词。根据句意：无论我在哪里，我总是爱你的。75.Hope改为Wish。考查动词辨析。动词hope后不能接双宾语，而wish可以，wish符合语境和语法规则。（2022·全国卷Ⅱ）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：35\n此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。DearEditor，I'mwritingtotellyouopinionaboutwatersaving.76.________________Waterisimportant.We,aswellasanimal,cannotlive77.________________withoutwaterandneitheragricultureorindustrycango78.________________withoutit.Yetitseemedwaterisbecominglessandless.79.________________Manycountriesintheworldfindwedon'thaveenoughwater.80.________________Todealwithaproblem,Ithink,weshouldfirstgoall81.________________outtoplanttreesthoughtreeswillhelpsavewater.Next,no82.________________drinkingwatershouldbeleftrunning.Third,weshouldfind83.________________waystoreusethewaterusinginwashing,especiallybath84.________________waterforwhichisquitealot,andthatwillsavemuchwater.85.________________Sincerely，LiHua【解析】DearEditor，I'mwritingtotellyou∧opinionaboutwatersaving.76.__my__Waterisimportant.We,aswellasanimal,_cannotlive77.__animals__withoutwaterandneitheragricultureorindustrycango78.__nor__withoutit.Yetitseemedwaterisbecominglessandless.79.__seems__Manycountriesintheworldfindwedon'thaveenoughwater.80.__they__Todealwithaproblem,Ithink,weshouldfirstgoall81.__the/this/that__outtoplanttreesthoughtreeswillhelpsavewater.Next,no82.__because/since/as__drinkingwatershouldbeleftrunning.Third,weshouldfind83.__√__waystoreusethewaterusinginwashing,especiallybath84.__used__waterfor[KG3mm]whichisquitealot,andthatwillsavemuchwater.85.__for\__Sincerely，LiHua35\n84.using→used　根据后面的inwashing可知是洗衣服用过的水，所以用used。85.去掉for　which指代water，作主语，不需要for。【2022高考真题精选】（2022·全国卷Ⅱ）第二节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。DearGeorge，It’sbeenaweekafterweleftyourfamilyandwearenow76.________backhome.Thankyouverymuchforshowingthemaround77.________yourcityandprovidingusforthewonderfulmeals.After78.________wesaidgoodbyetoyou,wewenttoWashingtonD．C.,79.________wherewestayedforthreedays.Mybrotherwassomuchfond80.________ofthemuseumstherethathebeggedmyparentstostaying81.________anothercoupleofday.However,myfatherhadtoreturnto82.________workonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturdayafternoon.It83.________wasreallyaniceexperience.Ifyou’dliketomaketripto84.________ourcitysomeday,Iwillbebetterthanhappytobeyourguide.85.________Yours，35\nMike79.正确80.去掉much　“so＋adj…”为结果状语从句，much多余。81.staying改为stay　begsbtodosth央求某人做某事。82.day改为days　couple是复数，所以day加s。83.fly改为flew　时态错误，前面使用的过去时，时态应该保持一致。84.加a　makeatripto去旅行。85.better改为more　morethan非常。（2022·全国Ⅰ卷）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行下边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行下边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行下边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行下边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。Oneofmyunforgettablememoryofmyschoolin35\n76．____________Xinjiangisthatofluncheswebroughtfromourhomes.77.____________IholdmylunchboxinmyhandwhenIwasgoingto78．____________school.Thesmellfromitwasverygood.Sincethelunch79.____________bellfinallyrang，myfriendsandImetunderatalltree80．____________andhadourlunches.MybestfriendAiguliewasused81．____________toshareherNangNang82.____________cakeinXinjiang.Ilikethemverymuch.NowAigulieand83．____________Istudyatdifferentcollegesorwecanonlyseeeachother84．____________duringthesummervacation.IthinkoverheralotandImiss85．____________thefoodandthegoodtimewehadtogether.