题型训练写作（八）第一节短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线（\)划掉。修改:在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Itwasmysister’s6thbirthday.Moreover,thewholefamilywenttoacafeforthebirthdaytreat.Shewalkedin,rockedherbirthdaycrownwithhernameonit,thatshemadeatschool.Agroupofteenagerssawherandbeginsinging"HappyBirthday”.Herfacejustwaslitupwithexcitement.Thenothertablesjoined.Soonalmosteveryonetherewassinging“HappyBirthday”tomygirl.Shescreamedjoyfulandgavehighfives.ItwasanamazingexperienceforherandIwasblewawaybytheLeenagerswhosawalittlegirlandde cidedtomakemyday!第二节书面表达假定你是李华。参观名校如今成为了旅游的新热点。现在某英文报社就“Shoulduniversitycampu^sesbeopentothepublic?”为主题向你征稿。请你写一篇100词左右的文章，简要描述其现状并谈谈你的看法.注意:1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.标题已经给出，不计入总数。Shoulduniversitycampusesbeopentothepublic?\n参考答案第一节：Itwasmysister’s6thbirthday.Moreover,thewholefamilywenttoacafeforthebirthdaytreat.SheThus/Thereforeawalkedin,rockedherbirthdaycrownwithhernameonit,thatshemadeatschool.Agroupofteenagerssawherrockingwhichandbeginsinging“HappyBirthday”.Herfacejustwaslitupwithexcitement.Thenothertablesjoined∧.Soonbegan删除inalmosteveryonetherewassinging“HappyBirthday”tomygirl.Shescreamedjoyfulandgavehighfives.ItwasjoyfullyanamazingexperienceforherandIwasblewawaybytheteenagerswhosawalittlegirlanddecidedtomakemyblownherday!第二节：PossibleversionShoulduniversitycampusesbeopentothepublic?\nOnholidays,moreandmorevisitors,includingmiddleschoolstudents,swarmintosomewell-knownuniversitieslikeTsinghuaUniversityandPekingUniversity.Thistrendhassparkedanationwidedebateonwhetheruniversitycampusesshouldbeaccessibletonon-students.Isitagoodorbadthing?Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Somepeoplearguethatitcanenablethestudentstogetmoreinformationabouttheuniversityandtheycanlaterpreparethemselveswiththechancetogetintotheuniversity.However,othersholdanegativeview.Intheiropinion,thepublictourismwillhaveanegativeeffectontheuniversitiesbecauseitwillnotonlydoharmtotheenvironmentbutalsototheintellectualatmosphere.Asforme,universitiesaremainlyforacademicresearch.Withtheincreasingtourismonthecampus,itwillruinthespiritualatmosphereinthislearningfield.
