优点英语读后续写：成长类Part1：经典例文（街边按铃）1Part2：成长类故事构造“三部曲”4第一步：成长前的苦恼（负面情绪塑造）4第二步：成长中（蜕变塑造）5第三步：成长后的升华（喜悦+感激+升华）6Part3：成长类场景描写7一、学习知识而成长7二、发挥天赋促成长7三、追逐梦想而成长8四、克服困难促而成长8Part4：灵活应用9例1：一首歌改变了我9例2：柔道比赛11Part5：高考真题再现（我的第一份薪水）13【2021年6月浙江卷】13Part1：经典例文（街边按铃）阅读下面材料。根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。RingaBell,优点英语Ms.Tracylookedupfromheryellownotebookandclearedherthroat.Thenoiseintheclassdieddownasweturnedtowardher."We'regoingtohelpacharitytocollectmoneybyringingabell.Eachofyouwillringitforfourhours,"sheannounced.Asthewordsleftherlips,complaintscouldbeheardaroundtheroom.Unwillingly,Idugformyplannerandlooknotes.Fourhoursofringingastupidbell.FourhoursthatIcouldbestudyingfortheSAT.Wasthissupposedtobeajoke?Ijoinedthestudentsaroundthetableandsignedupfor1hefirstdayofbreak-togetitoverwith.Afewweekslater,Iwasstandingnexttothebigblue-and-whiteWalmart.Therewasanotherguyholdingajaracrossfromme.Great,Iwasgoingtobestuckhereringingabellwithaguywhowastryingtogetdonationsforanothercharity.Totopitoff,itwasonlyabout4.4℃.Slowly,Iputonthereddressbearingthesymbolofowcharity.IhopedthatIalreadyspenttwominutesdoingthat,Ring!Ring!Agroupofolderwomencameupwiththeirwalkingstickstodropinsomechange.Аmanwithаbroad-cimmеdbatcamebyandputsomecoinsin.Icheckedmyphone.Just10minuteshadpassed.Astrongbitterly-coldwindblewagainstmyfreezingface.Iwasstartingtoregretignoringmymom'sadvicetowearascarf.Ilookedup,wishingthattimewouldpassmorequickly.Afewbirdssweptaroundthepoles.Theskywasgentlyblue.Palmtreeswavedinthecoldwind.Howcomfortableitmightbetocurl(蜷缩)upwithahotcupofteaandabookonthecozysofa.Thenanotherringbroughtmebacktoreality.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右；Fromtheparkinglotsteppedoutapoorly-dressedman,walkingwithdifficultytowardme._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inspiredbyhisgenerosity,Icontinuedtoringmybellhappily.,优点英语_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Fromtheparkinglotsteppedoutapoorly-dressedman,walkingwithdifficultytowardme.Isawhisunbalancedshouldersandawkwardfigure.Hishairwasamessandhisshirtwasdirty.Istoppedringingthebell,wonderingwhathewasgoingtodo.Hepulledsomechangeoutofhiswornpocketandreachedtowardsthebucket.Icouldn'thelpbutsay,"Thankyou,sir."Heturnedtosmile.Themoneyhedonatedwasnotalot,butitwasclearlyalottohim.Thisactofcharity,thoughnotmuch,wasworthsomuchmorethandonationsgivenbythosewhowerebetteroff.从停车场从一个衣着不好的男人走出来，艰难地朝我走去。我看到了他那不平衡的肩膀和尴尬的身材。他的头发很乱，衬衫也很脏。我不再按铃了，不知道他要做什么。他从破旧的口袋里掏出一些零钱，伸手向水桶走去。我忍不住要说，“谢谢你，先生。”他转身微笑起来。他捐的钱并不多，但显然对他来说是很多的。这项慈善行为虽然不多，但比那些富裕的捐款价值得多。Inspiredbyhisgenerosity,Icontinuedtoringmybellhappily.Thebellrangsomerrilythatitattractedmorepeople.Ibroadlysmiledateveryonewhoapproachedme,feelingmeshamefulinsideaboutmyunwillingnessandresistancewhengiventhetask.ItwasstillchillybutIwasbathedinthesunshineofkindness.Manysaythatthesedayspeoplearebecomingmoreandmoreselfish.IsaythatwhoeverbelievesthatneedstogoandringabellforacharityasIdid受他慷慨的启发，我继续高兴地按铃。