【解析】76.memory→memories　oneof…后面的名词要用复数形式。77.lunches前加the　lunches后面有定语从句修饰，因此为特指。78.hold→held　本文讲述的是过去的事情。79.Since→When80.√81.去掉used前的was　beusedto意思是“习惯于”，后面跟v.Nang（2022·四川卷）第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行下边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行下边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行下边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行下边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。35\nTomwashavingmuchtroublesgettingupinthe　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　66.__________morningandwasalwayslatewithwork.Hisbosswantedto67.__________firehimifhedidn’tstartcomingontime，buthewentto68.__________thedoctorforahelp.Thedoctorgavehimsome69.__________medicineandtoldhimtotakethembeforehewenttobed.70.__________Themandidastoldandsleptreallywell，wakeupbefore71.__________thealarmhadevengoneoff.Hehadtimeforaproperly72.__________breakfastandwasstillthefirstreachthefactory.“Boss，”he73.__________said，“thatmedicinereallyworks！”“I’mpleasingtohear74.__________it，”saidhisboss，“butwherewereyouyesterday？”75.__________【答案】Tomwashavingmuchtroublesgettingupinthe　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　trouble66．____________morningandwasalwayslatewithwork.Hisbosswantedto　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　for67．____________firehimifhedidn’tstartcomingontime，buthewentto　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　so68．____________thedoctorfora'help.Thedoctorgavehimsome　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　a[KH－1]69．____________35\nmedicineandtoldhimtotakethembeforehewenttobed.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　it70．____________Themandidastoldandsleptreallywell，wakeupbefore　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　waking71．____________thealarmhadevengoneoff.Hehadtimeforaproperly　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　proper72．____________breakfastandwasstillthefirst∧reachthefactory.“Boss，”he　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　to73．____________said，“thatmedicinereallyworks！”“I’mpleasingtohear　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　pleased74．____________it，”saidhisboss，“butwherewereyouyesterday？”　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　√75．____________35\n（2022·辽宁卷）第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。InearlyJanuarythisyear，therateofUFOreportsweresteady，aroundthreeperweeks.When，however，onMonday，January16，asciencefictionfilmaboutvisitorstoouterspacewasshownontelevision，therewastheimmediateincreaseinreportsofsightingsfromallpartsoftheStates.Thecommandingofficer,WayneTyler，whodirectlyresponsibleforthestudyofallsuchreports，decidedtomakinghisfindingsknown.Theywroteanarticle，whichsaidthatallUFOreportscouldbeexplainedforquitenaturallybyaircraftmovements.Followthisexplanation，therewasarapiddropinthenumberofreportedsightings，becausetherateremainedabovethepreviouslevel.35\nallUFOreportscouldbeexplainedfor'quitenaturallybyaircraftmovements.Followthisexplanation，therewasaFollowingrapiddropinthenumberofreportedsightings，becausethe　　　　　　　　　　　　although/though/but/yetrateremainedabovethepreviouslevel.1.were→was　主语为therate，因此谓语动词用单数。2.weeks→week　“每周”的表达为perweek，此处用单数形式。3.to→from　表“来自”要用from。4.the→an　这里泛指量的增长，需使用不定冠词。immediate读音为元音音素开头，故应用不定冠词an。5.who后增加was/is　构成结构beresponsiblefor为……负责。6.making→make　动词decide后常跟不定式作宾语，因此用tomake结构。7.They→He　此处指代的是WayneTyler这个人，因此用He。8.