优点英语读后续写:助人型Part1:经典例文(披萨店员工救人)1Part2:助人类故事构造三部曲4第一步:困难描写(消极情绪+困难处境)4第二步:助人过程呈现((想到办法+动作链)5第三步:皆大欢喜结局(感激+感动+升华)6Part3:助人场景描写7一、帮助他人之后7二、发生水灾之后8三、发生误解之后9四、发生火灾之后10五、感受善良之后11六、感受幸福之后11七、发生误解之后12八、获得勇气13九、获得自信14十、接收礼物之后15十一、老师的帮助16十二、陌生人的帮助17Part4:灵活应用18例1:老夫妇帮助我18,优点英语例2:帮助老妇人20Part5:高考真题再现23真题1:好心的墨西哥家庭【2021年八省联考】23真题2:买爆米花助穷人【2020年7月山东卷】25Part1:经典例文(披萨店员工救人)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。WhentheemployeesattheDomino’spizzaplaceinSalem,Oregon,hadn’treceivedanyorderfromKirkAlexanderformorethan2weeks,theyknewsomethingwasn’tright.Kirkwasaloyalcustomerandthestaffallknewhim.Soitwasnaturalthattheygotworriedwhentheyhadnonewsabouthim.Theirconcernsavedhislife.SarahFuller,thegeneralmanagerattheDomino’sbranch,saidthatKirk,whowas48yearsold,hadbeenaloyalcustomersince2009.“Heorderseveryday,oreveryotherday,”Sarahsaid.Normally,hisordercameuponthescreenbecauseheorderedonline.Sowesawitcameacrossthescreenandwewerethinking,“Oh,Kirk’sorder.”Afterafewdayswithoutasingleorder,Sarahandthestaffstartedtoworry.AfewDomino’sdrivershadmentionedthattheyhadn’tseenhisordercomeacrosstheirscreeninawhile.Sarahcheckedthesystemandsawthatnoorderhadcomein11days.Sotheydecidedtoinvestigate.SarahdecidedtosendTracyHamblen,adeliverdriver,toKirk’splace.Whenhegotthere,heimmediatelyknewsomethingwaswrong.WhilethelightsandTVwereon,Kirkdidnotcometothedoor.Additionally,hisphonewentdirectlytovoicemail.SoTracyimmediatelycalled911.Para.1:,优点英语Whenthepolicearrivedattheplace,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.2:Afewdayslater,Kirkwasreleasedfromthehospital.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Para1:Whenthepolicearrivedattheplace,theyheardacryforhelpfromtheinsideofthehouse.Inside,theyfoundKirk,whowasinneedofimmediatemedicalhelp.DuetothequickactionsofTracy,KirkisinstableconditionattheSalemHospital.TheDomino’semployeesreceivedalotofpraiseonlinefortheirunbelievablethoughtfulness.Buttheysaidthatitwasjustpartoftheirjobandtheywerejustdoingtheirjob.当警察到达现场时,他们听到了来自房子内部的呼救声。在里面,他们发现了需要立即得到医疗帮助的柯克。由于特蕾西的快速行动,柯克在塞勒姆医院的情况很稳定。多米美乐的员工令人难以置信的体贴在网上得到了很多赞扬。但他们说,这只是他们工作的一部分,他们只是在做他们的工作。Para2:Afewdayslater,Kirkwasreleasedfromthehospital.HecametotheDomino’spersonallywithsomehomemadecookiestosaythank--youtoSarahandtheDomino’sstaff.TheDomino’smentionedthat“Caringforcustomersshouldnotbetakenatfacevalue.Weshouldrememberthatthecustomersdeterminethesuccessofourcompanyandinturnwecanalsohaveanimpactontheirlives,smallorbig.”Kirk’sstoryhasmadethispizzashopevenmorepopularinthecommunity,andithasreceivedmoreorderseversince.几天后,柯克出院了。他亲自带着一些自制的饼干来到多米诺餐厅,对莎拉和多米诺餐厅的工作人员说声谢谢。多米美乐提到“照顾客户不应该是表面价值。”我们应该记住,客户决定了我们公司的成功,反过来我们也可以对他们的生活产生影响,无论大小。柯克的故事让这家披萨店在社区中更受欢迎,此后它收到了更多的订单。,优点英语【解析】【分析】文章以人物为线索展开,讲述了一个披萨店的员工,细心地发现近期没有收到来自老顾客Kirk的订单,于是派人前去查看,发现Kirk生病并及时报警就医,确保了Kirk的安全。员工的善举为披萨店赢得了更多的称赞和订单。【详解】1.段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“当警察赶到现场时,”可知,第一段可描写警察将Kirk送到医院的经过。②由第二段首句内容“几天后,Kirk出院了。”可知,第二段可描写Kirk出院后去披萨店感谢员工们拯救了他的生命以及该披萨店因为善意举动而为自己赢得更多的订单和顾客。2.续写线索:呼救——成功被救助——感谢——店员表达观点——披萨店更受欢迎3.词汇激活行为类①大声求救:cryforhelp/shoutforhelp/screamforhelp②受到赞扬:receivedalotofpraise/bepraisedgreatly③照顾,护理:caringfor/takingcareof/情绪类①.感谢:saythank--you/expressappreciation/showappreciation/showhisgratitude/begrateful②.体贴:thoughtfulness/beingconsiderate【点睛】[高分句型1].Inside,theyfoundKirk,whowasinneedofimmediatemedicalhelp.(由关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句,修饰先行词Kirk。)[高分句型2].Weshouldrememberthatthecustomersdeterminethesuccessofourcompanyandinturnwecanalsohaveanimpactontheirlives,smallorbig.(that引导宾语从句作remember的宾语。),优点英语Part2:助人类故事构造三部曲第一步:困难描写(消极情绪+困难处境)(1)消极情绪典型表达是:感到(这个可以有很多表达方式,并且可以结合在每一个环节中,可有非谓语动词形式和介词短语)1.aflushof(表情绪的名词)=awaveof...=afeeling/senseof...一阵...2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispointment/guilt/shame...)3.(表情绪的名词)floodedoversb=sweptoversb 因...颤抖tremble//shiver/shake(withfear,panicexcitement,rage...) (2)进一步细节描写典型是:流泪;心里想……流泪:1.Tearsblurredone'seyes. 2.One'seyesgotmisty. 3.One'seyesmisted/dimmedwithtears.泪眼模糊4....beclosetotears几乎要哭了5.tears(rolldownone'seyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下 困难处境1.Astheeconomywasindecline(经济衰退),somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet(使收支平衡).