专题检测卷(三十四)读写任务(建议用时:40分钟)Passage1阅读下面短文,然后按要求写一篇150个词左右的英语短文。Vivekopensupthewindowofhisroomandfeelsthefreshairofthemorning.Thisisaveryspecialdayinhislife.Heisenjoyinghimself,recollectingalltheeffortshehastakentoseethisdayinhislife.Vivek,anengineeringgraduate,wasrejectedfromselection12times.Aftereveryattempthelearnedsomethingnewabouthispersonalityandcorrectedhismistakes.Hebelievedthathisfailurewasnotdefeatbutanimportantsteptoachievinghisgoal.Hepreparedandpracticedwellandgotthroughinhis13thattempt(thenumberwhicheveryonebelievesisunlucky).Vivekhasprovedthatthereisnothingcalledluckbutsincereeffortiswhattakesonetosuccess.Vivek,fromallhispreviousexperiencehehadfacedduringtheselectionprocess,hadtakenitasachallengetoperformwellduringhistrainingperiod.Hebelievedinhimselfandcompletedhistraininginstyle.VivekwearsawhiteuniformandisreadyforthePassingOutParade.HehasmarchedallhislifetoperformattheIndianNavalAcademy.Vivek’sparentsarepresenttoseetheirchild/songettingcommissionedasanofficer.Theyarealsoproudoftheirsonforhisachievement.NowVivekmarchesupthestagetoreceivetheSwordofHonorAwardfromtheNavalChief.Vivek’sachievementissomethingreallygreatandthewholecrowdbecomesdelightedandexcitedwhenVivek’sstoryisnarratedtotheworld.Vivekhasgiventhismoral(寓意)totheworld:Aftereverydarknightthereisbrightsunlight.【写作内容】1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2.以约120个词就“坚持与成功”这个主题谈谈你的看法,内容包括:(1)坚持与成功的关系;(2)简述你或者你周围的人因为坚持而最后取得成功的例子;(3)如何才能做到坚持下去。【写作要求】1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Passage2(2022·揭阳一模)阅读下面短文,然后按要求写一篇150个词左右的英语短文。Onceuponatimeinalandfaraway,therewasawonderfuloldmanwholovedeverything.Animals,spiders,insects...-3-\nOnedaywhilewalkingthroughthewoodstheniceoldmanfoundacocoon(茧)ofabutterfly.Hetookithome.Afewdayslater,asmallopeningappeared;hesatandwatchedthebutterflyforseveralhoursasitstruggledtoforceitsbodythroughthatlittlehole.Thenitseemedtostopmakinganyprogress.Itappearedasifithadgottenasfarasitcouldanditcouldgonofarther.Thenthemandecidedtohelpthebutterfly,sohetookapairofscissorsandcutofftheremainingbitofthecocoon.Thebutterflythencameouteasily.Butithadaswollenbodyandsmall,shriveled(萎缩的)wings.Themancontinuedtowatchthebutterflybecauseheexpectedthat,atanymoment,thewingswouldenlargeandexpandtobeabletosupportthebody.Neitherhappened!Infact,thebutterflyspenttherestofitslifecrawlingaroundwithaswollenbodyandshriveledwings.Itwasneverabletofly.Whatthemaninhiskindnessandhastedidnotunderstandwasthattherestrictingcocoonandthestrugglerequiredforthebutterflytogetthroughthetinyopeningwerenature’swayofforcingfluidfromthebodyofthebutterflyintoitswingssothatitwouldbereadyforflightonceitachieveditsfreedomfromthecocoon.Sometimesstrugglesareexactlywhatweneedinourlife.Ifwewereallowedtogothroughourlifewithoutanyobstacles,itwouldcrippleus.Wewouldnotbeasstrongaswhatwecouldhavebeen.Andwecouldneverfly.【写作内容】1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2.以约120个词就“个人成长需要艰难生活的磨砺”这一话题发表你的看法,并包含以下要点:(1)你读了这个故事后的感受;(2)叙述当前父母溺爱子女的现象和由此造成的后果;(3)假如你是父母一方,你会如何磨砺自己的孩子?【写作要求】1.作文中可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案解析Passage1【参考范文】VivekhadfailedtwelvetimesbeforehefinallysucceededingainingtheadmissionintotheIndianNavalAcademyinhisthirteenthattempt,whichshowsthatperseverancecanhelpgetthroughallobstaclesandpavethewaytothefinalsuccess.Inreality,noonecanresistthesweettasteofsuccessbutsuccesscanhardlybeachievedwithoutperseverance.Inthishardstruggle,somemaysubmittothedifficulties,whileotherswithstrongwillpowerwillpersevereandmyuncleissuchanadmirableperson.Myunclehadtowalkforanhourtothetowntoreceivehismiddleschooleducation.Inthefirst-3-\nyear,hehadtenpeers.Injuniorthree,however,hehadtocoverthelongdistancealonebecausetheotherninefellowsquittedschoolforthegreathardships.Butmyuncleperseveredanddidn’tstophispursuitofidealandnowheisasuccessfulengineer.Weareboundtomeetchallengesonourlifejourney.Butaslongasweholdadreamthatcangreatlymotivateus,wewillmoveforward.Itisalsoadvisablethatwefulfillourdreambydividingitintosmallgoalssothatitmayseemmoreaccessible,whichcanhelpusperseveretilltheend.Passage2【参考范文】Akindoldmancutacocoonopeninordertolessenthepainofabutterflywhenhesawitstrugglingoutofthecocoon,onlytofindthatitcouldneverflybecauseofhishelp.Thestorysetsmethinking.Ourlifeismoreorlesslikethis.Sometimes,strugglesorobstaclesinourlifeareamustforourgrowth.Itisthesestrugglesorobstaclesthatincreaseourwillpowerandcontributetooursuccess.Withoutthesetrials,wecouldneverachieveourlifegoaljustasthebutterflydidinthestory.Nowadays,withonlyonechildinmostfamilies,parentsdowhatevertheycantosatisfythechild’sneedsandevendoforhimwhatshouldbedonebyhimself.Consequently,thechildisunabletolookafterhimselfwithouthisparents’presence.Toomuchcarefromparentsdepriveschildrenofchancestogrowstrongbyconqueringobstacles.Justasasayinggoes,“Flowersfromagreenhousecanneverwithstandastorm”.IfIwereaparent,Iwouldfirstkeephimwellinformedthatlifeisnevereasyandthatheshouldbereadytofaceanydifficulties.Besides,Iwouldexposehimtothehardshipsinlifeinsteadofprotectinghimfromdifficulties,providinghimwithchancestofightforhisbrightfuturebyconqueringchallenges.-3-