去掉for　explain为及物动词，其后可直接跟宾语(即该被动句的主语allUFOreports)，故去掉for。9.follow→following　此处是现在分词短语作伴随状语。10.because→although/though/but/yet　根据前后两个句子间的逻辑关系可知。35\n（2022·全国卷）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Mysummertravelstartedterribly.IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStationbuyatickettoHangzhou.IwasgoingtovisitafriendhereandafterthatIwouldgotoXiamenforlongholiday.IboughtmyticketbutturnedaroundtopickupmybagfromthefloorandthenIrealizedthatsomeonehadstolenit.Luckily，Ihadallmymoneyonmypocket，buttheonlyclothesIhadwasthoseIhadon.Itfeltverystrangetotravelwithoutanyluggages.WhenIfinallyarrivedatmyfriendhelenttomelotsofclothes.IfeelveryhappythatIcouldchangemyclothesatlast.【答案】Mysummertravelstartedterribly.IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStationbuy　aticketbuyingtoHangzhou.IwasgoingtovisitafriendhereandafterthatthereIwouldgotoXiamenfor∧longholiday.Iboughtmyticket35\nabutturnedaroundtopickupmybagfromthefloorandthenandIrealizedthatsomeonehadstolenit.LuckilyIhadallmymoneyonmypocket，buttheonlyclothesIhadwasthoseIinwerehadon.Itfeltverystrangetotravelwithoutanyluggages.luggageWhenIfinallyarrivedatmyfriendhelentto[KG*2]melotsoffriend’sclothes.IfeelveryhappythatIcouldchangemyclothesatlast.felt（2022·陕西卷）第二节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线(____)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。LastSundaymorning,whenIwashavingawalkintheparknearmyhome,Icameacrossacrewmakeanewfilmwithoneofmyfavouriteactor.Ididn’thavemycamerawithmeatthattime，butIrushedbackhometoget.Unfortunately，bythetimeIgotback，theyhavefinishedthesceneandtheactorcouldn’tbeseen35\neverywhere.Iwasreallydisappointingandabouttoleavewhenhewalkedoutabuilding.Hewasrightthereinthefrontofme！Icouldn’tbelievemyluck—notonlydidIhadmyphototakenwithhim，buthesignedhisnameonmyshirt!him，buthesignedhisnameonmyshirt!make→making　作后置定语，用非谓语动词，与所修饰词是主动关系，故用v（2022·重庆卷）以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行下边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行下边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行下边横线上写出改正后的词。TodayisSunday.I’vebeeninCanadafortwomonths.ThisisthefirsttimethatI’vebeenawaymyfamilyforsucha76.____________longtime.WiththehelpofKatia,aroommateofme,I’ve77.____________soongotusedtolivewithoutmyparentsaround.Katia,like78.____________manyotherRussiangirls,areniceandlively.Webecame79.35\n____________friendsshortlyafterwemeeteachother.AlthoughherEnglish80.____________isalittlehardlytounderstand,weenjoychattingandwe81.____________usuallytalkalotaboutourownfamily.We’rebothsurprised82.____________thatChinesecultureorRussianculturearesodifferent.Now,83.____________we’replanningasmallpartyforthenextSunday.There,Katia84.____________willintroducemetosomeofherfriends,oneofwhohasbeen85.____________toChinaseveraltimes.Ijustcan’twait.【解析】这是一篇记叙文，介绍了作者在加拿大两个月以来的生活适应及人际交往情况。76.away后加from　beaway“远离”，其后不能接宾语；beawayfrom“远离……”可接宾语。77.me→mine　表示“我的一位舍友”用aroommateofmine或oneofmyroommates。35\n【2022高考真题精选】（10四川）AnEnglishladywasfinallydecidedthatshereallyshould66_______learntodrive,Andaftermanyattempts,shepasther67_______drivingtestandtoldherhusbandthat，torelease，he68_______wasgoingtodrivehimovertoFranceforaholiday，But69_______thenaweekafterthetrip,shesuddenlyannouncedthat70_______theywouldn’ttaketheholiday.“Howdidyouchangeyour71_______mind?”heaskedherbysurprise.“Well，itisallbecause72_______ofthebusinessofdrivingonright.”Shesaid,“Ihave73______beenpracticingforthreeweeksnow，butIstillcouldn’t74______getusedtoit-infact,I’venearlykilledthreepeoples。”75______66.答案：去掉finally前的was解析：lady与decide之间为主动关系67.答案：past→passed解析：此处意为“通过”，应使用pass的过去式35\n（10全国Ⅰ）Itwasachanceofalifetimetowinthefirst76___________prizeontheStoryWritingShow.AllIhadtodo77___________wastowriteastoryorpresentit.Myteachers78___________havebeentellingmehowgreatmywritingwas.79_______Soiftheyhadsaidwastrue,Iwouldhaveachance80_______ofwinningtheprize.Whatwerebetter,Ihaduseful81.help.TherewasUncleChen,gentlemanliving82.nearmyhouse,whowasaverymuchfamouswriter83Heagreedtoreadingmystoryandgivemesome84advicesonhowtowritelikearealwriter8535\n解析：（10全国Ⅱ）Christiewasoneofmybestfriendathighschool76Atthattime,weoftenspendtimetogether.77Thanktoherhelp,Imadegreatprogressinmy78study.Lastyear,shedecidedtostudyabroad.In79otherwords,wewouldbeseparatedforlongtime.80Beforeherleavingoff,Ipreparedagifttoshow81mybestwhishestohim.Shesaiditwasthebest82giftshehaseverhad.Fromthenon,we’ve83kepttouchwithanotherthroughe-mails.I84lookforwardtoseeheragaininthenearfuture.85答案：76.friend→friends.oneof后接名词复数77.spend→spent.Atthattime表示过去发生的事情78.Thank→Thanks.Thanksto是固定短语，“多亏了，因为”35\n（10辽宁）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10初语言错误，每句中最多有两处。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符合(^)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。修改：在错的词下划—横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.至允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Christinewasjustagirlinoneofmyclass.Ineverknewmuchaboutherexceptforthatshewasstrange.shedidn’ttalkmany.herhairwasblackandpurple,andshewornblacksportsshoesandablacksweater,althoughinthesummer.shewas,infact,ratherattractively,andsheneverseemed^carewhattherestifusthoughtaboutherliketherestofmyclassmate,Ididn’treallytogetherthatIbegintounderstandwhyChristinedressedthewayshedid.Christinewasjustagirlinoneofmyclass.Ineverknewmuchaboutherexceptforthatshewasstrange.shedidn’ttalkmany.herhairwasblack去掉for解析：exceptthat中不能再用for。many→much解析：修饰动词talk应该用much，此处是副词，many没有此用法。andpurple,andshewornblacksportsshoesandablacksweater,althoughin35\ntheworn→wore解析：谓语动词用过去式，不能用过去分词although→even解析：although是连词，不能修饰介词短语，even可以summer.shewas,infact,ratherattractively,andsheneverseemed^carewhatattractively→attractive解析：做表语，用形容词seemed→seemedto解析：seem后用带to的不定式therestifusthoughtaboutherliketherestofmyclassmate,Ididn’treallyclassmate→classmates解析：名词需用复数wanttogetclosesttoher.itwasonlywhenwedidtheirchemistryprojectclosest→close解析get是连系动词，后跟形容词their→our解析：人称和前面一致togetherthatIbegintounderstandwhyChristinedressedthewayshedid.begin→begin解析：时态前后不一致（10重庆）Hereismyideaabouthowafriendislike.Firstly,76.afriendissomeoneyoucanshareyoursecrets.Ifyou77.tellhimasecret,neverwillhetalksaboutitwithanybody78.else.Besides,afriendisalwaysgoodlistenerwhenyou79.needone.Afterhearyoursadstories,hewillsaysome80.wordsthatisniceandwarm.Still,yourhappinessmakes81.himhappilytoo.What’smore,agoodfriendiswillingto82.offerthehelptowhichyouneed,orcanatleastgiveyou83.someadvices.Inaword,friendsarethoseyoulikeand84.trust,andyouwillenjoyeveryminutethatyouspentwith85.them.解析：76.howwhat,由what引导宾语从句，从句中like缺宾语。35\n（10浙江）Aftershopping,MotherandIwenttoarestaurantforlunch.InoticeMotherlookingatanearbytableoccupybyanelderlywomanandyoungcouple.Theyaresilently,anditwasclearlythatthingswerenotgoingwell.Asweleft,Motherstoppedontheirtable.“Excuseme,”shesaid,putherarmaroundtheunhappyoldwoman.