概要写作11.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Itisimportantthatyouteachyourbabytoreadatanearlyage.Why?Obviously,beingabletoreadisthebasisforanysuccessfuleducation,sotheearliertheystart,thebetter.Alltoooften,parentsleaveeducatingtheirchildrenuptoschools,whichprobablyexplainswhytheUnitedStatesiscurrentlyranked18thinitsrateofreadingandwriting.Teachingyourbabytoreadprovidesbrainexerciseandithasalsobeenshowntoincreasethebaby’sIQbecausethereissimplynobettertimeinaperson’slifeforlearningthanwhentheyarebabies.Duringthistime,theirbrainsaredevelopingrapidly.Thesoonertheybegintoread,thesoonertheycanbegintolearnothersubjects.Thisway,bythetimeyourchildrenbeginschool,theywillalreadyknowwhat’sbeingtaught,andwillbeputonthefasttrack.Maybetheywillevenskipagradedowntheroad.Oneofthecaseswas17-month-oldElizabethBarrettwhodrewpublic’sattention.Shewasgivenaseriesofwordsandevensentencesthatshecouldreadquitewell.Herparentshadbeenreadingtohersinceshewasbornandhadprovidedherwithaveryearlyeducation.Readingisthemostimportantthingtoteachbabiesatayoungage.Itdoesn’thavetobestressfulordifficultforyourchild.Learningcanbefunatsuchanearlyage,anditcanbeaccomplishedsoeasilythattheywon’thavetostruggleinordertolearn.Ifyou’reinterestedinteachingyourbabytoread,thebestwaytostartisbyspendingjustafewminuteseveryday.Flashcardsareahelpfultool.Simplyshowyourbabymatchingpictureontheoppositeside.Therearealsovideosthathelptoteachbabiestoread.Thereisnobettertimetoteachyourbabytoreadthanthepresent._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Teachingyourbabytoreadasyoungaspossibleiscrucialowingtothenecessityofobtaininggoodeducation.(要点一)Itneedsstartingassoonaspossiblebecausebabies’intelligencewillbeimprovedwhentheirbrainsdevelopfast.(要点二)Importantasitis,relaxationandeasinesscouldbebroughtintothelearningprocess.(要点三)Therefore,forpeoplekeenonteachingbabiestoread,itishightimetobeginwithsparingsometimeregularlywitheffectiveteachingmaterials.(要点四)【写作分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，为了获得良好的教育，让你的孩子从小就学会阅读是非常重要的。这需要尽快开始，因为婴儿的智力会随着大脑的快速发展而提高。重要的是，放松和轻松可以被带入学习过程。因此，对于那些热衷于教宝宝阅读的人来说，现在应该从定期抽出一些时间来阅读有效的教材开始。1.要点摘录①Itisimportantthatyouteachyourbabytoreadatanearlyage.Why?Obviously,beingabletoreadisthebasisforanysuccessfuleducation,sotheearliertheystart,thebetter.②Teachingyourbabytoreadprovidesbrainexerciseandithasalsobeenshowntoincreasethebaby’sIQbecausethereissimplynobettertimeinaperson’slifeforlearningthanwhentheyarebabies.③Learningcanbefunatsuchanearlyage,anditcanbeaccomplishedsoeasilythattheywon’thavetostruggleinordertolearn.④Ifyou’reinterestedinteachingyourbabytoread,thebestwaytostartisbyspendingjustafewminuteseveryday.⑤Thereisnobettertimetoteachyourbabytoreadthanthepresent.2.缜密构思要点二和要点三之间形成因果关系，整合四、五要点13
3.遣词造句①Teachingyourbabytoreadasyoungaspossibleiscrucialowingtothenecessityofobtaininggoodeducation.②Itneedsstartingassoonaspossiblebecausebabies’intelligencewillbeimprovedwhentheirbrainsdevelopfast.③Importantasitis,relaxationandeasinesscouldbebroughtintothelearningprocess.④Therefore,forpeoplekeenonteachingbabiestoread,itishightimetobeginwithsparingsometimeregularlywitheffectiveteachingmaterials.【范文点评】[高分句型1]Teachingyourbabytoreadasyoungaspossibleiscrucialowingtothenecessityofobtaininggoodeducation.（teaching为动名词作主语，用一个简单句总结了原文第一段的内容）[高分句型2]Importantasitis,relaxationandeasinesscouldbebroughtintothelearningprocess.（用as引导让步状语从句，总结文章第三段的内容）22.