题型训练写作（一）第一节短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Abouthowtokeephealthy,I’dliketooffermyadvices.Asweknow,weteenagersaregoingthrougharapidgrowthwhichneedstobesupportbyahealthyandbalanceddiet.Thus,weneedavarietyoffoodbutcutoutthefoodrichinsugarorfat.However,weshouldtakephysicalexerciseregular.Forexample,wecanplaybasketballortakewalkafterschool.What’smore,haveenoughsleepisofgreatimportance.Therefore,youshouldhaveatleasteighthoursofsleepeverydayandnotstayeduptoolate.Onlyinthiswaythatcanwekeepfit.第二节书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，最近负责校报英文版。请你用英文写封邮件给你校的外教Jerry，邀请他加入校报编辑部。内容包括：1.邀请缘由；2.工作职责；3.表达期望。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考答案第一节\n第二节DearJerry,MynameisLihua,theEnglisheditorofourschoolnewspaper.Tobehonest,Iamwritingthislettertoinviteyoutojoinus.Believeitornot,ournewspaper,especiallytheEnglishedition,isquitepopularwithstudents.Notonlydoesitopenawindowforstudentstoknowabouttheoutsideworld,butalsoitisagoodsourceforlearningEnglish.Thus,wewanttofindanexpertlikeyoutoensurethequality.Yourdutyistochecktheaccuracyofthelanguage.Iholdthefirmbeliefthatwecangetimprovedwithyourparticipation.Again,wewillbehonoredifyoucanmakeit.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua
