优点英语2020-2021学年高二英语热点写作提升专练(通用版)热点05.道歉信+读后续写+概要写作1.假定你是李华，你的外教Wilson明天下午要做一个关于“互联网+”（InternetPlus）的讲座，你因故不能参加，请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封80词左右的电子邮件。1.表达歉意；2.解释原因；3.询问是否有讲座的相关资料。注意1.词数80左右2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯3.开头语已给出。DearWilson，IamwritingtoapologizeforYours,LiHua【参考范文】DearWilson,Iamwritingtoapologizefornotbeingabletoattendyoulecturetomorrowafternoon,whichisonInternetPlus.Thereasonformybeingabsentisthatmymotherisseriouslyill.SoIwilltakehertohospitaltomorrowsincemyfatherisonabusinesstripforanurgentmatter.Iwillcareformymother.Tobefrank,IamextremelyinterestedinthetopicofInternetPlus.Therefore,itisreallyapitythatIwillmissit.Iwonderifthereareanyrelevantmaterialsofthelecture.Ifso,Icanlearnitmyselfwhenitisconvenient.Wishyourlectureagreatsuccess.,优点英语Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Wilson写一封道歉信。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.表达歉意；2.解释原因；3.询问是否有讲座的相关资料。第二步:列提纲（重点词组） apologizefor ；onabusinesstrip； carefor；tobefrank；beinterestedin；agreatsuccess第三步：连词成句1.Iamwritingtoapologizefornotbeingabletoattendyoulecturetomorrowafternoon,whichisonInternetPlus.2.Thereasonformybeingabsentisthatmymotherisseriouslyill.3.SoIwilltakehertohospitaltomorrowsincemyfatherisonabusinesstripforanurgentmatter.4.Iwillcareformymother.5.Tobefrank,IamextremelyinterestedinthetopicofInternetPlus.6.Therefore,itisreallyapitythatIwillmissit.7.Iwonderifthereareanyrelevantmaterialsofthelecture.8.Ifso,Icanlearnitmyselfwhenitisconvenient.9.Wishyourlectureagreatsuccess.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）,优点英语本文使用了表因果关系的衔接词：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【范文点评】[高分句型1]Iamwritingtoapologizefornotbeingabletoattendyoulecturetomorrowafternoon,whichisonInternetPlus. （which引导非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]Thereasonformybeingabsentisthatmymotherisseriouslyill. （that引导表语从句）[高分句型3]Ifso,Icanlearnitmyselfwhenitisconvenient.（when引导时间状语从句）2.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Afterthefinalbellrang,thestudentswereremindedthattherewasnoschoolonMonday.Theteachertoldherclasstoenjoytheirextradayoff.Asthestudentsreachedfortheirbackpacks,Kayla,ayounggirlaskedherfriendwhatwasLaborDay.Theyoungboydidn'tknow,eitherandsaidthathejustknewtheygotanextradayofffromschool.AnextradayoffunsuitedKaylajustfine.Shelovedbreaks.Infact,breakwasKayla'sfavoritepartoftheschoolday.AftertheschoolbusdroppedKaylaoff,sheranintothearmsofhermom.LearningaboutKayla'snoschoolonMonday,Kayla'smomwonderedifchildrenneededabreakonlytwoweeksaftertheyhadstartedbacktoschool.Kaylasmiledathermom.Shepickedupabasketballthatlayontheedgeofthedriveway.Shedribbled（运球）itacoupleoftimesandthenthrewforagoal.Aperfectshot!"Greatshot,Kayla!"saidherdad.“Thanks,Dad,"saidKayla."Hopefullymyfriendscancomeoverandplaybasketballthisweekend!""I'llcalltheirparentsandsee,Kayla,"saidhermom."Yourhomeworkneedstocomefirst,though."Kaylasaidthatshewasn'tassignedanyhomeworkfortheholidayweekend.So,shewasgoingtohaveasmuchfunaspossible.Kaylasleptinthenextmorning.Saturdaywasherfavoritedayoftheweek.Itrainedmostoftheday,soKaylaenjoyedplayinggamesinside.OnSunday,herfriendscameoverandplayedbasketballforseveralhours.ThenitwasLaborDay,youknow,thatextradayoffthatKaylawassolookingforwardto.ButKaylawasawakenedearlythatmorningbyherdad.HetoldKaylathatinhonorofLaborDay,thefamilywouldbecleaningbothinsideandoutsidethehouse.Kaylacouldn'tbelieveit.Thiswasaholiday.Adaywhenshewassupposedto,优点英语beenjoyinglemonadewhileplayinginhertree-house.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。AsKaylawipedhereyes,shebegantowonderifthiswasjustabaddream.ThenextdayKayla'steacheraskedherstudentswhattheydidontheirextradayoff.