钟响得很愉快，所以它吸引了更多的人。我对所有走近我的人哈哈一笑，当我接受任务时，我的不情愿和抵抗感到可耻。天气仍然很冷，但我却沐浴在善良的阳光下。许多人说，现在人们已经变得越来越自私了。我说，那些认为需要这样做的人都会像我一样去为慈善机构打电话【解析】本文以态度变化为线索展开，讲述了作者一开始对于摇铃的任务很抗拒，在执行过程中感受到了人性的温暖与伟大，慢慢的开始接受并积极起来的故事。1.段落续写：,优点英语①由第一段首句内容“一个衣衫褴褛的男人从停车场出来，艰难地向我走来。”可知，第一段可描写作者通过这个男人的捐赠态度发生改变。②由第二段首句内容“受他慷慨大方的鼓舞，我继续愉快地按门铃。”可知，第二段可描写作者感受到人性的温暖，反思自己。2.续写线索：不情愿——后悔——感动——积极——感悟3.词汇激活行为类①向某人走过来：walktoward/upto②掏出：pulloutof/take/pickout情绪类①感谢：thanksbfor/showone’sappreciation/gratitude/begrateful②感到羞耻：beashamedof/feelashamed【点睛】[高分句型1]:Istoppedringingthebell,wonderingwhathewasgoingtodo.这句话运用了what引导的宾语从句。[高分句型2]：Themoneyhedonatedwasnotalot,butitwasclearlyalottohim.这句话运用了省略关系代词的定语从句。[高分句型3]：Thisactofcharity,thoughnotmuch,wasworthsomuchmorethandonationsgivenbythosewhowerebetteroff.这句话运用了who引导的定语从句。Part2：成长类故事构造“三部曲”第一步：成长前的苦恼（负面情绪塑造）1、孤独,优点英语Inevermadefriendseasily(从不容易交朋友),andforatimeIdidlittlemorethangetonspeakingtermswithsomeboys.（2021年4月宁波二模）2、伤心1.我在口袋里什么也没发现，这个事实就像一把长矛刺进我的心脏，立刻开始流血。Ifoundnothinginmypocket,afactthatseemedlikeaspearpiercingintomyheartwhichstartedtobleedimmediately.（2021年4月宁波二模）2.看了看周围，我焦急地几乎哭了起来。（2021年4月宁波二模）Lookingaroundanxiously,Ialmostburstintocrying.3.就在我崩溃的时候，克劳利带领的一群男孩从我身边走过（2021年4月宁波二模）JustatthetimeIbrokedown,agroupofboysledbyCrawleypassedme.3、惭愧1.Shewasoverwhelmed/overcome/consumedwithguiltandshame(被内疚和羞愧淹没).（2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）2.Suddenlyshecamealive（精神就为之一振）,wavingherarthritic(关节炎的)hands.（2021广二模）3.Awaveofguiltsweptoverme(一阵恐惧向我袭来)andIhadtoadmitthefactthatIhadgonetothemoviesandthatwastherealreasonwhyIwaslate.（2020届山东省滨州市高三第二次模拟英语试题）4、嘲笑,优点英语他们大声地笑着，像是在尖叫“多漂亮的破表啊！”（2021年4月宁波二模）TheylaughedloudlywithCrawleyscreamingwordslike“Whatafinestbrokenwatch!”5、绝望我妈妈不让我带，”我撒谎，绝望在我心中沸腾。（2021年4月宁波二模）“Mymotherwouldn'tletmebringit,”Ilied,desperationboilinginsideme.6、紧张1.Meanwhile,Kariesatrestlesslyinherseatwithherfingerscrossed(她的手指交叉着).（2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）2.Shetoldtheteacherthetruth,withherheartthumping/pounding/pumpinglikeadrum(她的心跳得像打鼓一样).（2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）3.Havingpacedupanddownrestlessly(不安地来回走动)infrontofthetheteacher'soffice,shefinallygatheredcourageandploddedin.（2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）7、害怕Iunknowingly(不知不觉地)avoidedinteracting(interact)withanyonebecauseIwasafraidthey’dlaughinmyface(我很害怕他们会当面取笑我).（2021沈阳市一模）第二步：成长中（蜕变塑造）1、惊讶Raisinghereyebrowsinsurprise,MrsRossifroze,asifrootedontheground（仿佛定格在那里）.（2021广二模）,优点英语2、希望Jaycelookeduptohim,hiseyessparklingwithhopeanddetermination（闪烁着希望和决心）.（2021年汕头一模）3、教育与成长1.“That’snottherightway.Patience,Will.Patience,”avoiceechoedinmyears(一个声音在我耳边回响)aftertheboysleft.（2021年4月宁波二模）2.“Whatwasdonewasdone,”thoughtItomyself.“Whatisimportantnowistodocorrectthingsnext(现在重要的是下一步要做正确的事情).”