优点英语专题21书面表达【2021年】1.（2021年新高考I卷）你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.读报的经历；2.喜爱的栏目；3.期望和祝福。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。YouthandMe________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】YouthandMeIthasbeen10yearssinceYouthwasfounded.Inmymemory,itisYouththataccompaniesmethroughmywholehighschool.Whenfeelingdepressed,Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofimaginativestories.Thesestoriescanrelievemystressandbroadenmyhorizon.Besides,IevensubmittedmyownfictiontoYouth.RefusedasIwas,Istillreceivedsomegreatencouragement,whichgivesmeconfidencetobeawriter.IdoexpectYouthcanpublishmoreclassicworksandhaveapromisingfuture【解析】本文是一篇应用文，向校刊Youth表达自己的经历，并送上自己的祝福。1.词汇积累建立：found→establish沮丧的：upset→depressed得到：receive→obtain赏析：enjoy→appreciate2.句式拓展同义句改写原句：Thesestoriescanrelievemystressandbroadenmyhorizon.拓展句：Notonlycanthesestoriesrelievemystress,butalsotheycanbroadenmyhorizon.【点睛】,优点英语[高分句型1]Whenfeelingdepressed,Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofimaginativestories.(运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]RefusedasIwas,Istillreceivedsomegreatencouragement,whichgivesmeconfidencetobeawriter.(运用了as引导的让步状语从句还运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)2.（2021年全国甲卷）假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：1.阐明写信事由；2.征求建议；3.表示感谢。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearChris,WordcamethatourschoolisgoingtoholdaclassmeetingwhosetopicisrelatedtoChinesetraditionalcustoms.BecausethisactivitywillbepresentedontheEnglishwebsite,Isincerelywantyoutooffermesomeadvice.Asfarasweknow,thereisahugeculturaldifferencebetweenChinaandthewesterncountries.Inordertogetmoreclicks,you’dbettertellmewhichChinesecultureyouwesternersprefer.What’smore,ifIwanttodecoratemywebsitewithsomeChineseelements,whatshouldIdo?KnowingyouareinterestedinChina,Idobelieveyoucanhelpmesolvethesepuzzles.Ifpossible,youcanreplytomeassoonaspossible.Iwilltakeyouradviceintoconsideration.Ireallyappreciateyourhelp.Yours,LiHua,优点英语3.（2021年全国乙卷）你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Besmartonlinelearners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：1.分析优势与不足；2.提出学习建议。注意：1.词数100左右;2.题目和首句已为你写好。【答案】onepossibleversion:BesmartonlinelearnersNetworklearninghasincreasinglybecomeanimportantmeansforpeopletoacquireknowledgeandsolveproblems.Butbeingsmartonlinelearnershasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Firstofall,assmartonlinelearners,wecanmakefulluseofthemostextensiveeducationalresourcestobroadenthehorizon.Besides,Wecantaketheinitiativeinourstudybyourselveswithouttimeandspacelimit.Ofcourse,thesedisadvantagesareasfollows.Facedwithallkindsofinformationontheinternet,Wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingitdifficultforusnottobeaffected.Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantagesandfindaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以Besmartonlinelearners为题写一篇发言稿参赛。1.词汇积累充分利用：makefulluseof→makethemostof扩宽,丰富：broaden→enrich各种各样：allkindsof→varietiesof不完美：imperfection→defect2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantagesandfindaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.,优点英语拓展句：Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantages，findingaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.【点睛】[高分句型1]Facedwithallkindsofinformationontheinternet,Wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.（非谓语作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingitdifficultforusnottobeaffected.（现在分词作状语）4．（2021年天津卷）假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等)；(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)；(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。注意：(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。ABeautifulPlaceinChinaMarch19,2021ByLiJin______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ABeautifulPlaceinChinaMarch19,2021ByLiJinSichuanProvinceislocatedinsouthwesternpartofChina.Itenjoysmanyworld-famousplacesofinterest,suchasJiuzhaigouandDujiangyanIrrigationproject.JiuzhaigouNationalParkisanaturereserveinthenorthofSichuanProvince.Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.What’smore,walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalslikegiantpandas,goldenmonkeys.Therearealsomanyspeciesofrareplantsprotectedhere.AnotherfamousscenicspotisDujiangyanIrrigationProject.Itdatesfromover2,000yearsago.However,itisstill,优点英语playinganimportantpartinirrigationtoday.I’msurethevisitorswillbeamazedbythebeautifulsceneryinJiazhaigouaswellastheconstructionDujiangyanIrrigationProject.【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求给英文网站《最美中华》栏目投稿，介绍介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。【解析】第一步：审题体裁：说明文时态：一般现在时结构：总分法第一段是文章的总起段，说明四川省有很多著名的景点；第二段介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程，第三部分说明你对该地方的印象和感受。要求：1.说明四川省有很多著名的景点①四川的地理位置：中国西南部②著名景点：九寨沟、都江堰灌溉工程2.介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程①九寨沟是自然保护区②给人印象最深的层层叠叠的瀑布和五颜六色的湖泊，有很多珍稀动植物③都江堰灌溉工程始于2000多年前，现在仍然起着灌溉的作用3.你对该地方的印象和感受：九寨沟的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造会让你惊叹第二步:列提纲（重点词组）belocatedin；world-famous；placesofinterest；anaturereserve；impressive；multi-levelwaterfalls；haveachancetodo…；rareanimals；scenicspot；datefrom；playanimportantpartin；beamazedby第三步：连词成句(1)SichuanProvinceislocatedinsouthwesternpartofChina.(2)Itenjoysmanyworld-famousplacesofinterest,suchasJiuzhaigouandDujiangyanIrrigationproject.(3)JiuzhaigouNationalParkisanaturereserveinthenorthofSichuanProvince.(4)Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.(5)Walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalssuchasgiantpandas,golden,优点英语monkeys.