【参考范文】AsKaylawipedhereyes,shebegantowonderifthiswasjustabaddream.AsKaylasatdownatthekitchentableforherbreakfast,herparentssaidtheythoughtworkinghardthatdaywouldmakeherappreciatewhyLaborDayisobservedinthefirstplace.Kayladidsomehousework,includinghelpingtodryandputawaythebreakfastdishes,givingherpuppyabath.Itwashardwork.Butitwasalsoalotoffun.Kaylawascoveredinjustasmanysoapsudsasherpuppyandpickedupsticksintheyard.Kaylafeltproudofhowmuchbettertheyardlooked.Thelemonadetastedwonderfulafteraharddayofwork.ThenextdayKayla’steacheraskedherstudentswhattheydidontheirextradayoff.TwinbrothersMattand,优点英语Marksharedthattheywentboatingwiththeirfamily.Ayounggirl,Cassie,saidthatherfamilyhadapicnicatthelake.WhenKaylatalkedexcitedlyaboutherday,herclassmatesweresurprised.Notbecauseofalltheworkshehaddone,butbecauseofhowmuchfunshehadwhendoingit.【解析】本文以人物情感为线索展开，讲述了一个叫Kayla的小女孩当得知因劳动节而多放一天假期后的惊喜。在经历了快乐的周末后，她知道爸爸要开始大扫除来庆祝劳动节后，Kayla难以置信。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“Kayla擦了擦眼睛，开始怀疑这是否只是个噩梦。”可知，第一段可描写Kayla与父母一起大扫除的场景。②由第二段首句内容“第二天，Kayla的老师问她的学生，他们在额外的休息日做了什么。”可知，第二段可描写Kayla与同学们各自不同的回答。2.续写线索：怀疑——做家务——自豪——同学们的分享——Kayla的分享3.词汇激活行为类：① 收拾早餐盘子：clearbreakfastplates/putawaythebreakfastdishes；② 给小狗洗澡：givethepuppyabath/baththedog；③ 分享：participate/share情绪类① 艰苦：hard/difficult/trial；② 自豪：pride/gloryin/beproudof；③ 兴奋：beexcited/glad；④ 惊讶：astonishment/surprise【范文点评】[高分句型1].AsKaylasatdownatthekitchentableforherbreakfast,herparentssaidtheythoughtworkinghardthatdaywouldmakeherappreciatewhyLaborDayisobservedinthefirstplace.句中，用as引导的时间状语从句，makesb.dosth.让某人做某事等表示高级。[高分句型2].WhenKaylatalkedexcitedlyaboutherday,herclassmatesweresurprised.句中，when引导的时间状语从句，表达较为高级。3.概要写作：阅读下文，根据其内容写一篇50-60词胡内容概要。Fordecades,doctorshavewarnedpatientsthattoomuchsaltcanbebadfortheheart.Heartattackhaslongbeenconsideredagrown-upproblem,butnewresearchsuggeststhatsaltisstartingtoaffectchildren.Eatingtoomuchsaltyfoodwhenyou’reyoungcanleadtohealthproblemslater.Saltismadeupoftwoelements:sodiumandchlorine.Dietaryguidelinesrecommendthatadultsandkidsaged9-13shouldn’tconsumemorethanaboutateaspoonofsodiumdaily.TheaverageAmericaneatstwicethis,优点英语amount.Thisworriesdoctorsbecausetoomuchsodiumresultsinthebodyproducingmoreblood.Topumptheextrablood,thehearthastoworkharder.Thiscausesariseinbloodpressure---ameasurementofhowstressedtheheartis.Highbloodpressureoftenleadstoheartdisease.Akidwithhighbloodpressureismorelikelytobecomeagrown-upwithhighbloodpressure.Reducingsaltmightalsohelpstopchildhoodobesity.Britishresearchersrecentlyfoundthatkidswhoeatlesssaltalsodrinkfewersugarysoftdrinks.Drinkingfewerfizzydrinksmakeskidslesslikelytogainweight,becomeobeseanddevelophighbloodpressure.Saltcanaffectmorethanjustyourheartandweight.ArecentstudyfoundthatagrowingnumberofkidsintheUSaresufferingfromkidneystones.Thispainfulconditionusuallyaffectspeopleagedover40.Now,kidsasyoungasfivearegettingit.Cuttingdownonsaltcanbehard,butyoucanretrainyourselftopreferlesssaltyfood.Thebestwaytoreducetheamountofsodiumyoueatistomakechangesgradually.Startbyaddinghalfasmuchsalttoyourdinnerasyounormallydo.Switchtofreshfoodsinsteadofcannedandbottledversions.Andgoeasyonthecondiments.Youmightalsowanttostartreadingnutritionlabels.Youmaybesurprisedtolearnthatthereare1,150mgofsodiuminadoublecheeseburger,andover2,000mginmanyfrozenmeals.【参考范文】Eatingtoomuchsalthashealthrisksforchildrensuchascausinghighbloodpressure,heartproblems,obesityandkidneystones.Butthereareseveralwaystocutdownonsalt.Childrencanreducetheamountofsalttheyusuallyusebyhalf.Theyshouldeatfreshfoodsandreducethecondimentstheyaddtofood.Finally,theyshouldchecktheamountofsaltinfoodbyreadingnutritionlabels.【解析】,优点英语本文为说明文，要求写一篇概要。概要写作文中主要提到太多的盐（主要是钠）摄入会导致三个方面的健康问题：高血压、肥胖、心脏病和肾结石，而且文中主要讲到对孩子的危害。同时也提出了解决办法，主要是逐步减少摄入、多吃新鲜食品、多看食品营养标签。概要写作首先要通读全文内容，通晓文章大意；然后提炼语言；最后用高度概括性的句子表达出全文内容。本文主要写出三点：一、太多的盐（主要是钠）摄入会导致三个方面的健康问题：高血压、肥胖、心脏病和肾结石，二、主要讲到对孩子的危害。三、提出了解决办法，主要是逐步减少摄入、多吃新鲜食品、多看食品营养标签。结合三个要点即可写出本概要。【范文点评】本文要点齐全，语言概括性强，文中使用了Eatingtoomuchsalt动名词短语作主语；Theyshouldeatfreshfoodsandreducethecondimentstheyaddtofood.本句是and连接的并列句，theyaddtofood是定语从句，that引导（作宾语可省略）。
