短文改错1(2014届黑龙江省哈三中高三上学期第三次验收)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Asisknown,thatitisinterestingtoteachchildrentoswimwhiletheyarestillbabies.MostlargetowninFloridaandCaliforniahavealreadyrunparticularlylessonsforbabies.TheideahasquicklyspreadtoEuropewhich,inseveralcountries,specialcourseswerenowofferedtochildrenwhoarefrom7to24monthsold.Thefirststepistohavechildgetridofthefearwithwater.Next,heisteachingtofloatinwater.Oncehecandothatnaturallyandcanswimwithfear,thechildcanmasterthetechniqueandpushhimforwardthroughwater.【答案】1.去掉that2.town改成towns3.particularly改成particular4.which改成where5.were改成are6.have与child之间加a7.withwater改成ofwater8.teaching改成taught9.with改成without10.him改成himself2（2014届浙江省温州中学高三上学期期中）\nDearMr.Black,I’mverythanktoyouforinvitingmetostaywithyouinthecomesummervacation.IhavebeendreamedofseeingyouagainsothatIcangethelpfromyouinmyEnglishlearning.AndI’mafraidIcannotgotoyourplaceinthissummer.I’vepromisedmygrandmother,shelivesinthecountry,tospendthissummerwithher.ShemissesmetoomuchthatIfinddifficulttorefuseherrequest.I’mbusypreparingformyexaminationsinpresent.Iplannedtovisityouinwinterifit’sconvenienttoyou.Bestwishes.Yourstruly,LiYing【答案】1.thank改为thankful2.come改为coming3.dreamed改为dreaming4.And改为But5.去掉in6.she改为who7.too改为so8.find后面加it9.in改为at10.planned改为plan3(2014届浙江省浙北名校联盟高三上学期期中联考)下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。\nOneyearago,Iwasingreattrouble.IworkedhardatEnglishanddevoteallmysparetimetopractiseit.ButIfailedtopassthemid-termexamination,whichmademegreatdisappointed.SoIaskedmygrandpaforadvicewhenIgottohome.HearingthatItoldhim,hesaid,“Tosomeextent,examinationresultsaresometimeunexpectedbyyourstudylevel.Youcan’tjudgeyourprogressbyoneexamination.”Heencouragedmyselftoworkhardforlongtimetocheckmyresults.Itookmygrandpa’sadvice.NowIrealizethattheprocessoflearningismuchmoreimportantandmyEnglishismorebetterthanbefore.Frommyexperience,Ifeelthatweshouldlistentoopinionfromoldpeople.【答案】1.devote→devoted2.practise→practicing3.great→greatly4.去掉to。5.that→what6.sometime→sometimes7.myself→me8.for和long之间加a。9.more→much10.opinion→opinions4（2013-2014学年内蒙古包头市一中高三入学考试）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Amanwasdrivingontheroad.Suddenlyhiscarsstopped.Hegotoutofthecartriedtofindoutthetrouble.“It’sthemotor.”Saidthevoicebehindhim.Hewassurprisingandturned\naround.Buthesawonlyanoldhorse.“Didyousaysomething?”heasked.“Isaidyoushouldcheckyoursmotor.”Thehorsereplied.Themanrushedtothenearesthouse.Withaveryexcitedvoice,hetoldthefarmerhadhappened.Thefarmer,therefore,showednosignofexcitement.Heexplained,“Hedidn’tknowanythingaboutcars.HecanonlyrepeatwhatIoftensay.【答案】1.cars改成car2.tried→trying3.the→a4.surprising→surprised5.something→anything6.yours→your7.With→In8.thefarmer∧had→what9.therefore→however10.didn’t→doesn’t5（2014届浙江省江山实验中学高三上学期第一次阶段性测试）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一个横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。Itisrealagoodchancetohavemetallofyouhere.WehavespentseveralpreciousweekendinlearningintheEnglishClub.Althoughwehavebeenmembersforashortperiodoftimes,wehavemadeagreatprogress.Thatisbecauseweareallverymuchactiveandtheactivitiesarenotonlyenjoyableandalsohelpful.Besides,theforeignteachershereworkhardandtryhisbesttomaketheactivitieslivelyandinterested.IamverypleasedtosaythatallofusgreatlyimprovedourspokenEnglishsofar.Iamlookingforwardtoseeallofyouagaininthenearfuture!\n【答案】1.real--really2.weekend--weekends3.times--time4.去掉a5.