（2021年4月宁波二模）3.尽管愤怒、尴尬和悲伤重重地笼罩在空气中，但这个声音还是让我意识到我在试图给同学留下深刻印象时犯下的错误。（2021年4月宁波二模）Thoughanger,embarrassmentandsadnesshungheavilyintheair,thevoicedrewmetotheawarenessofthemistakesIhadmadewhenIattemptedtoimpresstheboys.第三步：成长后的升华（喜悦+感激+升华）1、喜悦1.Kariegrinned(grin)asshereadthelabelonthebox.（2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）2.Dadlookedatthepaper,withhislipscurvingintoasmile（他的嘴唇弯成了微笑）.（2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）3.Hearingthat,Kariegrinnedfromeartoear,awaveofhappinessfloodingoverher（幸福的浪潮涌上她的心头）.（2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）2、感激Ilookedather,tearsofloveandgratitude(感动和爱的泪水)wellingupinmyeyes.,优点英语（2021沈阳市一模）3、升华句1.我确信，将来每当我失去耐心时，我都会记住祖父的话。（2021年4月宁波二模）IknewforsurethateverytimeIlostpatienceinthefutureIwouldremembermygrandfather’swords.2.这是我第一次真正体会到这份礼物的意义——耐心。（2021年4月宁波二模）ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadtrulyrealizedthemeaningofthegift---patience.然而，从那时起，我保证这只破表会一直提醒我耐心等待，直到真相出现。（2021年4月宁波二模）2、Aramsaid,“Thanks,MrsRossi,forteachingmehowtomakeacaketorealizemydream（实现我的梦想）.”MrsRossiheldhishands,saying,“Itisyouwhoteachmehowtosticktomydream(坚持我的梦想).”（2021广二模）4、ItdawnedonAramthat（Aram突然想到）“Oneshouldsticktohis/herdreamnomatterwhathappens.”（2021广二模））,优点英语Part3：成长类场景描写一、学习知识而成长知识就是力量！在改变的过程中，学习不同的知识，然后才能面对各种困难和挑战。比如屏幕前的你，不就是在学习读后续写的技巧吗？请看下面的例句，也是我送给正在学习的你。It'snevertoolatetolearn.Eachindividualhastherighttoacceptmorechallengesandmakemore attempts.学习永远为时不晚。每个人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。【分析】individual这里表示“个人，个体”。makemore attempts做更多尝试。二、发挥天赋促成长认识自身天赋，并且发挥天赋，这是改变我们的现状的一个重要条件。请看下面的例句。Actually,everyindividualpossessestalent.Bebravewhenyoufinditandalsomakeefforts.Youcancreatemiraclesintheend. 事实上，每个人都有天赋，发现它的时候要勇敢，也要付出努力，最终你会创造奇迹。【分析】possess拥有。createmiracles表示创造奇迹。,优点英语三、追逐梦想而成长永远不要忽视了梦想的力量！“做人如果没有理想,跟咸鱼有什么区别呢”。请看下面两个例句。 It'snevertoolatetogoforyourdream.Aslongasyougraspeveryopportunityandtakefulladvantageofit,youwillstandachancetorealizeyourdreams.追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住机会，充分利用机会，你就有机会实现梦想。Aslongaswedaretodreamanddon'tletdifficultiesgetinourway,anythingispossible.只要我们敢于梦想，不被困难所阻挡，一切皆有可能。【分析】takefulladvantageof充分利用，realizeyourdreams表示“实现梦想”四、克服困难促而成长只有克服各种苦难，才能改变现状。请看下面的例句。Thejourneytosuccessisnotsmooth.Itisfullofchallengesanddifficulties.Weshouldbebravetofacethem.Aslongaswedon’tgiveuphopeandmakeeveryefforttoovercomeallthedifficulties,wewillsurelyachieveourgoal(success)finally.通往成功的路不会平坦，充满挑战和艰辛。我们要勇敢面对。只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难，我们最终会实现我们的目标（成功）。【分析】smooth表示“平坦的”overcomeallthedifficulties表示“克服困难”；makeeveryeffort表示“做出努力”；aslongas，表示“只要”，引导条件状语从句。,优点英语Part4：灵活应用例1：一首歌改变了我阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。