优点英语读后续写：亲情类Part1：经典例文（送花）1Part2：亲情类故事构造“三板斧”3第一板斧：冲突构造（误会、犯错等）3第二板斧：冲突化解（解释、道歉、弥补、回忆等）4第三板斧：亲情升华（诚实、珍惜等）6Part3：亲情类场景描写（七大关系）7一、母子关系7二、父子关系9三、父女之间12四、姐妹之间13五、兄弟之间14六、祖孙之间15七、夫妻之间16Part4：灵活应用:17例1：圣诞节的礼物17例2：爸爸带我体验生活19Part5：高考真题再现：母亲节的惊喜21,优点英语Part1：经典例文（送花）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。RecentlyIgraduatedfromhighschool,andasagiftIreceivedahugehunchofflowers,40tobeexact!IhadsomanythatIdidn'tknowwhattodowiththem.Thenextweekendmynieceandnephew,SueandMike,aged6and7,cameandsuddenlyIhadanidea.Imightletthemgiveouttheseflowerstopeopletheymetonthestreet,andinthiswaytheycouldlearnhowtobefriendlytoothers.SoItoldthemaboutmyplanandexplainedthattheseflowerswouldmakepeoplefeelhappyandsmile.Theylovedtheideaandwereeagertohaveatry.Soatoncewetookeverysingleflowerandtiedasmilecardtoit.Wethenwenttothestreetwiththeflowers.Thefirstflowerwenttoapoliceman.Assoonasshesawthepoliceman,mynieceranuptohimandhandedhimaflower.Hissmilewassobig,butherswasevenbigger!Innotime,wenearedtheendofourflowers.ItwaslunchtimeandwewenttoSubwayforlunch.Therethekidsgaveaflowertothewaitress,whowasreallyexcitedtoreceivetheflower.Aswewereeatingourlunch,thewaitresscameuptothekidswithtwobigchocolatecookies!Shesaidthechocolatecookieswereforthemandthatshereallylikedtheflower!Astheyatethecookies,mynieceandnephewlookedatmewiththebiggestsmilesIhadeverseen.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Withjustoneflowerleft,Isaiditshouldbegiventothepersonwhoneededitmost._______________________________________________________________________________Itturnedouttobeagreatdayforus._______________________________________________________________________________【答案】WithjustoneflowerleftIsaiditshouldbegiventothepersonwhoneededitmost.Justthen,mynephewcaughtsightofanoldwomaninawheelchairnearby.“Ithinkshe’stheverypersonfortheflower.Shelivesahardlifebecauseofbadhealth.Sheneedssmilesmost,”saidmy,优点英语nephew.Withthesewords,mynephew,followedbymyniece,tookthefloweruptoher.Youcanimaginehowhappytheoldwomanlooked!Shesmiled,andgaveeachofthekidsabigkiss.Itturnedouttobeagreatdayforus.Wespreadalotofsmilesbygivingoutflowers,andreceivedalotofsmilesinreturn.Theflowersnotonlymadeusfeelgoodaboutourselves,butalsomade40otherpeoplefeelhappy.Ifeelthereisnothingmoreenjoyablethanbeingfriendlytopeople.Meanwhile,thekidslearnedanimportantlessonintheprocess.Infact,theycan’twaituntilnexttimetheyhavesuchachanceagain.Theywanttogiveoutmoreflowers!【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，作者高中毕业时收到了很多鲜花，他打算让侄子侄女们把花送给别人，用这样的方式让他们知道如何对别人友好。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：只剩下一朵花了，我说应该给最需要的人……，所以应该写谁是最需要这朵花的人。要详细描述为什么这个人是最需要这朵花的，同时要刻画当这个人收到花时的感受与表现等。第二段开头是：这对我们来说是伟大的一天。本段应该写我和侄子侄女通过送花这件事的感受及明白的道理。【点睛】续写部分描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：catchsightof；more…than；can’twait；giveout等高级词汇；Withthesewords，followedbymyniece复合结构作状语等高级句式。Part2：亲情类故事构造“三板斧”第一板斧：冲突构造（误会、犯错等）只有冲突才能体会亲情的弥足珍贵。冲突原因大致有：疏于陪伴、理念不合（代沟）、误会等。1、生气1.我妈妈瞪着我，这是在我有一个重组家庭之前她从未做过的事。,优点英语“你可以捡起来的。”她说。“那才对。”（本可以，虚拟语气）Mymotherglancedatme.SomethingsheneverdidbeforeIhadastepfamily.“Youcouldhavepickeditup.”shesaid.“Thatwouldhavebeenthekindthingtodo.”2.他生气地握紧拳头，但是弟弟却激动地挥着手。Hefoldedhisfistangrily,buthisyoungerbrotherwavedhishandsexcitedly.3.Jackson试着说什么，但Carter太生气了，他一个字也听不进去。（对比，夸张）Jacksonkeptsayingsomething,butsoangrywasCarterthathecouldn’tevenhearaword.2、后悔1.我意识到我裙子上的蝴蝶结打得很不好。我本应该请妈妈帮忙的。IrealizedhowpoorlyItiedthestringonmyskirtwhichwasoverleggings.Ishouldhaveaskedmomforhelp.3、内疚1.一想到我对他所做的一切，遗憾和内疚就像没休止的潮水一样向我袭来。