优点英语读后续写：历险型Part1：经典例文（森林遇险）1Part2：历险类细节描写3①海上遇难3②洪水5③地震5④火灾5⑤受伤6⑥丛林逃生7Part3：历险类故事构造“三大套路”8套路一：恶劣环境要烘托8套路二：转折思维技巧好8套路三：万能升华要牢记9Part4：灵活应用10例1：山洞遇险10Part5：高考真题再现12真题1：爸爸与我森林遇险【2018年6月浙江卷】12真题2：旅游途中遇狼【2017年6月浙江卷】14Part1：经典例文（森林遇险）Brady wasarecentlyretiredsearchand rescue dog.HewasnothappyandmissedhisownerAlbecauseAlhadgoneoutonarescuemissionwithouthim.Al’snephewStevetookBradyalongwhenheandhis,优点英语friendZachwentonaovernighthike.ButsuddenlySteveandZachsmelledsomethingburningandtheyrealizedthatlightninghadsetthewoodson fire.Wind-blownflamehadleapedfromthetopofonetreetoanother.Thelongdrysummerhadturnedtheforestintoatinderbox(火绒箱)andthethunderstormwasn’thelpingmuch.Ithadmorewindandlightningthanrain.Zach pulled Steve’sarm.“Let’sgo!Wecanmakeitbackto theriver wecrossedtoday.”StevepulledBrady’sleash（皮带） andtheirheadsdownagainstthestrongfire-wind,theyhurrieddownthepaththeyhadfollowedearlier.Theairwas fullofsmoke，andpinebranchesbrokefromburningtreeswithacrispsound.Stevekepthiseyesontheroute.Alltheyhadtodowastomakeitdowntotheriver… Brady barkedasharpwarning.Aheadofthemlayadensecurtainofsmokeacrossthepath.They’dnevermakeitthroughthat.Theywouldhavetofindanother escaperoute.Thedogwaspullingathisleashtryingtodrawthemawayfromthesmoke.ThiswaswhatBradywas trained todo,andyetStevewasuneasy.Itseemedtohimtheyweremovingawayfromtheriver. Bradyliftedhisheadandsmelledthesmokywind.Suddenly,thedogranawayanddisappeared.Theboysyelledandshoutedforhim，buthedidn’tcomeback. Theyhadnochoicebuttoleavehimbehind.Heartsick,SteveandZachwentupaslope（斜坡）.Hecouldn’tblameBradyforpanickingandescaping.Hehimselfwantedtoruneventhoughhedidn’thaveacluewhichway.Theyhadn’tgonefarwhentherewasafamiliarbark,andBradycamerunningtowardhim.注意：1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：“Where’veyoubeen?”Stevecried.,优点英语Paragraph2： Bradyledthembackdowntheslopeandintothetrees.参考范文:Paragraph1“Where'veyoubeen?"StevecriedBradystoppeddirectlyinfrontofhimandstartedpushinghimbacktowardtheslopethey’djustclimbed.WhenStevestilldidn’tgetit,Bradygrabbedtheboy'sjeansandpulledharder.Themessagewasclear,butStevehesitated.OfcourseherememberedwhathisunclehadsaidaboutBradysavinghislife,butthathadbeenalongtimeago.Washestillsharpenoughtogetthemthroughthis?Bradypulledagain,urgently,“0K,bigguy,”Stevedecided...Paragraph2Bradyledthembackdowntheslopeandintothetrees.Severaltimesthebigdogstoppedtogethisescaperoute.Oftenhechangeddirection.Howlongthey’dwalkedStevehadnoidea.HejustheldontoBrady’sleashwithonehandandkeptputtingonefootinfrontoftheother.Hewasalmostnumbwhenheheardthewonderfulsoundofrushingwater.Theriver!Withayelltheboysranunsteadilyforwarduntiltheyjumpedincool,runningwater.“Brady,youdidit!”第1段：“你去哪儿了？史蒂夫叫道，布雷迪直接停在他面前，开始把他推回他们刚爬上去的斜坡。当史蒂夫仍然没有得到它，布雷迪抓住男孩的牛仔裤，并拉得更用力。信息很清楚，但史蒂夫犹豫了。他当然记得他叔叔说过布雷迪救他的命，但那是很久以前的事了。他还能让他们度过难关吗？布雷迪又紧急地拉了一下，“0K，大个子，”史蒂夫决定......第2段：布雷迪带领他们回到斜坡上，进入树林。这只大狗停了好几次，以获得他的逃跑路线。他经常改变方向。他们走了多久，史蒂夫不知道。他只是用一只手抓住布雷迪的皮带，继续把一只脚放在另一只前面。听到哗哗的水声，他几乎麻木了。河流！孩子们大喊一声，摇摇晃晃地向前跑，直到他们跳进凉爽的流水里。“布雷迪，你做到了！”,优点英语Part2：历险类细节描写①海上遇难天气*Theskyisdarkenedwithgloomyclouds.Lightingflashedacrossthesky,followedbyaclapofthunder.Minuteslater,therecameadownpour.*Thewindwashowlingandthewavessmackedrepeatedlyagainstherface.