WherewereyouwhenyoufirstheardMyHeartWillGoOn?Youknowthatlovesongthattookovertheworldinthelate1990s,theonethatruledradiosandtelevisionscreens,thattrilledthroughtheairwhenyourangyourneighbour’sdoorbell,orrangoutofaValentine’sDaymusicalcard—thesongwelovetohatenowbecauseitisalmostshamefultoadmithowmuchwelistenedtoitin1998.I’mnofanofthesong,butI’lltellyouonething—itsavedmylife.IrememberwhereIwaswhenIheardthesong,13yearsold,onlyafewweeksawayfromreceivingmyclasseightreportcard.WhenmymotherandIwenttocollectitfromschool,theskiesweregrey.Ontheleftsideofthereportcardwasthefailureofmychoosing—Maths,PhysicsandChemistry—onthebottomoftherighthandsideitsaidNotPromoted(不升级)inredink.Mymother,anEnglishteacherinanotherCalcuttaschool,wastooproudtobegtheprincipalforthethreemarksIneededinChemistrytobepromotedtoclassnine.Iwalkedalong,thinkingofthelastsongIwaswatchingonMTVbeforeweleftforschool.ItwasDion’sall­knowinghitMyHeartWillGoOn:“Youhavecometoshowyou,goon...”IwasafooltohaveeverthoughtthatIcouldgetawaywithnotstudyingandwatchingMTVforhoursonend.Tillclasseight,myfatherhadrefusedtogetacableconnectiononthegroundsthatmybrotherandIwouldforeverbegluedtothescreen,notstudyandfailtheexams.Theyearafterhegaveintohisdesiretowatchlatenightfootball,Iprovedhimright.IfailedclasseightbecauseIwasinlovewiththeBackstreetBoysandwouldwatchMTVallthetimesothatIwouldn’tmissasinglevideo.That’sthewholetruthandthebandwillneverknowthepriceIpaidformylove.,优点英语Paragraph1：FailingtheyearchangedtheworldasIknewit.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Somemonthslater,whenthetalentcompetitionwasannouncedinschool,Iwaspickedforthefinalround.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】FailingtheyearchangedtheworldasIknewit.Overnight,itseemedasthougheverythinghadchanged.Ilostmyfriendsinschoolbecauseeveryconversationwasfilledwithpity,theirs,andshame,mine.IwasstoppedfromwatchingTV.Atschool,someteachersignoredmyraisinghandsbecauseI’dalreadystudiedthetextbeforebutfailed.Iusedtolovesinging,nowmylifewasfilledwithsadness.失败的这一年改变了我所知道的世界。一夜之间，一切似乎都变了。我在学校失去了朋友，因为每次谈话都充满了我的怜悯和羞愧。我已经不再看电视了。在学校，一些老师无视我的举手，因为我以前已经学习过课文，但失败了。我曾经喜欢唱歌，现在我的生活中充满了悲伤。Somemonthslater,whenthetalentcompetitionwasannouncedinschool,Iwaspickedforthefinalround.Onthedayofthecontest,Istoodbeforetheentireschool,closedmyeyesandsangthesong.Inthatmoment,Irealizedwhat“Youhavecometoshowyou”meanttome—Ihadcometoshowmetomyclassmatesandmyteachers,toshowthemthatIwasn’tjustagirlwhogotheldback,thatfailed,thatIwasgoodforsomething,thatIwasenoughthewayIwas.Sometimes,whenyousinglikeyoumeanthewords,chancesareyoumightwin.,优点英语几个月后，当学校宣布了比赛时，我被选中进入了决赛。比赛那天，我站在整个学校面前，闭上眼睛，唱着这首歌。在那一刻，我意识到“我要展示给你看”对我意味着什么——我来给我的同学和老师，让他们展示我不只是一个女孩。有时候，当你像唱歌的时候，你很有可能会赢的机会。