ThinkingaboutwhatIhaddonetohim,regretandguiltoverwhelmedmelikeendlesstides.2.每当我想到亨利湿了的书，我的脸都会变红了。WheneverIthoughtofHenry’swetbook,myfaceturnedred.4、烦恼WatchingShirley’ssmilefadingaway,Peterfrowned.看着雪莉的微笑渐渐消失，彼得皱起了眉头。（2020-2021年汕头市高三第一学期质量监测）5、伤心当她望过她三岁妹妹的桌子时，Amanda感觉她的心情像天空一样灰暗。（比喻）,优点英语Amandafeltasgrayastheskyoutsidewhenshelookedacrossthetableatherthree-year-oldsister.6、犯错1.Tocoverhisterribleaction（为了掩盖他糟糕的行为，不定式作状语）,theterrifiedboygluedthepiecestogetherhastilyandputthevasebacktoitsplace.（2021广一模）2.Fearingpunishment（害怕惩罚，现在分词作状语）,thesuddenlyinspiredboysaidthataneighbour’scatjumpedinfromthewindowandhecouldn’tdriveitawaynomatterhowhardhetried.（2021广一模）3.Glancingatthechocolateswithhesitation,(犹豫地看着着巧克力,非谓语),theboytimidlyraisedhisheadbeforehismother.（2021广一模）第二板斧：冲突化解（解释、道歉、弥补、回忆等）1、道歉1.“对不起，”他说到，轻轻的摸摸Jackson的头。（2021.4湖丽衢三地联考）“I’msosorry.”hesaid,gentlypettingJackson’shead.2.他放下手，小心翼翼的看了Carter一眼，然后低下了头。（动作链）（2021.4湖丽衢三地联考）Heputdownhishand,glancedcautiouslyatCarterandloweredhishead.3.Tohersurprise,shesmiledatmeandexpressedherapologyforignoringmyloneliness（为她忽略我的孤独道歉）aswellasmydifficultywithEnglishcommunication.（2021年沈阳市一模）2、原谅1.他妈妈把手指放在他嘴唇让他停止说话，在他额头上吻了一下，然后走出了书房。（动作链）（2021广一模）,优点英语Hismothersilencedhimbygentlyputtingherfingeronhislips，gaveasoftkissonhisforeheadandwalkedoutofthestudy.3、开心1.“我想给你一个惊喜！”他指向一个包装精美的盒子，眼里闪烁着光芒。（with结构）（2021.4湖丽衢三地联考）“Iwantedtosurpriseyou!”hepointedataneatlywrappedboxwithhiseyesgleaming.2.看到他的家人围坐着，和谐地待在一起，卡特感觉到一种幸福感。（doing非谓语）（2021.4湖丽衢三地联考）Seeinghisfamiliessittingtogetherandstayingtogetherharmoniously,Caterfeltasurgeofhappiness.3.欢快的歌唱飘荡在房间里，两姐妹沉浸在音乐的美中。（独立主格）（2020.11温州一模）Cheerfulsingingfloatingintheroom,thetwosistersimmersedthemselvesinthebeautyofthemusic.4、感激1.如果没有亨利的帮助，我就不会顺利地完成我的演出了。（2021年南通市二模）ButforHenry’shelp,Iwouldn’thavefinishedmyperformancesmoothly.2.Ilookedather,tearsofloveandgratitudewelling(well)upinmyeyes.(独立主格结构)（2021年沈阳市一模）3.Afterwards,itwasmyturntogiveasmalllecture,inwhichIexpressedmysinceregratitudetomymomandfriends,bowing(bow)tothemseveraltimes.（定语从句，非谓语）,优点英语5、回忆1.在这时，毫无预料地，Carter突然想起Billy躺在地上哭的回忆，一直在他脑海回旋，提醒着他一些事情。（无灵主语句；doing非谓语；and连接两个同时进行的动作）（2021.4湖丽衢三地联考）Atthatmoment,unexpectedly,thememoryofthesightofBillycryingonthegroundoccurredtoCarter,hoveringinhismindandremindinghimsomething.2.看着Jackson，Carter忍不住想象他的弟弟花整天小心涂好那辆车的情景。（2021.4湖丽衢三地联考）LookingatJackson,Cartercouldn’thelpimagininghislittlebrotherspendingthewholedaycarefullypaintingthecar.（2021.4湖丽衢三地联考）3.“IjustwishIknewhowtohelpher,”Amandasaidtoherself,thinkingofLi’sfrightenedeyes（想到Li害怕的双眼）.（2020.11温州一模）第三板斧：亲情升华（诚实、珍惜等）1.Fromthenon,thethreechocolatesrangthealarminhishearteverytimeheintendedtolie,remindinghimtobehonest提醒他要诚实(非谓语).（2021广一模）2.Inoddedfirmly,knowingaflowerofkindnessandfriendshipbegantoblossom（善良和友谊之花开放）inbothofourhearts.（2021年南通市二模）3.ThisexperiencetransformedmyattitudetowardsHenryandourrelationshiphasalsobeenharmonious（我们的关系变得和谐）sincethen.（2021年南通市二模）4.正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会用心珍惜它的。（2021年南通市二模）ItwasHenry’skindnessthatmademefeelthewarmthfromourfamily.Iwilltreasureitwithallmyheart.,优点英语Part3：亲情类场景描写（七大关系）一、母子关系1.Doyoumeanthateveflowerhasitsownbeautyaskedmymotherthoughtfully.Inoddedwithouthesitation,asifasecondwastedcoulddeprivethedandelionsoftheilife."Thesametoyou,"sheadded,hervoicesoft""Noteveryonecanbearose,anditisalsoanhonortobeadandelion."Knowingthatmymotherhadrealizedmypain,ItookoffthemaskthatIhadwornforthewholelunchtimeandpouredoutmyuneaseheartilyShelistenedtomepatientlyandpattedmeonthebacktenderly.Suddenlyshestopped,asiftosaysomething.