(6)Therearemanyspeciesofrareplantsprotectedhere.(7)AnotherfamousscenicspotisDujiangyanIrrigationProject.(8)Itdatesfromover2,000yearsago.(9)Itisstillplayinganimportantpartinirrigationtoday.(10)I’msurethevisitorswillbeamazedbyitsconstruction.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇1.表递进关系：whatismore2.表转折关系：however3.表示列举：suchas,like【点睛】[高分句型1]Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.（what引导的主语从句）[高分句型2]Walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalssuchasgiantpandas,goldenmonkeys.（现在分词作状语）5．（2021年1月浙江卷）假定你是李华，下周有新西兰学生访问你校，你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿，内容包括：1.表示欢迎；2.介绍活动安排；3.表达祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Distinguishedguests:Onbehalfofourschool,Iwouldliketoconveymysincerewelcomeforyourvisiting.Atfirst,itisofsignificancetofullyunderstandtheschool.Asscheduled,allofyouwillvisitthemuseum,whichcontainsthesplendidhistoryofourschool.Furthermore,ourclassesareworthyofbeingattended,because,优点英语youcanappreciatethedifferencesbetweenChineseandwesternteachingmethods.Afterthat,itisatcanteenthatyoucanhaveaspeciallunchwithourstudents.Asmentionedabove,Iextremelyexpectyourcoming.Mayyouhaveanunforgettableexperience.【分析】本文是一篇应用文，要求考生写一篇发言稿，向即将到校的新西兰学生致欢迎辞。【解析】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1．表示欢迎；2．介绍活动安排；3．表达祝愿。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）onbehalfof;wouldliketo;convey;sincerewelcome;beofsignificance;splendid;beworthyof;appreciate;teachingmethods;canteen;extremelyexpect;unforgettable第三步：连词成句1.Onbehalfofourschool,Iwouldliketoconveymysincerewelcomeforyourvisiting.2.Atfirst,itisofsignificancetofullyunderstandtheschool.3.Asscheduled,allofyouwillvisitthemuseum,whichcontainsthesplendidhistoryofourschool.4.Furthermore,ourclassesareworthyofbeingattended,becauseyoucanappreciatethedifferencesbetweenChineseandwesternteachingmethods.5.Afterthat,itisatcanteenthatyoucanhaveaspeciallunchwithourstudents.6.Asmentionedabove,Iextremelyexpectyourcoming.7.Mayyouhaveanunforgettableexperience.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）,优点英语1.表文章结构顺序：atfirst2.表并列补充关系：Furthermore连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】[高分句型1]Asscheduled,allofyouwillvisitthemuseum,whichcontainsthesplendidhistoryofourschool.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Afterthat,itisatcanteenthatyoucanhaveaspeciallunchwithourstudents.(运用了强调句型)6.（2021年6月浙江卷）昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传，内容包括：1.展览时间、地点；2.观展感受；3.推荐观展。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】lnordertoenrichstudents’after-schoollife,anexhibitionofstudents'traditionalChinesepaintingsisbeingheldbyourschool,whichsparksagrowinglovefortraditionalart.Theexhibitionisheldonthefirstflooroftheschoollitrary.Mostofthestudentsthinkhighlyofthisexhibition，whichprovidesaplatformforthemtoexplorethebeautyofChinaandexperiencethecharmofChineseart.Throughtheexhibition,notonlycanyouadmirewonderfulpictures,butalsoenableyouunderstandtheartoftraditionalChinesepaintingbetter.Theexhibitionwilllastfortwoweeks,everystudentiswelcometovisit.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇关于学校举办的学生国画作品展的宣传稿。1.词汇积累绘画：drawing→painting激发：spirit→spark欣赏：appreciate→admire,优点英语欢迎：greet→welcome2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Theexhibitionwilllastfortwoweeks,everystudentiswelcometovisit.合并句：Theexhibitionwilllastfortwoweeks,duringwhicheverystudentiswelcometovisit.【点睛】【高分句型1】anexhibitionofstudents'traditionalChinesepaintingsisbeingheldbyourschool,whichsparksagrowinglovefortraditionalart.本句是which引导的非限制性定语从句。【高分句型2】Mostofthestudentsthinkhighlyofthisexhibition，whichprovidesaplatformforthemtoexplorethebeautyofChinaandexperiencethecharmofChineseart.本句是which引导的非限制性定语从句。【高分句型3】Throughtheexhibition,notonlycanyouadmirewonderfulpictures,butalsoenableyouunderstandtheartoftraditionalChinesepaintingbetter.notonly...butalso连接的并列句。【2020年】1.（2020·新课标Ⅰ）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括:1.人物简介；2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意:1.词数100左右；2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ThepersonIrespect,优点英语Wehavealotofrespectablepeoplearoundus.Theymaybeourteachers,parentsoroneofourelders.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmost.Myfatherisateacherwholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuch.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewillalsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanyfunnythingswithmeabouthiswork.WhenIcomeacrosstheproblemsoflearninginmystudy,myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.Heachievedalotinhiswork,respectedbyhisstudents.So,inmymindmyfatheristhepersonIrespectmostandIlovehimdeeply.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。第一步：审题体裁：应用文。时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法。要求：1.人物简介：2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。第二步：列提纲（重点短语）Asforme；sparesometime；listentomepatiently;第三步：连词成句1.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmostly.2.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewillalsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanyfunnythingswithmeabouthiswork.3.Myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍人物；阐述原因2.表示并列补充关系：Asfor;and;but;So第五步：润色修改2.（2020·新课标Ⅱ）,优点英语上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括:1.农场情况；2.采摘过程；3.个人感受注意:1.词数100左右；2.题目已为你写好。题目:MyWeekend_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyWeekendLastweekend，wetookpartinapickingactivity.Wedrovefromtheschool,andthefarmwasabout2kilometersawayfromourschool.Whenwearrivedatthefarm,thereareallkindsofanimals,greenfreshvegetablesandfruittreesinthefarm.Weweredividedintotwogroups.Onegroupwasresponsibleforpickingfruits,theotherpackedupthefruits.Timeflyingquickly,theactivitywasover.Butitwasameaningfulday,whenwelearnalotformit.Throughthisactivity,weknowhowhardthefarmersareandhowpreciousthefoodis.Weshouldtreasurethefoodplantedbythefarmers.