优点英语2020-2021学年高二英语热点写作提升专练(通用版)热点10.祝贺信+读后续写+概要写作1．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack在“外国人讲中国成语故事”比赛中获得了一等奖，请写一封英文电子邮件给他。内容要点如下：1.祝贺他获奖；2.肯定他付出的努力和取得的进步；3.希望他多传播中国传统文化。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：外国人讲中国成语故事:ForeignersTellStoriesOfChineseidiomsDearJack,Yours,LiHua【参考范文】DearJack,Iamwritingtooffermysincerecongratulationstoyouonyourwinningthefirstprizeinthe“ForeignersTellStoriesOfChineseIdioms”competition.Itakegreatprideinyourachievement.Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains”.Youreallydeserveagoodreward.Fortheseyears,you’veshownmuchinterestinChinesetraditionalcultures,especiallyChineseidioms.Withextremeefforts,youhavemaderapid,优点英语progressandacquiredarichknowledge.Idohopeyouwillactasacultureconnector,spreadingChinesesplendidculturesanditsbrilliantcivilizations.Congratulationsagain!Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友Jack写封信，在信中就他在“外国人讲中国成语故事”比赛中获得了一等奖表示祝贺，肯定他付出的努力和取得的进步并希望他多传播中国传统文化。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，现在完成时和一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.祝贺他获奖；2.肯定他付出的努力和取得的进步；3.希望他多传播中国传统文化。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）sincerecongratulations;ForeignersTellStoriesOfChineseidioms;competition;takegreatpridein;achievement;deserve;Chinesetraditionalcultures;extremeefforts;makerapidprogress;knowledge;actas;spread;splendid第三步：连词成句1.Iamwritingtooffermysincerecongratulationstoyouonyourwinningthefirstprizeinthe“ForeignersTellStoriesOfChineseIdioms”competition.2.Itakegreatprideinyourachievement.3.Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains”.4.Youreallydeserveagoodreward.5.Fortheseyears,you’veshownmuchinterestinChinesetraditionalcultures,especiallyChineseidioms.6.Withextremeefforts,youhavemaderapidprogressandacquiredarichknowledge.7.Idohopeyouwillactasacultureconnector,spreadingChinesesplendidculturesanditsbrilliantcivilizations.8.Congratulationsagain!,优点英语根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表并列补充关系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover（供参考）2.表转折对比关系：However,Onthecontrary,but（供参考）连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【范文点评】[高分句型1]Iamwritingtooffermysincerecongratulationstoyouonyourwinningthefirstprizeinthe“ForeignersTellStoriesOfChineseIdioms”competition.(运用了动名词作宾语)[高分句型2]Idohopeyouwillactasacultureconnector,spreadingChinesesplendidculturesanditsbrilliantcivilizations.(运用了省略了that的宾语从句和现在分词作状语)2．阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的故事。Shayasked,”Doyouthinkthey'llletmeplay?”Shay’sfatherknewthatmostoftheboyswouldnotwantsomeonelikeShayontheirteam.Afterall,Shaywasnotanormalboy-strickenbyadeadlydisease,hewasbothmentallyandphysicallydisabled.Hewasabitcrippled(瘸)andtendedtolosephysicalbalancewhilerunning.Worsestill,hewasintelligentlyretarded-hewasnotascleveraskidsofhisage.ForShay,eachdaymeantafightforsurvival,buteachday,hedesiredtojoinotherkidsingames,andlikeotherkids,hedreamtofbeingaheroofagame.Shay'sfatherunderstoodthatsoccerwasnotforShay,butifhissonwereallowedtoplay,itwouldgivehimamuch-neededsenseofbelongingandsomeconfidence.HeapproachedoneoftheboysonthefieldandaskedifShaycouldplay,notexpectingmuch.Theboypausedandthoughttohimself,“We'relosingbyonegoalandthegameisinthesecondhalf.Shay'sgonnadecreaseourchancetowin."Hehesitatedforawhilebutsaiddeterminedly,“Iguesshecanbeonourteamandwe'lltrytoputhimonthefield."Overjoyedandexcited,Shaystruggledovertotheteam'sbenchandputonateamshirtwithabroadsmile.Seeingallthis,hisfatherhadasmalltearinhiseyeandwarmthinheart.SimplyapositiononthebenchwasgoodenoughforShaytoenjoyhisdream.Theboysonbothteamsawthefather'sjoyathissonbeingaccepted.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Inthelasttenminutes,Shaygotthechanceandsteppedonthefield.,优点英语Thegamecontinued,andatthelastminuteoneoftheboypassedtheballinthedirectionofShay.