(2020.7高考山东卷)2.Therewasamansickinbed(卧病在床),hiswife,whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgooutto,优点英语work,andtheirlittleboy.(2020.7高考山东卷)1.Butoneday,ahurricanehitthearea(台风袭击当地)wherehelived,completelydestroyinghishome(完全摧毁他的家).(2021广州2月联考)第二步:助人过程呈现(想到办法+动作链)(1)突然有了一个想法:一句话表示想法典型:某人想到/明白...; 有了主意1.Itsuddenlyoccurredtosbthat 从句=Ithitsbthat 从句=Itstruckmethat 从句 =Itdawnedonsbthat 从句2.(idea,thought...)occurred/cametosb.=...came/flashedintoone'smind=...crowdedinone'smind3.One'smindbegantorace(2)动作链Thenhegotasaw(锯子)fromthetruckandcutasectionoutofabiglogonthesideoftheroad.Werolleditoverandputhisjackontop,andwewereinbusiness.然后他从卡车上拿到了一把锯子(锯子),从路边的一根大木头上砍了一段。我们把它翻过来,把他的杰克顶放在上面,我们开始做生意。【八省联考】第三步:皆大欢喜结局(感激+感动+升华)(1)皆大欢喜:过了一段时间,事情有了最后的转折过了一段时间1.notlongafterthat,...=shortlyafterwards,...=beforelong,...=Itdidn'ttakelongbefore 从句=Ittooksometimebefore从句不久,... 2.foraninstant/moment一瞬间 ,优点英语(2)有了结果1.Toone'ssurprise(delight)/Strangelyenough,itturnedoutthat 从句2.Butonsecondthoughts,...但是转而一想,...3.Butwhathappenednextwaspuremagic. 接下来发生的非常奇妙(3)感谢1.Now,Iwasdefinitelygratefultoherforextendingahelpinghand(伸出援手).(2021届湖南长沙市一中高三月考三)2.MollyandShawnmetonTuesday,andshesaysshecouldn’tthankhimenough(非常感谢他)andeveryoneinvolvedinforwhattheydidforher.(2020届山东省泰安市高三第二轮复习质量检测(二模)英语试题)(4)感动1.Needlesstosay,theyweredeeplymoved(他们被深深地感动了),especiallyBernardwhofinallyfoundawaytomakemoneyforhisfamily.(2020.7高考山东卷)2.HewastouchedthatI,acompletestranger,caredsomuchabouthim(如此关心他)andsaidhewaswillingtowork.(2021广州2月联考)3.Inaflash,withtearswellingupinmyeyes,Iwastouchedbeyondwords(感动得说不出话来).Ifeltsowarmasiftherewereninesunsinmychest.(2021年1月八省联考)4.Inoddedingratitude,eyesglisteningwithheld-backtears(眼睛因为强忍的泪水而闪耀).(2021年1月八省联考)5.Stunnedandmoved(惊讶又感动),Istaredatthenote,feelingapangofguiltaboutmypreviousthoughtthatallpeoplewereindifferent.(2021年1月八省联考),优点英语(5)升华1.Itislovethatmakestheworldgoround(是爱让世界运转)andBernardfeltitdeepinhislittleheart.(2020.7高考山东卷)2.Everyonewashappyandsweet,exposingtheirsetsofwhiteteeth(露出他们洁白的牙齿).(2020.7高考山东卷)3.Imadeupmymindtopasson“love”toothers(传递爱给其他人).Justasasayinggoes:“Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand(赠人玫瑰,手有余香).”(2021年1月八省联考)4.Fromthatdayon,everytimeImeetsomeonewhoneedshelp,Ialwaysreachouttothem,hopingtopassonthekindness(希望传递善意)thatMexicanfamilyofferedme.(2021年1月八省联考)5.Sometimes,asmallactofkindnessmaybepowerfulenoughtomakeahugedifference(会有很大不同).Part3:助人场景描写一、帮助他人之后Ijustlookedatmyfriendwithdisbeliefashetoldthestoryofthefirstdaywemet.Kylehadplannedtokillhimselfovertheweekend.HetalkedofhowhehadcleanedouthislockersohisMomwouldn’thavetodoitlaterandwascarryinghisstuffhome.Meanwhile,Ifoundhelookedhardatmeandgavemealittlesmile."Thankfully,Iwassaved.Myfriendsavedmefromdoingtheunspeakable,Iheardthegaspgothroughthecrowdasthishandsome,popularboytoldusallabouthisweakestmoment.Whenhiseyescaughtmine,Iwasabletoseetearsshimmeredinhissmilingeyes.我只是难以置信地看着我的朋友,他讲述了我们第一天见面的故事。凯尔计划周末消遣。他谈到了他是如何清理他的储物柜的,这样他的妈妈就不用再做了,然后把他的东西带回家了。同时,我发现他狠狠地看着我,给了我一个小小的微笑。“谢天谢地,我得救了。,优点英语我的朋友不让我做那些无法形容的事,我听到人群中的喘息声,就像这个英俊、受欢迎的男孩告诉我们他最脆弱的时刻一样。当他的眼睛抓住我的眼睛时,我能看到他微笑的眼睛里闪烁着泪水。Ismiledbackintears.NotuntilthatmomentdidIrealizewhatbigdifferenceonesmallgesturehadmadetohim.IevensawhisMomandDadlookingatmeandsmilingthatsamegratefulsmile.Itdawnedonmethatnevershouldweunderestimatethepowerofouractions.Withonesmallgesturewecanchangeaperson'slife.Forbetterorforworse.我笑着。直到那一刻,我才意识到一个小小的手势对他产生了多么大的不同。我甚至看到他的爸爸妈妈看着我,也带着同样感激的微笑。我意识到,我们永远不应该低估我们行动的力量。只要用一个小小的手势,我们就可以改变一个人的生活。为好或坏。二、发生水灾之后Thewaterkeptrising,andtherewasnohopeofrescue.Thehourspassed.JasonandAndrewdidn'tdaretomoveforfearofslipping.Theydozedoffandthenjerkedthemselvesawake.Everyonceinawhile,oneofthemturnedonhisheadlamptocheckthewaterlevel.Anhourlater,thewaterlevelwentdownenoughthattheycouldtryanescape.Stifffromkeepinginonepositionfor12hours,theyslowlyunfoldedtheirbodies.Jasonscreamedinpain,buthewasdeterminednottoletitstophim.水不断上涨,没有了救援的希望。几个小时过去了。杰森和安德鲁不敢动,因为害怕滑倒。他们打了个瞌睡,然后猛地清醒过来。每隔一段时间,其中一个人就打开他的前照灯检查水位。