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Themantarayisoneofthelargestfishesintheworld,reachingupto29feetinwidth.Andmantaraysaresomeofthefriendliestcreatures.Theyallowdiverstoswimrightuptothem.Unfortunately,thesegentleanimalsareinbigtrouble.Since2011,mantarayshavebeenlistedasathreatenedspeciesworldwide.Overfishingisconsideredthebiggestthreattogiantmantanumbers,bothintentionalandaccidental.Peoplecatchmantaraysfortheirgillplates—thepartsthroughwhichtheyfiltertheirfoodfromseawater—aresoldinChinaformedicalpurposes.Drivenbythehugedemand,fishermenhavehuntedthemmercilessly.From2010to2013,thenumberofrayskilledannuallytosupplythegillplatemarkettripledto150,000.Clearly,overfishingisbadforanyseacreature,butit’sevenworseforgiantmantarays.Femalemantasusuallyhaveonlyonebaby,everytwotofiveyears.Soeverymantaraythatwascaughthurtsthepopulationinabigway.13
Toprotectgiantmantapopulation,Peru,acountryinSouthAmerica,recentlytookabigsteptoprotectgiantmantarays.Itbannedfishingforthem.Peoplewhobreakthelawcanbefinedorhavetheirfishinglicensestakenaway.Evenmantarayscaughtaccidentallyinfishingnetsmustbereleased.Althoughothercountrieshavepassedlawstoprotectmantarays,Peru’smaybethemostimportantoneyet,becausetherearemoregiantmantaraysinthePacificOceannearPeruthaninanyotherplaceintheworld.ScientistsworkingintheMantaTrust,anorganizationthatresearchesmantarays,arealsotryingtoprotectmantaraysbylearningmoreaboutthem.Earlierthisyear,theorganizationattachedvideocameras,calledCrittercams,tomantaraysoffthewestcoastofMexico.Thephotosthecamerascollectcouldhelpresearcherspredictwhereandwhenmantaraysswim.Thescientistcouldusetheinformationtowarnfishingboatstoavoidtheseareas,helpingreducethenumberofaccidentallycaughtmantarays.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Thoughbeinglargeandfriendly,thegiantmantarayareindanger.(要点1)Duetoitsmedicalvalueandhugeprofit,mantaraysareover-hunted,whichcanbemoredetrimentalforthespeciesgivenitslowproductivity.(要点2)Tosavetheendangeredspecies,thePerugovernmenthastakentheinitiative,carryingoutstrictlaws.(要点3)Besides,scientistsaremakingattemptstoprotectmantaraysthroughgainingmoreknowledgeofthem.(要点4)【写作分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，尽管巨大的蝠鲼又大又友好，但它们正处于危险之中。由于它的医疗价值和巨大的利润，蝠鲼被过度猎杀，考虑到它的低生产力，这可能对这个物13
种更有害。为了拯救濒危物种，秘鲁政府采取了主动，实施了严格的法律。此外，科学家们正试图通过更多地了解蝠鲼来保护它们。1.要点摘录①Themantarayisoneofthelargestfishesintheworld,reachingupto29feetinwidth.Andmantaraysaresomeofthefriendliestcreatures.Unfortunately,thesegentleanimalsareinbigtrouble.②Overfishingisconsideredthebiggestthreattogiantmantanumbers,bothintentionalandaccidental.Peoplecatchmantaraysfortheirgillplates—thepartsthroughwhichtheyfiltertheirfoodfromseawater—aresoldinChinaformedicalpurposes.③Toprotectgiantmantapopulation,Peru,acountryinSouthAmerica,recentlytookabigsteptoprotectgiantmantarays.Itbannedfishingforthem.Peoplewhobreakthelawcanbefinedorhavetheirfishinglicensestakenaway.④ScientistsworkingintheMantaTrust,anorganizationthatresearchesmantarays,arealsotryingtoprotectmantaraysbylearningmoreaboutthem.2.缜密构思，将第1个要点进行总说，将第2、3、4三个要点进行分说。3.遣词造句Thoughbeinglargeandfriendly,thegiantmantarayareindanger.Duetoitsmedicalvalueandhugeprofit,mantaraysareover-hunted,whichcanbemoredetrimentalforthespeciesgivenitslowproductivity.Tosavetheendangeredspecies,thePerugovernmenthastakentheinitiative,carryingoutstrictlaws.Besides,scientistsaremakingattemptstoprotectmantaraysthroughgainingmoreknowledgeofthem.【范文点评】[高分句型1]Duetoitsmedicalvalueandhugeprofit,mantaraysareover-hunted,whichcanbemoredetrimentalforthespeciesgivenitslowproductivity.运用一个复杂的主从复合句对原文第二段进行了概括，其中which引导非限制性定语从句。[高分句型2]Tosavetheendangeredspecies,thePerugovernmenthastakentheinitiative,carryingoutstrictlaws.用不定式作目的状语对第三段进行了概括。13