“你的意思是那朵夜花有它自己的美丽吗？”妈妈沉思地问。我毫不犹豫地点点头，仿佛一秒钟的浪费就能剥夺蒲公英的生命。“你也一样，”她又说，“不是每个人都能成为一朵玫瑰，成为蒲公英也是一种荣誉。”我知道妈妈已经意识到了我的痛苦，我摘下了我整个午餐时间戴的面具，尽情地倾诉我的不安。她耐心地听着我的话，温柔地拍了拍我的背。突然，她停了下来，好像在说什么。"Butyouwillbeabeautifulnarrator."Momsaid.SheremindedmeofhowfluentlyIcoulddelivermypartathome.ItwasatthattimethatIunderstoodthatmaybeIwasmoresuitableforarolebackstagelikeanarrator.Fromthenon,Ipracticedmylinesheartandsoulwithmymotheratlunchtimeforweeks.AndtheperformanceapproachedultimatelyStandingbackstage,nervousnesscamefloodinginme.Whatencouragedmetoovercomeitwastheinspirationfromthebeautifulyellowdandelions.Theperformancethatnightwaseventuallyabigsuccess.Hearingthethunderousapplause,Itookprideinmyroleandfirmlybelievedthatevenadandelionhaditsownbeauty.,优点英语“但你将会成为一个美丽的叙述者。”妈妈说。她让我想起了我在家里可以多么流利地扮演我的角色。正是在那个时候，我明白也许我更适合像叙述者这样的角色。从那时起，我在午餐时间和母亲一起练习了好几周。演出最终站在后台，紧张情绪涌上心头。鼓励我克服它的是灵感来自于美丽的黄色蒲公英。当晚的演出最终大获成功。听到雷鸣般的掌声，我为自己的角色感到自豪，坚信甚至蒲公英也有自己的美。2."Doyoumeanthateveryflowerhasitsownbeauty?"askedmymotherthoughtfully.Mylipspartedwithnothinguttered,myeyesdroopedtotheground.Thedandelionblossomspreadintheair,lightandallsilent.Ifeltasinkinginmyheart,andmyheartinmythroat.Amixedsentimentoffearanddesireclunguponmymind."Similarly,everyindividualhashisownbeauty,"saidmymotherinacomfortingvoice.Myeyebrowsfurrowed,myfistsclenched,Imurmuredtimidly,"butIfailedplayingtheprincessforthelinesdespiteallthepractice."“你是说每一朵花都有自己的美丽吗？”妈妈若有所思地问。我的嘴唇张开了，什么也没说，我的眼睛下垂到地上。蒲公英的花朵在空中蔓延开来，淡淡的，所有的寂静。我感到我的心在下沉，我的心在我的喉咙。一种恐惧和欲望混合在我的脑海里。“同样，每个人都有自己的美丽，”母亲安慰地说。我的眉毛皱了起来，我的拳头紧握着，我胆怯地喃喃地说，“但我没能在所有的练习中扮演公主。“"Butyouwillbeabeautifulnarrator,"momsaid.Myglancesteadilyrestingontheblossom,whenIraisedmyhead,Ihardlyresistedtheimpulsetotakeaglimpse.Inaninstantoureyesmet,anditwasareflectivelook.Thetenderbreezeofearlyspringblewmycheeksflush.Momloweredherleanshoulder,reachedoutandpattedonmyhead.Agentlesmileslippedfromherlips."Youarethedandelionblossom,thebestnarratorinourgarden."Afaintwhispercameintomyear.Theperfumeofgrassesandbushesand,allflowersscentedthemellowatmosphere.“但你将会成为一个美丽的叙述者，”妈妈说。我的目光坚定地停留在花朵上，当我抬起头来时，我几乎无法抗拒要瞥一眼的冲动。刹那间，我们的眼睛相遇了，神情也在沉思。早春的微风使我的脸颊红晕了。妈妈放下她瘦削的肩膀，伸出手来拍了拍我的头。她嘴里露出一丝温柔的微笑。“你是蒲公英的花朵，是我们花园里最好的叙述者。”我耳边传一阵耳语。草和灌木丛的芳香，所有的花朵都散发着柔和的气氛。,优点英语3.Approachingthedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.Whensheknockedatthedoor,shefoundthedoorwaslockedandhermotherwasnotin.Tiredandsad,shesatdowninfrontofthehouse."Wherecouldmymotherbe?"shewondered,"Wasshestilangrywithme?"Again,thesceneofthequarrelappearedinhermind.Sherememberedherrudenesstohermother.Realizingthatallthescoldingfromhermotherwasduetothefactthathermotherreallycaredalotabouther,shefeltratherashamed,andtearsbegantorolldownhercheeks.走近门口，珍妮深吸了一口气。当她敲门时，她发现门被锁着，她的母亲不在。她又累又伤心，坐在房子前面。“我妈妈在哪儿？”她想，“她还在生我的气吗？”再次，争吵的场景出现在她的脑海里。她记得她对母亲的粗鲁。意识到母亲所有的责骂都是因为她母亲真的很关心她，她感到相当羞愧，眼泪开始从她的脸颊滚下来。Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback.Sheraisedherheadandsawthefamiliarfaceofhermother."Hereyoucome!I'vebeenlookingforyou,shesaid,tiredandrelieved.Jennycouldn'thelpthrowingherselfintohermother'sarms."Mum,I'msosorryandthankyouforallyouhavedoneforme."Sheexpressedhersincereapologyandgreatgratitude.Hearingthis,hermothersmiledpattingherbackgently.她的头发上轻轻的一碰，使她的思想恢复了。她抬起头，看到了母亲那张熟悉的脸。”“你来了！我一直在找你，她说，累了，松了一口气。珍妮忍不住扑进妈妈的怀里。“妈妈，我很抱歉，谢谢你为我所做的一切。”她表示真诚的道歉和极大的感谢。听到这话，妈妈笑着轻轻拍了拍她的背。