优点英语2020-2021学年高二英语热点写作提升专练(通用版)热点11.通知+读后续写+概要写作1.因为李华教授突患感冒，原定于今天举行的“如何有效地开展病毒防治工作”的讲座推迟到下周五举行。现请你代表学生会写一份延期举行讲座的通知。内容包括：1.延期原因；2.时间：下周五下午3-5点；3.地点：学校礼堂；4.出席者：高二学生，也欢迎其他年级的师生；5.要求：认真听讲并做好笔记。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.参考词汇：礼堂auditorium。NoticeStudents’UnionJanuary26,2021【参考范文】NoticeWearesorrytoinformyouthatbecauseofasuddencoldProfessorLiHuacannotgivethelectureon“Howtoeffectivelypreventandcurethevirus”today.ThelecturewillbepostponedtonextFriday,from3to5pm,intheschool’sauditorium.AllSeniorTwostudentsarerequiredtoattendthelecture.Teachersandstudentsfromothergradesarealsowelcomed.Pleaselistencarefullyandtakenotesduringthelecture.,优点英语Students’UnionJanuary26,2021【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生代表学生会写一份延期举行讲座的通知。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。要求：1.延期原因；2.时间：下周五下午3-5点；3.地点：学校礼堂；4.出席者：高二学生，也欢迎其他年级的师生；5.要求：认真听讲并做好笔记。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）sudden;prevent;effectively;postpone;auditorium;require;takenotes第三步：连词成句1.WearesorrytoinformyouthatbecauseofasuddencoldProfessorLiHuacannotgivethelectureon“Howtoeffectivelypreventandcurethevirus”today.2.ThelecturewillbepostponedtonextFriday,from3to5pm,intheschool’sauditorium.3.AllSeniorTwostudentsarerequiredtoattendthelecture.4.Pleaselistencarefullyandtakenotesduringthelecture.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend(供参考)2.表并列补充关系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,(供参考)连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰【范文点评】[高分句型1]WearesorrytoinformyouthatbecauseofasuddencoldProfessorLiHuacannotgivethelectureon“Howtoeffectivelypreventandcurethevirus”today.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]ThelecturewillbepostponedtonextFriday,from3to5pm,intheschool’sauditorium.(运用了一般将来时的被动语态)2.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。,优点英语Birdsong“Nothingwilleverbethesameagain,”Allywhispered.Shesankslowlyintoherfather’sfavoritechairandstaredatthesmallAmericanflagonhisdesk.ItwastheflagwhichChiefRussellhadgiventoherafterthefuneral(葬礼)lastsummer,whenhehuggedherandtoldherhowproudthePoliceDepartmentwasofherdad’sworkforthem.HistearshadwarmedAlly’scheeks,andherowntearswerestillfrozeninsideherheart.Allylookedatherfather’spictureonthebookcase.Dadwassittinginthemiddleofastream,wetthroughbutgrinningproudly.“Imissyou,Dad,”shesaidsoftly.Bythistimelastyearshehadalreadytakendozensofpictures.Eversinceshecouldremember,sheandDadhadbeenateam,searchingthewoodsbehindthehouseeachweekendforaglimpseofthespecialwoodwarbler(林中莺).AllyreachedforthefirstphotoalbumsheandDadputtogether.Onthecoveratinyorangebirdwithblue-greywingsandsharpblackeyespeeredoutofthephotoherfatherhadclippedfromalocalnewspaper.Allysmiled,rememberingtheexcitedlookonhisfacewhenhefirstshowedhertheprettybird,“Ally,Ibetifwesearchrealhard,we’llseethislittleguytogethersomeday.”They’dneverspottedthewarbler,butherfatherhadanamazingwayofmakingeachoutingseemspecial.StayingwithDad,Allyfeltcomfortable.