去掉much6.and--but7.his--their8.interested--interesting9.us∧have10.see--seeing6（2014届浙江省湖州市八校高三上学期第二次联考）下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出改正后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Ican’tswimsoIhaveastrongfearofwater.Lookbackatmychildhood,Ithinkthatthreereasonsmightexplainfear.Firstly,IamnotallowedtogonearthewaterwhenIwasachild,asmymotherhadanunreasonablefearofit.Therefore,Iwastaughttoseetothewaterassomethingdanger.Secondly,myeyesbecamebadwhenIwasfive.IfItookoffmyglassinthewater,Icouldn’tseesomething,andthisincreasedmyfear.What’sworse,forachildIoncesawaneighbordrowned.SincethenIhavebeenmorefrightening.【答案】1.so—because2.look—looking3.加the4.am—was\n5.去掉to6.danger--dangerous7.glass--glasses8.something---anything9.for--as10.frightening—frightened7（2014届云南省部分名校高三第一次联考（11月）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线（__），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Peopleoftenhavetroublesgettingusedtoanewculture.Theyareusuallycuriouswhentheyfirstarriveaforeigncountry.Therefore,iftheystayforalongtime,theymaystarttofeeldifferentstagesofcultureshock.Theycanfeelaloneorsadbecausehecan’tdealwiththelocalpeople.Howquickpeoplegetusedtoculturedifferencesmaybedependonthewaytheylearn.That’saproblemiftheycan’tspeakthelanguage.Onotherhand,somecanstudythesituationandmakegoodguessesabouttheculture.Whentheyfinallybegantounderstandsomeofthelanguageandmakesomenewfriends,theywillgraduallyenjoythemselvesandfeelsatisfying.【答案】1.troubles改为trouble。2.arrive后加in。3.Therefore改为However。4.alone改为lonely。5.he改为they。6.quick改为quickly。\n7.maybedependon中删去be。8.other前加the。9.began改为begin。10.satisfying改为satisfied。8（2014届黑龙江哈师大附中高三上学期期中）【答案】1.shall---should2.specially---special3.respondingto4.thebest5.appreciation6.willprefer---prefer7.which---what8.bringing9.means10.ourselves9（2014届河北省衡水中学高三上学期四调考试）英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。\n注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。DearJoe,Thanksforyoumail.I’mgladtoknowyouareinterestedinthe2014FloridaWinterCamp.ItwillbeheldfromJanuary27toFebruary13,duringthattimeyouwillgetwonderfulexperience.YouwillhavechancestoimproveyourspeakingEnglishinthecoursesproviding.Also,activitiesarrangedforyoutospendweekendstogetherwithyourhostfamily,soyoucanlearnAmericanEnglishinauthenticsituations.However,atriptothelocalDisneylandwillcertainlyaddupthefunofthecamp.JoininthecampandyouwillhavethebetterknowledgeofAmericancultureandlife.Youaresuretobenefitfromit.YourstrulyLiHua【答案】1.you→your2.that→which3.在“get”后面加a或experienc→experiences4.speaking→spoken5.providing→provided6.在“arranged”前面加are7.However→Besides/Also/Morever8.up→to9.去掉in10.the→a10（2014届河南省南阳市高三五校联谊期中考试）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处浯言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及—个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。\n修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。MyneighborJackieisalwaysconsiderationtoothers.Oneday,IwasgoingtodeliveraspeechataninstitutewhileIfoundmycarwouldn’tgetstarted.Irushedtothestreettohireataxi.JustatthattimeIcomeacrossJackie.Hewashurriedgoingtoattendhissickmotherinhospital.Furthermore,whenhelearnedaboutmyproblems,hedidn’thesitatetogivemealift.Iarrivedatthelecturehallintime,whentheaudiencehadbeenpresent.IowemygreatthankstomyneighbourJackie,heisapersonreadytohelptheothersatanytime.【答案】1.consideration改成considerate2.While改成when3.come改成came4.hurried改成hurriedly5.attend后面加to6.Furthermore改成however7.problems改成problem8.when改成where9.he改成who10.去掉the11（2014届黑龙江省齐齐哈尔实验中学高三上学期期中考试）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处浯言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及—个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。