专题十七短文改错A组 2022～2022模拟基础题Passage1 (2022·曲阜4月)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Hello，everyone.It'snicetospeakaboutthatwecandoforourschool，andIthinksmallactionscanmakebigdifference.Thefirstthingwecandoistomakeourcampusmorebeautifully.Everyoneofthemmayplantatreeintheschoolortoorganizeathoroughcleaningonthecampus.Wecanalsoformagoodhabitofputtingrubbishesintotrashcans.Neverforgettoturnoffthelightsandclosethedoors.Weshouldnotleavethetapwaterrunorwasteanymaterialsinthelaboratoryclass.Inthatcase，Ibelievewe'llturnourschoolinabetterplacetostudyandlivein.HowIwishwecanenjoyabetterschoollife!Thankyouforlistening!答案 Hello，everyone.It'snicetospeakaboutwecandoforourschool，andIthinksmallactionscanmakebigdifference.Thefirstthingwecandoistomakeourcampusmore.Everyoneofmayplantatreeinthe\nschoolororganizeathoroughcleaningonthecampus.Wecanalsoformagoodhabitofputtingintotrashcans.Neverforgettoturnoffthelightsclosethedoors.Weshouldnotleavethetapwaterorwasteanymaterialsinthelaboratoryclass.Inthatcase，Ibelievewe'llturnourschoolabetterplacetostudyandlivein.HowIwishweenjoyabetterschoollife!Thankyouforlistening!Passage2 (2022·潍坊3月)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。DearJack，Welcometomyschool！Uponyourarrival，therewillbeapartyforyouorganizingbymyclassmates.YoumayattendtoEnglishclassestofeeladifferentlylearningstyle.Afterthat，youcangotoyourhostfamilythatyoucanexperiencetheChinesewayoflife.Youcanhavemealstogetherchattingaboutwhateverinterestyou.Thehostfamilywillalsoshowyouoffsomefamousscenicspots.Youcanseepeoplesellingkiteseverywherebecauseourcitywashometokites.Therearevarietiesofkitestochoose.Soisn'tthatagoodideatobuysomeforyourfriends？Writetomeunlessyouhaveanyquestionsabouttheschedule.Yours，\nLiHua答案 DearJack，Welcometomyschool！Uponyourarrival，therewillbeapartyforyoubymyclassmates.YoumayattendEnglishclassestofeelalearningstyle.Afterthat，youcangotoyourhostfamilyyoucanexperiencetheChinesewayoflife.Youcanhavemealstogetherchattingaboutwhateveryou.Thehostfamilywillalsoshowyousomefamousscenicspots.Youcanseepeoplesellingkiteseverywherebecauseourcityhometokites.Therearevarietiesofkitestochoose∧from.Soisn'tagoodideatobuysomeforyourfriends？Writetomeyouhaveanyquestionsabouttheschedule.Yours，LiHuaPassage3 (2022·淄博模拟)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。IamveryhappythatyouareinterestedintheprotectionofantelopesinChina，soI'dliketotellyoueverythingaboutit.Inthepast，somepeoplekillantelopesfortheirfreefurwhichcanbemadeintomanybeautifulthingsthatareveryexpensive.Astheresult，thenumberofantelopeswasdecreasingdaybyday.Nowthingsarebeguntochange.Thegovernment\nandthelocalpeopletakepowerfulmeasurestoprotectantelopessothattheywillnotdieinthefuture.Theyhadtakenmanyeffectivemeasures，suchasmakingstrictlawstoprotectingantelopes，settingupseveralreservesfortheantelopes，andsoon.Ofcourse，it'sstrongprohibitedtobuyorsellanythingmadeofantelopesfur.Nowadays，toourjoy，therearemuchmoreandmoreantelopesinChina.What'smore，theirlivingconditionshavegreatlyimproved.