优点英语2020-2021学年高二英语热点写作提升专练(通用版)热点01.建议信+读后续写+概要写作1．假如你是李华，开学之初，你的英语老师MsLi希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。1.对英语学习的认识；2.自己英语学习存在的主要问题；3.对英语教学的两点建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.信的开头和结尾已给出。DearMsLi,I’mveryhappytohaveyouasourEnglishteacher._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou!Yours,LiHua【参考范文】DearMsLi,IamveryhappytohaveyouasourEnglishteacher.Astheworldisbecomingaglobalvillage,Englishisgettingmoreandmoreimportant,somasteringEnglishmeanswecanseetheworldthroughanewwindow.MyEnglishisjustOKandthetwomainproblemsinmystudyarethatIfeelitdifficulttolearnwordsbyheart,andthatIoftenfeelnervouswhenspeakingEnglish.Ireallyhopethatyoucangivemegoodadviceonhowtomemorizenewwords.Anothersuggestionistogiveusmorechancestopracticespeaking.IbelievewecanmakemuchprogressinEnglishwithyourhelp.,优点英语Thankyou!Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；开学之初，你的英语老师MsLi希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。1.对英语学习的认识；2.自己英语学习存在的主要问题；3.对英语教学的两点建议。时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：moreandmoreimportant,masterEnglish，feelitdifficulttodo，givemegoodadviceonhowtomemorize，makemuchprogress等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【范文点评】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Astheworldisbecomingaglobalvillage,Englishisgettingmoreandmoreimportant（时间状语从句）MyEnglishisjustOKandthetwomainproblemsinmystudyarethatIfeelitdifficulttolearnwordsbyheart,andthatIoftenfeelnervouswhenspeakingEnglish.（表语从句）Ireallyhopethatyoucangivemegoodadviceonhowtomemorizenewwords.（疑问词加不定式做宾语）Anothersuggestionistogiveusmorechancestopracticespeaking.（不定式做表语）全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Iamalwayscarefulinmydailylife.However,onceinahurry,Isometimesmakecarelessmistakes.Althoughaworryingincidentoccurredtomethismorning,Ifoundmyheartfullofwarmth.Istayeduplatelastnight,forIhadtofinishaplanforaprojectandhandeditovertomybossthenextmorning.Igotuplaterthanusual,tiredandhungry.ThinkingofthepossibilitythatIwouldbescoldedbymyboss,IdroveasfastasIcouldalongtheroadwithoutbreakfast.About10minuteslater,mystomachbegantogrowlsoIstoppedtogetahotchocolateataconveniencestore.Ididn'thavethecorrectcreditcardonmeandwentbackto,优点英语mycartogetit.Whendone,Ilockedmycardoorintheold-fashionedway,usingthemanuallock.Youknowwherethisisgoing,yep,thereweremycarkeyandcellphoneinsidethecar!Iwentinsidethestoreandtheyletmeusetheirphonetoplacesomecalls.Unfortunately,Iwasn'tabletogetintouchwithanyonewhocouldhelp.Idaresay,atthatmomentnobodywouldunderstandbetterthanmewhatthesayingmeant,“ifyouarenotinsideahouse,youdon'tknowaboutitsleaking”.Icoulddonothingbutstayinthestorehopelessly.Lookingaroundanxiously.Ifoundanoteonthewallsaying,“Signupforaroadsideassistanceprogram.”Suddenlymyeyeslitup.“Maybesomeonecanoffermehelpnow.”Ithoughttomyself.Iwentovertotheassistantquicklyandaskedhertohelpdialthenumberonthenote.Afterwhatseemedlikeforever—butinrealtimeitwaslessthananhour,Istartedtoprayforhelp.Also,Icalledmybossandtoldhimwhatwasthematterwithme.IstartedtoregretthatIcouldhavegotupearlierthismorningandIneedn'thavegotoffmycartogetmybreakfast.“Can’tyoubemorecareful?Mary!”Ilaughedatmyself.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Wouldn’tyouknowit,inwalkedapoliceofficer.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Itoldhimhewasmyangel.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Wouldn’tyouknowit,inwalkedapoliceofficer.Hetoldmethathewassentbytheroadsideassistanceprogramandaskwhathecandoforme.Iwasmorethangladandtoldhimwhathadhappened.Afterhearingmystory,hesaidhehadthetoolswhichcanopenthecar.Iletoutalongsighofreliefandhelpedhimcarryoutthe,优点英语tool,withwhichweopenedthedoorwithin10minutes.Myfeelingsatthattimewerebeyonddescription.Itoldhimhewasmyangel.“IsthereanythingIcandoforyoutoexpressmygratitude?”Iasked.“Yes,maybenexttime,don’thaveyourkeyandcellphonelockedinthecar,”herepliedjokingly.Webothlaughed.BeforeIleft,Iboughthimabottleofwater,takingitasa“thankyou”.Finally,althoughIwas30minuteslate,mybossdidn’tblamemesincehethoughtthisisaspecialsituation.