一个小时后,水位下降到足以让他们尝试逃跑。他们僵硬地保持在一个位置12小时,慢慢地展开他们的身体。杰森痛苦地尖叫着,但他决心不让它阻止他。Slowlybutsteadily,thegroupmadetheirwayforward.Still,eachtimeJasonmovedaleg,hecriedout.Overthenext90minutes,theymadetheirwaytowardtheentrance,attimesin,优点英语chest-highwater.Now,inapassagethatwashighenoughforthemtowalkupright,Jasonsawsomethingflickerinthedistance."Lights!Iseelights!"Jasonshoutedout.Forthefirsttimesinceenteringthecave,over20hoursearlier,Jason'semotionsgotthebestofhimandtearstrickleddownhischeeks.水不断上涨,没有了救援的希望。几个小时过去了。杰森和安德鲁不敢动,因为害怕滑倒。他们打了个瞌睡,然后猛地清醒过来。每隔一段时间,其中一个人就打开他的前照灯检查水位。一个小时后,水位下降到足以让他们尝试逃跑。他们僵硬地保持在一个位置12小时,慢慢地展开他们的身体。杰森痛苦地尖叫着,但他决心不让它阻止他。三、发生误解之后Asshereachedinherbaggage,shegaspedwithsurprise.Atthatmoment,inhersightcamethepacketofcookies,whichhadbeenjustboughtbyher,unopenedatall.Ashamedandfeelinglikeathief,shefinallygotthatthecookieswerenothersbutbelongedtothemansittingnexttoher,whohadcalmlyofferedtosharehislastcookiewithher.Asuddenrushofshybloodfillingtheface,sheinstinctivelylookaroundwiththehopeoffindingtheverymantomakeanapology.当她伸手拿行李时,她惊讶地喘了一口气。就在这时,她看到了她刚买的一包饼干,根本没有打开。她感到羞愧,感觉自己像个小偷,终于明白了这些饼干不是她的,而是属于坐在她旁边的男人,他平静地提出和她分享他的最后一块饼干。脸上突然涌满了害羞的鲜血,她本能地环顾四周,希望能找到那个男人来道歉。Surprisingly,shefoundthemansittingjustbehindher.Hewasjustlookingupandmethereyes,alsowithasmileonhisface.Thewomanwasatanabsolutelossbutgavethemananervouslaughinreturn.Withaquiteopenmouth,shewasunabletosayanyapologytohim.Murmuring"Sorry,sorry..ItwasImyselfwhowastherealcookiethief."Afterawhile,shefellasleeponherseatwiththeplaneflyingsteadily.Thenextday,whenshearrivedathernewcompany,thebiggestsurprisewaswaitingforher.,优点英语令人惊讶的是,她发现那个男人就坐在她身后。他只是抬头看了看她的眼睛,脸上也带着微笑。女人完全不知所措,但却给了男人一声紧张的笑声作为回报。她张开嘴,不能向他道歉。“对不起,对不起。。真正偷饼的是我自己。”过了一会儿,她在座位上睡着了,飞机平稳地飞着。第二天,当她来到她的新公司时,最大的惊喜就是在等她。四、发生火灾之后Tomnoticedtheflamewasreachingup.Frozenwithfear,hestoodrootedtothespot.HecomprehendedthegravityofthesituationandheldJane′shandtightly.Bythen,bothofthemwerecoughingandtheireyeswerestinging.Timeseemedtostandstill,thoughtheywereprobablythereforonlytwoorthreeminutes.TombeggedJanetorunforsafetyasquicklyaspossible.Janetriedtoshieldhernosefromthechokingsmokeandshookherhead.Shekeptpoundingagainstthedoor.Tomburstoutcrying.汤姆注意到火焰正在升起。他吓得僵住了,站在原地。他明白形势的严重性,紧紧地握住简的手。到那时,他们俩都在咳嗽,眼睛刺痛。时间似乎静止不动,虽然他们可能只在那里两三分钟。汤姆恳求简尽快跑过去寻求安全。简想保护她的鼻子免受呛人的烟雾,摇了摇头。她不停地敲门。汤姆突然哭了起来。Luckily,someneighborspassingbystoppedandofferedhelp.AsenseofstrengthimmediatelyreplacedthemountingfearandanxietyinJane'smind.ShetoldthemMs.Makcikmustbestillintheroom.Theyforcedthedooropenwithalltheirmight.Sureenough,Makcikwaslyinginbed,unconscious.Shewascarrieddownstairsandthenrushedtothehospital,whereshefinallycametoherself.PeopleintheneighborhoodfeltrelievedandJaneandTom'sjoywasimmense.幸运的是,一些邻居路过时停下来,并提供了帮助。一种力量感立刻取代了简心中日益增加的恐惧和焦虑。她告诉他们,马克奇克女士一定还在房间里。他们竭尽全力地强行打开了门。果然,马克西克正躺在床上,失去了知觉。她被带下楼,然后被紧急送往医院,终于苏醒过来。附近的人都松了一口气,简和汤姆非常高兴。,优点英语五、感受善良之后Seeingwhatwasgoingon,mydadputhishandinhispocket,pulledouta$20billanddroppeditontheground.Thenhepickeditupandtappedthemanontheshoulderandsaid,"Excuseme,sir,thisfelloutofyourpocket."Themanturnedaroundandsawthemoney.Heknewwhatwasgoingon,helookedstraightintomydad'seyes,tookmydad'shandinbothofhis,squeezedtightlyontothe$20bill,andwithhislipshakingandatearrunningdownhischeek,hereplied,"Thankyou,thankyou,sir.Thisreallymeansalottomeandmyfamily.水不断上涨,没有了救援的希望。几个小时过去了。杰森和安德鲁不敢动,因为害怕滑倒。他们打了个瞌睡,然后猛地清醒过来。每隔一段时间,其中一个人就打开他的前照灯检查水位。一个小时后,水位下降到足以让他们尝试逃跑。他们僵硬地保持在一个位置12小时,慢慢地展开他们的身体。杰森痛苦地尖叫着,但他决心不让它阻止他。ThatdaymyfatherandIwentbacktoourcaranddrovehomewithoutanytickets.Wedidn'tgotothecircusthatnight,whenIaskeddadwhyhedidso,Dadsaid,"Mychild,itwasadesperate,heartbreakingandembarrassingsituationforafather.Surelyhewasn'tbeggingforahandout,butheremindedmeofmyfather,whenIwasyoung."Hepausedforawhile,asifwanderinginhismemory."Weshouldappreciatewhatwehaveobtainedfromlifeandseizeeveryopportunitytohelpothers.Wedidn'tgotothecircustonight,butwedidn'tgowithout.Now,whowantsanicecream?。那天,我和我父亲回到我们的车里,没有任何票就开车回家了。那天晚上我们没有去马戏团,当我问爸爸为什么这么做时,爸爸说:“我的孩子,对一个父亲来说,这是一个绝望、令人心碎和尴尬的情况。他当然不是乞求施舍,但他让我想起了我年轻时的父亲。”他停顿了一会儿,仿佛在记忆中徘徊。,优点英语我们应该珍惜从生活中获得的东西,抓住一切机会帮助别人。我们今晚没有去马戏团,但我们没有去。