海上*Theseaboiledinthestorm.*Theangrywavescrashedagainstthesideoftheboat,withwatersplashinghereandthere.船*Leanedsideways*Theshipwasrockingupanddownintherestlesssea.*Thecrashingwavesfilledtheirboatwithwaterfasterthantheycouldemptyit.救援人*Butthen,asIlookedinthedistance,Idiscoveredaseriesofthreeorfourbigwavesheadingtowardstheshore.*Withoutthinking,Irandownintothestreet,holdingmybodyboardonthewayandshoutedatastrangertocallthepolice.,优点英语*Pattingtheirfacestowakethemup,Icontinuouslytoldthemtobestrong.遇难者*Shecalmeddowntokeeptherhymeofbreathingsothatshecouldbreatheevenly.*Ifeltextremelyexhausted（apparentlyworn-out）*Lookingatthevastsea,Ifeltasenseoffearsurgingthroughmywholebody.*Saltstingingmyeyes,IcouldhardlytellhowlongIcouldholdon.*ButIstillshoutedinmyhead:keepon.*Hesawanairplaneflyingoverhead.Butwithnoflashlight,hewasinvisibleinthevastocean.*Hetookoffhisyellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflaggedthemiftheycameback.*Insheerdesperation,Ifinallycaughtsightofsomeboatswithlifeguardsonthemheadingtowardsus.Thankyou,lord.*Quitesoon,Ifeltstrongarmspullmeoutoftheseaontotheboard.(摘自杭二中参考答案)救援过程*Thenhedraggedherupperfromthewater,.救人未遂*Heheldherhandtightlybutahugewaveseparatedthem.*Hefoughtthewavesandstrovetocatchher,butfailed,shewasdriftedaway.其他,优点英语*Energyreturningmagically,herosetohisfeetandtookimmediateaction.*Theywavedtheflagandscreamedforhelp.*BearGryllscaughtsightoftheshabbyboatandtwomeninrags.*TheyweretakenonboardandthankedEdwardoverandoveragain.*Fromthemon,hemadeuphismindnevertotakeanyrisksunlesshecouldensuretightsafety.Becauseitwassimplyhisstubbornconductsandhisignoranceof...that...②洪水*Thewaterkeptrising.Twohourspassed.Hedidnotdaretomoveaninchforfearofslipping.*Anothertwohourslater,henoticedthatthewaterlevelwentdownenoughthathecouldtryanescape.*Stifffromkeepinginonepositionforhours,heslowlyunfoldedhisbodies.*Cautiouslyandsteadily,hemadehiswayforwardtotheentrance.③地震*Deepcracksopenedupinthestreets.*Thewallcavedin.*Hugebuildingscollapsed,sendingcloudsofdustintotheair.*Theanimalsgrewrestlessasifinanticipationofadisaster.④火灾屋子,优点英语*Fannedbythewind,thehousewasbathedinanimmensestreamofflames.*Thehousewasbathedinanimmensestreamofflames.*Theroaringfireswallowedthewholehouse.烟*Densesmokeswirledandbillowedandthefumesmadeherchokeforamoment.*Thethicksmokecausedhimtostumbleblindlyaround,burnedhiseyes,andmadeitimpossibletobreathe.人的反应*Throughtheofficedoor,shesawflamesclimbingupthewall.*Bothofthemwerecoughingandtheireyeswerestinging.*Sheclungtoher,terrifiedbytheleapingflames.*Turning,hefoughtthroughthesmokeandranoutofthehouse.*Shieldinghernoisefromthesmoke,shepromptedhimtorunforsafety.*Whenheopenedthefrontdooroftheirflattoinvestigate,athickcloudofsmokegreetedhim.*Bythen,withtheirmouthschokedwithsmoke,bothofthemfeeltheheatengulfingeverything.⑤受伤*Sheturnedaround,onlytofindTimbeatentothegroundinextremedanger.*Afraidandmerelydesperate,sherushedtowardshim.*Withallherstrength,sheinstantlyseatedhimontothecar.,优点英语*Hepulledhertowardshimwithfullstrength.*Herbodywaslimpandshewasnotbreathing.*Hescoopedherintohisarmsandstruggledtofeet.伤情*Hewasattackedviolentlyandcoveredwithscratches.*Therewasatrickleofbloodfromthewound.