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生为英语角写一篇关于和同学一起参加采摘活动的短文。第一步：审题体裁：应用文。时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法。要求：1.农场情况；,优点英语2.采摘过程；3.个人感受第二步：列提纲（重点短语）tookpartin；wasresponsiblefor；ameaningfulday；shouldtreasure第三步：连词成句1.Lastweekend,wetookpartinapickingactivity.2.Onegroupwasresponsibleforpickingfruitstheotherpackedupthefruits.3.Butitwasameaningfulday,whenwelearnalotformit4.Weshouldtreasurethefoodplantedbythefarmers.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍农场；描述采摘过程；个人感受2.表示并列补充关系：and;But;Through第五步：润色修改3.（2020·新课标Ⅲ）假定你shi李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教MissEvans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:1.剧情简介；2.指导内容；3.商定时间地点。注意:1.词数100左右;2.结束语已为你写好。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMissEvans,Howiseverythinggoing!Iamwritinginsinceritytoaskyouafavorregardingaplayweadaptedaccordingtothetextbook.We’dliketocombineyourculturewithoursbyadaptingtheclassicnovelTheSteamboatforashortEnglish,优点英语play.Theplayissetonabigstormaftermidnight,ontheraftdowntherivernavigation,weseeasteamboatthatisgoingtosink.Wesavedascaredboy.However,theadaptionisquiteachallenge.HavingwrittentheEnglishscript,wedon’twantanythinginappropriatetospoiltheplay.Sowouldyoupleasesparesometimetoreviewthedraftscriptattachedtothisemailandmakenecessarychanges?Ifitisconvenient,mayIpayyouavisitatyourofficenextTuesdaytogiveyoumoredetails?Givenyourbusyschedule,I’dbeveryappreciativeifyouoffertogivesomeprofessionaladvice.Lookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestregards!Yourstruly,LiHua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教MissEvans对于《theSteamboat》改编短剧的支持。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。结构：总分总法第一段说明写这封邮件的目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）writeto；accordingto；combine；adaption；challenge；attachedto；convenient第三步：连词成句根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改4.（2020·江苏卷）请阅读下面有关中国题材纪录片(documentary)的对话，并按照要求用英语写一篇150个词左右的文章。SuHua:Hi,LiJiang!DidyouseetheBBCdocumentaryonCCTV9lastweek?LiJiang:YoumeanDuFu:China’sGreatestPoet?Yes,Idid.Fantastic!,优点英语SuHua:JustthinkanEnglishactorrecitesChinesepoems.LiJiang:Idon’treallyunderstandeverylineherecites,butIbelievehetrulylovesthepoemshimself.SuHua:Right.ItisreportedthatthefilmiswellreceivedoutsideChina.LiJiang:Yeah,It’smyfirsttimetohearChinesestoriestoldbyanEnglishspeaker.SuHua:Infact,documentariesaboutourcountryareplentifulbothathomeandabroad.Thesefilmscanhelpforeignfriendsbetterunderstandthisland-Chineseliterature,geographyhistory,food...LiJiang:Icouldn’tagreemore.【写作内容】1.用约30个词概括上述对话的主要内容；2.谈谈中国题材纪录片受到外国朋友欢迎的原因(至少两点)。【写作要求】1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】CCTV9broadcastDuFu:China’sGreatestPoet,adocumentaryproducedbyBBC.Thiswell-madefilmprovidesforeignaudienceswithafreshwayofbetterknowingChina’spastandpresent.DocumentariesaboutChina,producedeitherinChinaorinothercountries,arebecomingincreasinglypopularamongforeigners.Foronething,theoveralldevelopmentoverthepastdecadeshasbeensostrikingthattheyfeeleagertofamiliarizethemselveswithwhatisgoingoninChina.Foranother,Chinaenjoysalonghistoryandrichculture.IthasalwaysbeenanattractionforthosewhoarekeenonanythingthatisChinese.ThesedocumentariespresentasplendidpictureofChinainfrontoftheiraudiences-ithistory,landscape,art,food,oreventraditionalChinesemedicine.Becauseofthesefilms,someforeignershavebeguntothinkofcomingtoChina.Inthisway,theycanformatruepictureofChinathemselves.,优点英语【解析】这是一篇读写任务。第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。要求阅读中国题材纪录片的对话，写一篇150个词文章。包括两部分。(一)、用30词概括对话内容。(二)、谈谈中国题材纪录片受到外国朋友欢迎的原因。要求至少两点原因。第二步:布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为四段。第一段，概括对话内容。第二段和第三段，中国题材纪录片受到外国朋友欢迎的原因。第四段，总结因为电影吸引外国人想来到中国。第三步:确定关键词汇和短语:producedby,provide…with,either…or,bekeenon,present,becauseof,inthisway,theoveralldevelopment，sostrikingthat，feeleagertofamiliarizethemselveswith.第四步:确定较为高级的句子:非谓语动词结构adocumentaryproducedbyBBC；定语从句的运用:IthasalwaysbeenanattractionforthosewhoarekeenonanythingthatisChinese.第五步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:foronething,foranother.第六步:注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。5.（2020·山东卷）假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.参加人员:2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下:3.活动反响。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。ACross-CountryRunningRace________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ACross-CountryRunningRaceLastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycross-countryrunningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool.Thestudentsselectedfromeveryclasstookpartinthecompetition.Theroutemeasuredfivekilometers,fromourschoolgatetothefootofNanshanMountain.Everyrunnertriedtheirbesttofinishthetask,withtheir,优点英语classmatesalongthewaygivingthemnecessarilyhelpaswellasencouragement.Atlast,alltherunnersmanagedtoarrivethefinishline,receivingcheersfromallthedirections.Theactivitywashighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydiditprovidechanceforustoexercise,butalsomadeusmorecohesive.【解析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生就上周日学校举行的5公里越野赛活动写一篇新闻报道。体裁:应用文时态:根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主结构:总分总要求:1.参加人员2.跑步路线3.活动反响第二步:列提纲(重点词组)attend/witness/drawone’sattention/managetodosth./measure/speakhighlyof/providesth.forsb.