谁要冰淇淋?。六、感受幸福之后Thedriverresponded,"Itmustfeelgoodtobetakencareofandprotectedlikeyouareeveryday."Confusedbywhatthedrivertalkedabout,sheasked,"Whatdoyoumean?"Thedriveranswered,"Everymorninginthepastweek,afinelookinggentlemaninamilitaryuniformhasbeenstandingacrossthestreetwatchingyougettingoffthebus.Hemakessureyoucrossthestreetsafelyandhewatchesuntilyouenteryourofficebuilding.Thenheblowsyouakiss,givesyoualitesaluteandwalksaway.Youareoneluckylady.'司机回答说:“像每天一样被照顾和保护一定会感觉很好。她对司机所说的话感到困惑,她问道,“你是什么意思?”司机回答说:“在过去的一周里,每天早上,一个漂亮的军装绅士都站在街对面看着你下车。他确保你安全过马路,他看着,直到你进入你的办公楼。然后他打了你一个吻,向你轻轻地敬礼,然后走开了。你是一位幸运的女士。”TearsofhappinesspoureddownSusan'scheeks.Shestoodmotionlesslyfacingtheoppositesideofthestreetasifgazingatsomeone.Althoughshecouldn'tphysicallyseehim,shedefinitelyfeltMark'spresence.Susanthoughtshewasactuallylucky,forhehadgivenheragiftmorepowerfulthansight,agiftoflovethatcanbringlightwherethereisdarkness.JustasMarkgrewalittleworried,hesawhiswifebreakintoaradiantsmileandblowakisstohisdirection.Finallyshefoundbackherselfblindbutattractiveandconfidentassheusedtobe.司机回答说:“像每天一样被照顾和保护一定会感觉很好。她对司机所说的话感到困惑,她问道,“你是什么意思?”司机回答说:“在过去的一周里,每天早上,一个漂亮的军装绅士都站在街对面看着你下车。他确保你安全过马路,他看着,直到你进入你的办公楼。然后他打了你一个吻,向你轻轻地敬礼,然后走开了。你是一位幸运的女士。”,优点英语七、发生误解之后Aseatbesideherwasempty,andDannisoccupiedit.Hefeltawaveofangersweptoverhim."Whereismywallet?"heyelled.Theblack-hairedgirlglancedupfromherreading,withaconfusedlookonherface.Dannisstoodup,glaredatherandshouted,"Youstolemywallet!"Thecrowdsbegantogossip.Thegirlturneddeadlypale,lookingsorestlessthatwordsfailedher.Astrangesilencehungintheair.Abruptly,sheleapedfromtheseat.她旁边的一个座位空着,丹尼斯坐着。他感到一阵愤怒席卷了他。“我的钱包呢?”他大叫。黑发女孩从阅读中抬起头来,脸上露出困惑的神色。丹尼斯站起来,瞪了她一眼,喊道:“你偷了我的钱包!”人群开始闲聊起来。那女孩脸色惨白,神情不安,言语使她失望。一种奇怪的沉默挂在空中。她突然从座位上跳了起来。ThegirlranandDannisranafterher.Afterawhile,Dannisfinallygrabbedherbythearm.Atexactlythatmoment,apolicemanapproachedthemandaskedaboutwhathappened.Dannishastenedtoexplainitwhilethegirlfrownedwithashakeofherhead.Afterfurtherenquiries,thepolicemantookoutawalletandhandedittoDannis,addingthatsomeonehadfounditinthetoilet.Whatamistakehehadmade!Overwhelmedbyguilt,Dannismadeanapologytothegirl.女孩跑了,丹尼斯追了她。过了一会儿,丹尼斯终于抓住了她的手臂。就在这时,一个警察走近他们,问他们发生了什么事。丹尼斯急忙解释,而女孩皱着眉头摇了摇头。经过进一步的询问,警察拿出一个钱包递给丹尼斯,并补充说有人在厕所里发现了它。他犯了什么错误!由于内疚,丹尼斯向女孩道歉。八、获得勇气Theboystartedrunningagaintogivethekitelift.Thewindonthekitewasatoncestrongandswift,carryinghimuphighintotheair.Closinghiseyestight,hetrembledalloverinpanic,notdaringtolookdown.Butwiththeboy'sinspiringwordsinmind,hegotuphisnerveandmanagedtokeepthebalanceandlethisfeargo.Asthewindcarriedhimupward,heslowlyopenedhiseyes,,优点英语onlytoseethewholetownfromabrand-newdimension!"Givemorestring,please.More!heyelledtotheboyexcitedly.Withcourage,hemadeagreatdanceintheair,makingotherkidscheeringwildly那男孩又开始跑去放风筝了。风筝上的风立刻强烈而迅速,把他从高空吹到空中。他紧紧地闭上眼睛,惊恐得浑身发抖,不敢低头看。但考虑到男孩鼓舞人心的话,他鼓起了勇气,设法保持平衡,释放了他的恐惧。当风带着他向上走时,他慢慢地睁开眼睛,却从一个全新的维度看到了整个城镇!“请再多写信吧。请了解更多信息!他兴奋地对那男孩大喊大叫。他鼓着勇气在空中跳了一场舞,让其他孩子疯狂地欢呼Thekitefeltpeacefulanddelightedandnew.Withotherkitesflyingaround,hefloated,twirled,stretchedhiswingsandwavedhisragtail,abroadsmilespreadingonhisface.Thehigherhewent,thegreatertheview.Seeingthescared,timidkitenowdancingconfidently,theboywastouched,believingthatthekitehadlearnedanewlesson--thebestwaytodefeatfearistofaceitbravelyandoptimistically.风筝感到平静、快乐和新鲜事物。其他风筝四处飞着,他漂浮着,旋转着,展开翅膀,摇着破尾巴,脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容。他走得越高,视野就越大。看到害怕的、胆小的风筝现在自信地跳舞,男孩被感动了,相信风筝已经吸取了新的教训——战胜恐惧的最好方法是勇敢而乐观地面对它。九、获得自信EverybodywasfixingtheireyesonJenny,waitingforanexplanation.Jennydidn'tanswer.Howcouldsheexplainaboutthewatchanditsmagic?Noonecouldunderstand.Noonecouldbelieve."ButIsawyouwearingityesterday,"MissWalkergentlyremindedhim.ForamomentLeeremainedsilentandthenheapologizedhehadjustrememberedthat.Jennywasrelievedsayingshehadfounditonthewayhomeanddecidedtoreturnitafterthespeech.Everybodywaspuzzledandaskedwhy.Jennyagainwasspeechless.,优点英语每个人都把眼睛盯着珍妮,等待着解释。珍妮没有回答。她怎么能解释一下这只手表和它的魔力呢?没人能理解。没有人能相信。“可是我昨天看到你戴着它,”沃克小姐温柔地提醒他。李沉默了一会儿,然后他道歉了,他只记得这一点。珍妮在回家的路上找到了它,并决定在演讲后归还。每个人都很困惑,并被问及为什么。珍妮又说不出话来了。