答案 IamveryhappythatyouareinterestedintheprotectionofantelopesinChina，soI'dliketotellyouaboutit.Inthepast，somepeopleantelopesfortheirfreefurwhichcanbemadeintomanybeautifulthingsthatareveryexpensive.Asresult，thenumberofantelopeswasdecreasingdaybyday.Nowthings/tochange.Thegovernmentandthelocalpeopletakepowerfulmeasurestoprotectantelopessothattheywillnotdieinthefuture.Theytakenmanyeffectivemeasures，suchasmakingstrictlaws/antelopes，settingupseveralreservesfortheantelopes，andsoon.Ofcourse，it'sprohibitedtobuyorsellanythingmadeoffur.Nowadays，toourjoy，therearemoreandmoreantelopesinChina.What'smore，theirlivingconditionshavegreatlyimproved.Passage4 (2022·大连一模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。\n删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Inthesummerholiday，wetravelledtoQingdaoandpaidvisittomyunclethere.It'salongandboredjourney.ButthemomentIarrived，Ifallinlovewiththecity.It'ssuchbeautifulacitythatIcanhardlyfindanywordtodescribeit.Thestreetsarecleaningandtheskyisblue.Ifyouwalkalongthecoast，youcanfeelthewindtoblowingonyourface.Theseaisvastandsometimesyoucanfindaboatoraship.Youmayalsodosomefishingasfarasitispermitted.Moreover，Ithinkthedrivertheredrivetoofastinthestreet.Youcanneverbetoocarelesswhencrossingthestreet.答案 Inthesummerholiday，wetravelledtoQingdaoandpaidvisittomyunclethere.It'salongandjourney.ButthemomentIarrived，Iinlovewiththecity.It'sbeautifulacitythatIcanhardlyfindanywordtodescribeit.Thestreetsareandtheskyisblue.Ifyouwalkalongthecoast，youcanfeelthewindblowingonyourface.Theseaisvastandsometimesyoucanfindaboatoraship.Youmayalsodosomefishingasasitispermitted.，Ithinkthetheredrivetoofastinthestreet.Youcanneverbetoowhencrossingthestreet.Passage5 (2022·山东省实验中学模拟)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。\n修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Asweallknow，everyonehaveadream.IhavedreamedofbeingadoctorsinceIenteredintotheprimaryschool.Nowadayswithmodernlifegorapidly，manypeoplesufferfromdifferentkindofdiseases，bothmentallyandphysically.Asaresult，doctorsareingreatneedathomeandabroad.Mydreamistobecomesuccessfuldoctor，helpingtosavepeople'slives.Althoughtobeagooddoctorwasverydifficult，IwilldowhateverIcantokeepeveryonehealth.Tomakemydreamcometrue，IhavetoldmeoverandoveragainthatI'llconcentratemoretostudies.Afterall，onlybyworkinghardlycanonesucceed.答案 Asweallknow，everyoneadream.IhavedreamedofbeingadoctorsinceIenteredinto\theprimaryschool.Nowadayswithmodernliferapidly，manypeoplesufferfromdifferentofdiseases，bothmentallyandphysically.Asaresult，doctorsareingreatneedathomeandabroad.Mydreamistobecomesuccessfuldoctor，helpingtosavepeople'slives.Althoughtobeagooddoctorverydifficult，IwilldowhateverIcantokeepeveryone.Tomakemydreamcometrue，IhavetoldoverandoveragainthatI'llconcentratemorestudies.Afterall，onlybyworkingcanonesucceed.Passage6 (2022·枣庄一模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。\n修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Weallhavedreams，butnotallthesedreamscancometrue.Peoplegiveuphisdreamsforthisorthatreason.Thosewhodreamshavecometruehaveatleastonethingincommon，whichis，theyalwaysholdfasttotheirdreams.MarieCuriesetusthegoodexample.In1898，Mariehasfoundanewelement.Inordertoproveherdiscovery，shehadtogetitandshowedittotheworld.Thentogetthenewelementbecomeherdreamandgoalofherlife.Afterfouryears'hardwork，Marieandherhusbandlastsawthedimbluelightofthenewelement—radium.Holdfasttoyourdreams，nomatterhowbigandsmalltheyare.Thepathtoyourdreamsmaynotbesmoothlyandwide，evensomesacrificesareneeded，butholdontotheend.