二、父子关系1.,优点英语Theman,seeingthattheboyalreadyhadmoneystartedtogetangryagain."Howcanyoubesoselfish?Whydoyouwantmoremoneysinceyoualreadyhavethesebills?"thefathercouldhardlyholdhisangerbackandinquiredwithtwoeyebrowsknittedintoone.Withheld-backtearsinhiseyes,thelittleboyslowlyandcarefullycountedouthismoney,andthenlookedupathisfather,replying,"BecauseIdidn'thaveenoughbefore,butnowIdo."withbigblueeyes]shiningwithtears.那个男人，看到那个男孩已经有钱了，又开始生气了。“你怎么这么自私？既然你已经有了这些账单，你为什么还要更多的钱？”父亲几乎不能忍住他的愤怒，用两个眉毛编织成一个。小男孩含着泪水，慢慢地小心地数出他的钱，然后抬头看着他的父亲，回答说：“因为我以前没有足够的钱，但现在我有了。”带着蓝色的大眼睛]眼泪闪闪发光。Notknowingwhathissonmeant,thefatherjuststoodthere,waitingforhisboy'sexplanation.Wipingawayhistearsandaninnocentsmileappearingonhisface,theboyrequestedinarelievedvoice,"Daddy,Ihave$20now.CanIbuyanhourfromyou?Pleasecomehomeearlytomorrow.Iwanttohavedinnerwithyou."Hearingtheboy'ssmallbutsincererequest,thefathercouldn'tholdbackhistears.Realizinghewastoobusywithhisbusinesstosparesometimewithhisbelovedones,hegatheredhissonintohisarmsandapologizedagainandagain,"Sorry.,andIpromiseI'Ilbebackearlytomorrow."他不知道儿子的意思，父亲就站在那里等着儿子的解释。男孩擦去眼泪，脸上露出天真的微笑，用松了一口气的声音问道：“爸爸，我现在有$20了。我能从你那里买到一个小时吗？请明天早点回家。我想和你共吃晚饭。”听到男孩小而真诚的请求，父亲忍不住流住了眼泪。意识到自己忙了，没有时间和心爱的人在一起，他把儿子抱在怀里，一遍又一遍地道歉：“抱歉。我保证明天早点回来。”2.Thebirddroppedlikearock,onewingfloppingbehindasitfell.Ihearditthumpintothedirt.Beforeloweringthegun,IrealizedwhatI'ddone~I'dkilledmyfirstanimal."Ohno,"My,优点英语stomachwastiedinknotsandIprayed,"OhGod,pleasedon'tletitbedead."Thebirdlaytherewithbloodstreamingfromitsbeak,featherslargeandsmallscatteredabout.Ireachedoutandrolleditover,butitsheaddroopedlifelesslytotheside.Afterburyingit,Ihurriedhome,hidingmyBBguninthecloset.那只鸟像石头一样落下，一只翅膀在它落下的时候扑向后面。我听到它砰的一声撞到泥土里。在放下枪之前，我意识到我做了什么~我杀了我的第一只动物。“哦，不，”我的胃结成结，我祈祷，“哦，上帝，请不要让它死了。”鸟儿躺在那里，鲜血从它的喙流出来，羽毛大大小小散落在周围。我伸手把它翻过来，但它的头毫无生气地垂到一边。埋了它之后，我急忙回家，把我的BB枪藏在壁橱里。Whenmydadgothomethatevening,heaskedmehowmydaywas.Ihesitated,andwasmomentarilyuneasythatguiltcrossedmyface.Mydad,amanofkeenperception,quicklywentintoconfrontationmode,askingwhatreallyhappened.Ireplied,asifIhadtochokethewordsoutofmythroat,tearsstreamingdownmyface.Hedidn'tsayanythingbutjustlookedatme,handrestingonmyshoulder.Thatevening,mydadmademevowtoneverkillathingagain,explainingthatonceIgotboredofanimals,thenexttargetcouldbesomethingevenmorepriceless.那天晚上我爸爸回家时，他问我今天过得怎么样。我犹豫了一下，一时感到不安，内疚掠过我的脸。我的父亲，一个敏锐的感知，很快进入对抗模式，问到底发生了什么。我回答说，好像我不得不掐住喉咙里的话，眼泪从我脸上流下来。他什么也没说，只是看着我，手放在我的肩膀上。那天晚上，我爸爸发誓再也不杀任何东西，解释说一旦伊戈特厌倦了动物，下一个目标可能是更无价的东西。2.Thebirddroppedlikearock,onewingfloppingbehindasitfell.Asurgeofexcitementranthroughme,asifIweretheking.LoweringtheBBgun,Icameuptocheckmytarget.Itwassill,优点英语alive,withonlyonewingbleeding."WhynottakeithomesothatIcanplaywithit?"Ipickedupthelittlecreatureandwenthome.WhenIplaceditonthedesk,itwasstrugglingtostandupbutinvain.Atthesight,Ibegantofeelalittleuneasy.Withthenightfalling,Iwasonpinsandneedles.那只鸟像石头一样掉了下来，一只翅膀在它掉下来的时候向后面。一阵兴奋从我身上掠过，仿佛我是国王。放下BB枪，我来检查我的目标。它还活着，只有一只翅膀在流血。“为什么不把它带回家让我玩呢？”我抱起小生物，回家了。当我把它放在桌子上时，它挣扎着站起来，但徒劳无功。一看，我就开始觉得有些不安。夜幕降临，我如坐针毡。Whenmydadgothomethatevening,heaskedmehowmydaywas.Iwasdeadsilent.Dadmerelyrestedhishanduponmeandwaitedwithasoftlookinhiseye."I.."myvoicecrackedandIclearedmythroat."Ishotabird.""Oh?"hereplied,hisexpressionunchanging."Whereisthebirdnow?"Iledhimtothedesk.Seeingthebird,dadsmootheditsfeatherswithhisgentlefingersandfixedthebrokenwingwithabandage.Severaldayslater,thebirdwasfullyrecovered.Seeingitflyaway,IrealizedIshouldusetherealpowertoprotectratherthanhurtlives.那天晚上我爸爸回家后，他问我今天过得怎么样。我沉默了。爸爸只是把手放在我身上，温柔地等待着。“我。”我的声音裂开了，我清了清嗓子。“我射杀了一只鸟。”“哦吗？”他回答说，他的表情始终保持不变。“这只鸟现在在哪里了？”