【参考范文】Inthelasttenminutes,Shaygotthechanceandsteppedonthefield.Eventhoughtheballdidn'tcomehisway,Shaywasobviouslyjoyfultobeonthefield,andtobepartoftheteam.Hechasedaftertheballdespitethefactthathisunsteadystepscouldnevercatchupwiththerapidlyflyingball.ThenShay'steamscoredandthematchwastied!Thewholeteamhuggedandcelebrated,includingShay.Shaysmiledandchantedexcitedlywithhisteammatesasifhehimselfhaddonethegoal.Thegamecontinued,andatthelastminuteoneoftheboypassedtheballinthedirectionofShay.Thewholegroundwentwildwithcheering."Shoot,Shay!Shoot,Shay!"Boysonbothteamstopped,yellingforShay.Shaystruckaposeofshooting,andgavetheballallhisstrength.Niceastheshotwas,thespeedwasnot.Seeingtheballrollingslowlytowardsthegoal,thegoalkeepersloweddownhismovementandnarrowlymissedtheball.Awinninggoal!Shaywasoverwhelmedwithjoy,aswashisfather.Thankstothesekindboys,Shayrealizedhisdreamofbeingaheroofthatgame.【解析】,优点英语本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Shay是一个在智力和身体上都有残疾的男孩，父亲知道Shay想要加入球队踢足球后，尽管担心他们可能不愿意，还是问了球场上的一个男孩是否能让Shay上场，那个男孩答应了，仅仅在板凳上的一个位置就足够让Shay享受他的梦想了。两队的男孩都看到了父亲为自己的儿子被接受而感到的喜悦。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“在最后十分钟，夏恩抓住机会走上了球场。”可知，第一段可描写Shay上场后的心理状态和在球场上的表现。②由第二段首句内容“比赛继续进行，在最后一分钟，一个男孩把球传给了Shay。”可知，第二段可描写在接到球后，Shay把球踢进球门的过程以及进球后的喜悦之情。2.续写线索：Shay很高兴——Shay追着球——尽管追不上——球队进球了——团队拥抱——Shay进球—欣喜若狂—实现梦想3.词汇激活：行为类追着：chase/runafter；追上：catchupwith/keepupwith；进球：scoreagoal/shoot拥抱：hug/embrace；实现梦想：realizeone’sdream/makeone’sdreamareality/cometrue情绪类：高兴的：joyful/glad/delighted；欣喜若狂：overjoyed/beoverwhelmedwithjoy【范文点评】[高分句型1]Shaysmiledandchantedexcitedlywithhisteammatesasifhehimselfhaddonethegoal.（asif引导的状语从句使用了虚拟语气）[高分句型2]Seeingtheballrollingslowlytowardsthegoal,thegoalkeepersloweddownhismovementandnarrowlymissedtheball.（seeing为现在分词作状语）3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Whenlearninghowtotrainyourcat,you'llstartwithverybasicfirststeps.Butcanyoutrainacatthesamewayyoumighttrainadog?Yesandno.Becausethey'rehighlyindependentanimals,catsmightappearuninterestedinfollowingyourcommands.Thatdoesn'tmeanyoucan'tinfluencetheirbehavior,though.Ifyou'repatient,yournewcatoroldcatcanbetrainedinnotime.First,decidewhatyouwantyourcattolearn,andthenmovetowardsyourgoalsinsmallstepseachday.Beforeyoustarttrainingyourcat,however,considerwhatcommandsyou'lluseandwhattypesofbehavioral,优点英语actionsyouwanthertolearn.Thinkaboutwhatyoumayhavewonderedinthepast:howtotrainyourcattousealitterbox,bowtokeephercalmduringtrips,andsoon.Howcanyouteachhertostopscratchingyourrugsorfurniture?Havingdeterminedwhichlessonsyouandyourcatwillmaster,it'stimetogetdowntobusiness.Ifyou'reexcitedabouttraining,youmaywanttojumprightinandteachyourcateverythingatonce.However,yourcat'sattentionspanisshorterthanyours;youcan'texpecthertostayinterestedeverytimeyou'rereadytobethetrainer.Tobesuccessful,though,it'sagoodideatosticktoonelessonatatime.Onceyourcathasmasteredwhateveryou'reworkingon,youcanmoveontothenexttrainingexercise.Whenonlyyouandyourcatareathome,youdon'thavetoworrytoomuchaboutinvolvingothersinthetraining.Yetyoustillwantyourcattolearntobesocial.Shortlyafterbringingyourcathome,invitefriendsorfamilymembersovertosocializewithyournewpet.Justremindthemnottobetooforwardwiththeirintroduction.Ifyou'rebringingacarintoalargerfamily,it'sevenmoreimportanttoinvolveeveryoneinthetraining.Afterall,she'llseethesefamiliarfaceseveryday!【参考范文】Asindependentanimals,catscanbetrainedifyoustartwithseveralbasicsteps.(要点1)First,youshoulddeterminewhatyouwouldlikeyourcattolearn.(要点2)Then,trainyourcatstepbystepanditiswisetosticktoonelessonatatime.(要点3)What’smore,involvingotherpeopleinthetrainingcanmakeyourcarmoresocial.(要点4)【解析】这是一篇读后续写。猫和狗不同，它们是一种很独立的动物，通常不会听人的指令。但是如果按照一定的方法，猫也是可以被训练的。文章主要列举了三个训练猫的方法。,优点英语通读全文，我们可以从以下四个方面对文章进行概括：作为一种独立的动物，如果你按照几个基本步骤，它们也是可以被训练的；首先，你要决定你想让你的猫学会生么；其次，逐步训练猫，一次只训练一个内容是明智的；最后，让其他人参与到训练中，能让猫更加社会化。