“Youremindmesomanyofmymother.MayIhug”(拥抱)you?”Thewomansmiledhappilyassheacceptedtoit.Afterweleft,Isaid,“Thatwasveryniceofyou,Mother.SoIdidn’tthinkshelookedlikeGrandma.”“Neitherdidme.”saidMothercheerfully.1.notice改为noticed考点：解析：本文的时间都是一般过去时态。2.occupy改为occupied考点：解析：此处是分词短语作后置定语，occupy与table是被动关系，故应用过去分词。3.young之前加上a。考点：解析：从下文可知是一对夫妇，所以需加冠词。4.clearly改为clear。考点：解析：此处是作表语，用形容词形式。5.on改为by或at。考点：35\n（10福建）Deareditor,IamEvanfromCanada.Beingtheeldestchildinthefamilyhasits76.________disadvantages.Firstofall,Ihavetoshareallmy______（玩具）withmy77________youngersisters.Ofcourse,theydon’tn____toreturnthefavorbecause78________高I’mtotallyuninterestedintheirthings._______（除……之外）that,79________高theyarealwayshangingaroundme.Ijustcan’tgetamoment’sp_____80________Atmeals,Ihavetoeatwhateveris_____theplateregardlessof81________thetaste.Mysistersonlytryonebiteifit’snot______favoritefood.82________Inaddition,w____itcomestopracticingourmusicalinstruments,.Ihaveto83________35\npractice______thandoublethetime.Worstofall,Igetalargerquantity84________ofhomework,_____(对比)tothem.中学学科网I’mfeelingratherannoyed.Canyoupleaseg_____mesomeadvice?85________YourstrulyEvanSmith解析：Deareditor,IamEvanfromCanada.Beingtheeldestchildinthefamilyhasits76.toysdisadvantages.Firstofall,Ihavetoshareallmy______(玩具)withmy77needyoungersisters.Ofcourse,theydon’tn____toreturnthefavorbecause78_Besides_I’mtotallyuninterestedintheirthings._______（除……之外）that,79_peace___theyarealwayshangingaroundme.Ijustcan’tgetamoment’sp_____80_on_____Atmeals,Ihavetoeatwhateveris_____theplateregardlessof81_their__thetaste.Mysistersonlytryonebiteifit’snot______favoritefood.82_when___Inaddition,w____itcomestopracticingourmusicalinstruments,.Ihaveto83_more_practice______thandoublethetime.Worstofall,Igetalargerquantity84comparedofhomework,_____(对比)tothem.中学学科网I’mfeelingratherannoyed.Canyoupleaseg_____mesomeadvice?85give____YourstrulyEvanSmith35\n【最新模拟】短文改错(一)文中有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Lastweekourclassvotedonwhatdoforourclassouting：visitingTangParadiseorgoonatriptotheNightZoo.WegirlwantedtogotoTangParadise,butsincewewereintheminority,welostfortheboys,whoallwantedtotheNightZoo.Wegetastudentdiscount,whatwasgreatbecausewestillhadenoughmoneytobuyahandbookabouttheparkaswellassomethingsatthegiftshop.TheNightZoowasscarybutagreatfun.Aswetooktheridethroughthepark'sdarkjungle,boyscouldseetheeyesofmanycreatureslookingus.Mostofanimalstheresleepwhenthereissunlightandwakeupatnight.(二)文中有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Alotofpeoplethoughtthatteachersneedtoloveourstudentsandthattheyneedtohaveanexpertknowledgeoftheirsubjects.Theseideasare,ofcourse,truetoacertaindegreeandtheyareperhapsalittleoftoosimple.Itisimpossibleforanyoneloveeveryonetheyknow,andteachersdealwiththelargenumberofstudentsovertheyears.Ontheotherhand,teacherscouldcertainlybeabletomaketheirstudentsfeelthattheyareconcerning.Agoodknowledgeofthesubjectisextremelyimportant,butequalimportantistheabilitytopassthatknowledgeontothestudentseffectively—ateacherneedtobetrainedintheskillsofteaching.(三)文中有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。35\n删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。