33.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Parentsalwayswantthebestfortheirchildrenandgivingthem;thebesteducationisalwaysontopofthelist.Butifyouthinkeducationisalltheyneed,maybeyoushouldthinktwice.Sure,youlearnalotofthingsinschool,butthereareimportantlessonsandskillsyouwillneedinlifethatonecanonlylearnathome.Therefore,teachingthechildrentodohouseholdchoresisveryhelpfulintheirgrowth.Mostfamiliesnowadayshirehousemaidstodothechores,sochildrendon’tgettoexperiencedoingitanymore.Butstudiesarguethatit’sstillnecessarytoletchildrendothem.Helpingathomecanbeatrainingplaceforyourchildrentowhateverresponsibilitiestheymayhaveinthefuture.Bydoingso,theycanlearnwhatmightbeoftheiradvantagewhentheygrowup.“Performingchoresofferskidsafeelingofself-sufficiency,helpsthemdevelopaworkethic,istiedtoacademicsuccessinschool,makesthemfeelusefulandteachesthemtheimportanceofhelpingothersandcontributingtothegreatergood.”Although,mostparentscanalsoarguethatitisnoteasytoforcetheirchildrentodochores.Itisanatureforthechildrentorefusetodochoreswhentheyaretoldto.Buttherearewaysthatcanturnhouseholdchoresintoamorelikelyactivityforthechildren.First,startthemyoung.Thisdoesn’tmeanthatyouletyourchildrendohugetasksatanearlyage.Youcangraduallyincreasetheleveloftasksastheygrowoldbutnevereverpushthemtoohard.Second,appreciateeverylittleachievement.Praisethemorgivethemsomething.Childrenloverewardsanditdrivesthemtodobetter.Mostimportantly,letthemknowthataskingthemtohelp-outisnotapunishment.Choresshouldneverbeusedasapunishment.Theymightgetdoneintheshortterm,buttheeffectswon’tlast.Thisapproachdoesnotgivethechildthefeelingofdoingsomethingbecauseitistherightthingtodo.Itonlymakesthemhatechoresandhopingoutevenmore.Choresshouldbeusedasasenseofpurpose.Explainto13
themthatitisfortheirbenefitandeverythingtheylearnfromitisfortheiradvantage.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Teachingchildrentodohouseholdchoresisveryhelpfulintheirgrowth,whichcanmakehomeatrainingplaceforyourchildrentowhateverresponsibilitiestheymayhaveinthefuture.Althoughit’shardtoforcechildrentodochores,therearewaysthatcanturnhouseholdchoresintoamorelikelyactivityforthechildren.Butmostimportantly,choresshouldbeusedasasenseofpurposeinsteadofapunishment.【写作分析】本文是一篇议论文。文章主要论述了让孩子学做家务对于孩子成长的重要性，它可以培养孩子的责任心，同时，要运用合理的方式鼓励孩子学做家务，而不是将做家务作为惩罚，要让做家务成为一种使命感。1.要点摘录①Therefore,teachingthechildrentodohouseholdchoresisveryhelpfulintheirgrowth.②Helpingathomecanbeatrainingplaceforyourchildrentowhateverresponsibilitiestheymayhaveinthefuture.③Although,mostparentscanalsoarguethatitisnoteasytoforcetheirchildrentodochores.④Buttherearewaysthatcanturnhouseholdchoresintoamorelikelyactivityforthechildren.⑤Mostimportantly,letthemknowthataskingthemtohelp-outisnotapunishment.13
⑥Choresshouldbeusedasasenseofpurpose.2.缜密构思将第①、②两个要点进行整合；将第③、④两个要点进行整合；将第⑤、⑥两个要点进行整合。3.遣词造句Teachingchildrentodohouseholdchoresisveryhelpfulintheirgrowth,whichcanmakehomeatrainingplaceforyourchildrentowhateverresponsibilitiestheymayhaveinthefuture.Althoughit’shardtoforcechildrentodochores,therearewaysthatcanturnhouseholdchoresintoamorelikelyactivityforthechildren.Butmostimportantly,choresshouldbeusedasasenseofpurposeinsteadofapunishment.【范文点评】[高分句型1]Teachingchildrentodohouseholdchoresisveryhelpfulintheirgrowth,whichcanmakehomeatrainingplaceforyourchildrentowhateverresponsibilitiestheymayhaveinthefuture.