MissWalkersmiledandaskedtheclasstolistentoJenny'sspeechfirst.Jennywalkedslowlytothefront.Shecouldn'tthinkproperly.Allroundher,aseaoffaceswaswatching.Shefeltsofrightenedandthewatchdidn'tseemmagicalatall.SuddenlyshesawMissWalker'sencouragingeyes.Jennytookadeepbreath."I'mgoingtotalkaboutswimming…."TenminuteslaterthewholeclassstoodupapplaudingJenny'swonderfulspeech.Jennysmiledassheeventuallyrealizedtherealsourceofconfidence.沃克老师笑了笑,让全班同学先听珍妮的演讲。珍妮慢慢地走到前面。她无法正常思考。她的四周,一片面海在看着。她感到很害怕,手表看起来一点也不神奇。突然,她看到沃克小姐鼓励的眼睛。珍妮深吸了一口气。“我要谈谈游泳的事...。”十分钟后全班同学起立为珍妮的精彩演讲鼓掌。珍妮笑了,因为她最终意识到了自信的真正来源。十、接收礼物之后Iwasstoppedbymymother'seager,joyfullook."Let'sseewhatitis,honey.Hurryandopenit."Itwasablowdryer.Thoughthismayseembutasimplegift,tomeitwassomuchmore.Beinganeleven-year-oldgirl,Iwasstunned.Inmyworld,wherereceivinglatelyoutweighedgiving,mymom'sactofselflessnesswasincomprehensible.ItwasahugeactTearsfilledmyeyesandIthoughtindisbeliefabouthowmuchmymommustlovemetogiveupherChristmasso-couldhaveafewmorepresents.,优点英语我被我母亲急切而快乐的目光拦住了。“让我们看看那是什么事吧,亲爱的。赶快打开它。“那是一个吹风机。虽然这似乎只是一份简单的礼物,但对我来说,它更多了。作为一个11岁的女孩,我惊呆了。在我的世界里,最近接受的东西超过了付出,我妈妈的无私行为是不可理解的。这是一个巨大的表演,眼泪充满了我的眼睛,我不相信我妈妈一定是多么爱我才能放弃她的圣诞节,所以可以再有几份礼物。IhavealwaysrememberedthatChristmasfondly:Ithadsuchanimpactonme.AsanadultwithchildreninmylifewhomIadore,Icannowunderstandmymom'sactions.Iseeactually,shewasnot""givingupherChristmas"asIhadthought,butwasfindinganevengreaterjoyinherChristmasbecausegivingtrulyisbetterthanreceiving.Mymom'ssimpleactmeanttheworldtome.WheneverIlookbackonmymom'sgiving,Iwillchoosetogiveinmylife.我一直深情地记得那个圣诞节:它对我有如此的影响。作为一个在我的生活中有孩子的成年人,我现在可以理解我妈妈的行为。实际上,我知道,她并没有像我想的那样“放弃她的圣诞节”,而是在她的圣诞节中找到了更大的乐趣,因为真正的给予比接受更好。我妈妈的简单行为对我来说意味着世界。每当我回首妈妈的付出,我都会选择在我的生命中付出。十一、老师的帮助EverybodywasfixingtheireyesonJenny,waitingforanexplanation.Jennydidn'tanswer.Howcouldsheexplainaboutthewatchanditsmagic?Noonecouldunderstand.Noonecouldbelieve."ButIsawyouwearingityesterday,"MissWalkergentlyremindedhim.ForamomentLeeremainedsilentandthenheapologizedhehadjustrememberedthat.Jennywasrelievedsayingshehadfounditonthewayhomeanddecidedtoreturnitafterthespeech.Everybodywaspuzzledandaskedwhy.Jennyagainwasspeechless.每个人都把眼睛盯着珍妮,等待着解释。珍妮没有回答。她怎么能解释一下这只手表和它的魔力呢?没人能理解。没有人能相信。“但我昨天看见你戴着它,”沃克小姐温柔地提醒他。李沉默了一会儿,然后他道歉了,他只记得这一点。珍妮在回家的路上找到了它,并决定在演讲后归还。每个人都很困惑,并被问及为什么。珍妮又说不出话来了。,优点英语MissWalkersmiledandaskedtheclasstolistentoJenny'sspeechfirst.Jennywalkedslowlytothefront.Shecouldn'tthinkproperly.Allroundher,aseaoffaceswaswatching.Shefeltsofrightenedandthewatchdidn'tseemmagicalatall.SuddenlyshesawMissWalker'sencouragingeyes.Jennytookadeepbreath."I'mgoingtotalkaboutswimming…"TenminuteslaterthewholeclassstoodupapplaudingJenny'swonderfulspeech.Jennysmiledassheeventuallyrealizedtherealsourceofconfidence.沃克老师笑了笑,让全班同学先听珍妮的演讲。珍妮慢慢地走到前面。她无法正常思考。她的四周,一片面海在看着。她感到很害怕,手表看起来一点也不神奇。突然,她看到沃克小姐鼓励的眼睛。珍妮深深地吸了一口气。十分钟后,全班同学起立为珍妮的精彩演讲鼓掌。珍妮笑了,因为她最终意识到了自信的真正来源。2.Timepassedquicklythatyear,andbeforeweallknewit,itwasthelastdayofschool.Ourschoolhadaveryspecialtraditiononthelastday.Alltheteachersfilledthesidewalk,wavinggoodbyetothekidsasthebusespulledoutwiththeirhornshonking.Butonthatparticularday,Stevenwalkedslowlytothebus,hisheaddown,tearsinhiseyes.Heboardedthebusreluctantly,hesitated,andthenranbackoffthebustohugMr.Rowe."Idon′twanttoleaveyou."Hesobbedwithred-rimmedeyes.Mr.Rowecomfortedhim,"Iwillmissyou,too."那一年时间过得很快,我们还没意识到,那是学校的最后一天。我们学校在最后一天有一个非常特殊的传统。所有的老师都挤满了人行道,向孩子们挥手道别,车上按着喇叭离开。但就在那一天,史蒂文慢慢地走到公交车前,低着头,热泪盈眶。他不情愿地登上了巴士,犹豫了一下,然后跑回来拥抱Mr。罗伊。“我不想离开你。”他用红边缘的眼睛抽泣着。Mr.罗安慰他,“我也会想念你。”Manyyearslater,Mr.RoweandIweresurprisedwhenahandsomeyoungmanwalkedintoourclassroom,dressedintheMarineCorpsuniform.Theyoungmanstoodtallandproud.ItwasSteven!Mr.RoweandIcouldn'tbelieveoureyes.HesalutedandhuggedMr.Rowetightly!"I,优点英语havecomebacktoschooltodayjusttosaythankstoyou!"Itismyhopethateveryteacherisblessedwithsuchanexperienceofaformerstudentcomingbacktosay,simplytosayaverysimplewordofTHANKS.许多年后,当一个穿着海军陆战队制服的英俊年轻人走进我们的教室时,罗先生和我感到惊讶。那个年轻人站得高高的,很骄傲。是史蒂文!我和罗先生简直不敢相信我们的眼睛。他敬礼,紧紧地拥抱罗先生!“我今天回到学校只是为了感谢你!“我希望每一位老师都有这样的经历,一位以前的学生回来说,简单地说一个非常简单的“谢谢。