第三步:连词成句1.LastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycross-countryrunningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool.2.Thestudentsselectedfromeveryclasstookpartinthecompetition.3.Theroutemeasuredfivekilometers,fromourschoolgatetothefootofNanshanMountain.4.Everyrunnertriedtheirbesttofinishthetask,withtheirclassmatesalongthewaygivingthemnecessaryhelpaswellasencouragement.5.Atlast,alltherunnersmanagedtoarrivethefinishline,receivingcheersfromallthedirections.6.Theactivityishighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydoesitprovidechanceforustoexercise,butalsomakesusmorecohesive.第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…状语从句连词:because/if/though/although…定语从句连词:which/that/when/where…第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语),优点英语6.（2020·天津卷）假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍关情况，内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事边录像)；(2)对活动的感受；(3)对自己未来的展望。注意:(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行方连贯；(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇:成人礼thecoming-ofageceremony新冠脑炎COVID-F9DearChris,I’msogladtohearfromyou._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiJin【答案】DearChris,Iamsogladtohearfromyou.Thecoming-of-ageceremonywasheldinourschoolonJune8ththismonth.Duringthecoming-of-ageceremony,theheadmastercongratulatedusonsteppingintotheadult,reviewingthegrowthperiodthatwehadexperienced.Afterthat,weallwatchedthevideoofalumnusfightingagainsttheepidemic.Throughtheactivity,whatIfeltisthatIamabletoshouldertheresponsibilityandmakeusstrongerandmoredetermined.Whenfacedwiththedifficultiesandfailures,Imustovercomethem.Inthefuture,Iwillbeagooddoctortohealthewoundedandrescuethedying,devotingmyselftomywork.Bestwishes！Yours,LiJin,优点英语【解析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你校于6月8号举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)2.对活动的感受。3.对自己未来的展望。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。第二步:布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段:成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)。第二段:对活动的感受；对自己未来的展望。第三段，表达期望。第三步:确定关键词汇和短语:congratulatesbonsth.,befacedwith,healthewoundedandrescuethedying,devoteoneselftodoingsth.；第四步:确定较为高级的句子:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语Duringthecoming-of-ageceremony,theheadmastercongratulatedusonsteppingintotheadult,reviewingthegrowthperiodthatwehadexperienced.that引导的表语从句Throughtheactivity,whatIfeltisthatIamabletoshouldertheresponsibilityandmakeusstrongerandmoredetermined.时间状语从句的省略句Whenfacedwiththedifficultiesandfailures,Imustovercomethem.第五步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:Afterthat,besides,however.第六步:注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。7.（2020·浙江卷）假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括:1.询问近况；2.分享班级最新消息；3.表达祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearPeter,Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavegonebackhomeonsickleave.Howareyoufeelingnow?Ihopemygoodnewsforyouwillsweepawaytheshadowofdisease.Lastmonth,anEnglishfestivalwasheldinourschool,andourclassperformedasongwhichyoutaughtusatthefestival.Assoonaswefinishedthesong,alltheaudiencegaveuswarmapplause.Ifonlyyouhadbeenthere.Weallmissyouverymuchandwishyouaquickandcompleterecovery.,优点英语Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向因病假回国休假的外教老师询问近况，分享消息和表达祝愿。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。结构：三段式结构。第一段询问近况；第二段告知班级消息；第三段表达祝愿。要求：1.询问近况（Howareyoufeelingnow?）2.告知班级消息（mygoodnews;performedasongwhichyoutaughtus）3.表达祝愿（wishyouaquickandcompleterecovery）第二步:列提纲（重点词组）besorrytodo;onsickleave;sweepaway;assoonas;givesb.warmapplause;recovery第三步：连词成句1.Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavegonebackhomeonsickleave.2.Ihopemygoodnewsforyouwillsweepawaytheshadowofdisease.3.Assoonaswefinishedthesong,alltheaudiencegaveuswarmapplause.4.Weallmissyouverymuchandwishyouaquickandcompleterecovery.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【2019年】1.【2019·全国卷I】假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.个人优势；3.能做的事情。注意:：,优点英语1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结束语已为你写好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。1.审题立意本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在式。2.谋篇布局书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。3.关键词根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇有：volunteer，aChinesePaintingExhibition，localcity，advantages，agoodcommandof，beneficialfor，familiaritywith，appreciate，takemyapplicationintoconsideration。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如Firstofall,Besides,tobeginwith，moreover，asforme，Lastbutnotleast，等，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。【范文】Dearsirormadam,IamaChinesestudentnamedLiHua,whoisstudyinginLondonduringthesummervacation.Knowingthat,优点英语thelocalartgallerywillholdanexhibitionofChinesepaintings,Iamwritingtoapplyforvolunteering.AsastudentwhohaslearnedChinesepaintingsince5yearsold,IamverypleasedtohaveanopportunitytointroduceChinesepaintingstoforeigners.Besides,myfluentspokenEnglishandrichknowledgeaboutChinesepaintingswillhelpvisitorsunderstandthemeaningbehindeachpaintingdeeply.IwillappreciateitifIcouldbegiventheopportunity.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua.2.【2019·全国卷II】假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括:1.比赛信息；2.赛前准备；3.表达期待。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearChris,I’mwritingtoletyouknowthatwewillhaveavolleyballmatchnextmonth.ThematchwilltakeplaceinourschoolgymontheafternoonofJuly4th.WewillplayagainsttheteamfromHongXingHighSchool.Inordertowinthematch,weshouldgetfullypreparedandpracticehard.Sofromtomorrow,weneedtotrainfortwohoursafterschooleveryday.Pleasecometotheschoolgymat6:30pmfromMondaytoFriday.You’reanexcellentplayer.Withyouontheteam,weareconfidentthatwecanwinthegame.Let’stryhardtogether!,优点英语Cheers,LiHua【解析】今年的书面表达沿袭近几年的体裁，仍旧是应用文。