运用一个复杂的主从复合句对原文第一段和第二段进行了概括。其中which引导的非限制性定语从句等表达高级。[高分句型2]Althoughit’shardtoforcechildrentodochores,therearewaysthatcanturnhouseholdchoresintoamorelikelyactivityforthechildren.用although引导让步状语从句对第三段进行了概括，且句中“that”引导定语从句修饰先行词“ways”，表达非常高级。44.阅读下面短文，根据内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Beesareverystrangecreatures.Theyhavetheirownwayoftellingeachotherthattheyhavefoundanewflower.Theybringsomeofitsnectar(花蜜)backhomeandthendoalittledancethatshowswheretheflowerisandhowfarawayitis.Inautumntheworkerbeesgooutandcollectasmuchnectarandpollen(花粉)astheycancarry.Thentheyreturntomakehoneyandstoreitforthelongcoldwinter.13
Beesbuildtheirownhousesbuttheydonotalwayshaveroundtopslikepeopledrawtheminstorybooks.Theyareusuallyfivestoreyshigh.Thequeenbeealwayshasthebottomstorey.Inbetweenthebottomstoreyandalltheresttherearebarsonlyjustwideenoughfortheworkerstopassthrough.Thequeenbeecannevergouptotheotherfloorsbecausesheisbiggerthanalltheotherbees.Thestoreysthequeencan’tenterarewherethestoreroomsare.Thereareroomsforpollen,nectarandroyaljellies(蜂王浆).Ifthereisafiretheworkershavetocoverthewallsandentranceoftherooms.Theyhavetomovethehoneyandthenectarandpollenawayfromthehotwallsoftheroom.Thequeenistheonlythatcanlayeggs.Shemateswithamalebeecalledadrone.Oncethequeenhaslaidtheeggsshethrowsthedroneoutbecauseadronejustsitsaroundeatinghoneyandnectar.Hecannotgooutandcollectpollenbecausedronesdonothavepollen-carryingthingsontheirlegsliketheworkershave.Youngbeesarecallednursesbecausetheyhavetonursethenewbornbeeswhethertheylikeitornot.Whatabeeendsupbeingwhenitgrowsupdependsonwhatiteats.Ifitistobeaqueenitmustfeedonroyaljelliesanditmustnever,everseteyesonanotherqueen.Ifitdoestheymustfighttillonlyoneofthemisstillalive.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Beesareweirdanimalsandhaveauniquewaytocommunicatewithoneanother.(要点1)Workerbeesworktirelesslytostorefood.(要点2)Unlikeworkerbees,therelaxingqueenbeetakesupthebottomstoreyofthefive-storeyhouse.(要点3)Sheevendesertsthedroneaftershefinishesusinghim.(要点4)Sameasworker13
bees,youngbeesneedtoworktocarefornewbornbees,buttheycanonlyleavetheirfuturestowhattheyeat.(要点5)【写作分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍蜜蜂家族生存习性、不同分工及蜂房布局。1.要点摘录1）Beesareverystrangecreatures.Theyhavetheirownwayoftellingeachotherthattheyhavefoundanewflower.2）Inautumntheworkerbeesgooutandcollectasmuchnectarandpollen(花粉)astheycancarry.Thentheyreturntomakehoneyandstoreitforthelongcoldwinter.3）Theyareusuallyfivestoreyshigh.Thequeenbeealwayshasthebottomstorey.4）Thequeenistheonlythatcanlayeggs.Shemateswithamalebeecalledadrone.5）Youngbeesarecallednursesbecausetheyhavetonursethenewbornbeeswhethertheylikeitornot.2.缜密构思将1、2、3、4、5段各概括为一个要点，共5个要点。3.遣词造句Beesareweirdanimalsandhaveastrangewaytocommunicatewitheachanother.Workerbeesworkveryhardtostorefood.Unlikeworkerbees,therelaxingqueenbeealwaystakesupthebottomstoreyofthefive-storeyhouse.Sheeventhrowsthedroneoutaftershefinishesusinghim.Youngbeesneedtoworktocarefornewbornbees,buttheycanonlyleavetheirfuturestowhattheyeat.【范文点评】[高分句型1]Unlikeworkerbees,therelaxingqueenbeetakesupthebottomstoreyofthefive-storeyhouse.运用介词短语作状语，对第三段内容进行概括，简练明白。13
