三、增加细节的5大策略在英语书面表达中，增加细节内容的描述是必不可少的。在信息提纲类写作中，考生一定不能简单地翻译或者仅仅完成所给条目的指定内容；在看图作文中更不能只是轻描淡写图片内容，否则很有可能造成内容不充实、字数要求不达标或者结构不连贯。适当增加细节内容，能够使习作流畅、丰满，达到应有的表达效果。微技能(一) 列举具体的实例进行补充说明1．我们青少年应尽我们所能保护环境、拯救地球。Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.→Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample，wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags，refusetousesingle-useproducts，plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.2．我要花一些时间和父母呆在一起。I’llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents.→I’llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents，chattingwiththemanddoingsomehousework.3．我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。I’dliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.→I’dliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.Ifpossible，wecantraveltogetherorsharetravelingexperiences.4．我是一个充满活力的健康男孩，我非常喜欢体育运动。I’mahealthyboyfullofenergy，soIlikesportsverymuch.6\n→Iamahealthyboyfullofenergy，soIlikesportsverymuch，especiallyoutdooractivities.WheneverIhavetime，I’llgohikingormountainclimbingwithmyclassmates.题组过关1 根据括号内提示完成句子1．TheInternetisplayingamoreandmoreimportantpartinourdailylife.Wecannotonlyreadnewsfromhomeandabroad(我们不仅能阅读国内外的新闻)，butalsogetinformation，sendemailsandattendonlineschools.2．LauraisastandardAmericanstyle.ShespeaksperfectAmericanEnglish(她说一口完美的美式英语)，andthat’swhyIamcrazyabouther.3．However，itseemspeopleareunawareofthenegativeeffectsofmobilephonesoncommunication.Forexample，manypeoplebegintopaylessattentiontoface-to-facecommunication(比如，很多人开始越来越不重视面对面的交流)．4．However，everycoinhastwosides，sodoestheInternet.Forexample，beinglostintheInternetmayaffectourstudyandwork(比如，沉溺于因特网也许会影响我们的学习和工作)．微技能(二) 增添与所写信息相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容1．我有时去村西的小河游泳。Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.→Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.Thewaterintheriverwasveryclear.(背景渲染)→Weatherpermitting，Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.(相关背景)2．我发现了一些不良行为。Ifoundsomebadbehavior.→Ifoundsomebadbehavior.Somepeoplescribbledonthewall；somepeopleplayedsocceronthelawnandsomepeoplethrewrubbisheverywhere.(相关行为描述)3．晚饭后，这位男士走向了卧室。Aftersupper，themanwenttohisbedroom.→Afterarichmeal，thefatmanslowlymadehiswaytohisbedroom.(神态、动作)题组过关2 根据括号内提示完成句子5．Consideringtheactivityisofgreatvalue/ismeaningful(考虑到这项活动很有意义)，weintendtodesignauniformsuitedtoourownclass.6．I’lltrymybesttomakeyourunclehappyhere.Iameagerlylookingforwardtohisvisittoourcity(我热切地期盼着他来我们城市参观)．6\n7．Manyteenagersdon’tpayanyattentiontotheirhealth，especiallyduringtheholiday.TheyspendtoomuchtimewatchingTV(他们花费太多的时间看电视)，playinggamesandchattingontheInternetallnight.8．LookingbacktomystayinBritain，Ifeltveryhappyandsatisfied(我感到非常高兴和满意)．9．Inthesummervacation，Iamlongingtoget/haveapart-timejob(我渴望得到一份兼职工作)．微技能(三) 增加相关信息的时间、地点等内容1．我要和父母一起去超市购物。I’mgoingtodosomeshoppingwithmyparentsinthesupermarket.→I’mgoingtodosomeshoppingwithmyparentsinthesupermarketandwon’tbebackuntilabout5∶00intheafternoon.(增加时间)2．我已经带来了你让我归还的这两本书。Ihavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturn.→IhavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturntotheCityLibrary.(增加地点)题组过关3 根据括号内提示完成句子10．YaoMing，whowasborninShanghaionSeptember12,1980(1980年9月12日出生于上海)，startedplayingfortheShanghaiSharksasateenager.11．TheChineseSilkRoad，whichstartsfromtoday’sXi’anandfinallyfinishesattheeastcoastof(起源于今天的西安，并最后达到……的东海岸)theMediterranean，iswell-knowntotheworld.12．TodayIpaidavisittooneofthegreatestcitiesinAsia，BeijinginChina(在亚洲，中国的北京)．13．Iwasattractedbythebeautyofthecitythemoment/immediately/assoonas/directly(一……就……)Iarrivedhereat6o’clockinthemorningbyplane.微技能(四) 适当增加与所给信息相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的、地点等内容1．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Henry最近来信询问你高考后的暑假安排。