答案 Weallhavedreams，butnotallthesedreamscancometrue.Peoplegiveupdreamsforthisorthatreason.Thosedreamshavecometruehaveatleastonethingincommon，is，theyalwaysholdfasttotheirdreams.MarieCuriesetusgoodexample.In1898，Mariehas\foundanewelement.Inordertoproveherdiscovery，shehadtogetitandittotheworld.Thentogetthenewelementherdreamandgoalofherlife.Afterfouryears'hardwork，Marieandherhusband/sawthedimbluelightofthenewelement—radium.Holdfasttoyourdreams，nomatterhowbigsmalltheyare.Thepathtoyourdreamsmaynotbeandwide，evensomesacrificesareneeded，butholdontotheend.\nPassage7 (2022·泰安期末)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。I'dliketogiveyousomeadvicesonhowtolearnChinesewell.First，itwasimportanttotakeaChinesecourse，asyou'llbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpractisingwithyourfellowstudents.Then，italsohelptowatchTVandreadbooks，newspapersandmagazinesintheChinesewheneverpossible.ItwillmakeyoufamiliartoChinesecharactersandenlargeyourvocabularyevenbeforeyounoticeit!Besides，itisagoodidealearnandsingChinesesongs，becausebydoingsoyou'lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasy.YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends，theywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.TrytospeakChineseasmanyaspossible.答案 I'dliketogiveyousomeonhowtolearnChinesewell.First，itimportanttotakeaChinesecourse，asyou'llbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandwithyourfellowstudents.Then，italsotowatchTVandreadbooks，newspapersandmagazinesinthe\Chinesewheneverpossible.ItwillmakeyoufamiliarChinesecharactersandenlargeyourvocabularyevenbeforeyounoticeit!Besides，itisagoodidealearnandsingChinesesongs，becausebydoing\nsoyou'lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmore.YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends，willtellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.TrytospeakChineseasaspossible.Passage8 (2022·昆明一模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。It'spleasureformetohaveachancetomakeashortspeechtoday.Ihavefoundthatsomeofmyclassmatesstudydeeplyintothenight.What'smore，theydidnotspareanytimetoexerciseduringtheday.Buttheyarelessenergeticthantheothersinclassandcan'talwaysstayfocusingontheirlessons.Worsethanthat，someofthemseldomhavebreakfast，withwhichisalsoabadhabitandwillcertainlydoharmfortheirhealth.Obvious，it'simportantforustohaveenoughsleepandaproperdiet.Wemustlearntomakewiseuseofourtime，andonlyinthiswaycanwekeepfitandstudywell.Ihopemyadvicescanhelpyou.Thanksforlisten.答案 It'spleasureformetohaveachancetomakeashortspeechtoday.Ihavefoundthatsomeofmyclassmatesstudyintothenight.What'smore，theynotspareanytimetoexerciseduringtheday.theyarelessenergeticthantheothersinclassandcan'talwaysstayontheirlessons.Worsethanthat，some\nofthemseldomhavebreakfast，with\whichisalsoabadhabitandwillcertainlydoharmtheirhealth.