我把他领到桌子前。看到这只鸟，爸爸用它温柔的手指抚平了它的羽毛，用绷带固定着折断的翅膀。几天后，这只鸟就完全康复了。看到它飞走了，我意识到我应该使用真正的力量来保护生命，而不是伤害生命。,优点英语三、父女之间Itwasalongtripbacktotheoffice.Ipickedupthewastebasketandpouredthecontentsonmydesk.Iwascarefullysortingitallout.Afterwasremovingthedirtoffandsprayingthewholethingwithbreathfreshenertokillthesmelloffood.Icarefullysmoothedoutthebagandputthetreasuresinside.Icarriedthewholethinghomegingerly,likeaninjuredkitten.Thatevening,IreturnedittoMolly.Afterdinner,IaskedMollytotellmeaboutthestuffinthebag,andsoshetookitalloutapieceatatimeandplacedtheobjectsinarowonthediningroomtable.Everythinghadastory,amemory,orwasattachedtodreamsandimaginaryfriendsJmanagedtosay"Isee"verywiselyseveraltimeAd_asa_matteroffact,Ididsee.这是回办公室的长途旅行。我拿起废纸篓，把东西倒在桌子上。我仔细整理了一下。在清除污垢后，用呼吸清新剂喷洒整个东西来杀死食物的气味。我小心地把袋子弄平，把宝藏放进去。我小心翼翼地把整件事带回家，就像一只受伤的小猫。那天晚上，我把它还给了莫莉。晚饭后，我让莫莉告诉我袋子里的东西，所以她一次拿出一块，把东西排成一排放在餐厅的桌子上。每件事都有一个故事，一个记忆，或者依附于梦想和想象中的朋友J成功地说了几次“我明白了”事实上，我确实看到了。Tomysurprise,Mollygavethebagtomeonceagainseveraldayslater.Thesamebagandsamestuffinside.Ifeltforgiven,andtrustedandloved.Andalittlemorecomfortablewearingthetitleoffather.Overseveralmonths,thebagwiththenoteinwentwithmefromtimetotime.IntimeMollyturnedherattentiontootherthings.Shefoundothertreasures,lostinnewgames,andgrewup.Iwasleftholdingthebag.Shegaveittomeonemorningandneveraskedforitsreturn.AndsoIhaveitstill.令我吃惊的是，几天后莫莉又把这个包给了我。同样的袋子和同样的东西。我感到被宽恕，被信任和被爱。穿上父亲的头衔会更舒服一点。几个月多了，那个带着纸条的包不时地跟着我走。不久，莫莉把注意力转向了其他事情。她还发现了其他在新游戏中丢失的宝藏，然后长大了。我一直拿着袋子。一天早上，她把它给了我，但从来没有要求让它回来。所以我还在那里。,优点英语三、姐妹之间Alilookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead.Refusingtogiveupatthispoint,hejumpedtohisfeetandranasfastashecould.Hedashedacrossthefinishlineandwonthefourthprize.Thinkinghewouldlethersisterdown,Alicouldn'thelpsobbing.JustthenhesuddenlyheardtheannouncementfromthebroadcastthathewonthethirdprizeastherunnerwhocollidedwithAliwasdisqualifiedforbreakingtherule.Holdingtheshoesclosetohischestduringtheawardceremony,Alifeltoverjoyedandrelievedasheeventuallywontheshoesforhissister.阿里抬起头，看到其他男孩冲在前面。在这一点上，他拒绝放弃，他跳起来，跑得尽可能快。他冲过终点线，获得了四等奖。以为他会让她妹妹失望，阿里忍不住抽泣起来。就在这时，他突然听到广播中宣布，他赢得了三等奖，因为与阿里相撞的跑步者因违反规则而被取消资格。在颁奖典礼上，阿里把鞋子紧贴在胸前，感到欣喜若狂，松了一口气，因为他最终为他的妹妹赢得了鞋子。Filledwithdelight,Aliwalkedhomequickly.Hecouldnotwaittoseehissisterandsharethethrillingnews.Onhisarrival,AlifoundZahrawaswaitingoutside.Shewasreallynervouswhetherherbrotherhadbroughtherwhatshewasexpecting."Zahra,seewhatIhavegotforyou"hetooktheprizeoutofhisbagwithhistremblinghands.TheinstantZahrasawtheshoes,herfacelitup.SothrilledwasshethatshethrewherselfatAli."Thankyou!Ali."Tearsofjoywelleduptheireyesasthebrotherandsisterhuggedtightlytogether.充满喜悦，阿里快步走回家。他迫不及待地要去看妹妹，分享这个惊心动魄的消息。阿里一到，就发现Zahra在外面等着。她真的很紧张，她哥哥是否给她带来了她所期待的。“扎赫拉，看看我给你买了什么”他用颤抖的双手从包里拿出奖品。扎赫拉看到鞋子的瞬间，她的脸就亮了起来。她激动得扑向阿里。”“谢谢！Ali。”当兄妹紧紧地拥抱在一起时，喜悦的泪水涌上了他们的眼睛。,优点英语三、兄弟之间Therewasnofenceatall.Itwasabridge!Abridgestretchedfromonesideofthecreektotheother!Johnwasabouttocomplainabouteverything,whenhefoundtheneighbor,hisyoungbrother,wascomingacrossthebridge,hishandsoutstretched."YouarequiteafellowtobuildthisbridgeafterallIhavesaidanddone,"saidJohn'sbrother.Thetwobrothersmetinthemiddle,takingeachother'shandandhuggingeachother.根本没有栅栏。是一座桥！一座桥从小溪的一边延伸到另一边！约翰正要抱怨一切，当他发现邻居，他的弟弟，正在过桥，他的手伸出。约翰的哥哥说：“我说了这么多，你真是个造桥的好朋友。两兄弟在中间相遇，牵着对方的手，互相拥抱。Theyturnedtoseethecarpenterliftthetoolboxontohisshoulder."No,wait!Stayafewmoredays.Wehavemorejobsforyou,"saidtheolderbrother."I'dlovetostayon."thecarpentersaid."butIhavemanymorebridgestobuild."Observingthecarpenterleaving,thetwobrotherswavedgratefulgood-byetohim.Whatathought-provokingstory!Everydaywehavethechoiceofbuildingafenceorabridge.Oneleadstoseparationandangerwhiletheotherleadstoopennessandfriendship.