本次书面表达要求考生写一封邮件告知队友有关比赛的信息。本篇书面表达是一封告知信。首先要告知写信目的；然后简明扼要地告知排球比赛的时间、地点以及赛前的准备事项，注意事件信息的三要素：时间、地点、人物，要交代清楚；第三则要表达对队友的期待和鼓励。3.【2019·全国卷III】假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括:1.时间；2.活动安排；3.欢迎他表演节目。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】DearAllen,Howiseverythinggoing?OurschoolwillholdamusicfestivalnextSundaymorningintheschoolhall.AndI’mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinus.Theopeningceremonywillstartat9:00am,andtheschoolmasterwilldeliveraspeech.Thentherewillbevariousfantasticperformancesplayedbytalentedstudents.Youaredefinitelywelcometoshowuponstage,whichwilladdcolorandfuntoourfestival.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.,优点英语Bestwishes,LiHua【解析】今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的，之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息，最后欢迎他表演节目。第二，根据提纲，确定关键词语，如：Howiseverythinggoing?amusicfestival，intheschoolhall，Theopeningceremony等。第三，注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。4.【2019·北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括:1.交通出行；2.必备衣物。注意:1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。DearJim，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【范文】DearJim,I’mpleasedthatyou’recomingtotourinChina.IsuggestthatyoubeginfromBeijing,andI’llshowyouaround.Tianjinwillbeyournextstop.Afterthat,youcangotoShanghai,whereyoucanstayforaweek.Youcantakehigh-speedtrainstobothcities.Summerinthesecitiesishotandrainy,sotakesummerwearplusanumbrellawithyou.Lookingforwardtoyourarrival.,优点英语Yours,LiHua【写作指导】本文是一篇应用文，要求给朋友写回信。【解析】红星中学高三学生李华的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。要求给他回复邮件，内容包括:1.交通出行；2.必备衣物。本文时态应采用一般现在时和一般将来时，用第一人称和第二人称来写。文章可以分为三部分来写：首先表达欢迎Jim来中国；然后交代交通出行和必备衣物；最后盼望朋友的到来。注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。5.【2019·天津卷】假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；（3）希望从中有何收获。注意：（1）词数不少于100：（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。DearChris，I'mLiJim，astudentatChenguangHighSchool.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforyourtime.Yours，,优点英语LiJin【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.【范文】DearChris，I'mLiJin,astudentatChenguangHighSchool.Igotthenewsthatyourschoolwillsendteacherstomyschoolforaweek-longsummerexchange.Duringtheactivity，youwillgivealectureonWesternart.Youwanttoseekforadviceonwhattopicthelecturewillbeabout.Frommypersonalnote，musicismypriority.Iaminterestedinallkindsofmusic，amongwhichJazzismyfavorite.Iwanttoknowaboutthehistoryofjazz，andsomefamousjazzsingers.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucanaddsomesessionsofenjoyingjazz.Thankyouforyourtime.Yours，LiJin6.【2019·浙江卷】第一节应用文写作(满分15分)假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括:1.表示感谢；2.回顾Alex对你的帮助；3.临别祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,优点英语____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能选漏要点，跑题偏题.本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。【范文】DearChris,Iamsoregretfultoknowthatyouaregoingtoreturntoyourhomebeforelong.WegetalongwellduringyourstayinChinaandyouofferedmelotsofhelp.IwouldliketoexpressmygratitudetoyouforyourhelpwithmyEnglish.WhilestudyinginChina,youalwaysspentyourfreetimeinhelpingmepolishupmyoralEnglish.ItisyouwhosharedmewithrichknowledgeofEnglishandEnglishculture.NeverwillIforgetyouandyourkindness.Itismyhopethatyoucanremembermeasoftenaspossible.Yours,LiHua【2019·北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。注意：词数不少于60。提示词：西瓜watermelon,优点英语________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】LastweekItookpartinafarmworkprogrammeinthesuburbs.Attheclassmeeting,ourteachertoldusabouttheprogrammewiththetheme“Workingismostbeautiful”.Andhestressedtheimportanceofworkingwithourownhands.WhenIgothome,Ipackedupmyluggageforthetrip.Onthefarm,wehelpedpickwatermelons.Whileworking,Irealisedhowharditwastoworkinthefieldsunderahotsun.WhenIcamebackhome,Isharedmyexperienceswithmyparents.Andtheywereveryproudofme.【写作指导】本文属于图画作文，要求根据图画内容写一篇英文周记。【解析】假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”,优点英语为主题的社会实践活动。要求根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。图画作文内容要点比较清晰，其中包括：老师宣布活动内容和意义，我为活动准备，在农场的劳动过程，介绍活动感受。这样有利于学生写作时发挥与扩展。全文可分成三部分，开头段概括活动，中间段描述图画，结尾段总结收获和意义。文章用第一人称来写，使用一般过去时。【2018年】1.【2018·全国卷I】假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1．到达时间；2．合适的礼物；3．餐桌礼仪。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解析】本文是一篇电子邮件类应用文写作。餐桌礼仪也是考生比较熟悉的话题。成文时注意以下几点：一、内容要点要齐全1．到达时间；2．合适的礼物；3．餐桌礼仪。二、时态：主要用一般现在时和将来时；三、人称：第二、三人称。四、注意使用恰当的高级词汇、短语或句型，以提高作文的水平；五、适当使用一些连接词和插入语，使文章表达自然、流畅。1.浏览信息要点2.三个任务点，第一段内容：问候对方，马上呈现对方所涉及的话题，拜访中国家庭，做客时间的要求和忌讳!,优点英语第二段内容：做客拜访的合适礼物，可以适当延展，初次拜访，亲密朋友之间拜访，二次拜访，家庭情况适合的礼物，通用的礼物等。第三段：tablemanners,可以描述两三个通常的中国人的餐桌礼节和忌讳的地方，有鲜明特色之处，最后一句表达祝愿。3.时态，给对方的建议和说明，用一般现在时，描述风俗礼仪这是客观规律性的东西，用一般现在时。4.头脑风暴短语、句型结构，开始打草稿5.行文6.检查拼写和语法。【满分范文】DearTerry,Howareyoudoing?LearningthatyouareabouttopayavisittoaChinesefriendandconfusedabouttheChinesecustoms,Iamwritingtoputforwardsomeadvice.Firstly,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyouarrive5to10minutesearlier,whichiscommoninChinesetraditionalculture.Secondly,ifIwereyou,Iwouldbringsomeappropriategiftswithme,suchassouvenirsfrommyowncountry.Besides,tablemannersarealsowhatyoushouldpayattentionto.Forexample,youarenotsupposedtostickyourchopsticksintoyourfood.Instead,layingthemonyourdishisasmartchoice.Ifyouhaveanyotherproblems,pleasedon’thesitatetocontactme.YoursLiHua【素材积累】做客礼仪：1.预先约定一个时间以便对方事先作好安排。如果事先已经约定好了时间，就应遵守约定，准时到达，如需提早十分钟二十分钟之内可以接受，不要迟到，以免主人等候，也不要太早到，以免主人未作好准备。