\nIwenthikingtoamountainwithmyfriendlastsummer.Itwasagoodtripinthebeginningandsomethingunexpectedhappenedhalfway.Oneofmyfriendssuddenlyfeltaterriblepaininhisstomachandhecouldn’tmoveanyfar.Nobodyknewhowtodealit.Onegirltriedtocallhermumoverhermobilephone,butthereisnosignalinthemountainarea.Luckywehadbroughtatentwithus.Weputitupandlethimtorestinit.Aftertakensomepills,hedranksomewaterandatesomefood.Afterawhile,Ifeltmuchbetterandwewalkedon.Weallenjoyedusonthetopofthemountain.【答案】1.第一句：friend改成friends;2.第二句：and改成but3.第三句：far改成farther4.第四句：deal后加with5.第五句：is改成was6.第六句：Lucky改成Luckily7.第七句：去掉rest前面的to8.第八句：taken改成taking9.第九句：I改成he10.第十句：us改成ourselves12（2014届浙江省衢州一中高三上学期期中考试）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处浯言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及—个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Nowadays,somestudentswouldnotliketoliveinadormitory.Instead,theyrentedhousesoutsidetheschool.Thereareadvantagesforthemall.Livinginadormitorycanincreasefriendshipandcooperationamongclassmates,butofcourseitissafer．Besides,adormitoryismorelike\nasociety,whereenablesstudentstolearntogetalongwiththeeachother，thuspreparingthesociallifelater.Asforrentinghousestolivelonely,it’sbetterforyourstudyasyoucanfeelfreelyinyourownroomwithoutbeinginterruptedbyothers.Asaresult，youcanhaveaplentyoftimetodevoteyourselftoreviewyourlessonswholeheartedly.Buttheremayappearafewsafetyproblemasyouliveoutsidetheschool.Anyhowasastudent,Ipreferlivinginadormitory.【答案】1.rented改为rent2.all改为both3.but改为and4.where改为which5.repairing后面加for6.lonely改为alone7.freely改为free8.去掉a9.review改为reviewing10.problem改为problems13（2014届浙江省湖州中学高三上学期期中考试）假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。Patienceisofgreatimportanceinourdailylife.OnceIwaitedabustocomeatastop.30minutespast,butnobuscame.Bothsadandannoyed,Idecidedtowalkonfeet.ButnosoonerhadIleftwhenthebusarrived.IthoughtifIhadwaitedforonemoreminute,Iwouldhavecaughtit.IfIchosetotakeanextbus,Iwouldhavetowaitforother30minutes.Onlythen\ndoIrealizemyproblem.Beingimpatientwillpossiblewastealltheeffortthatwehaveputitin.NowwheneverIamclosetolosemypatience,I’llthinkofthisexperience.【答案】1.加上for2.past→passed3.feet→foot4.when→than5.a→the6.other→another7.do→did8.possible→possibly9.去掉it10.lose→losing14（2014届辽宁省抚顺市六校联合体高三上学期期中考试）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文 中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Asstudents,allofuswillbefacedaproblemafterpassedthecollegeentranceexamination.Shouldwechooseagoodmajorandagooduniversityfirst?Herearesomedifferentideas.Somemoreprefertochooseamajorfirstsotheycanlearnthattheyareinterestedin.Inthiswaytheycanputtheirheartsintostudyandgottheirfavoritejobsinthefuture.Otherbelievethattheenvironmentisimportanttoone’sdevelopandthatgraduatesfromkeyuniversitiesaremorelikelytofindgoodjobs.AslongasI’mconcerned,thebestchoiceisagooduniversityifwecan’tobtainall.【答案】\n1.faced后面加上with2.passed改成passing3.and改成or4.Some后面的more去掉5.learn后面的that改成what6.got改成get7.Other改成Others8.develop改成development9.long改成far10.all改成both15（2014届吉林省长春外国语学校高三上学期期中考试）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文 中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。DearEditor,I’mtheonlydaughterofmyparents.SotheyworriedabouteverythingIdo.Forexample,whenIridemybike,myparentswon’tletmetoridebymyself.TheyareafraidImightfalloffmybikeandhurtmyself.Theyaretakinggreattroubletosupportabike,withmymotherevencarriedafirst-aidbox.I’mnotfreetorideandIoftensayangry,“Whynotletmeridealone?”Now,mostfamilyhaveonechild.Parentswanttodoeverythingforhischildren.Thisdoesnogoodonthem.Toomanylovefromparentsmaypreventchildrenfromindependent.Inmyopinion,parentsshouldlettheirchildrendothattheyshoulddoalone.【答案】1.worried—worry/加are\n2.去掉to3.the--a4.carried—carrying5.angry—angrily6.his--their7.family--families8.many--much9.on--to10.that--what