十二、陌生人的帮助IwaswonderingwhattosaywhenIheardthesoundoffootstepsoutofthetent.Webothlookedup.Itwasexactlytheyoungmaninthephotobutlookedmuchstronger.Thewomansaidsomethingtohim,lookingatussmiling."NeedsomeMg?"heasked.It'samazinghewasspeakingverygoodEnglish!GeorgeandIlookedateachother,eyeslitup."Yes,andwewerewonderingifyoucouldhaveoneofourtyreschanged.""Followme!"hesaid,soundinglikesortofanorder.当我听到帐篷外的脚步声时,我想说什么。我们都抬起头来。照片上的正是那个年轻人,但看上去更强壮。女人对他说了些什么,看着我们微笑。”“需要镁吗?”他问道。他说的英语很好真是太棒了!乔治和我互相看了一眼,眼睛亮了起来。“是的,我们想知道你们是否可以换一个轮胎。”“跟我来!”他说,听起来像是命令。Wegotupandtogetherwalkedbacktothecar.Themangrabbedthewheelwithonehandandaspannerwiththeother.Withanoutburstofshout,thetyrewasoosenedup."Youjustneedabitofeffort.Haha!"GeorgeandIstoodtheredumbfoundedwatchinghimfinishingthewholejob,gratitudeandadmirationrushinginmyheart.Theknotthathadbeentiredupbythepaininmyfoot,thecoldsoakingrainandthestubbornflattyrewaslooseneduptoo,inthewarmteafromthewoman,theheroicshoutoftheman,themountainviewinthedistanceandthejoyofbeingaleltosetoffagain.,优点英语我们站起来,一起走回到车里。那个人用一只手抓住轮子,另一只手抓住扳手。大叫一声,轮胎亮了。“你只需要付出一点努力。哈哈哈!”我和乔治呆地站在那里看着他完成整个工作,感激和钦佩在我心中涌动。我脚的疼痛、冰冷的雨和顽固的平轮胎也松开了,在女人温暖的茶里,男人的英雄呐喊,远处的山景,还有比加莱尔再次出发的喜悦。Part4:灵活应用例1:老夫妇帮助我阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。(满分25分)Manyyearsago,whenIwasfreshoutofschoolandworkinginDenver,Iwasdrivingtomyparents'homeinMissouriforChristmas.Istoppedatagasstation(加油站)about50milesfromOklahomaCity,whereIwasplanningtostopandvisitafriend.WhileIwasstandinginlineatthecashregister(收款台),Isaidhellotoanoldercouplewhowerealsopayingforgas.Itookoff,buthadgoneonlyafewmileswhenblacksmokepouredfromthebackofmycar.IstoppedandwonderedwhatIshoulddo.Acarpulledupbehindme.ItwasthecoupleIhadspokentoatthegasstation.Theysaidtheywouldtakemetomyfriend's.Wechattedonthewayintothecity,andwhenIgotoutofthecar,thehusbandgavemehisbusinesscard.Iwrotehimandhiswifeathank-younoteforhelpingme.Soonafterward,IreceivedaChristmaspresentfromthem.Theirnotethatcamewithitsaidthathelpingmehadmadetheirholidaysmeaningful.Yearslater,Idrovetoameetinginanearbytowninthemorning.InlateafternoonIreturnedtomycarandfoundthatI'dleftthelightsonallday,andthebattery(电池)wasdead.ThenInoticedthattheFriendlyForddealership-ashopsellingcars-wasrightnextdoor.Iwalkedoverandfoundtwosalesmenintheshowroom.注意:1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右;,优点英语2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为二段,每段的开头语已经为你写好;4续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1Ienteredtheshop,andoneofthesalesmancametome.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2Afterawhile,theyquicklydroveapickuptrucktomycarandstartedit.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph1Ienteredtheshop,andoneofthesalesmancametome.Irecognizedhimatonce.thetwosalesmenweretheoldercouple,andtheyweretheownersoftheFriendlyForddealership.“Hey,it’syou!youeverhelpedme,remember?”Isaidtothemexcitedly.Yeah,wedo!”theoldmanlaughed,weruntheshoptohelpmorepeople.youknow,itmakesourlifesomeaningful!”我走进商店,其中一个推销员来找我。我立刻认出了他。这两名销售员是老夫妇,他们是友好的福特经销商的老板。“嘿,是你!”你曾经帮助过我,记得吗?我兴奋地对他们说。是的,老人笑了,我们经营商店是为了帮助更多的人。你知道,这让我们的生活如此有意义!”Paragraph2Afterawhile,theyquicklydroveapickuptrucktomycarandstartedit.theysolvedmytroubleonceagain,butwhenIpaidforit,theywouldnotacceptmymoney.theytoldmethatwhentheyrantheshopatfirst,noonehadevertakenthetimetowritethemandsaythankyou,,优点英语butnowtheyreceivedmoreandmorethank-younotesfrompeople,whichtheywerereallyhappyabout.过了一会儿,他们很快就开了一辆小货车到我的车前,发动了它。他们再次解决了我的麻烦,但当我付钱时,他们不会接受我的钱。他们告诉我,当他们一开始经营商店的时候,没有人花时间写声谢谢,但现在他们收到了越来越多的感谢信,他们真的很高兴。例2:帮助老妇人“Hurry,Marcus!”Milliecalledtoherbrother.Marcuscaughtupjustastheschoolbusarrived.Thedoorsopenedandtheygottheirfirstlookatthenewbusdriver,Mr.Cross.Therewasnosmileonhisface.Hejustnoddedatthemastheyclimbedthesteps.Milliewonderedifheeversmiled.“Imissourolddriver,”shewhispered.Thebustraveledtwomoreblocks,thenstoppedinfrontofahousewithnooneinsight.“Hey,wedon’tusuallystophere,”whisperedMillie.Mr.Crossopenedthebusdoors.Milliewaitedtoseewhowouldgeton,butnobodydid.Still,Mr.Crossnoddedhishead,thewayhehadwhensheandMarcusboardedthebus.Thenheclosedthedoors.“Didyouseethat?”Milliesaid.“Hejustopenedthedoorsandnoddedatsomeone,butnobodygoton!”Marcusagreed.