请根据下面要点写一封回信，说明你的计划，并简述理由。1.休息；2.读书；3.参加社会活动。(1)Ineedagoodrest.I’lldosomereading.→IneedagoodrestbecauseIdofeeltiredafterthehardworkofalltheseyears.Ofcourse，I’lldosomereadingforfun，andforknowledgeaswell.(因果关系)(2)I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.6\n→IfIhavefreetime，I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.(条件状语)→Ifpossible，I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.(条件状语)→Ifpossible，I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivitiessothat/inorderthatIcanknowmoreaboutthesociety.(结果状语)2．Tracy来电话：咖啡屋(BoltonCoffee)见面取消。Tracycalled，sayingthatshecouldn’tmeetyouatBoltonCoffee.→Tracycalled，sayingthatshecouldn’tmeetyouatBoltonCoffeeasshehadsomethingimportanttodo.(原因状语)3．帮助邻居的孩子们补习英语。IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.→IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.Tomyjoy，theymaderapidprogressandtheirparentsthoughthighlyofme.(增添结果)题组过关4 根据括号内提示完成句子14．TombSweepingDay，oneofthetraditionalChinesefestivals(传统的中国节日之一)，usuallyfallsaroundApril5everyyeartohonorthedeadandsatisfytheirancestors.15．Withtheglobalclimatebecomingwarmerandwarmer(伴随着全球气候变得越来越暖和)，ourearthisfacedwithgreatthreat.16．Situated/Locatedinnortheast(坐落在东北部)，Beijingiswell-knownforitsculturalrelicswhichhavebeenthereforalonghistory.17．Duringthisperiod，peoplewillgotocleanthegravesandpayrespecttotheirancestors，carryingfoodandfruit(带上食物和水果)．18．Beingaseniorschoolstudent(作为一名高中生)，it’severyone’sdutytodosomethingtosaveourearth.19．Asisknowntoall/Aseveryoneknows(众所周知)，EarthHourisanactivitywhichaimsatsavingenergy.微技能(五) 结尾适当发挥，写出个人感受、评价、希望愿景、倡议等1．AlthoughIwasverytiredthissummerholiday，IfeltveryhappyforwhatIdid.(个人感受)2．Ithinksuchactivitiesarenecessaryandmeaningful.(评价)3．Inaword，ifshewouldliketolearnChinese，Ihopeshewilldoitwell.(愿景)4．Asstudents，it’sourdutytoprotectourschoolenvironmentandmakeitclean.(倡议)6\n题组过关5 根据括号内提示完成句子20．Asaprofessionalbasketballplayer(作为一名专业的篮球运动员)，heisoneofChina’sbest-knownathletes.21．IthinkBeijingiswellworthasecondvisit(非常值得再次参观)．22．Inmyview，nomatterhow/howeverattractivetheInternetis(不管因特网多么吸引人)，itshouldn’tseparateusfromourlovedones.23．Wedrewaconclusionthroughtheexperiment(通过这个实验我们得出一个结论)：thetemperaturedoesn’tchangewheniceismeltingintowater.24．Let’sdevelopgoodhabitsofsavingenergyinourdailylifeandtrytomakemorecontributionstoourenvironment(尽力为我们的环境做出更多贡献)．25．Therefore，weshouldspendtimewithourfamilies，enjoyingthetimewhenwearetogether(享受我们在一起的时光)．Ⅰ.按要求对下列句子进行扩充1．每天要努力学习，为每一次考试做出仔细的计划。(增加条件状语)Studyhardeverydayandmakecarefulplansforeveryexam.Ifweareprepared，wewillnotfeelworried.2．复旦大学位于上海。(增加which引导的非限制性定语从句)FudanUniversityislocatedinShanghai，whichisaninternationalcitywhereIcangetalotofknowledgeandexperience.3．不管我将面对什么样的困难，我都不会屈服。(增加目的状语)Torealizemydream，whateverchallengeIwillface，Iwillnevergivein.4．我们应该学会如何与他人相处。(增加具体信息说明)Weshouldlearnhowtogetalongwellwithothers.Forexample，weshouldrespectteachersandbefriendlywithclassmates.5．一些学生非常担心考试以至于晚上无法入睡。(增加结果状语)Somestudentsaresoworriedaboutexamsthattheycan’tfallasleepatnight.Asaresult，theyfeelsleepyinthedaytimeandcan’tconcentrateinclass.Ⅱ.请为下面的短文适当增加细节DearSam，TheCollegeEntranceExaminationlastsfortwodays.TheexamineesaretestedonChinese，math，scienceandarts.Wearephysicallyandmentallystressedduringtheexaminationandthequestionsaredifficultandcomplex.6\n参考范文 DearSam，Thankyouforyourconcern.NowI’lltellyousomethingabouttheonce-a-yearCollegeEntranceExamination.Thereisnodoubtthattheexaminationisveryimportant.ItlastsfortwodaysfromJune7thto8th.TheexamineesaretestedonChineseandmathonthefirstday.Scienceandartsaretestedonthesecondday.Wearephysicallyandmentallystressedduringtheexaminationandthequestionsaredifficultandcomplex.Butwearefullofconfidencebecausewearewellprepared.Weallbelievethatthefruitsofoureffortswillbesweet.6