，it'simportantforustohaveenoughsleepandaproperdiet.Wemustlearntomakewiseuseofourtime，andonlyinthiswaycanwekeepfitandstudywell.Ihopemycanhelpyou.Thanksfor.Passage9 (2022·西铁一中诊断)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线()，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Hello，Peter.I'mverygratefulforyourconcernaboutmycomingexam.Totellyoutruth，Ihavebeenbusypreparefortheexamrecently.Someclassmatesarefeelingrealstressedduetotheexam，butIdon'ttakethemsoseriously.IalwayslearninarelaxingmoodandI'mmakingagreatprogress.NowthatIhadtriedmybest，itdoesn'tmattermuchtomewhattheresultis.Inmyopinion，weshouldkeepagoodbalanceamongourstudy，restorexercise.Ibelievewecanbesucceededifwepreparefortheexaminaproperway.I'dappreciateitifyoucouldgivemesomegoodadvices.答案 Hello，Peter.I'mverygratefulforyourconcernaboutmycomingexam.Totellyoutruth，Ihavebeenbusyfortheexamrecently.Someclassmatesare\nfeelingstressedduetotheexam，butIdon'ttakesoseriously.IalwayslearninamoodandI'mmakinga\greatprogress.NowthatItriedmybest，itdoesn'tmattermuchtomewhattheresultis.Inmyopinion，weshouldkeepagoodbalanceamongourstudy，restexercise.Ibelievewecanbeifwepreparefortheexaminaproperway.I'dappreciateitifyoucouldgivemesomegood.Passage10 (2022·沈阳一模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Mymotherisverygoodforraisingplantsandflowers.Wehaveplantsandflowersindoorsandoutdoorsalltheyearsround.Someofourplantswereverysmallseveralyearsbefore,butnowtheyarelargeandverybeautifully.Ontopofourroofthereisalargerglass－enclosedgreen－house.Allourfriendslovetocometoourhouseseethebeautifulworldmymotherhadmadeforus.Everymorningandeveningweseemymothertakencareofherplantslikelittlechildren.Asherrealchildrenhavegrownup,andmymotherdevotesmoretimetohergarden.Thisistheverygoodwayofspendingherfreetime.答案 Mymotherisverygoodraisingplantsandflowers.Wehaveplantsandflowersindoorsandoutdoorsalltheround.Someofourplantswereverysmallseveral\nyears,butnowtheyarelargeandvery.Ontopofourroofthereisaglass－enclosedgreenhouse.Allourfriendslovetocometoourhouseseethebeautifulworldmymothermadeforus.Everymorningandeveningweseemymothercareofherplantslikelittlechildren.Asherrealchildrenhavegrownup,and\mymotherdevotesmoretimetohergarden.Thisisverygoodwayofspendingherfreetime.B组 2022～2022模拟能力题Passage1 (2022·青岛一模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Thesayingthatpracticemakesperfectmeanthatafteryouhaveplentyofpracticeinwhatyouweredoing，youwillbeperfectinit.Ifyouwantimproveyourstudyandwork，rememberingthatthemostimportantthingishowtoputtheknowledgeyouhavelearnedintopractice.Forexample，whenlearningalanguage，thoughyoucanmakefulluseforyourtalent，practiceisnecessary.Ifyouonlylearngrammarrulesbytheheartanddon'tdoenoughexercise，it'scertainthatyoucan'tunderstandthelanguageperfectly.Butifyourealpractisealot，maybeyouwillunderstandthemmuchbetter.Inthisway，youcanapplythatyouhavelearnedbetter.答案 \nThesayingthatpracticemakesperfectthatafteryouhaveplentyofpracticeinwhatyoudoing，youwillbeperfectinit.Ifyouwantimproveyourstudyandwork，thatthemostimportantthingishowtoputtheknowledgeyouhavelearnedintopractice.Forexample，whenlearningalanguage，thoughyoucanmakefulluseyourtalent，practiceisnecessary.Ifyouonlylearngrammarrulesbythe\heartanddon'tdoenough，it'scertainthatyoucan'tunderstandthelanguageperfectly.Butifyoupractisealot，maybeyouwillunderstandmuchbetter.Inthisway，youcanapplyyouhavelearnedbetter.Passage2 (2022·贵阳模拟)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。