2021高考英语读后续写讲练结合（八）Partone小试身手读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Jamieranoutofhishousealongthestreettowardhisbuilding.Theabandonedbuildingstherewerehisplayground. Jamiemovedawoodenboardfromthedoortooneofthebuildings.Hecrawledinside.Therewasbrokenglassonthefloor.Jamiewentdownthestairstothebasement.Itwasevendarkerdownthere,anddamp.Thebuildingswereneartheriver.Sometimeswaterfloodedin.He'dneverfoundanythingaliveuntilhefoundSharon. “Sharon,I’mhere!”Jamiecalled.“Ibroughtacandle,too.I'mgoingtolightitsoIcanseeyoubetter." Jamietookoutamatchandlitthecandle.Asoftcircleoflightlitupthedarkness. “ComeoverherewhereIcanseeyou,”Jamiesaid.“Pleasedon’tbeafraid.I’mnotafraid.Itoldyouthat.” Thecreatureslithered(滑行)intothelight.ItwasaboutJamie’ssize.Itsheadandbodywerecoveredwithdarkgreenscales(鱗片).Inthelightofthecandle,thescalesshonelikediamonds.Thecreature’seyesglowedred,suddenly,likehotcoals.Itsnostrils(鼻孔)flared,givingoffheat.Jamiestared.Hethoughthehadneverseenanythingsobeautiful.That’swhyhe’ddecidedtocallthecreatureSharon.Hewantedtogiveabeautifulnametohisnewpet. “Gee,Sharon,”hesaid,“Iwishyoucouldtalk.Idon’tknowifyouunderstandmeornot.AndI,dreallylikeyoutotellmehowyougothere. Thecreaturedidn’tanswer.ItjustlookedatJamie.Itsmouthopenedslightlyandsomethingwhitegleamed.Jamiethoughtitwassmiling. “Well,”saidJamie,"Ihopeyou’rehungry.Ibroughtyouachickensandwich.”\n Thecreaturelookeddownatthesandwich,thinkingaboutsomethingelse,butmadenomovetoeatit. “I'lljustleavethefoodhereforyou,"Jamiesighed.“IwishIcouldstay.ButIhavetogo.Momisonmycaserightnow.I’dhelpher.I’llcomebacktomorrowafterschool.”注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Jamieturnedtogo.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2: WhenJamiegothome,hismotherlookedangry.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Parttwo知识及技巧分享\n1月亮出现了片刻，她的月轮略带点血红色，半遮着脸：她似乎向我投去一个迷茫、沉闷的目光，然后立刻又把自己埋在了深深的云朵里。2然后，月亮在其其优雅的白色光芒的映衬下出现，照亮了无云的天空；最后，它慢慢地移动，在河面上投下一大片光，像无数星星一样闪闪发光。3曾经泛着红紫色的天空转变成了乌黑得一大片，黑夜吞没了整个城镇，黑暗的海洋中出现了明亮的星星。4.逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。5.被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。6.夜晚带来了一片无情的黑暗，包裹着他们的眼睛和嘴巴，把他们浸没在一片没有星星的天空下。空气变浓了，温度下降了，没有一个地方有令人欣慰的声音。\n亮点词汇unrelenting持续的;不缓和的;势头不减的;不留情的wrapped包，裹;用…包裹;用…缠绕;wrap的过去分词和过去式burying埋葬;安葬;丧失;把掩藏在地下;埋藏;bury的现在分词thickened变厚，变浓，变稠;thicken的过去分词和过去式nowhere无处;哪里都不参考答案：1Themoonappearedmomentarily,herdiskwasblood-redandhalf-overcast：sheseemedtothrowmeabewildered,drearyglance,andburiedherselfagaininstantlyinthedeepdriftofcloud.2Thenthemoonappearedinallitselegantwhiteness,lighteningupthecloudlesssky;finally,movingmoreslowly,itcastonthesurfaceoftheriveralargeparchoflightwhichglitteredlikeaninfinityofstars.3Theoncereddishandpurpleskytransformedintoavastexpanseofjet-blackthatengulfedthetown.Acanopyofluminousstarsmaterializedamongsttheoceanofblackness.4.Thelingeringsunlightwasobliteratedbytherapidlyfallingnight，resemblingapitch-blackcurtaindrapedoverthesky.5.Themoonundersiegebystarsseemedtolightenthenightbringingforthstarsthatshoneandhungintheblackness.Theneverendingblacknessconsumedeverything6.Thenightbroughtanunrelentingdarknessthatwrappedtheireyesandmouths,buryingthembeneathastarlesssky.Theairhadthickened;thetemperaturedroppedandnowherewasthereacomfortingsound.技法讲解：融情于景——如何在环境中融入人物的内心状态不难发现，1所表达的气氛沉闷萧瑟，可以推测出主人公内心的烦躁、不安或是迷茫；2所表达的气氛静谧安详，可以推测出主人公内心的喜悦、宁静或是欣慰，同样是写夜晚的月亮，却传达出不同的情感，这就是环境描写之融情于景的威力，那么，这是如何做到的呢？\n我们并未直接写1中主人公内心的沉闷、烦躁、无所适从，而是说（Themoon）throwmeabewildered,drearyglance（月亮向我投来一个迷茫、沉闷的目光），表面上写月亮迷茫、疲惫，实际上是在说主人公内心沉闷迷茫或是困乏疲惫，andburiedherselfagaininstantlyinthedeepdriftofcloud.（然后立刻又把自己埋在了深深的云朵里）其实也反映了主人公内心世界的孤闭。相反，注意2中用词：elegantwhiteness（优雅的白色），cloudlesssky（无云的天空），thesurfaceoftheriver（湖面），aninfinityofstars（无数星点），glittered（闪闪发光），这些词都十分宁谧、祥和、优美，可见主人公也是十分享受这月夜的景色，其内心必定是欢乐、安宁的。参考范文Paragraph1: Jamieturnedtogo.Hewalkedbackslowlvalongthebasementfloor.Thecreatureraiseditsheadandwatchedhimcarefully,anditsmouthopenedslightlyandaseriesofbubblescameoutswiftly.Itlookedasifitwastalkingalot.AfterJamiedisappearedinthedistance,thecreatureslitheredbackintoitscorner.Paragraph2: WhenJamiegothome,hismotherlookedangry.Shegrabbedhim,andasked,“Oh,myGod!Annoyingguy,andvou’reallright. Wherehavevoubeen?Youmademesoworried!Why,justlastweekalittleboydisappearedonhiswayhomefromschool."However,hereallydidn'tlisten,insteadheseemedtobethinkingaboutsomethingelse.“Mommy,whynotbuyapetforme?I'mlonely,soIranout.”Hearingthis,Jamie'smothersmiledbyherself."Okay,okay,I’llthinkaboutitseriously,butyouhavetopromisetotakegoodcareofyourpel.Youdoneedaplaymate.”Jamiehuggedhismotherhappily."Oh,thanks.Mom.I'lltellSharonthegoodnewsimmediately!"Jamierushedout.