“Thatwasstrange.”Thebuscontinuedontheroute,andtheusualkidsgoton.Mr.Crossnoddedateachone.Duringschoolthatday,Milliekeptthinkingbacktowhathadhappenedthatmorning.Itdidn'tmakesense.Attheendoftheday,whensheandMarcusgotonthebustogohome,Marcussaid,“IthinkIfigureditout.Heprobablystoppedtopickupaghostkid!”“Aghostkid?”Milliegulped(倒吸气).“MaybeMr.Crosscanseeghosts,”Marcussaid.“No,”saidMillie.“That’ssilly.”Butastheyrodehome,Milliethoughtaboutit.Whatelse,优点英语coulditbe?Whyelsewouldheopenthedoors?Thenexttwodays,thesamethinghappened.Thebusstoppedandthedoorsopened.Smileless,Mr.Crossnodded,andthedoorsclosed.Milliebegantopanic.ThistimeshedecidedMarcuswasright.“Whoisthisghostkid?Whatifhe’ssittingnexttous?”Theygatheredcouragetofindoutthetruth.OnFridaymorning,thebusstoppedatthathouseagain.Theirheartsraced.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右:2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。WhenMr.Crossopenedthedoorsandnoddedtonobody,theywentforwardtohim.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hearingthestory,inrelief,theydecidedtovisitthehouseandseewhatcanbedone.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】WhenMr.Crossopenedthedoorsandnoddedtonobody,theywentforwardtohim.Milliesaid,“Excuseme,Mr.Cross,whogetsonatthisstopeverymorning?”Mr.Crossreplied,“Iamafraidthattherearesomemisunderstandingsbetweenus.Ihaveanoldfriendwholivesintheoldhouseattheendofthisblock.Everydayatthistime,shewillwaveatmeinfrontofthehouse.Icanalsoseeherinthedistanceandknowthatsheishealthyandsafe.IamsotallthatIhavetonodmyheadtolookoutside.”,优点英语克罗斯先生开门,没有向任何人点点头,他们就向他走去。米莉说:“对不起,克罗斯先生,他每天早上都会在这里停留?”克罗斯先生回答说:“恐怕我们之间有些误解。”我有一个老朋友住在这个街区尽头的老房子里。每天在这个时候,她都会在房子前向我挥手。我也可以在远处看到她,我知道她很健康,很安全。我太高了,我得点头才能看外面。”Hearingthestory,inrelief,theydecidedtovisitthehouseandseewhatcanbedone.Asapproachingthehouse,theysawanoldwomansittingonachairwithadognexttoher.Theyintroducedthemselvestothisoldwoman.Fromthenon,theyoftencametohelptheoldwomanwithsomehouseworkonweekends.WiththegeneroushelpofMillieandMarcus,theoldwomannolongerfeltlonely.Sheoftentoldthemsomeoldstoriesandtheybecamegoodfriends.克罗斯先生开门,没有向任何人点点头,他们就向他走去。米莉说:“对不起,克罗斯先生,他每天早上都会在这里停留?”克罗斯先生回答说:“恐怕我们之间有些误解。”我有一个老朋友住在这个街区尽头的老房子里。每天在这个时候,她都会在房子前向我挥手。我也可以在远处看到她,我知道她很健康,很安全。我太高了,我得点头才能看外面。”【解析】【分析】这是一篇记叙文。米莉和她的弟弟马库斯乘坐的校车换了司机,新司机开车每次过两个街区都会停下来,并没有任何人上车,司机都会点一下头。米莉和马库斯既害怕又纳闷。终于有一天,他们决心弄清楚这件事情。【详解】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知,米莉和她的弟弟乘坐的校车换了司机,新司机叫克罗斯,他们觉得新司机很陌生,脸上没有笑容。更令他们害怕的是,校车每次过两个街区,克罗斯先生就会把车停下来,并没有任何人上车,但是司机都会点一下头。他们很诧异,弟弟马库斯猜测说,克罗斯先生在那一站接上来的是“鬼孩子”,米莉并不这么想,但是也很害怕。接下来的几天都是这样,他们忍不住了。终于有一天,他们鼓起勇气,决心把这个事情弄明白。,优点英语续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:当克罗斯先生打开门,对着无人的地方点头示意时,他们向他走去……因此,接下来应该续写,司机克罗斯先生是怎样把这个事情跟米莉姐弟解释清楚的。原来是一场误会,克罗斯先生有一位老朋友就住在这附近,这位老朋友是个老妇人,年龄大了,自己孤独的住在这里。每次到车到这的时候,老妇人都会出来和他挥挥手,他也能从远处看看她,看到老朋友是健康的、安全的,他就放心了。第二段开头是:听到这个故事,他们松了一口气,决定去这个房子看看能做些什么……本段续写他们认识了住在房子里的老妇人,并且经常在周末的时候来帮助老人做家务,他们也成了很好的朋友。【点睛】本文描写详略得当,使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如:waveat,infrontof,inthedistance,nolonger等高级词汇;定语从句Ihaveanoldfriendwholivesintheoldhouseattheendofthisblock;结果状语从句IamsotallthatIhavetonodmyheadtolookoutside;运用了Withthegeneroushelpof...的with复合结构等高级句式。Part5:高考真题再现真题1:好心的墨西哥家庭【2021年八省联考】阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Duringthispastyear,I’vehadthreeinstancesofcartrouble.Eachtimethesethingshappened,Iwassickofthewaymostpeoplehadn’tbotheredtohelp.Oneofthosetimes,IwasonthesideoftheroadforclosetothreehourswithmybigJeep.Iputsignsinthewindows,bigsignsthatsaidNEEDAJACK(千斤顶),andofferedmoney.Nothing.RightasIwasabouttogiveup,aMexicanfamilyinasmalltruckpulledover,andthefatherboundedout.Hesizedupthesituationandcalledforhisdaughter,whospokeEnglish.HeconveyedthroughherthathehadajackbutthatitwastoosmallfortheJeep,sowewouldneedsomethingtosupportit.Thenhegotasaw(锯子)fromthetruckandcutasectionoutofabiglogonthesideoftheroad.Werolleditoverandputhisjackontop,andwewereinbusiness.Istartedtakingthewheeloff,andthen,ifyoucanbelieveit,Ibrokehistireiron.Noworries:Hehandedittohiswife,andshewasgoneinaflashdowntheroadtobuyanewtireiron.She,优点英语wasbackin15minutes.Wefinishedthejob,andIwasaveryhappyman.Thetwoofusweredirtyandsweaty.Hiswifepreparedapotofwaterforustowashourhands.Itriedtoputa$20billintheman’shand,buthewouldn’ttakeit,soinsteadIwentuptothetruckandgaveittohiswifeasquietlyasIcould.Iaskedthelittlegirlwheretheylived.Mexico,shesaid.TheywereinOregonsoMommyandDaddycouldworkonafruitfarmforthenextfewweeks.Thentheywouldgohome.