他们转过身来，看到木匠把工具箱抬到肩上。“不，等等！再呆几天。我们有更多的工作要给你。“我很想继续。”木匠说。“但我还有很多桥要建。”看着木匠走了，两个兄弟向他挥手表示感谢。多么发人深省的故事啊！每天我们都可以选择建造栅栏或桥梁。一个导致分离和愤怒，另一个导致开放和友谊。,优点英语三、祖孙之间WhenChristmasbreakcame,Grandmagotachestcold,andIwasafraidtoleaveher.Ihadn'tbeenhomesinceLaborDay,andmymotherwasanxioustoseeme.Iagreedtocomehome,butfortwoweeksinsteadoffour,soIcouldreturntoGrandmaandGrandpa.Isaidmygood-byes,arrangedfortheirtemporarycareandreturnhome.AsIwasloadingmycartogobacktoschool,thephonerang."Grandmadiedlastnight,I'msorry."Ihungupthephonefeelinglikemyworldhadended.Ihadlostmyfriend,andthatwasfarworsethanknowingIwouldhavetoreturntowashingdishes.Iwentbackattheendoffourweeks,askingtobeginthework-studyprogramagain.ThefinancialaidadvisorlookedatmeasifIhadlostmymind.Iexplainedmyposition,thenhesmiledandslidmeanenvelope."Thisisforyou,hesaid.当圣诞假期来临时，奶奶胸口感冒了，我害怕离开她。从劳动节开始我就没回家，我妈妈很想见我。我同意回家，但两个星期而不是四个星期，所以我可以回到奶奶和爷爷身边。我说了我的道别，安排他们暂时照顾，然后回家。当我正在装货回学校时，电话响了。“奶奶昨晚死了，对不起。“我挂了电话，感觉我的世界已经结束了。我失去了我的朋友，这比我知道我必须回去洗碗要糟糕得多。四个星期后，我又回去了，要求开始勤工俭学。财政援助顾问看着我，好像我疯了似的。我解释了我的立场，然后他笑了笑，递给我一个信封。“这是给你的，”他说。Theenvelopewasfromgrandma.Shehadknownhowsickshewas.IntheenvelopewasenoughmoneytopayfortherestofmycollegeyearandarequestthatItakepianolessonsinhermemory.Movedtotears,Ideterminedtolearnpianolessonsbyheartandmymemoryofgrandmamotivatedmetopracticedayandnight.Idon'tthinkthepianopiecewasevenplayedwithmorefeelingthanitwasmysecondyearincollege.Now,yearslater,whenIwalkbyapiano,IsmileandthinkofGrandma.Sheisplayingthepianosmilinglyinheaven,Iamsure.,优点英语那个信封是从奶奶那里寄来的。她已经知道自己病得有多厉害了。信封里有足够的钱来支付我大学剩下的时间，并要求我为她上钢琴课。我哭了，决心用心学钢琴，对奶奶的记忆激励我日夜练习。我甚至不认为这首钢琴曲比我上大学的第二年更有感情。几年后，当我走过钢琴时，我微笑着想起了奶奶。我相信，她是在天堂微笑着弹钢琴的。三、夫妻之间Thedriverresponded,"Itmustfeelgoodtobetakencareofandprotectedlikeyouareeveryday."Confusedbywhatthedrivertalkedabout,sheasked,"Whatdoyoumean?"Thedriveranswered,"Everymorninginthepastweek,afine-lookinggentlemaninamilitaryuniformhasbeenstandingacrossthestreetwatchingyougettingoffthebus.Hemakessureyoucrossthestreetsafelyandhewatchesuntilyouenteryourofficebuilding.Thenheblowsyouakiss,givesyouasaluteandwalksaway.Youareoneluckylady."司机回答说：“每天都像你一样受到照顾和保护，感觉一定很好。”她被司机说的话弄糊涂了，问：“你什么意思？”司机回答说：“过去一周的每天早晨，一位穿着军装的英俊绅士一直站在街对面，看着你下车。他确保你安全过街，他看着你进入你的办公楼。然后他给你一个吻，给你一个敬礼，然后走开。你真是个幸运的女士。“TearsofhappinesspoureddownSusan'scheeks.Withtearsofhappinessinhereyes,shestoodmotionlesslyfacingtheoppositesideofthestreet,asifgazingatsomeone.Althoughshecouldn'tphysicallyseehim,shedefinitelyfeltMark'spresence.Susanthoughtshewasactuallylucky,forhehadgivenheragiftmorepowerfulthansight,agiftoflovethatcanbringlightwherethereisdarkness.JustasMarkgrewalittleworried,hesawhiswifebreakintoaradiantsmileandblowakisstohisdirection.Finallyshefoundbackherself,blindbutattractiveandconfidentassheusedtobe.幸福的泪水顺着苏珊的脸颊流下来。她眼里含着幸福的泪水，一动不动地站在街道对面，仿佛在凝视着某人。虽然她看不到他的身体，但她绝对感觉到马克的存在。苏珊认为她实际上是幸运的，因为他给了她一份比视力更强大的礼物，一份爱的礼物，可以在黑暗中带来光明。就在马克有点担心的时候，他看到他的妻子露出灿烂的微笑，朝他的方向吹了一个吻。最后，她发现自己回来了，她失明了，但像以前一样有吸引力和自信。,优点英语Part4：灵活应用:例1：圣诞节的礼物Severalyearsago,IwaslivinginNewYorkandworkingforanairline,soInevergotbackhomefor Christmas.MyChristmaswashappytoowithsomeothercolleaguesaround.ButinmyheartIwassadbecauseIcouldn’tstaywithmyfamily.SometimesmycolleagueswouldsayourChristmaswasfilled withtears.ButthisChristmaswasdifferent.Iwaslucky.Ihadthewholedayoff,whichmeantIcould staywith myfamilyonChristmasEve.WhenChristmasmorningcame,Iawoketoasmallhandrubbingmyface.