例2：柔道比赛阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Sometimesyourbiggestweaknesscanbecomeyourbiggeststrength.Everyonehashisownweakness，butGodalwaysoffershisunexpectedstrengthinhismisfortune.We’dmakefulluseofitjustlikethegirlbelow，wearecertainlyfortunatetobegivenotherblessingsfromHeaven.Thestoryofonegirlwhodecidedtostudyjudo(柔道)despitethefactthatshehadlostherleftarminacaraccident.ThegirlbeganlessonswithanoldJapanesejudoinstructor.Thegirlwasdoingwell.Soshecouldn’tunderstandwhy，afterthreemonthsoftraining，theinstructorhadtaughtheronlyonemove.“Instructor，”thegirlfinallysaid，“Shouldn’tIbelearningmoremoves?Itisn’tfarenoughtolearnjustthis.”“Thisistheonlymoveyouknow，butthisistheonlymoveyou’lleverneedtoknow，”theinstructorreplied.Notquiteunderstanding，butbelievinginherteacher，thegirlkepttraining.Shedidn’tdaretocomplainaboutanythinganditwasapparentthatsinceherteachersaidso，shehadtofollowwithoutanyunhappiness.Severalmonthslater，theinstructortookthegirltoherfirsttournament.Surprisingherself，thegirleasilywonherfirsttwomatches.Thethirdmatchprovedtobemoredifficult，butafter,优点英语sometime，heropponentbecameimpatientandcharged.Thegirlskillfullyusedheronemovetowinthematch.Stillamazedbyhersuccess，thegirlwasnowinthefinals.Thistime，heropponentwasbigger，strongerandmoreexperienced.Forawhile，thegirlappearedtobeover-matched.Concernedthatthegirlmightgethurt，therefereecalledatimeout.Shewasabouttostopthematchwhentheinstructorinterrupted.“No，”theinstructorinsisted，“Lethercontinue.”Soonafterthematchstartedagain，heropponentmadeacriticalmistake:shedroppedherguard.Instantly，thegirlusedhermovetoholdheropponenttightly.Thegirlhadwonthematchandthetournament.Shewasthechampion.Paragraph1：Onthewayhome,thegirlandherteacherreviewedeverymoveineachandeverymatch.___________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：“Tworeasonsaccountforthatyouwon，”theteacheranswered.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onthewayhome，thegirlandherteacherreviewedeverymoveineachandeverymatch.Thenthegirltookcouragetoaskwhatwasreallyonhermind.“Instructor，howdidIwinthetournamentwithonlyonemove？Isthereanymagicpoweraboutit?Ismyopponentmuchweakerthanme？Pleasetellmethesecret.”Thejudoinstructorandhispupiltalkedexcitedlyaswalkingforward.Shecouldn’twaittoknowtheanswer，buttheinstructorappearedunhurriedly.Finallyheopenedhismouth.,优点英语在回家的路上，女孩和她的老师回顾了每一场比赛的每一个动作。然后女孩鼓起勇气问她到底在想什么。“教练，我是怎么只花一步就赢得锦标赛的？”它有什么魔力吗？我的对手会比我弱得多吗？请告诉我这个秘密。柔道教练和他的学生兴奋地说。她迫不及待地想知道答案，但老师却急匆匆地出现了。最后，他张开了嘴。“Tworeasonsaccountforthatyouwon，”theteacheranswered.“First，you’vealmostmasteredoneofthemostdifficultthrowsinallofjudo.Second，theonlyknowndefenseforthatmoveisforyouropponenttograbyourleftarm.Itisyourbiggestweaknessthatmakesyouwinthematch.Asaproverbsays，‘Everycoinhastwosides.’Makingfulluseofyourstrengthisyourachievement.Pleaserememberthatinnocasewillyougiveupespeciallyintrouble.Godisfairtoeveryone.”“你赢有两个原因，”老师回答，“首先，你几乎掌握了柔道最困难的投掷之一。其次，唯一已知的防守是让你的对手抓住你的左臂。这是你最大的弱点，让你赢得了比赛。正如谚语所说，“每枚硬币都有两面性。”充分利用你的力量是你的成就。请记住，无论如何你都不会放弃，尤其是在麻烦中。上帝对每个人都是公平的。”