I'mverygratefulformyparents.Theynotonlygavemelife，butalsobroughtmeupwithendlessloveandsupport，feelsoproudofmyeveryimprovements.IstillrememberonceIwasseriouslyill.Theyweresoworryingandalmostkeptmecompanythewholenight.NowI'mGrade3.Luckyforme，myparentscanunderstandmystressfulconditionbutoftencommunicatewithmewithencouragingwords.Furthermore，theygivemeenoughpersonalspace，whichIappreciateitsomuch.Ishouldstudyhard.WhenIgrowup，Iwillbecomeanusefulpersonandmakemyparentslivedahappylife.答案 \nI'mverygratefulmyparents.Theynotonlygavemelife，butalsobroughtmeupwithendlessloveandsupport，soproudofmyevery.IstillrememberonceIwasseriouslyill.Theyweresoandalmostkeptmecompanythewholenight.NowI'mGrade3.forme，myparentscanunderstandmystressfulconditionoftencommunicatewithmewithencouragingwords.Furthermore，theygivemeenoughpersonalspace，whichIappreciateit\somuch.Ishouldstudyhard.WhenIgrowup，Iwillbecomeusefulpersonandmakemyparentsahappylife.Passage3 (2022·保定联考)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。MymomandIamfighting.Weusedtogetupsowell.Butthesedays，shehasbeenarguingwithmeaboutmenotcomehome.ShethinksIshouldspendmoretimehelpherwiththehouseworkinsteadgoingoutalot.Inhereyes，I'mjustalazyboywhomonlylovesplaying.ThefactisthatsomeofmyfriendsandIaregoingtodifferentschoolsoon.SoIwanttospendasmanytimeasIcanwithhernow.IknowIshouldtrytounderstandthesituationfromherpointofaview.ButIhopeshecanunderstandhowimportantthesefriendsaretome.答案 \nMymomandIfighting.Weusedtogetsowell.Butthesedays，shehasbeenarguingwithmeaboutmenothome.ShethinksIshouldspendmoretimeherwiththehouseworkinsteadgoingoutalot.Inhereyes，I'mjustalazyboyonlylovesplaying.ThefactisthatsomeofmyfriendsandIaregoingtodifferentsoon.SoIwanttospendastimeasIcanwithnow.IknowIshouldtrytounderstandthesituationfromherpointofa\view.ButIhopeshecanunderstandhowimportantthesefriendsaretome.Passage4 (2022·兰州摸底)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。ItwasayearagowhenJoshuagotabikeforChristmas，butherodeiteveryday.Onemorning，hesuddenlyfoundthebikegone.Rantohisfrontyard，hesawamanloadingitintohiscar.Heshouted，butthemandriveoff.AsadevotedChristian，hetoldhisdadherealforgavethethief.What'smore，hewantedthethiefknowhewasforgiven.Sothenextday，hepostedthemessageonaposter－boardandputitinthefrontyard：“Tothepersonwhostolemybike；Youhurtmyfeeling.ButIamaChristianandIforgivehim！”Whenheleftforhomethenextmorning，attheendofthedriveway，thebikewasbackwithnewbrakes.答案 ItwasayearagoJoshuagotabikeforChristmas，herodeitevery\nday.Onemorning，hesuddenlyfoundthebikegone.tohisfrontyard，hesawamanloadingitintohiscar.Heshouted，butthemanoff.AsadevotedChristian，hetoldhisdadheforgavethethief.What'smore，hewantedthethiefknowhewasforgiven.Sothenextday，hepostedmessageonaposter－boardandputitinthefrontyard：“Tothepersonwhostolemybike；Youhurtmy.ButIamaChristianandIforgive！”