治疗*Sheappliesacleantoweltothewoundandpressfirmlyonittostopthebleeding.*Washandstitchedthewound*Applysomemedicinetohiswound⑥丛林逃生意识到不见了*Hescannedaroundtheforestforher.“Eurus?”heshoutedagain.*herheartdroppedasherealizedthatshewasgone.*hesparednoefforttofindher,butitwasallinvain.*Thinkingbacktoallofthegoodtimesthathehadsharedwithher,herealizedthathelovedherandhewantednothingmorethanforhertocomeback.逃生*Hetriedtogetonfaster,buthecouldnotfindthewayoutofthebush.,优点英语*HewasgettingtiredbecauseCeilwastooheavytocarryforayoungboy.*Atlasthecameintoanopenspacewithalargepoolinthemiddle.*Hequicklysoakedhisclothes,fortheapproachingsmokecouldchokethem.救援*Heimmediatelyranoutforsearching,sbrunningafterhim.*Mypoorchildren,theflamecouldhaveburntthemtodeath.’thoughtsbdesperately.*Whiletheywalkedonwithouthope,therecameasweetvoice.”Dad!”itwasfromsb.*Sbjumpedwithjoyandhuggedhiskids.*Shecouldhearwatertrickingsomewhereatadistance.,优点英语Part3：历险类故事构造“三大套路”套路一：恶劣环境要烘托1.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats，gotonourhorses，andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains（慢慢地向山走去）.（17年11月浙江高考）2.NeverhadIseensuchalovelycreatureinmylife,soIfolloweditstrackwithoutthinkingtwice（不假思索地追随它的足迹）.（17年11月浙江高考）3.Intheprocessofseekingforit,Iwastotallyimmersedinthecharmofnature（完全沉浸在大自然的魅力中）.（17年11月浙江高考）4.What'sworse,hedidn'thaveanyfoodorwaterwithhim,letalonehiscellphoneorothersupplies（更不要说他的手机和其他日用品）.（江苏省如皋中学2021届高三第一学期教学质量调研试）5.Wewereinthemiddleofnowhere,wearingonlyunderwear,withoursuppliesburntintoashes（把我们的物品烧成灰烬）,includingourcellphones.（湖北省宜昌市第二中学2021届高三起点考试英语试题）套路二：转折思维技巧好例如，故事中我们迷路了，正在想办法如何脱离困境。Suddenlyitoccurredtousthatwecouldkeeptothetracktoguideusback.Butitwasgettingdarkeranddarker,thusmakingitincreasinglydifficultforustomakeouttheroad.（突然我们想到我们可以坚持小路引导我们回去。但天色越来越暗，使我们走道路越来越困难。）解析：这个例子属于“正”变“负”的模式。迷路后，想到了办法，属于“正向”，但是外在环境不允许：天色太晚。属于“负向”。,优点英语【素材积累】1.Ultimately,wewereback,safeandsound（安然无恙）.（17年11月浙江高考）2.Wejumpedintothewarmvehicleandtheforesterdroveustotherangerstation（开车送我们去巡逻站）,whereweweregivenclothesandwereabletocallourparents.（湖北省宜昌市第二中学2021届高三起点考试英语试题）套路三：万能升华要牢记需要牢记，历险类的文章不要无缘无故拔高主题，一般的主题词是“勇敢”、“克服困难”，当然还有一个万能的表达“这是一次难忘的经历”。万能句1：Thatdaywassounforgettablethatitwouldstayinmymemoryforever.那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆。遇到危险并且最终成功脱险的经历，想必对我们每个人来说一定是一生中难忘的经历。所以这个句子使用的场合还是挺多的。句子中使用了so...that的句式结构：如此......以至于。unforgettable是一个形容词，表示“无法忘记的”。万能句2：OnlythendidIrealizethatitwasbraverythatcanconquerwhateverdifficultycameintheway.直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。,优点英语遇到危险后，勇敢面对，才能解决问题。这个句子突出了“勇敢”这个核心，这在“脱险型”的故事里，是非常恰当的。这句话使用了倒装的结构和强调结构结合的方式，也属于高分亮点句。【素材积累】1.Sittingintheguestroom,Ifounditreallyblissfultobeaccompaniedbyourbelovedones（有我们所爱的人陪伴真的很幸福）.（17年11月浙江高考）2.Despitefeelingweak,Nicholaswasgenerallyinagoodcondition,andhewasreallyhappyashewascarriedbacktotheskiresorttoreunitewithhisfamily（和他的家人团聚）.（江苏省如皋中学2021届高三第一学期教学质量调研试）3.Asourvanchugged((发动机缓慢运转时)发出突突声)downthefreeway,Ithoughtthistripmightnotbesobadafterall.Good-bye,regularoldsummervacation.Hello…TripofaLifetime（一生一次的旅程）?