这是一个基本礼节问题。2.如果有专属地域文化特色的礼物是最好的。如果朋友家有长辈，带点烟酒和茶叶或一些老人家用的保健品等；如果朋友家有小孩，带点儿童玩具或买箱牛奶，然后加点烟酒或茶叶；不要送钟、梨、伞等这些东西，被认为不吉祥。3.主人会请客人入座上席，再请长辈入座客人旁。入座的时侯要从椅子的左边进入。在中餐结束时，筷子应整齐地放在靠碗右边的桌上，并应等客人们都放下筷子以后，主人示意离席后方可以离开，不能自己吃完了放下筷子就走，这样做是很没礼貌的表现。常用词语和句子,优点英语准时ontime/punctually餐桌礼仪tablemanners合适的、恰当的appropriate拜访payavisittoYouaresupposed/expected/requiredtodo…It’sagoodideato…It’sappropriate/suitabletodo…It’ssensible/reasonable/advisabletodo…It’sgoodmannerstodo…It’snoteworthythat…Ithinkitwouldbemorehelpfulifyoucoulddo…Itwouldbewiseofyouto…It’sdesirabletodo…It’sinappropriatetodo…It’simpolitetodo…It’sunwise/inadvisabletodo…Never（助动词/系动词/情态动词）主语+谓语动词…It’snotsuitableforyoutodo…insuchasituation.【备考启示】近年来高考写作的命题常用的思想就是高起点低落点。高起点题目很高，中国文化，中国故事，中国礼仪等等，但最终都把它们落在应用文的框架里，这就是低落点。写这样的作文，一定要注意不能写过于具体的内容，要找最重要的，最熟悉的写，不要面面俱到，中国餐桌礼仪内容太多，100单词无法写。找重点，以点带面。但选择重要内容本身就是一种能力。2.【2018·全国卷II】你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片GrowingTogether，内容包括：(1)短片内容：学校的发展；(2)放映时间、地点；(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。,优点英语注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解析】英语书面通知的时态应该以一般将来时为主，多使用被动语态、简单句。在通知中不应当过度的使用较复杂的词语和读起来拗口的句子。第二个注意点：层次一定要清晰，一个层次要表达一件事情，使人看起来一目了然。【满分范文】Boysandgirls,MayIhaveyourattention,please?Recently,anoutstandingmoviewillbeshowninourcampus.Welcometojoinusendenjoyit!Herearesomerelevantdetailsaboutit.Tobeginwith,thenameofthemovieis Growingtogether,whichisaboutthedevelopmentofourbelovedschool;asaresult,itwillbenotonlymeaningfulbutalsointeresting.Besides,itwillbeinthelibraryfrom2:00to4:00intheafternoononJune9th .What’smore,everyoneofyouwillbewelcometotakepartinit,enjoyingthemovie,havingaheateddiscussionafterwardsandgivingyourowncomments. Hopefully,youwouldmakeittoouractivity.Ihavetheconfidencethatyouwillhaveagreattime.TheStudentUnion3.【2018·全国卷III】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括：1.学校的体育场馆；2.主要的运动项目；3.你喜欢的项目。注意：1.词数100左右：,优点英语2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解析】本题作文为提纲式作文，形式依然是书信，即给英国朋友Peter介绍学校体育运动情况，属于学校生活话题。这一话题贴合学生生活的实际，学生并不陌生，有话可说。首先可以介绍学校的体育场馆，场馆的位置，大小，开放时间等等。然后简要介绍学校主要开设的体育项目有哪些，可挑选一到两个做详细介绍，如学生的活动时间，活动形式，以及此类活动的好处等。再次简要分析自己喜欢的体育项目是什么，并简单分析喜欢的原因，自己从中得到的益处等。文章可主要采用一般现在时态，第一人称的方式来写。【满分范文】DearPeter,Iamexceedinglydelightedtohearfromyou.Youaskedmeinyourlastletteraboutthephysicalexerciseinourschoolandthefollowinginformationmaygiveyouaroughsketch.Tobeginwith,afabulousnewstadiumhasbeenbuiltup,whichhasbecomethenewlandmarkinourschool.Moreover,withthestadiumsetup,awiderangeofsportseventsareabletobeheld,ofwhichping-pong,footballaswellasrunningcompetitionsenjoygreatpopularity.Asforme,I’mintoxicatedwithbasketballsinceithasbeengivingmestrengthtoconfrontthechallengesinmylife.Allinall,Isincerelyinviteyoutocometoourschoolandseeforyourself.Yours,LiHua4.（2018·浙江卷）第一节应用文写作假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：1.口语能力：2.相关经验；3.应聘目的。注意：,优点英语1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写应聘信。第一步：根据提示可知，学校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。要求写封应聘信，内容包括：1.口语能力：2.相关经验；3.应聘目的。第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组）。第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。【范文】DearSirorMadam,MynameisLiHua.AndIamwritingtoapplyforbeingavolunteerofourschoolEnglishassociation.IhaveagoodcommandofEnglishandhavebeentotheUSAtwice.SoIcancommunicatewellwithnativespeakersofEnglish.What’smore,Iamkindandfriendlytootherpeople.SoIcaneasilygetalongwithforeignstudents.I’mparticularlyinterestedinthisjobbecauseIwanttofurtherimprovemyoralEnglishcapabilitiesandinterpersonalcommunicationskills.HopefullyIcanreceiveyouracceptance.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua,优点英语5.（2018·天津卷）假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。（1）比赛的时间、地点；（2）邀请他的原因；（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：世界青少年机器人技能竞赛theWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionDearChris,Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiJin【解析】本篇书面要求写一封邀请信。写作的时候要注意以下几点：一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：1.代表兴趣小组发出邀请；2.介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；3.说明邀请他的原因，包括Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖；4.告诉他训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。二、写作时注意准确运用时态，对于本文来说，以一般将来时为主，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【满分范文】,优点英语DearChris,Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.TheWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionwillbeheldinTianjinattheendofJuly.HearingthatyouoncetookpartinaRoboticsSkillsCompetitionandwonanaward,I,onbehalfoftheRoboticsHobbyGroup,intendtoinviteyoutojoinourteaminthecomingcompetition.Iamsurethatyourinvolvementwillnotonlyhelpusinwinningtheawardbutalsoenhancethefriendshipbetweenourtwoschools. WiththisemailIalsosendyouourtrainingplan,aboutwhichIwishtogetyouradvicebecauseyouaremoreexperiencedthanus.Wesincerelyhopethatwecanparticipateinthecompetitionasteampartners.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiJin6.（2018·北京卷）第一节假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：(1)表示欢迎；(2)推荐他上哪所大学；(3)建议他做哪些准备工作。注意：(1).词数不少于50；(2).开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJim,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【解析】,优点英语本文为提纲式作文，文章要求写推荐信，为英国朋友介绍北京的大学。首先可以介绍一下写作背景（Jim对中国文化感兴趣，要来中国学习），表达欢迎。然后推荐一所大学，并简要介绍推荐的原因（如大学的特色，可以学到什么等）。再次简单介绍应该做哪方面的准备，如可以提前学习汉语，读点有关中国传统文化的书，了解中国的习俗，让自己更好地适应中国的生活。文章可采用一般现在时，人称可以使用第二人称。