“IfonlyIcouldgetthatgoodfeelingback,”shethoughtsighing.Staringatthebird,shesuddenlyknewexactlywhatshehadtodo.Grabblingthelittleflag,sheplacedhercameraaroundherneckandhurriedoutside.Allystucktheflagamongtheflowersinthegarden.“PleaseletmeseetheWarbler,”shemurmuredtoherself.ShegaveherworriedMomakissandthensetoffintothewoods.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1Familiarsmellsoftheearthroseuptogreether.,优点英语Paragraph2Determinedtostartoutagainthenextmorning,shewasabouttoheadhomewhenaringingbirdsongfloateddowntoher.___________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Paragraph1:Familiarsmellsoftheearthroseuptogreether.Somethingsneverchange,Allythought.Quickeningherpace,shehurriedtotherockbythestreamwheresheandherfatherusedtositandeatlunch.Shesatonit,withherfacetowardthesun.Overheadtheskywasfilledwithbirdsbusilydivingtogatherdriedgrasstoplaceintheirnests.Theirsweetsongsechoedthroughoutthewoods.Allyfeltcontentforthefirsttimeinalongwhile.Shecouldalmosthearherfather’slaughterinthegentlebreezeasshelistenedforthesweetsongofthespecialbird.Alltoosoon,thesundisappearedbehindthickgrayclouds.Paragraph2:Determinedtostartoutagainthenextmorning,shewasabouttoheadhomewhenaringingbirdsongfloateddowntoher.Itwasprettierthananyshehadheardbefore.AnexcitedfeelingbubbledupinsideAllyasshesearchedthesky.Aflashoforangedasheddownandrestedonanearbybranch.ForamomentAllycouldn’tbelievehereyes,butitwastrue.Thetinywoodwarblerjustsatthere,lookingaround,asifitwerewaitingforsomething.Allyblinkedbacktears.“Thanks,Dad,”shewhisperedslowlyliftinghercameraandtakingcarefulaim.“Thingswillbedifferentwithoutyou.I’llalwaysmissourtimetogether,butIfeelbetternow.”【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Ally的父亲去年去世了，她翻看相册时看到了封面上一只橘黄色的小鸟，想起了父亲第一次给她看这只漂亮的小鸟时脸上激动的表情。她想着要是能把那种美好的感觉找回来就好了，于是她拿起相机动身走进了树林。,优点英语1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“熟悉的泥土气息向她袭来。”可知，第一段可描写Ally进入树林后的事情，她坐在和父亲过去常常坐的岩石上，感到满足。②由第二段首句内容“她决定第二天早上再出发，正准备回家的时候，传来了一阵鸟鸣的声音。”可知，第二段可描写Ally再次看到了橘黄色的小鸟，觉得很感动，自己会永远怀念和父亲在一起的时光。2.续写线索：进入森林——回忆过去——离开森林——遇见橘黄色的小鸟——感悟3.词汇激活行为类：①做决定：determinedtodo/makeadecision/makeone'smindtodosth；②.回家：gobackhome/returnhome；③.四处看：lookaround/lookabout情绪类：①.满足：feelcontentfor/toone'ssatisfaction/besatisfiedwith；②.激动：excited/fevered【范文点评】[高分句型1].Quickeningherpace,shehurriedtotherockbythestreamwheresheandherfatherusedtositandeatlunch.（由关系副词where引导的定语从句）[高分句型2].Shecouldalmosthearherfather’slaughterinthegentlebreezeasshelistenedforthesweetsongofthespecialbird.（as引导时间状语从句）3.