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI’dhadlunch.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI’dhadlunch.Hearingwhatshesaid,IrealizedthatIdidn’thavelunch.Tobehonest,afterworkinghardforseveralhours,Iwassohungry.Feelingabitembarrassed,Ireplied:“no!”Thegirlsaidwithasmile,“Comeon!Joinus.TheMexiconsandwichisdelicious!”Withmovedtearsrollingaroundmyeyes,Itookthesandwich.Aftereatingitlikewolf,IfeltthatitwasthetastysandwichthatIhadeverhad.Whiledining,Italkedaboutmytroubleandfeelingsandtheysharedtheir interestingstoriesinthelife.Then,,优点英语thegirl’smotherhadanothersandwichandsomefruitplace dinapaperbagandhandedittome,saying gently:“Keepitandhaveitlater!Wehadtogonow.” Ishowedmyheartfeltgratitudetothemandsaw themdisappearinmysight.Aftertheyleft,Igotintomyjeepandopenedthe paperbag. Whatsurprisedmealotwasthattherewasasandwich,fruit andthebillgivenbyme.Holdingthepaperbagtightly,Istoodstill,awarmcurrentrisinginmyheart.HowgratefulwasItothefamilyhelpingme.AlthoughmostofpeopleImetontheroadwereindifferent,therewerestillsomepeoplelikethisfamilywhowassohelpfuland thoughtful.Fromthenon,Iplacedajackandsomecommontoolsinmycar.Whenmeetingpeoplein needontheroad,Iwouldtrymybesttohelpthemlikethefamily.Onlyinthisway,couldmoreandmorepeoplehelpeachotherinthefuture.真题2:买爆米花助穷人【2020年7月山东卷】第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。TheMeredithfamilylivedinasmallcommunity.Astheeconomywasindecline,somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet.Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges.Mrs.Meredithwasamostkindandthoughtfulwoman.Shespentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor.Sheknewtheyhadproblems,andtheyneededallkindsofhelp.Whenshehadtime,shewouldbringfoodandmedicinetothem.Onemorningshetoldherchildrenaboutafamilyshehadvisitedthedaybefore.Therewasamansickinbed,hiswife,whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,andtheirlittleboy.Thelittleboy—hisnamewasBernard—hadinterestedherverymuch.“Iwishyoucouldseehim,”shesaidtoherownchildren,John,Harry,andClara.“Heissuch,优点英语ahelptohismother.Hewantsverymuchtoearnsomemoney,butIdon’tseewhathecando.”Aftertheirmotherlefttheroom,thechildrensatthinkingaboutBernard.“Iwishwecouldhelphimtoearnmoney,”saidClara.“Hisfamilyissufferingsomuch.”“SodoI,”saidHarry.“Wereallyshoulddosomethingtoassistthem.”Forsomemoments,Johnsaidnothing,but,suddenly,hesprangtohisfeetandcried,“Ihaveagreatidea!Ihaveasolutionthatwecanallhelpaccomplish(完成).”Theotherchildrenalsojumpedupallattention.WhenJohnhadanidea,itwassuretobeagoodone.“Itellyouwhatwecando,”saidJohn.“YouknowthatbigboxofcornUncleJohnsentus?Well,wecanmakepopcorn(爆米花),andputitintopaperbags,andBernardcantakeitaroundtothehousesandsellit.”注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn’sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________,优点英语Onepossibleversion:WhenMrs.Meredithheardoftheidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.ThenMrs.Meredithsearchedtheinternetandorderedahouseholdpopcornmachine.Afterthat,Mrs.Meredith,togetherwithherthreechildren,paidanothervisittothefamilyandtoldthemaboutthepopcornplan.Needlesstosay,theyweredeeplymoved,especiallyBernardwhofinallyfoundawaytomakemoneyforhisfamily.Afewdayslater,themachinewasdeliveredtoMrs.Meredith’sdoorstep.Anditwasn’tlongbeforetheygotthehangofusingthemachinetomakepopcorn.Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.Althoughitwasahardtimeandthingsweretightforeverybody,Bernard’sbusinessworkedoutquitewell.Hecarriedthepopcornonhissmallbike,goingfromdoortodoortosellit.Peopleweresurprisedtoseesuchalittle,poorly-dressedboysellingpopcornattheirdoors,buteventuallyalmostallofthemwouldbuyabagortwo.ItislovethatmakestheworldgoroundandBernardfeltitdeepinhislittleheart.(续写词数:164)