“Dad, MerryChristmas!”wasall myyoungerson hadtimetosay.Heseemedtoberacingagainsttime.Iknewhewashuntingfor gifts withhisbrothereagerly.Igotdownstairsjusttoseethetwolittleboys’facesastheylookedatthepocketrocketsSantaClaushadleftthem.IrealizedthattherealChristmaswasforthechildrenwhohaddeepbeliefintheamazingpowerofSantaClaus.Atfirst,theirfingerswentalmostshylyovertheirtoys.Whentheirinspectionhadbeencompleted,thetwoboysensuredthatthegiftswerereallydeliveredbySantaClausandtheydraggedeverythingintothecenterofthelivingroom.Delight floodedtheroom.Astheirmotherbegangivingoutgifts,Ismiledtomyself, wondering howmyunexpectedgiftsthisyearwouldbereceived.WithsomanyChristmasspentoutside,Ihadpreparedsomanygiftsformychildrenandtogetherwithmywife.Ihidtheminseveralsecretplaces.Butthechildrenwereexcellentdetectivesandtheyfoundallofthem.Theywerehappilyopeningpackagesconstantly thanking considerateSantaClausforhiskindnessandabilitytoknowtheirdesires.ButIhadnotreceivedasingleone.Iknewtheyhad forgotten myexistencewithmyabsencefromtheirChristmastheseyears.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；,优点英语2. 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:I had to admit that my disappointment was growing steadily. Paragraph2:Suddenly my wife walked up to me.参考范文Paragraphl:Ihadtoadmitthatmydisappointmentwasgrowingsteadily.IwaswonderingwhetherIcouldgetagiftwhenmyyoungersonrantome,whowasreallykindenoughtosavemyface.HeaskedmetoadmirehisgiftwhichhedeeplybelievedwascarefullychosenbySantaClaus.Hesaidhappilythathewouldsharesomeofthegiftsofhisandallowmetochooseonefromthem.Ithankedhimfromthebottomofmyheart,stillfeelingdisappointed.Paragraph2:Suddenlymywifewalkeduptome.ItseemedthatshehadguessedhowIfelt.SheaskedmetolookattheChristmastreewhichwasdecoratedwithsomanyboxes.Ithinkshewasshowingoffhereffortsonthedecorationbutshetookoffasmallboxandpassedittomesmilingandsayingitwasforme.Iopeneditandsawaletterwhichread.“Wewillneverforgetyou.MerryChristmas!”Undertheletterwasawatchwhichwasclickingwithdelight.Iwasmovedtotears.,优点英语第1段：我不得不承认，我的失望正在稳步增长。我在想，当我的小儿子跑到我身边时，我是否能得到一份礼物，他真的很善良，足以拯救我的脸。他让我欣赏他的礼物，他深信这是圣诞老人精心挑选的。他高兴地说，他将分享他的一些礼物，并允许我从他们中选择一个。我从心底感谢他，仍然感到失望。第2款：突然我妻子走到我面前。似乎她已经猜到了我的感受。她让我看看装饰着这么多盒子的圣诞树。我想她是在炫耀她在装饰上的努力，但她脱下了一个小盒子，微笑着递给我，说这是给我的。我打开它，看到一封信，上面写着：“我们永远不会忘记你。“圣诞快乐！”信下面是一只手表，它正高兴地咔嗒作响。我感动得流泪。例2：爸爸带我体验生活阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Doingthingswithmyfatherwasalwaysfunduetohisrichimagination.Withhispersonality,itwasamazinghowpatientDadcouldbe.Idon'trecallatimewhenhestoodacrossmypath;healwayswalkedbeside,guidingmewith__his__own__steps.When,at10,IannouncedthatIwasgoingtoAfricatobringbackwildanimals,mymotherandsisterspointedoutmyage,theproblemsoftransportationandallsuchordinaryandunimportantfacts.ButnotDad.HebroughthomebooksaboutAfrica,trainandboatschedulesforustostudy,andevensomeironbarswhichweusedtobuildcagesfortheanimalsIwastobringback.WhenthedeparturedayapproachedandIwasbecominganxious,myfatherbroughthomeanewspaperthattoldofanaccidentontherailroadthatwastotakemetoBaltimore.Thispostponedmytripand,bythetimethetraintrackswererepaired,heandIwereoffonanewandmoreexcitingproject.Whenaneighbor'sdogkilledmydogBounce,Iwasdeterminedtokillthatdog.Ithoughtitdayafterday,almostmakingmyselfillwithmyownhate.,优点英语“Let'sgetitdone，”myfatherstatedunexpectedlyinawhisperoneeveningafterdinner.Ifollowedhim,todiscoverthathehadtiedthedog.Hegavemeagun,andthensteppedbackformetodomywork.ThedogandIlookedateachother.Heshookhistailtoexpressfriendship.Suddenlythegunwastooheavyformetoholdanditdroppedtotheground.Thedogcameupandkissedmyhand.Thethreeofuswalkedhometogether,thedogjumpinginfront.Nowordwaseversaidaboutwhathadhappened.Nonewasneeded.WhenPresidentHardingdied,the_funeral_trainwasscheduledtopassthroughatownabout20milesfromours.Iwanteddesperatelytogoandseethistrain,butMotherpointedoutthattherewouldbeschoolthenextdayandthatitwouldbealongtrip.Thatendedthediscussion.