Whenheleftfor\homethenextmorning，attheendofthedriveway，thebikewasbackwithnewbrakes.Passage5 (2022·洛阳质检)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Arecentsurveyshowsthatmanystudentshavegotintosomebadlivinghabit，whichdogreatharmtotheirhealth.Asweallknowit，healthismoreimportantthanwealth.Withoutahealthybody，youcannotdoeverythingevenifyouareamillionaire.Inorderkeephealthy，it'snecessarytogetridofunhealthyhabitsandformgoodones.Firstofall，eatahealthybreakfastisagreatwaytostarttheday.Youshouldeatmorefruitandvegetables，whicharerichofvitamins.Secondly，gettingenoughsleep.Earlytobedandearlytorisemakeyoufeelgreatalldaylong.Lastly，takeexerciseeverydaytomakeyourbodystrong.Aslongasyouformhealthhabitsandkeepthem，you'llhaveastrongbodyandlivethehealthylife.\n答案 Arecentsurveyshowsthatmanystudentshavegotintosomebadliving，whichdogreatharmtotheirhealth.Asweallknowit\，healthismoreimportantthanwealth.Withoutahealthybody，youcannotdoevenifyouareamillionaire.Inorderkeephealthy，it'snecessarytogetridofunhealthyhabitsandformgoodones.Firstofall，ahealthybreakfastisagreatwaytostarttheday.Youshouldeatmorefruitandvegetables，whicharerichvitamins.Secondly，enoughsleep.Earlytobedandearlytoriseyoufeelgreatalldaylong.Lastly，takeexerciseeverydaytomakeyourbodystrong.Aslongasyouformhabitsandkeepthem，you'llhaveastrongbodyandlivehealthylife.Passage6 (2022·宝鸡一模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线()，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。HerearetheinformationaboutManchesterUniversity.Itisabout200milesfarawayfromLondon，andithasaverybigschoolyard.Youcanliveintheschoolorneartheschool.Theyhaveallsortsofcourse.I'msureyouwillfindoneyoulikeit.IknowyouareparticularinterestedinHumanRights.SoIwillseethatthereisanythingintheirwebsites.I'llsendmyfriendCharliemeetyouattheairport\nwhenyouarrived.Youmethimafewyearsago，buthehaschangedalotsincethen.BothyourauntorIlookforwardtoseeingyouagain.答案 HeretheinformationaboutManchesterUniversity.Itisabout200milesfar\awayfromLondon，andithasaverybigschoolyard.Youcanliveintheschoolorneartheschool.Theyhaveallsortsof.I'msureyouwillfindoneyoulikeit\.IknowyouareinterestedinHumanRights.SoIwillseethereisanythingtheirwebsites.I'llsendmyfriendCharliemeetyouattheairportwhenyou.Youmethimafewyearsago，buthehaschangedalotsincethen.BothyourauntIlookforwardtoseeingyouagain.Passage7 (2022·黑龙江摸底)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。DearJim，OurfriendLiMingwillleavetoShanghaitostudy.Sowearegoingtohaveaget－togetheron3：30thisFridayafternoon.HelivedatNo.225DongfengStreet.Itisnotverydifficultytofindyourwaytoyourhome.TakeaNo.2bus，thestopofthatisontheleftofyouruniversity，andgetoffatsecondcrossing.Thereisacinemacrossthestreet.Turningrightatthecorner，andyouwillfindDongfengStreet.LiMing'shomeis200yardsdownthestreetontheright.ThereisapostofficeisoppositetoLiMing'shome.Yours，\nZhangHua答案 DearJim，OurfriendLiMingwillleaveShanghaitostudy.Sowearegoingtohaveaget－together3：30thisFridayafternoon.HeatNo.225DongfengStreet.Itisnotverytofindwaytoyourhome.TakeaNo.2bus，thestopofisontheleftofyouruniversity，andgetoffatsecondcrossing.Thereisacinemathestreet.rightatthecorner，andyouwillfindDongfengStreet.LiMing'shomeis200yardsdownthestreetontheright.Thereisapostofficeis\oppositetoLiMing'shome.Yours，ZhangHuaPassage8 (2022·金华十校联考)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。