Part5：高考真题再现（我的第一份薪水）【2021年6月浙江卷】My dad,George,onlyhadaneighthgradeeducation.Aquietman,hedidn'tunderstandmyworldofschoolactivities.Fromage14,he worked.Andhisdad,Albert,tookthemoneymydadearnedandusedittopay family expenses.Ididn'treallyunderstandhisworldeither:Hewasalivestocktrucker,andlthoughtthatIwouldsurpass（超过）anythinghehadaccomplishedbythetimelwalkedacrossthestageathighschoolgraduation.Summersinthemid,70swerespentathomeshootingbaskets,hittingabaseball,orthrowingafootball,preparingformy future asaquarterbackonafootballteam.Inpoorweather,Ireadaboutsportsorpracticedmytrombone（长号）.,优点英语ThesummerbeforemyeighthgradeIwasoneofagroupofboysthataneighboring farmer hiredtoworkinhisfield.Heexplainedourbasictask,thetractorfiredupandwewereoff,ridingdownthefieldlookingforweedstospraywithchemicals.Afterashortway,thefarmerstoppedandpaintedataweedwhichwemissed.Thenwebeganagain.Thishappenedoverandover,butwesoon learned toidentifydifferentgrasseslikecockleburs,lamb's-quarters,foxtails,andthekingofweeds,theprettypurplethistle.Itwas tiring work,butIlookedforwardtothepay,eventhoughIwasn'tsurehowmuchitwouldamountto.Athome,mydadsaid,"Ajob'sabigstepto growingup. I'mgladyouwillbecontributingtothehousehold." Mydad'swordsmademe realize thatmyearningmightnotbeminetodowithaswished.Mylaborslastedabouttwoweeks,andthefarmersaidtheremightbemorework,butIwasn'tinterested.Idecideditwasnot fair thatlhadtocontributemymoney.注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Thepaydayarrivedatlast.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswere worriedabout.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph1:,优点英语Thepaydayarrivedatlast.IwasgladthatIfinallygotthepaymentafterworkinghardfortwoweeks.Whilewalkingbackhomewithanexcitedmind.Iconceivedmanyplansabouthowtodisposeofit.Ineededanewfootballbecausetheoldoneweplayedhadalreadywornout.Iintendedtopurchasemyfavoritechocolates.Uponapproachingthehouse,Inoticedmydadandmomstandingbesidetheoldtruck,lookingsadly.Itseemedasifsomethingunpleasanthappened.“Howmuchdowestillneedtopayforanewtruck?".askedmymother.Threehundreddollars,butwejusthadtwohundredleft.”发薪日终于到了。我很高兴，在我努力工作了两周后，我终于得到了报酬。一边兴奋地走回家。我构思了许多关于如何处理它的计划。我需要一个新的足球，因为我们踢的旧足球已经用坏了。我打算买我最喜欢的巧克力。走近房子，我注意到我爸爸和妈妈站在旧卡车旁边，悲伤地看着。似乎发生了一些不愉快的事情。“我们想买一辆新卡车还得付多少钱？”。我妈妈问。300美元，但我们只剩下200美元了。”Paragraph2:Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.Really,thetruckmydaddroveoftenbrokedownontheway,whichmademydadintrouble.Myparentshadintendedtobuyanewtruckbutcouldn'taffordit.Suddenly,IrealizedwhatIshoulddo.Steppingforward,Isaid,“Dad,hereiswhatI receivedformywork.Ithinkitwouldhelpyoualittle.”AlittlesurprisedatwhatI said,mymomhuggedmetightly.Thatnight,beforeIwenttobed,lthoughtIwouldtellthefarmerthenextdaythatIwouldcontinuemywork,afteralllgrewup.我立刻明白了我的父母在担心什么。真的，我爸爸开的卡车在路上经常坏了，这给我爸爸惹上了麻烦。我父母本来打算买一辆新卡车，但买不起。突然，我意识到我应该做什么。我走上前去，说：“爸爸，这是我工作的回报。我想这会对你有帮助。我说的话有点惊讶，妈妈紧紧地拥抱着我。那天晚上，在我睡觉之前，我想第二天我会告诉农夫，在我长大了之后，我将继续我的工作。,优点英语