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Itisquitereasonabletoblametrafficjamsandthegreatspeedofmodernlife,butbehaviorontheroadarebecominghorrible.Everybodyknowsthatthenicestmenwouldbecomefiercetigersbehindthewheel.Itisallrighttohaveatigerinacage,buttohaveoneinthedriver’sseatisanothermatter.Roadpolitenessisnotonlygoodmanners,butgoodsense.Ittakesthemostcool-headeddriversgreatpatiencetogiveupthedesiretohitbackwhenforcedtofacerudedriving.Ontheotherhand,alittlepolitenessgoesalongwaytowardsreducingthepossibilityofquarrelingandfighting.Afriendlynodorawaveofthanksinanswertoanactofpolitenesshelpstocreateanatmosphereofgoodwillandbecomessonecessaryinmoderntrafficconditions.Butsuchbehaviorofpolitenessisbynomeansenough.Manydriversnowadaysdon’tevenseemabletorecognizepolitenesswhentheyseeit.However,misplacedpolitenesscanalsobedangerous.ATypicalexampleisthedriverwhowavesachildcrossingthestreetatawrongplaceintothepathofoncomingcarsthatmaynotbeabletostopintime.Thesamegoesforencouragingoldladiestocrosstheroadwhereverandwhenevertheywantto.,优点英语Anexperienceddriver,whosemannersarefaultless,toldmeitwouldhelpifdriverslearnttocorrectlyjoinintrafficstreamwithoutcausingtotalblockages(堵塞)thatgiverisetounpleasantfeelings.Unfortunately,moderndriverscan’tevenlearntodrive,letalonemastertheroadmanship.Yearsago,expertswarnedusthatthefastincreaseofthecarownershipwoulddemandmoregive-and-take(互谅互让)fromallroadusers.Itishightimewetookthismessagetoheart.【参考范文】Roadmannersaregettingworse.Civilizeddrivingisnotonlyaboutpolitebehaviorbutrequiressensiblejudgmenttoidentify/recognizeit,whichisignoredbymanydrivers.Besides,inappropriatepolitenesscansometimesputroadusersindanger.Therefore,withtheincreasedcarownership,moderndriverswholackthedrivingskillsandproperroadmanshipshouldbeargive-and-takeinmind.【解析】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍道路礼仪越来越糟。文明驾驶不仅仅是礼貌的行为，还需要理智的判断来识别它，这被许多司机忽视了。此外，不适当的礼貌有时会把道路使用者置于危险之中。因此，随着汽车保有量的增加，那些缺乏驾驶技术和适当的道路行驶的现代司机应该牢记互谅互让。1.要点摘录1.Itisquitereasonabletoblametrafficjamsandthegreatspeedofmodernlife,butbehaviorontheroadarebecominghorrible.2.Roadpolitenessisnotonlygoodmanners,butgoodsense.3.However,misplacedpolitenesscanalsobedangerous.4.Anexperienceddriver,whosemannersarefaultless,toldmeitwouldhelpifdriverslearnttocorrectlyjoinintrafficstreamwithoutcausingtotalblockages(堵塞)thatgiverisetounpleasantfeelings.5.Yearsago,expertswarnedusthatthefastincreaseofthecarownershipwoulddemandmoregive-and-take,优点英语(互谅互让)fromallroadusers.Itishightimewetookthismessagetoheart.2.缜密构思将第1、2两个要点进行重组，将第3、4两个要点进行整合，将第5点独立出来。3.遣词造句Roadmannersaregettingworse.Civilizeddrivingisnotonlyaboutpolitebehaviorbutrequiressensiblejudgmenttoidentify/recognizeit,whichisignoredbymanydrivers.Besides,inappropriatepolitenesscansometimesputroadusersindanger.Therefore,withtheincreasedcarownership,moderndriverswholackthedrivingskillsandproperroadmanshipshouldbeargive-and-takeinmind.【范文点评】[高分句型1]：Civilizeddrivingisnotonlyaboutpolitebehaviorbutrequiressensiblejudgmenttoidentify/recognizeit,whichisignoredbymanydrivers.这句话运用了notonly…but(also)…连接主句，并运用关系代词which引导的非限定性定语从句。[高分句型2]：Therefore,withtheincreasedcarownership,moderndriverswholackthedrivingskillsandproperroadmanshipshouldbeargive-and-takeinmind.这句话运用了关系代词who引导的定语从句。