DearEditor，I'mwritingtotellyouaboutafoodpoisoningaccident.Severaldaysago,myneighborateabagoffoodbuyingfromthemarket.Afterthemeal,theyhadstomachachesandtheirfacesturnpale.Lucky,oneoftheirfriendsfoundtheaccidentandimmediatelycalledanambulance,whichcarriedthemquicklytoahospital.Afterseveralhours'treatmenttheyfinallyescapedofdeath.Assomeillegalbusinessmenareonlyinterestedinmakingprofitstobecomerichquickly,weseldomcareaboutthenecessarysafetymeasuresorwhichhappenstoconsumers.Theymustbehavechargedbylaw.Meanwhile,Idohopewholesocietycanrealizetheimportantoffoodsafety.(四)文中有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Haveyoueverheardfromthesaying：AllworkandnoplaymakeJackadullboy？Whatthismeansisthatifyoustudyallthetimesyouwillbecomeaboringperson.Youmustgooutandhaveafunwithyourfriends,otherwiseyouwilllosehim.Noonewantstobefriendswithsomeoneonlytalkaboutworkandstudy.Perhapsyouhaveaconfidenceproblem.Pleasetryrememberwhattheworkyoudoisforyourselfbutnooneelse.Youdonothavetocompetewithyourclassmates.Noonecouldbehappierinstudyingsevendaysandsevennightsinaweek.(五)文中有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。DearMr.Black，We'reverygladlytohavereceivedyourmoneyandsomereadingmaterials.Thankyouverymuch.Wehadbeenstudyinghardsincewecamebacktoschool.Underthehelpofour35\nteachersandclassmates,wehavemadegreatprogressonourstudies.Soweoftenpraisedandencouragedbyourteachersandparents.Wehavemadeourmindstostudyhardthanbeforetolearneverysubjectwellinordertobeadmittedtokeyuniversityinthefuture.We'relookingforwardtoseeyou,butwehavenochancetogototheNanjingourselves.Sowehopeyoucanpostusaphotoofyourssoon.Bestwishes!Yous，LiHua(六)文中有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。IstillrememberhownervouslyIwasonmyfirstdayinthenewschoolthreeyearsago,whenIfounddifficulttofollowmyteacherinthefirstEnglishclass.TheteachersspokeEnglishthroughouttheclass,thatwastotallydifferentfromlessonsIhadtakenbefore.Inthemorningclassthenextday,theEnglishteachercametomewhileIamreadingthetextaloudasotherstudents.Afterlistentomeforawhile,shegavemeabigsmileandsaidhelikedmyvoiceverymuch.Thesmileshoneonthewholedayandthefollowingdays.Aweeklater,IwasvolunteeredtotakechargeofEngishstudyinmyclass,Thanktothecomfortingsmileinmyfirstmorningclass,Ibegantoconfident.答案：35\n(三)DearEiditor，I'mwritingtotellyouaboutafoodpoisoningaccident.Severaldaysago,myateabagoffoodfromthemarket.Afterthemeal,theyhadstomachachesandtheirfacespale.Luck，oneoftheirfriendsfoundtheaccidentandimmediatelycalledanambulance,whichcarriedthemquicklytoahospital.Afterseveralhours'treatmenttheyfinallyescapeddeath.Assomeillegalbusinessmenareonlyinterestedinmakingprofitstobecomerichquickly,seldomcareaboutthenecessarysafetymeasuresorhappenstoconsumers.Theymustbehave\[KG1]chargedbylaw.Meanwhile,Idohopewholesocietycanrealizetheoffoodsafety.(四)Haveyoueverheardthesaying：AllworkandnoplayJackadullboy？Whatthismeansisthatifyoustudyalltheyouwillbecomeaboring35\nperson.Youmustgooutandhavea\'funwithyoufriends,otherwiseyouwilllose.Noonewantstobefriendswithsomeoneonlyaboutworkandstudy.Perhapsyouhaveaconfidenceproblem.Pleasetryremembertheworkyoudoisforyourselfbutnooneelse.Youdonothavetocompetewithyourclassmates.Noonebeinstudyingsevendaysandsevennightsinaweek.(六)IstilllrememberhowIwasonmyfirstdayinthenewschoolthreeyearsago,whenIfounddifficulttofollowmyteacherinthefirstEnglishclass.TheteacherspokeEnglishthroughouttheclass,wastotallydifferentfromlessonsIhadtakenbefore.Inthemorningclassthenextday,theEnglishteachercametomewhileIreadingthetextaloudasotherstudents.Aftertomeforawhile,shegavemeabigsmileandsaidlikedmyvoiceverymuch.Thesmileshoneonthewholedayandthefollowingdays.Aweeklater,Iwas\'　volunteeredtotakechargeof35\nEnglishstudyinmyclass.tothecomfortingsmileinmyfirstmorningclass.Ibegantoconfident.