[高分句型2]Sheevendesertsthedroneaftershefinishesusinghim.运用含有时间状语从句的复合句对第四段内容进行高度概括。[高分句型3]Sameasworkerbees,youngbeesneedtoworktocarefornewbornbees,buttheycanonlyleavetheirfuturestowhattheyeat.运用文章纽带衔接词but，以及名词性从句whattheyeat将第五段进行高度概括。55.阅读下面短文，根据内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Collegestudentsneedtextbookstohelpthemlearnandearnanacademicdegree.However,ontopoftuition,roomandboardandmeals,whyaretextbookssoexpensive?Textbookscovermanyareasofknowledge.Theyarepreparedspecificallywithalotofinformationthatincludemanyoriginalpictures,specialcharts,andspecificdata.Textbooksareextremelyusefultostudentsforlearningandprofitableforthecompaniesthatpublishthem.Whiletextbookscanbeafinancialburdenonthestudent,theycanbeprofitableforabookscouter(侦察员).Abookscouterisanopportunistwhobuyscheapusedbooksatthriftstores(二手店)orbooksales,andsellsthemformoremoney.Brandnewtextbooksarethemostdesiredofbooksforscouterssincetheytypicallycostover$100.Ofcourse,usedtextbooksdon’tcostasmuch.Butwhenthescoutergoestoathriftstoreandbooksalesatlibraries,textbookscancostaslittleasseveraldollars.So,buyingusedtextbooksthatarenewisoneofthemostprofitablebooksthatsellerscanbuy.Unfortunately,manycollegetextbookeditionschangeeveryyear,whicheliminates(消除)thestudent’schancetouselastyear’sedition.So,theywillhavetopaymoremoneyforbrandnewtextbooks.Thesadrealityisthatveryfewchangesaregenerallymadebetweeneditions.Bookscouterssearchfortextbooksaswellasothercategoriesofbooksavailableatlocalthriftstoresorbooksales.Textbooksthatareneworrelativelynewaremarkeddowntojustafewdollars.ThentheycanbesoldonAmazonforpotentiallyhighprofits.Amazonbuysnewtextbooksforalotmoremoneythanmostothertypesofbooks.Ifyouwanttotryscoutingtextbookstomakeaprofit,buytheirnewesteditionsortheonesaheadofthem.Buyitinthebestconditionpossible.Ifyou13
liveinatownorcitywherethereisauniversity,youhaveabetterchanceoffindinggoodtextbooks.Althoughtextbookscanbeexpensivefortheaveragestudent,heorshecouldpotentiallysellthemonAmazonforthesamepricethattheywerepurchased.Justremember,knowledgeispowerandcanbeprofitabletoo.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Textbookburdensstudentsfinanciallybutisprofitableforbookscouters.(要点1)Theybuyusedbutnewbooksandsellthemoutforextramoney.(要点2)However,becauseofthesubtleeditionschange,studentshavetobuynewbooks.(要点3)Therefore,it’swisetobuythenewestversionformoreprofits.(要点4)Andstudentscanselltheirbooksoutagainforthesamepricetheyboughtwhentheydon’tusethemanymore.(要点5)【写作分析】本文是一篇说明文，主要介绍了二手教科书回收者通过回收使用过但是依旧保存良好的的课本并出售来赚钱这一现象。1.要点摘录①Whiletextbookscanbeafinancialburdenonthestudent,theycanbeprofitableforabookscouter.②So,buyingusedtextbooksthatarenewisoneofthemostprofitablebooksthatsellerscanbuy.③Unfortunately,manycollegetextbookeditionschangeeveryyear,whichmakesstudentspaymoremoneyforbrandnewtextbooks.④Ifyouwanttotryscoutingtextbookstomakeaprofit,buytheirnewesteditionsortheonesaheadofthem.13
⑤Althoughtextbookscanbeexpensivefortheaveragestudent,heorshecouldpotentiallysellthemonAmazonforthesamepricethattheywerepurchased.2.缜密构思将各要点进行整合，使得逻辑连贯。3.遣词造句Textbookscanbeafinancialburdenonthestudentbutbeprofitableforabookscouter.Bookscoutersbuyusedbookswhicharenewandsellthemoutforprofits.However,textbookeditionshavesubtlechangeeveryyear,whichmakesstudentshavetobuybrandnewtextbooks.Therefore,ifyouwanttomakemoreprofit,buythenewestversion.Studentscanalsoselltheirbooksoutforthesamepricethattheywerepurchasedwhentheydon’tusethemanymore.【范文点评】[高分句型1]However,becauseofthesubtleeditionschange,studentshavetobuynewbooks.运用介词短语becauseof…作状语对第三段大部分内容进行了概括。[高分句型2]Andstudentscanselltheirbooksoutagainforthesamepricetheyboughtwhentheydon’tusethemanymore.用省略关系代词的定语从句和when引导的时间状语从句对最后一段进行了概括。13
