【创新设计】（课标通用）2022高考英语大二轮复习测试写作专题专题一短文改错 Ⅰ.体验高考(2022·浙江)IwastakingatraintoLondon'sVictoriaStation.Ihadnoticedthatthecarriagewasnoiseandfilledwithpeople.Beforelong，atraininspectorcomestocheckourtickets.Apassengerrealizedhecouldn'tfindhisticketbutbecamequiteupset.Theneveryoneinthecarriagebegansearchingtheticket，whichwaseventuallyfoundunderaseatseveralrowsfromhisowner.Thepersonwhofoundaticketsmiledwithpleasureathissuccess.Nooneinthecarriagehadpreviousspokentoorevennoticedtheticketownerbefore.Yettheyhadsoquicklyofferedthestrangerstheirhelp.Ifwecouldshowconcerntoothersonneed，theworldwouldbeabetterplacetolivein.答案 IwastakingatraintoLondon'sVictoriaStation.Ihadnoticedthatthecarriagewasandfilledwithpeople.Beforelong，atraininspectortocheckourtickets.Apassengerrealizedhecouldn'tfindhisticketbecamequiteupset.Theneveryoneinthecarriagebegansearchingtheticket，whichwaseventuallyfoundunderaseatseveralrowsfromowner.Thepersonwhofoundticketsmiledwithpleasureathissuccess.\nⅡ.仿真、模拟Passage1WhatDoesaCreditCardBringUsiswrittenbyEilltonHenley.It'sabrieforexcellentarticleaboutcreditcards.Theauthorexplainswhatcreditcardswork.Andhealsopointsoutthepositiveandnegativeaspectforhavingit.Americanconsumersaremostlylikelytousecreditcards.However，theuseofcreditcardsareexpandingintoalmosteverycountryinworld.Thekeypointmakingbytheauthoristhatusersshouldpayfortheamountinfullwhenabillissentfromthecreditcardcompany.Thisprotectedalltheadvantagesandavoidsallthedisadvantagesofusingcreditcards.答案 Passage2Afterwatch“EnglishTV”lastSundaymorning，Iphonedtomyclassmateandtoldhimtogotoseeafilmintheafternoon.Beforethefilmwasover，wereturnedtoschooltodoourlessons.Whilewearehavingarestinthe\ncorridor，IsawMrLiu，myChinateacher.HetoldmethatwehadmadesomeprogressesinEnglish，butmyChineselaggedbehind，especiallymyChinesecomposition.HesuggestedIshouldreadmoreandkeepingadiaryeveryday.Intheeveningmyfathertoldmethatreadingnewspaperswoulddomewellforimprovingcompositionwriting.Thatwasreallygoodidea!Whattheysaidwasquiteright，andIshouldfollowtheiradvice.答案 Passage3I'mverygladtohavereceivedtheletteryousentmetwoweekago.Ihave\nbeenthinkingaboutaquestionyouaskedme.Inmyopinion，youshouldcomebackafterfinishyourstudiesabroad.Foronereason，thatyouarestudyingisbadneedednowadaysinourcountry.Itwillbequiteeasyforyoufindagoodjob.Infact，Iknewafewbigcompaniesinourcityhopetohirepeoplelikeyou.Foranotheronereason，Ithinkitwillbemoreconvenientforyoutolookafteryourparentsbuttheyaregettingold.Butthisisonlymypointofview.Itisupforyoutomakearightchoice.答案 Passage4ThismorningIfoundredwalletonthecampus.Girlsusuallikered，soIbelievedthewalletwasbelongedtoagirlstudent.Iopenedit，trytofindoutwhoseitwas.Therefore，Ifoundnothingbut300yuaninit.IwaswonderingwhattodowithitwhilesuddenlymyclassmatesChenYangpassedby.ShesuggestedsheputupaLostandFoundnoticeandIdidso.Iwrotedownmytelephonenumberandasktheownertocallmeaftershesawit.Later，agirlcametoclaimiton3o'clockthisafternoon.答案 \nPassage5LastSaturday，ourschoolhadorganizedalloftheSenior1studentstovisitthechildrenatalocalorphanage.Wetookmanybooksthatwaspopularamongchildren，aswellasmanykindsofschoolsuppliesandtoys，tochildren.Theyweredelightedtoreceivethesegift.Weplayedsomegamestogetherandgiveperformances.Beforeleavetheorphanagewetookphotoswiththemandgavethemourcontactdetailsbutwecouldkeepintouchwithoneanother.Thatday，eachoneofushadanenjoyabletime.Wegavethechildrentheircareandhelp；forreturn，theygaveustheirsmilesandlove.Thesevoluntaryactivitiesmadeadeeplyimpressiononus.答案 \nPassage6IaswellasmyfamilyaregoingtoNewYorkCitythisweekend.Ihadbeenlookingforwardtogothereforalongtime.Itisoneofthemodernestcityintheworld.Therehavealsoalotofmuseumswhereyoucanlearnsomethingyoucan'tlearnitinschool.I'dalsoliketoseetheStatueofLibertyandtheEmpireStateBuilding.Unfortunately，thetwintowersdestroyedonSeptember11th,2022andIwouldhavethechancetoseethembymyself.NowIamgettingreadyfortheexcitedtrip.Ibetitwillbeaunforgettableexperience.答案 \n