【满分范文】DearJim,I’msogladtohearyourfutureeducationplaninBeijinginyourlastletter.FirstIwouldliketoexpressmywarmestwelcometoyouandIamsureyouwillhavethemostunforgettableexperienceduringyourcollegeinBeijing.LearningyourkeeninterestinChineseculture,IsuggestyouapplyforPekingUniversity,oneofthebestuniversitiesinChina.ItsChineseLiteraturemajorisperfectforyouwhereyoucanbecompletelysoakedinChineseprofoundhistoryandrichculture.Asforpreparation,somereadinginadvanceinneededlikeTheStoryoftheStonewhilesomeonlinecoursesofspokenChinesecanbehelpfulforyoutoadaptintotheChineselanguageenvironment.Isincerelyhopeyourdreamwillcometrueandit’smypleasuretoshowyouaroundinBeijingwhenthatdaycomes.Ifyouhavefurtherquestions,pleasefeelfreetoletmeknow.Yours,LiHua【2017年】1.【2017·全国卷I】假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：（1）时间和地点；（2）内容：学习唐诗；（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,优点英语___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解析】今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知外国朋友汉语课的时间和内容 (属学校生活、语言学习范畴)。与往年相比最大的变化是涉及我国优秀的传统文化，这符合2017年英语高考大纲提出的：在英语学习上重视和突出中华传统价值观，重视语言应用，回归了英语作为语言功能的本质。因此，掌握一些传统文化方面的英语知识很有必要。文体：书信体，一种常见的告知信，相对简单。人物关系：朋友问候语及开头语： Howareyou?/Howiseverythinggoing? /Howarethingswithyou?/Iamwritingtoyouabout…./Iamwritingtotellyousomethingabout….写信目的：告知上课时间，内容及课前准备结束语 如：Lookingforwardtoseeingyouagain./Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply./Hopetohearfromyousoon/Bestwishes.个人发挥，适当增加相关细节语言分析话题词激活学校生活：takepartin,attend,activity,knowledge语言学习：acquire,advisessb.todosth.,在平时的学习中要注意话题词的积累。运用高级句式：如：since引导的状语从句，which 引导的非限制性定语从句。【满分范文】DearLeslie，IamveryhappythatyouhavemadegreatprogressinlearningChineseandyouareinterestedinChineseculture.NowI'lltellyouthenextlearningprogramme.OnJuly20,wearegoingtolearnpoemsoftheTangDynastywhichyouareinterestedinintheLectureHall.Asaforeignlearner,itisdifficultforyoutounderstandthetruemeaningandthecultureofthem.Therefore,beforeclass,youcanreadsomebooksrelatedtothehistoryoftheTangDynastytobetterappreciatethepoems.BesuretogototheLectureHallontime.Youcannotmissthewonderfulpoems.Bestwishes.Yours，LiHua,优点英语【解析】随着时代的发展，电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎，所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：1.要点要齐全：（1）时间和地点；（2）内容：学习唐诗；（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。2.时态：以一般现在时为主；3.人称：第二人称为主；4.注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5.适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。2.【2017·全国卷II】假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.展览时间、地点；2.展览内容。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解析】题目要求写封邮件邀请外教参观中国剪纸艺术展。写作情境设置真实，任务要求符合学生能力水平，自然地融入了我国优秀传统文化(剪纸papercutting)的内容，能够引导学生在使用外语了解世界的同时，注重传承发扬中华民族优秀文明成果，运用中国元素讲中国故事，增强文化自信。该写作贴近学生生活，学生有话可说。考生成文时应注意：1.结构采用三段成文：第一段自我介绍并引出话题；第二段具体交代活动时间、地点；第三段较为详细地交代展览内容。2.时态：以一般将来时和一般现在时为主。3.人称：第一人称。4.注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5.适当使用一些高级词汇和句型以提高作文档次。【满分范文】DearHenry，I'mLiHua,oneofyourstudentsinyourculturalclass.Iknowyou'reinterestedinoneofChinesetraditionalartforms—papercutting.SoIinviteyoutoattendanexhibitionofit.,优点英语It'llbeheldfromJune10toJuly10thisyearandtheopeningtimeisfrom9：00amto7：00pmfromMondaytoSaturdayandtheplaceoftheexhibitionisattheCityGallery,whichislocatedat118,JianGuoRoad,HaiDianDistrict.ShallwegotheretogetherthisFridayafternoon?Iwillmeetyouat2：00pmattheteachingbuildinggateifyoulike.YouknowweChinesehavealotoftraditionalartforms,ofwhichpapercuttingisoneofthemostpopular.Intheexhibition,youwillenjoymanyspecialkindsofpapercuttings.Maybeyoucanlearnoneortwoskillsofthecutting.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Regards,LiHua3.【2017·全国卷III】假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：1.球队活动；2.报名方式及截止日期。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解析】该篇书面表达是书信类文体，但是与体育有关，要求考生按照所给提示进行写作，可增加细节以使行文连贯。在写作本文时考生需注意以下几点：1.确定文章的结构：书信的开头、正文和结尾。2.确定文章的要点：写信的目的；表示感谢。3.确定文章的布局。4.确定文章的时态，在本文中根据要求判断应该用一般现在时和一般将来时。5.正确使用较高级词汇和多种句式，如定语从句，状语从句，主语从句等。6.准确使用一些恰当的连接成分以使语意更连贯。【满分范文】DearEric,,优点英语IamLiHua.Iamwritingtoinviteyoutojointhetabletennisteaminourschool.Itisknownthatwecanbenefitalotfromplayingtabletennis.Itcanpreventusfromgettingshortsightedanditcankeepusphysicallyhealthy.Astotheactivities,weplantoinviteexperiencedplayerstogivingtrainingtouseveryFridayafternoon.Atthesametime,wewilldividethemembersintoseveralgroupstopracticeat5:00pmafterschool.Ifyouareinterested,signuponourschoolwebsitebeforeAugust10.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua4.（2017·浙江卷）第一节应用文写作假定你是李华，计划组织一次郊游，请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：1.参加者；2.时间、地点；3.活动：登山、野餐等。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解析】本试题是一篇半开放的作文，写作文体是电子邮件，写一封邀请信给Chris。要点提示中只列出了大概内容，包括3点(参加者，时间、地点和活动)，具体细节需要考生自己发挥。邀请信一般分为以下几部分：首先，要列出写信的目的，并发出诚挚邀请；其次，要就邀请的具体内容给予明确的说明，什么时间，什么地点，做什么事情等；最后，要再次表示邀请，希望对方参加。【一句多译】①Myintentiontowritethisletteristotellyouanoutgoingthatwewillmakethesedays.②OurdestinationisSimingMountain,wherewewillhaveaclimbtogetherwiththelocalpeoplewewillholdapicnicparty.,优点英语【满分范文】DearChris,Howareyounow?①Thepurposeofmywritingistotellyouthattherewillbeanoutgoingforusthesedays.Iwouldbehonoredtohaveyoutherewithus,enjoyingthecolorfuldays.TheoccasionwillstartonthenextSundaymorning.②WewillgotoSimingMountain,wherewecanhaveaclimb.What’smore,wecanalsoholdapicnicpartywiththelocalpeople.Ireallyhopeyoucanmakeit.AndIdolookforwardtoreceivingyourreplyletterassoonaspossible.5.（2017·天津卷）假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs.Green一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。（1）简要介绍自己的学习和生活；（2）告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备（如深入了解天津等）；（3）希望她有机会重访天津。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：第十三届全运会the13thNationalGamesDearMrs.Green,I’mgladtohearfromyou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiJin【解析】,优点英语这是一封邮件，要点都已经给出，关键在于要点要全面，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，同时要注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文时态主要是一般现在时和现在完成时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。