七、Timeandtidewaitnoman.Mymotherisbecomingamiddleagewomanquietly.Shehadbeenbusyrunningafterusalltheyears.Myfatherisverybusyeverydayoutside.Buttheheavyburdenfallsonmymother'sshoulder.Becausemyschoolisfarfrommyhome,Ihavetogotoschoolbythetrainandmymotherseesmeoffatthestationeverytime.Ioftenchooseaseatwhereisclosetothewindow,soIcanseeher.However,Ialwayscan'thelpruntearsfrommyeyes.Allthebuildingsandpeopleoutsidethewindowdisappear.IwavegentletomymotherandIlookathertilltheviewofherbackdisappears.Uptonow,evenifheisbusy,shestilldoesitasusual.Theviewofmymother'sbackwillneverchangeinmyheart.八、Lastyear,Iwasaddictedwithplayingcomputergames.Ifoundithardtobreakingawayfromthebadhabit.Myteachertalkedtomyparentsaboutthis,andtheymademetopromisenottoplaythosegamesagain.Itriedhard,butIfoundituselessly.Themomentmyfingersleftthekeyboard,Iwouldfeelveryuncomfortable.BecauseIwasdeterminedtoforgetthegames,Istillcouldnotconcentrateonthelessonsgivinginclasses.Fortunately,psychologicaladvisorinourschoolcametoknowthis.Hetalks35\nwithmeabouthisproblem.Atlast,heofferedhisadvicesonhowtogetridoftheaddiction.NowIcanmanagetocontrolmyself.九、DearMary，I'vereceivedyouremail.Don'tworriedaboutme.I'mgettingonwellwithmyresearchworkinthelab.Butinmysurprise,yousayyouwillgiveuplearnEnglish.Thereasonisbecauseyouhavenotdonewellinitrecentlyandyouhaveloseinterest.I'mafraidIcan'tagreewithyou.IknowitisnoteasytolearnEnglish,anditiswidelyusedintheworldtodayanditwillbeimportanttoolinthefuture.Beside,itisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantinourdailylife.Iamsurethatifyoustudyhardly,youwillsucceed.I'mlookingforwardtohearingagoodnewsfromyou!Yours，LiHua【解析】DearMary，I'vereceivedyouremail.Don't或aboutme.I'mgettingonwellwithmyresearchworkinthelab.Butimysurprise,yousayyouwillgiveuplearEnglish.Thereasonisbecausyouhavenotdonewellinitrecentlyandyouhavelosinterest.I'mafraidIcan'tagreewithyou.IknowitisnoteasytolearnEnglish,anitiswidelyusedintheworldtodayanditwillbeimportanttoolinthefuture.Besid，itisbecomingmoreandmoreimportant35\ninourdailylife.Iamsurethatifyoustudyhardl，youwillsucceed.I'mlookingforwardtohearingagoodnewsfromyou!Yours，LiHua十、DearWeiFang，It'salongtimesinceIheardfromyouinlasttime.NowI'dliketotellyouaimpressivestorythathappenedonthefirstdayofmyteachingcareer.Aboy,LiMing,whomfatherdiedamonthago,waslateforschool.Hestoodoutsidetheclassroomsilent.Ismiledtohimandlethimcome.Afterawhile,hebegantocry.Seeingthis,Iwalkedtohimandaskedwhathashappened.Hetoldmehismotherwasillbuthehadtogetsomemedicineforher.Atthesametime,heapologizedtomeforhislateness.Movedbyhisword,Ipraisedhimforhisdeedsanddecidedtosingasongwasnamed“Mother”forthestudents.Fromthenon,Ibegantorealizeweshouldrespectourparentsanddidourbesttohelpthem.Doyouthinkso?I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.十一、Weseniorschoolstudentsdohavesomegrowingpains.Takesomeofmyclassmateforexample，theyoftenfeelupsetbecausetheexpectationsfromparents，endlesshomeworkandthepressureofexams.Theseseriousaffecttheirphysicalandmentalwellbeing.Therefore，Ithinkaboutitquitenecessarytotakemeasurestorelieve35\nthepains.First，thatisagoodideatohavehearttohearttalkswithourparents，tellthemwewon'tdisappointthem.Meanwhile，it'sadvisabletosparesometimetotakesomeexercisebesideourdevotiontothestudiessothatwewillalwaysfeelrelaxingandenergetic.Aslongaswewerefullyprepared，wearesuretoachievegreatsuccessinmyacademicperformance.35