（2021.03十校联盟续写讲评）Part4：灵活应用例1：山洞遇险阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Twomonthsago,myfriendLisa,HarryandI,plannedtodosomethingadventurous,sowedecidedtoexploreadeepcaveintheoutskirtofourcitywithsomefood,water,torchesandmostimportantlyourcellphones.Butthingswerenotgoingwell.Wecouldnotfindanyvehicletodropusthere.Atlonglast,wemanagedtofindataxiwhichtookustotheoutskirtofthecity.AnotherevidenceofbadluckwasthatHarryhadlefthiscellphoneathome.Afterwegotoutofthetaxi,someofthelocalstoldusthewaytothecave.Thecavelookedveryattractiveyetstillmysterious:thecavewassodark,andthetinysoundsmadebytheinsectsandanimalscouldbeheardproperly,pullingusintothecavewithsomeunknownsupernaturalpower.Asweweremovingforwardwemademarksontherocksalongourpathtoremindusoftheexitofthecave.Andwealwayskeptourmobilesinswitchonmodetocontacteachotherincasewe,优点英语gotseparatedandevenworse,lostinthecave.Asweweremovingforward,Harryfeltthatsomebodywasfollowingourfootstepsbuthelefthisintuitiontoajoke.Whenwereachedinthedeepofthecave,welostourwayandgraduallythefogspreadeverywhereandwewerenotabletoseeeachotherproperly.Allofusgotveryscaredofwhatwashappeningaroundus.Suddenly,wenoticedthatHarrywasnotwithusandthenwevaguelyheardashoutfromthedepthofthecaveandwethoughtitwasHarry,sowestartedsearchingforhim.Butourtorcheswereleftnouseinsuchthickfog.续写词数应为150左右Paragraph1:Sowegropedourwaytowardsthedirectionoftheshout._______________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:AfterwereunitedwithHarry,wetriedtofindthewayout._______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Sowegropedourwaytowardsthedirectionoftheshout.Frightenedaswewere,westillmadeupourmindtosearchforHarry.Hardlycanweseeanythinginthecompletelydarksituation,sowehadtofeelourwaytosearchHarrywithallstrength.Slowlyandcautiouslymovingforward,weheldourhandstightlyinordernottobeseparated.Withthevoiceapproaching,werealizedwewouldmeetHarryimmediately.Fortunately,whenfindingHarrysittingontheground,wesighedwitharelief.AfterwereunitedwithHarry,wetriedtofindthewayout.Withouthesitation,wedecidedtohuntforthesemarkswhichwehadmadebefore.“Igetit!”Harryscreamed.Lookingupquickly,wefoundtheseclearmarkseasily.Itwaswiththehelpofthesemarksthatwequicklyfoundtheexit.Whenwalkingoutofthecave,weknewweweresaved.Fromthisexperience,whatwelearntwasthatitwasdangeroustoexploretheunknownwordwithoutafullydetailedplan.【解析】,优点英语【分析】本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了作者和小伙伴们一起去探索一个位于城市郊区的山洞。山洞里面太黑又有雾，所以Harry和我们走散了。当听到Harry的呼救后，我们一起找到了Harry，最终逃离了山洞。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“所以我们摸索着朝着呼喊的方向走去。”可知，第一段可描写我们是如何在山洞中寻找Harry的。②由第二段首句内容“我们和Harry重逢后，我们试图找到出路。”可知，第二段可描写我们利用之前所做的记号逃离山洞的过程。2.续写线索：听到声音——寻找Harry——找到Harry——寻找出口——逃离山洞——领悟感受3.词类激活行为类①寻找：huntfor/searchfor/find②大叫：scream/cry③接近：approach/drawnear情感类①小心：cautious/careful②害怕：scared/frightened【点睛】[高分句型1].Frightenedaswewere,westillmadeupourmindtosearchforHarry.(运用了as引导让步状语从句时的倒装结构)[高分句型2].Withouthesitation,wedecidedtohuntforthesemarkswhichwehadmadebefore(运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型3].Itwaswiththehelpofthesemarksthatwequicklyfoundtheexit.(运用了强结构),优点英语Part5：高考真题再现真题1：爸爸与我森林遇险【2018年6月浙江卷】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning.UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Don’tbelateforsupper,”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!”