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：Butwhenthedayarrived,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：Dadputtwopenniesintomyhandandaskedmetoputthemontherails.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________,优点英语________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：Butwhenthedayarrived,Daddidnotforget.Hecametomeand,inavoiceasnearawhisperashisnaturewouldallow,said,“Jim,boy,it'stimetoseethefuneraltrain．”Wedrovealongtothetownwithouttalkingmuch.Whenwecametotherailroadstation,ahalfdozenpeopleweretalkinginsofttonesandlookingdownthetracks.Suddenlythefuneraltrainwascoming!但当这一天到来时，爸爸并没有忘记。他走到我跟前，轻声说：“吉姆，孩子，该看葬礼火车了。”我们不说话就开车去城里。当我们来到火车站时，六个人轻声说话，望着铁轨。突然间，葬礼上的火车开来了！Dadputtwopenniesintomyhandandaskedmetoputthemontherails.Ididastoldandjumpedbacktoholdhishandasthetrainwentpast.Icouldhardlybreathe.Soexcitingwerethesightandsound.Afterthetrainhadleft,Igotbackthetwopenniesfromthetracks.DadputoneinhispocketandIkepttheother.Foryears,DadandIcarriedthosecoinspressedbytheweightofhistory.Andtheknowledgeofwhatwesharedmademefeelveryclosetohim.爸爸在我手里放了两便士，让我把它们放在铁轨上。我照了，火车经过时跳回去握住他的手。我几乎无法呼吸。这种景象和声音是如此令人兴奋。火车离开后，我从铁轨上找到了两便士。爸爸把一个放进他的口袋里，我放了另一个。多年来，我和我都拿着那些受历史沉重的硬币。我们分享的知识让我觉得和他非常亲近。Part5：高考真题再现：母亲节的惊喜2021年6月新高考全国1卷：阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISE,优点英语ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jemafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jefturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJeftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear！Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.答案Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared. Onelookandheknewwhattheywereupto.Seeingtheirdiscouragedfaces,hetoldthemtocleanupthekitchenwhilehehelpedthemmakebreakfastforMother.Thetwinscheeredupanddidastold.Withinanhour,thekitchenwascleaned,andFatherhadsuccessfullymadesomeFrenchtoastandchickenporridgeasthechildrenwished.Thenhesneakedbacktobed.Thetwinspreparedthebreakfasttray,addedacardtheyhadmade,andthenheadedfortheirparents' bedroom.,优点英语当这对双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。他看了一眼，他就知道他们在做什么。看到他们沮丧的脸，他让他们打扫厨房，同时帮他们为母亲做早餐。这对双胞胎高兴起来，照做了。不到一个小时，厨房就打扫干净了，父亲按照孩子们的意愿，成功地做了一些法式吐司和鸡肉粥。然后他偷偷溜回床上。双胞胎准备了早餐托盘，加了一张他们做的卡片，然后前往他们父母的卧室。Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup. "HappyMother'sDay,darlingMummy!" thrilledvoiceyellingfromtheirthroat,thetwinshuggedtheirmomtightly.Movedandexcited,motherheldthetwinswithherwarmarmsaswell.Hereyeswidenedatthesightofthebreakfasttray.Sheshookfatherwhowaspretendingtosnore.Hewhistledinastonishmentwhenseeingthebreakfast.Motherbitintoasandwichandsaidshehadnever tastedabetterone.Jeffimmediatelywantedtohaveabite.Jennacaughtherfather'seyeandtheywinkedateachothersecretly.这对双胞胎把早餐带到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲。“母亲节快乐，亲爱的妈妈！”激动的声音从他们的喉咙里叫喊着，双胞胎紧紧地拥抱着他们的妈妈。母亲感动而激动，也用她温暖的胳膊抱着这对双胞胎。一看到早餐托盘，她就睁大了眼睛。她摇着假装打鼾的父亲。当他看到早餐时，他惊讶地吹着口哨。妈妈咬了咬三明治，说她从来没有尝过比这更好的三明治过。杰夫立刻想咬他一口。詹娜抓住了她父亲的目光，他们偷偷地互相眨了眨眼。