IhaveabicyclethatcametomeasbirthdaypresentfrommymumanddadwhenIwas12.Itcostabout1，200yuan，thatwashalfofmyfather'smonthlysalary.ThebicyclewasmadeinShanghaiandit'scolorisred，myfavorite.Whichisimportantisthatmybicycleplaysanimportantpartonmyschoollife.Italsorepresentthedeeplovefrommyparents.ButIrideittoschooleveryday.IhavemadeupmymindtoworkhardlysothatIcanrepaytheminthefuture.IwillbuyacartodrivethemtowherevertheywantwhenIgrowupbecausethecarisfasterandveryconvenientthanthebike，especiallywhenitrains.\n答案 IhaveabicyclethatcametomeasbirthdaypresentfrommymumanddadwhenIwas12.Itcostabout1，200yuan，washalfofmyfather'smonthlysalary.ThebicyclewasmadeinShanghaiandcolorisred，myfavorite.isimportantisthatmybicycleplaysanimportantpartmyschoollife.Italsothedeeplovefrommyparents.Irideittoschooleveryday.IhavemadeupmymindtoworksothatIcanrepaytheminthefuture.Iwillbuyacartodrivethemto\wherevertheywantwhenIgrowupbecausethecarisfasterandconvenientthanthebike，especiallywhenitrains.Passage9 (2022·陕西安康一模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线()，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。TodayisSunday.Theskyisfullofsunshine，sodoesmylife.Atabout9：00a.m.，Igotothebookstorewithmyfriends.Therewasalotofnewbooks.Ididn'tknowwhatonetobuybecausethesebookswereallusefultome.At10：00，wewenttocinema.ThefilmwascalledTheEarthquakeofTangshanbutsomepeoplewerewaitingoutsidethebookingoffice.Ittookusabouttwohourstoseeit.Havingbeenseenthefilm，everyonewasdeeplymoving.Someofmyfriendsevenburstintotear.That'sareallywonderfulfilm.Itisveryworthseeing.Whatahappyday！IhopetomorrowIwillbeevenhappier.答案 \nTodayisSunday.Theskyisfullofsunshine，somylife.Atabout9：00a.m.，Itothebookstorewithmyfriends.Therealotofnewbooks.Ididn'tknowonetobuybecausethesebookswereallusefultome.At10：00，wewenttocinema.ThefilmwascalledTheEarthquakeofTangshansomepeoplewerewaitingoutsidethebookingoffice.Ittookusabouttwohourstoseeit.Havingbeen\seenthefilm，everyonewasdeeply.Someofmyfriendsevenburstinto.That'sareallywonderfulfilm.Itisworthseeing.Whatahappyday！IhopetomorrowIwillbeevenhappier.Passage10 (2022·成都名校质检)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。DearSir/Madam，I'moneofyourcustomer.ThedaybeforeyesterdayIboughtawalkmaninyourshop.BeforeIleft，Idocheckitcarefullyandeverythingwasallright.WhenIgothome，therefore，Ifoundafaultwithit.Theproblemiswhatthe“Play”doesn'tworkatall.Probableit'snotyourfaultandsoismine.Anyhow，Ican'tsolvetheprobleminperson.Yousee，awalkmanisofgreatusefulformetolearnEnglishandIcannotwaitfortoolongbeforethisproblemissolved.Hopefullyyouwilldealwiththewalkmanwithoutdelay，whenyouacceptmyletter.Hopingtohearofyouintheearliestpossibletime!Yourssincerely，\nLiHua答案 DearSir/Madam，I'moneofyour.ThedaybeforeyesterdayIboughtawalkmaninyourshop.BeforeIleft，Icheckitcarefullyandeverythingwasallright.WhenIgothome，，Ifoundafaultwithit.Theproblemisthe“Play”doesn'tworkatall.it'snotyourfaultandismine.Anyhow，Ican'tsolvetheprobleminperson.Yousee，awalkmanisofgreatformetolearnEnglishandIcannotwaitfor\toolongbeforethisproblemissolved.Hopefullyyouwilldealwiththewalkmanwithoutdelay，whenyoumyletter.Hopingtohearyouintheearliestpossibletime!Yourssincerely，LiHua.C组 