“OK!”mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.,优点英语注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________PossibleVersion:Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.DadandIfounditwassocutethatwedecidedtochaseit.Afterawhile,wewerecompletelylostintheforest.Therewasnothingleftinoursightbutthetrees.“Wemaynotbeabletomakeitbacktothefarmhouseintimeforsupper.”Ithoughttomyself.Afteraseriesoffruitlessattemptstofindawayout,wefelthungryandtired.Paragraph2:,优点英语Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Wegotstuckintheforest.Andanunexpectedshoweraddedtothedifficultyofusinfindingawayhome,forallthetrackswehadmadedisappearedbecauseoftherain.Iwasalmostontheedgeofbreakingdownwhenmyfathersaid,“Don’tworry,myson.Irememberthereisarivernearthefarmhouse.Findtheriverandwewillbebackhome.”Finally,wefoundtheriverandgotbacktothehousealongit.Needlesstosay,weatealatedinner.真题2：旅游途中遇狼【2017年6月浙江卷】第二节读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Onabright,warmJulyafternoon,MacHollan,aprimaryschoolteacher,wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair,buttheyhadencouragedMactocarryon,andtheywouldcatchupwithhimsoon.AsMacpedaled(骑行)alongalone,hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.“Man,that’sabigdog!”hethought.Butwhenhelookedtotheside,hesawinstantlythatitwasn’tadogatall,butawolf,quicklycatchingupwithhim.Mac’sheartjumped.Hefoundouthiscanofbearspray.Withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMac’srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,itwasbyhissideagain.ThenitattackedthebackofMac’sbike,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellbackonlytoquicklyrestartthechase(追赶).Macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoslowdown.Hesawasteepuphillclimbbeforehim.Heknewthatoncehehitthehill,he’dbeeasycaughtupandthewolf’steethwouldbetearingintohisflesh.,优点英语Atthismoment,PaulandBeckyweredrivingtheircarontheirwaytoAlaska.Theydidn’tthinkmuchofitwhentheysawtwocyclistsrepairingtheirbikeonthesideoftheroad.Abitlater,theyspottedwhatthey,too,assumedwasadogrunningalongsideamanonabike.Astheygotcloser,theyrealizedthatthedogwasawolf.Macheardalargevehiclebehindhim.Hepulledinfrontofitasthewolfwascatchingupfast,justadozenyardsawaynow.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1Thecarabrubtlystoppedinfrontofhim._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Possibleversions:1Paragraph1:,优点英语Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Macjumpedoffhisbicycleandrushedtothedoorofthecar.ButbeforeMaccouldopenthedoor,thewolfhadcaughtupandjumpedtoattack.Luckily,themagicspraysavedMacathirdtime.Seeingthewolfbackoff,Paulquicklyunlockedthedoor,andthefrightenedmanclimbedintothecarinnotime,shuttingthedoorbehindhimheavily.BeckylookedoutofthebackwindowandsawthewolfstandingoverMac’sbicycleasifitwereakill.Soonafter,theanimalranoff.Paragraph2:Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Macgotoutofthecarandhuggedhisfriends.“ItwasreallyanightmareandIthoughtIwasgoingtodie,”saidMacinashakyvoice,tearsgatheringinhiseyes.Forhim,lifecouldneverbemorebeautiful.AftersayinggoodbyetoPaulandBeckywithgratitude,thethreemencontinuedtheirtrip,agreeingnevertoseparateagain.(续写词数：158)