【满分范文】DearMrs.Green, I’msogladtohearfromyou. WhileithasbeenmorethanayearsinceyoutaughtusEnglish,I’vemissedyoualot,thinkingaboutthosehappymomentswhenwestayedwithyou.Actually,I’vebeendoingprettywellinmystudiesaswellasinmylife.Apartfrommyacademicstudies,IalwaysmanagetofindtimeforwhatI’minterestedin.Forexample,Ihavesuccessfullygotadmittedasavolunteerforthe13thNationalGames,whichisscheduledtobeheldattheendofthisAugust.Togetadmitted,Ihavemadegoodpreparationsbeforehand,tryingtoknowasmuchasIcouldaboutmycity,Tianjin.Bytheway,it’smysincerehopethatyoucansparesometimeforavisittoTianjinagain,whichhaschangedgreatlysinceyouleft.PleaseletmeknowifyoucometoTianjin.Yours,LiJin6.（2017·北京卷）第一节（15分）你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.你建议的线路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJim,,优点英语____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【解析】本文为提纲类作文。首先，学生要仔细阅读提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。 其次，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语， 按照一定逻辑关系来写。 最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态,语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文是一封信，按照内容要求可以确定文章的框架结构，三段式，其中第一段写你所建议的路线，第二部分是本文的主体，要阐述你所建议的路线的原因，好让他们有很好的掌握，最后一段，提出你的祝愿。写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。【答案】DearJim,I’mhappytoreceiveyourletterandknowyou’recomingtoChina.OfthetwotripstotheYangtzeRiverandMountTai,botharehighlyrecommended.Personally,IpreferthetouralongtheYangtze,thelongestriverandoneofthemotherriversofChinesecivilization.YoucanlearnalotaboutthehistoryofChinaandChinesepeople.Moreover,thesceneryalongtheriverisamazing,withmanywell-knownsightseeingspots.That’swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzewillbeabetterchoice.Hopeyou’llhaveagoodtimeinChina.Yours,LiHua【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。表语从句的使用：That’swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzewillbeabetterchoice.高级词汇的使用：highlyrecommended。连接词的合理使用：Personally，moreover。【2017·江苏卷】请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入(boxofficeincome)的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。,优点英语SaturdayAfternoon.InaShoppingCentre.LiJiang：Hi，SuHua.Whichmovieshallwesee?SuHua：Whatever.We'vegotsomanychoices,KungFuYoga,JourneytotheWest…Eachsoundsgreat!LiJiang：Yeah！Andsomemoviestarsarefantastic.SuHua:Andthehightech！…LiJiang：Perfect！Let'sgetsomefoodfirst.Weonlyhave20minutesleft.SuHua：Nohurry.Thecinemaisonthesamefloor.OneDayin2016.AtHome.Son：Mum，shallwegoandseeafilmtonight?Mother：Whybother?Wecanstayathomeandwatchfilmsonline.It'sconvenientwithournewandfasternetwork.Son：Butitfeelsgoodinacinema.Mother：Andtheprice…Wehavetopay50yuanaticket.Son：Only10yuanmorethanlastyear.Mother：Butstillwecannotgetthemoney'sworth.Somefilmsarejustboring…【写作内容】1．用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；2．我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅供参考，原因不少于两点)；3．谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。【写作要求】1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3．不必写标题。【评分标准】,优点英语内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解析】本题考查任务型读写。此类作文对考生的能力要求极高。首先考生要以30词左右概述短文内容。接下来要分析票房收入变化的原因并给出自己的看法，并谈谈自己对票房走向的看法。作文以第三人称和一般现在时为主。要点：1.概述：中国电影票房在2012—2016年间呈现不断增长的趋势，但是2016年的增长相比于前几年很缓慢。2.分析原因：票房增长与人们生活水平的不断提高息息相关，人们有了多余的钱，才可能消费、娱乐；另一方面，电影的制作技术日臻成熟，许多优质的电影不断上映；再者，互联网的普及无疑起到了很大的宣传作用。3.看法和理由：票房增速将会小幅上涨或有所回落。只要给出恰当的理由，对票房看涨或是看落皆可。写30词的概述时，语言要简练、不拖沓。遣词造句要符合英语的表达习惯，尽量用上定语从句、状语从句和非谓语动词与倒装句等语法和句型。同时注意语句的连贯性。【参考范文】TheboxofficeincomeofChinesemovieswitnessedaconstantincreasefromabout17billionyuanin2012toover40billionin2015.However,thatincreasesloweddownin2016.Thereasonsbehindthisarevarious.Thefasteconomicdevelopmentbefore2016wasprobablythemostpowerfulenginedrivingtheconstantgrowthintheboxofficeincome.Theapplicationofnewtechnologiesandthewideappealofmoviestarscouldalsoaccountfortheincrease.However,Chinasawadeclineinitseconomicgrowthratelastyear.AndtheInternetincreasedoptionsformovielovers.Consequently,someviewersbegantoturnawayfromcinemas,leadingtoaslowergrowth.China'seconomyisexpectedtogrowatamediumspeedinthecomingyears,soanincreaseispossibleintheinvestmentinthemovieindustryandthenumberofqualitymovies.Therefore,itsboxofficeincomewillprobablyenjoyaslightincrease.,优点英语【2017·北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。注意：词数不少于60。提示词：视频video________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解析】本文属于看图说话类作文。首先要读懂图片隐含的信息，本文有四幅图，而且要求是按先后顺序，所以一定要注意顺序的问题；其次，根据图片隐含的信息把每幅图的主题找到，然后分别写出每幅图的主题句，也就是说把文章主体部分的大纲要列好，最后结合自己的看法，写出相应的总结和感受。写作的过程中一定要注意先后顺序，巧用连接词，巧妙衔接，合理安排。1.Inordertoleavesomeimpressivememoriesforallofusbeforegraduation,ourclassmadeaspecialvideotoexpressourappreciationto…2.carriedoutadiscussion/variousideaswereputforward3.shotsomewonderfulvideosintheschool/interviewedourteachers…4.Thosewhoaretalentedincomputercontributedtothemakingofthevideo.5.editedthevideo/addedourloveto…,优点英语6.Theshowreceivedawarmwelcomeamongourfellowschoolmates.7.Memoriesofthepastfloodedintoourminds/firmbondtoourschool…内容要点：1.讨论分工 2.收集素材 3.编辑制作 4.放映视频【参考范文】Onepossibleversion：Graduationfinallycame.MyclassmatesandIdecidedtodosomething.Afteraheateddiscussion,weagreedonmakingavideotorecordourexperiencesatschool.Materialcollectingtookusawholeweek,duringwhichweinterviewedourteachersandtookpicturesofeveryaspectofschoollife.Theeditingpartafterthatwastough.Wedebatedoverwhattoputintothevideo.Somecompromiseswereunavoidable,butthevideoturnedoutperfect.Severaldayslater,whenthevideowasplayedonthegraduationceremony,itwaswellreceived.Thestudentsandteacherssharedagreattime.Thatsurelygaveusagreatsenseofachievement.