一年创新导向Passage1假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dearteachersandschoolmates，It'sgreathonorformetobeheretodayandsharemyexperienceoflearningEnglishwithyou.IwanttolearnEnglishwelltotakeabetterjob，butIlearnEnglish\ninsomedifferenceways.Inclass，Ilearnnewwords，usefulexpressionsandgrammarandtakeeffortstounderstandthetextsunderthehelpofourEnglishteacher.Aftertheclass，Idoalotofexercisesprepareforthecollegeentranceexamination.YoualsoreadnewsandwatchvideosontheInternetandfromothersource.IhavealotoffunespecialwhenlearningEnglishwithcartoonmovies.Thanksforlistening!答案 Dearteachersandschoolmates，It'sgreathonorformetobeheretodayandsharemyexperienceoflearningEnglishwithyou.IwanttolearnEnglishwelltotakeabetterjob，IlearnEnglishinsomeways.Inclass，Ilearnnewwords，usefulexpressionsandgrammarandeffortstounderstandthetextsthehelpofourEnglishteacher.Afterthe\class，Idoalotofexercisesforthecollegeentranceexamination.alsoreadnewsandwatchvideosontheInternetandfromother.IhavealotoffunwhenlearningEnglishwithcartoonmovies.Thanksforlistening!Passage2假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。ItseemedthateveryoneisstudyinghardfortheCollegeEntranceExamination.Therearesuchmanybookstoread.Nowadays，manyaparentexpecttoo\nmuchoftheirchildren.Theyhopetheirsonsordaughtersstudyhardinordertogetgreatcolleges.Itisthereasonwhatparentsarestrictwiththeirchildren.Theydon'tknowwhattheydowithhasbecomeaheavyburdenontheirchildren.Onmyopinion，thatisn'tright.Instead，Ithinkparentsshouldcreateaproperlearnedenvironmentforthechildrenandallowmetoplayfromtimetotime.Onlyinthiswaycanthechilddotheirbestandsucceedatlast.答案 ItthateveryoneisstudyinghardfortheCollegeEntranceExamination.Therearemanybookstoread.Nowadays，manyaparenttoomuchoftheirchildren.Theyhopetheirsonsordaughtersstudyhardinordertogetgreatcolleges.Itisthereasonparentsarestrictwiththeirchildren.Theydon'tknowwhattheydowith\hasbecomeaheavyburdenontheirchildren.myopinion，thatisn'tright.Instead，Ithinkparentsshouldcreateaproperenvironmentforthechildrenandallowtoplayfromtimetotime.Onlyinthiswaycanthedotheirbestandsucceedatlast.Passage3假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Thedaybeforeyesterday，myfatherinvitedtoarestaurantbyhisgoodfriends.Attherestauranttheydidn'tstopdrinkinguntilbothofthemweredrunk.Myfatherdidn'trealizetheseriousofdrivingacarafterdrinking.Hedecidedtosend\nhisfriendstotheirhome.Andthenhedrovehome.Whiledrivenhome，myfatherfeltuneasy.Beforeherealizedthatwouldhappen，myfatherrunintoahouseneartheroad.Thepolicecameandexaminedtheamountofalcoholmyfatherhaddrunk.Itwasoverthenormallystandard.Sothepolicefinedmyfather.Afterthat，myfatherregrettedwhathehaddonebutmadeuphismindnevertodrinkagainbeforedriving.答案 Thedaybeforeyesterday，myfatherinvitedtoarestaurantbyhisgoodfriends.Attherestauranttheydidn'tstopdrinkinguntilofthemweredrunk.Myfatherdidn'trealizetheofdrivingacarafterdrinking.Hedecidedtosendhisfriendstotheir.Andthenhedrovehome.Whilehome，myfatherfeltuneasy.herealizedwouldhappen，myfatherintoahouseneartheroad.Thepolicecameandexaminedtheamountofalcoholmyfatherhaddrunk.Itwasoverthestandard.Sothepolicefinedmyfather.Afterthat，myfatherregrettedwhathehaddonemadeuphismindnevertodrinkagainbeforedriving.