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者某天早上去上班时，下车去便利店买早饭，结果把车钥匙和手机锁在了车里，多亏了一个路边援助项目的警察帮助作者打开了车。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“我还没反应过来，进来了一个警察。”可知，第一段可描写进来的警察的身份，以及他是如何帮助作者的。②由第二段首句内容“我告诉他他是我的天使。”可知，第二段可描写作者是如何感谢这位帮助自己的警察的。2.续写线索：进来了一位警察——警察帮助作者——作者感谢——作者赶到公司——老板体谅了作者3.词汇激活行为类回答：reply/respond拿出：carryout/takeout责备：blame/scold情绪类感谢：expressone’sgratitude/showone’sappreciation//begrateful松了口气：letoutalongsighofrelief/berelieved【范文点评】[高分句型1]Iletoutalongsighofreliefandhelpedhimcarryoutthetool,withwhichweopenedthedoorwithin10minutes.(运用了“介词+关系代词”结构非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Finally,althoughIwas30minuteslate,mybossdidn’tblamemesincehethoughtthisisaspecialsituation.(运用了although引导让步状语从句)3．阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。,优点英语Anoldsayinggoesthatanearneighborisbetterthanadistantcousin.Thissayinghasfullyprovedthatneighborsaresosignificantinourlife.Inthepast,neighborshelpedoneanotherbuildhousesandclearfields.Theycouldoffertimelyhelpwhensomeonewasintrouble.Familiesdependedononeanotherforfriendshipandentertainment.Theysharedhappinessandsorrowfromtimetotime,whichbroughtaharmoniousatmosphere.However,nowadays,lackofcommunicationandinteractionbetweenneighborsisthenorm（常态）.Thecloserelationshipbetweenneighborsisnotcommoninourcities.Afamilymaynotevenknowtheotherfamiliesthatlivenextdoortothem.WeliveinanageofmachinesandtheInternet,andeachfamilyhasitsowncar,TVset,andwashingmachine.Peoplenolongerdependonneighborsasmuchastheyoncedid.MachinesandtheInternetkeeppeopleapart.Inourgrandparents’times,womenmetwhiletheyhungthewashingout,andmenstoppedandtalkedwhiletheymowed（割草）theirlawns.Today,theycan’thearanythingabovethenoiseoftheirpowerlawnmowers.Andwomenstayinsidewiththeirelectricaldryers.ChildrenareinsidewatchingtheirfavoriteTVshowsorplayingcomputergames.Istheideaofbeingagoodneighborold-fashioned?In1965,apowercuthitNewYorkCity,andmanythousandsofpeoplewerelefthelpless.Suddenlyeveryonesharedthesameproblem,andthelargestcitybecameagroupofeightmillionneighbors.Peoplewithcarsofferedridestothosewalking.Otherpeoplehelpeddirecttraffic.Trappedinelevators,peopleplayedwordgamesandhelpedkeepeachotheringoodspirits.Intimesoftrouble,peoplestilldependononeanother.Astimegoeson,peoplemayonceagainfeelthatbeingagoodneighborisimportant._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Neighborsplayanimportantroleinourlife.(要点1)Inthepast,neighborshelpedoneanotherandlivedaharmoniouslife.(要点2)Admittedly,owingtomoderndevicesandtheInternet,neighborsdriftapart,resultinginlittlecontactbetweeneachothernow.(要点3)Nevertheless,undergoingapowerfailureenabledresidentsinNewYorkCityin1965tobecomeneighbors,andtheyassistedandencouragedoneanother,whichillustratesthe,优点英语significanceofbeingagoodneighbor.(要点4)【解析】本文是一篇议论文。文章通过事例介绍了俗语“远亲不如近邻”的意义，最终提出邻居之间的友好关系是很重要的。1要点摘录①Neighborsaresosignificantinourlife.②Inthepast,neighborshelpedoneanotherandlivedaharmoniouslife.③However,nowadays,lackofcommunicationandinteractionbetweenneighborsisthenorm.④In1965,apowercuthitNewYorkCity,andmanythousandsofpeoplewerelefthelpless.Suddenlyeveryonesharedthesameproblem,andthelargestcitybecameagroupofeightmillionneighbors.Astimegoeson,peoplemayonceagainfeelthatbeingagoodneighborisimportant.2.缜密构思将第1个要点作为总说、第2、3两个要点进行句式上的润色和修改；将第4个要点中的两个句子进行整合。3.遣词造句Neighborsplayanimportantroleinourlife.Admittedly,owingtomoderndevicesandtheInternet,neighborsdriftapart,resultinginlittlecontactbetweeneachothernow.Nevertheless,undergoingapowerfailureenabledresidentsinNewYorkCityin1965tobecomeneighbors,andtheyassistedandencouragedoneanother,whichillustratesthesignificanceofbeingagoodneighbor.【范文点评】[高分句型1]Admittedly,owingtomoderndevicesandtheInternet,neighborsdriftapart,resultinginlittlecontactbetweeneachothernow.不可否认，由于现代设备和互联网，邻居们疏远了，导致现在彼此之间很少有联系。“resultingin”为现在分词作结果状语。[高分句型2]Nevertheless,undergoingapowerfailureenabledresidentsinNewYorkCityin1965tobecomeneighbors,andtheyassistedandencouragedoneanother,whichillustratesthesignificanceofbeingagoodneighbor.然而，1965年纽约市停电后，居民们成为了邻居，他们互相帮助，互相鼓励，这说明了做一个好邻居的重要性。“whichillustratesthesignificanceofbeingagoodneighbor.”为which引导的非限制性定语从句。
