2013年高考第二轮复习英语广东版专题升级训练十七 写作综合训练（三）A组第一节 基础写作以下是一则关于首届中学生“春晚”的报道的主要内容。主题首届全国中学生“春晚”——“轮到我们了”组织者一群广州中学生时间2012年1月15日，节目时长180分钟内容学生喜欢的各种节目，如街舞等特色1．自编、自导、自演2．传统节目与新潮节目的结合目的1．给中学生提供展现才华的机会2．让观众更多地了解岭南文化参考词汇：首届全国中学生“春晚”：thefirstNationalMiddleSchoolStudents'SpringFestivalShow【写作内容】请根据以上内容用英语报道这一则校园新闻。内容包括：1．晚会的基本信息。2．晚会的目的与特色。【写作要求】只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文：AgroupofstudentsfromGuangzhouplantoholdthefirstNationalMiddleSchoolStudents'SpringFestivalShow.Thethreehourshowwithitstheme“It'sOurTurn”willbeheldonJan.15th.Theperformances,allorganized,directedandperformedbythestudentsthemselves,willcombinetraditionalstyleswithmoremodernonesthatstudentstodayaregreatlyinterestedin,suchasstreetdancingandBBox.Theshowgivesagoodchanceformiddleschoolstudentstoshowtheirtalenttotheworld.ItwillalsobeagreatchancefortheaudiencestolearnmoreaboutLingNanculture.第二节 读写任务阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。WangYue，whowastwoyearsold，wanderedawayfromherhomeinFoshanwhilehermotherwasquicklycollectinglaundryduringathunderstorm.Shewalkedintoanarrow，busymarketstreet.Closedcircuittelevisioncameras（闭路电视摄像机）capturedthechildwanderingintothestreet.Inonlyafewmomentsofherappearanceonthescreen，WangYueisstruckbyawhitevan（货车），knockedtothegroundandgoesunderthevan'sfrontwheels.Thevandriverpauses，butdoesnotgetout.Afteramoment，hepullsforwardslowly，atwhichtimehisrearwheeldrivesoverWang.Thedrivermoveson.Subsequently，atleast18peoplewalkpasther，andfailtoassisther，somepausingtostarebeforemovingon.Inthattime，anotherlargetruckrunsoverWang'slegswithbothfrontandbacktires.Sheiseventuallyhelpedbyafemalewhocollects-4-\nrubbish，ChenXianmei.ItisapparentinthevideothatWangiscrying，holdingherhead，movingherarmsandlegs，andbleeding.However，sevendayslater，thelovelygirldiedofbrainfailure.Wang'sparentsWangChichangandQuFeifeichosenottoblameanyonebesidesthemselvesfortheirdaughter'sdeath.Qusaid“GrannyChenrepresentsthebestofhumannature；it'sthenicestandmostnaturalsideofus.”Thedriversofbothvehicleswerekeptbypoliceinthedaysaftertheincident.Closedcircuitfilmoftheincidentwasbroadcastbyalocaltelevisionstation，thenpostedonline.Thefilmresultedinworldwidenewsreportsandcauseddozensofeditorials（社论）andmillionsofpostsonsocialmediasites，themajoritycriticizingthecallousness（冷漠）andcrueltyofthosewhopassedWangYuewithouthelpingher.AccordingtoChinaDaily，“Atleast10PartyandgovernmentdepartmentsandorganizationsinGuangdong，includingtheprovince'scommissiononpoliticsandlaw，thewomen'sfederation，theAcademyofSocialSciences，andtheCommunistYouthLeague，havestarteddiscussionsonpunishingthosewhorefusetohelppeoplewhoclearlyneedit.”【写作内容】1．以约30个词概括这段短文的内容。2．然后以约120个词就“是否应该助人”为主题进行议论，内容包括：（1）你阅读短文后的感受。（2）假如你在现场的话，你会如何做？（3）你认为应该怎样做才能避免这样的悲剧再次发生？【写作要求】1．你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料中的内容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文：TwoyearoldWangYuediedinatrafficaccidentnearamarketinFoshanwithoutreceivingtimelyhelpfromtruckdriversandpassersby.Thisarousedthecriticismfortheirindifferenceandcrueltyandledtoaheateddiscussiononpunishingthosewhorefusetogivehelp.Afterreadingthereport，Ifeelreallyshocked.Howcananyonebesocoldheartedandturnablindeyetowardsthevictim？Thepassersbyshouldbecriticizedfortheirindifferenceandthetwodriversmustbeseverelypunishedfortheirhitandrunbehavior.HadIhappenedtobethere，Iwouldhavetriedtodosomethinghelpful，likestoppingthetruckorthevanhittingYueYue，calling120foranambulanceandaskingothersnearbytohelpgetherparents.Tostopsuchtragedyfromhappeningagain，somethingmustbedone.First，thegovernmentshouldencouragepeopletohelpothersintimesofemergencyandprotecthelperssothatanyonecanofferassistancewithoutanyworriesthatthevictimsmaysuethemforcompensation.Besides，parentsshouldlookaftertheiryoungchildrenresponsibly.Lastbutnotleast，themediashouldsparenoefforttopraisethose-4-\nkindheartedpeopleandgivecorrectguidancetothepublic.B组第一节 基础写作以下是你校英语辩论会的情况。*学科竞赛：academiccompetition【写作内容】根据以上辩论会情况为某英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1．辩论的时间及主题。2．辩论的内容和启示。【写作要求】只能用5个句子表达全部内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文：Adebateonthe“Advantagesanddisadvantagesofstudents'attendingacademiccompetitions”wascarriedoutlastThursdayinourschool.Thosewhosupportitholdtheviewsthatsuchcompetitionscanstimulatetheirinterestinaspecificsubject，promotetheunderstandingofthesubjectandfosterthespirittoexplore.However，thosewhoareagainstitarguedthatacademiccompetitionsaredisturbingtheirnormalstudies，whichwillleadtounbalancedlearningandfrustration.Somestudentsmayevensufferfromphysicalandmentalproblemsbecauseofunbearablepressuretowinthecontest.Fromthedebatewelearnedthateverycoinhastwosidesandweshoulddealwiththingsappropriately.第二节 读写任务Nowadays，abrandnewwayofshoppingisattractingincreasingcustomers：onlinegroupbuying，alsoknownascollectivebuying，whichoffersproductsandservicesatreducedpricesontheconditionthataminimumnumberofbuyerswouldmakethepurchase.OriginsofgroupbuyingcanbetracedtoChinawheregroupbuyingorteambuyingwasexecutedtogetdiscountpriceswhenalargegroupofpeoplewerewillingtobuythesameitem.Chinagroupbuyingtransactionvolumehit$1.74billion（RMB11billion）in2011，up550%fromthesameperiodin2010，accordingtoareportbyTuan800.com，theBeijingbaseddailydealsitesaggregator.Thereportalsoshowsthat2011wastheyearthattheChineseGroupbuyingmarketgotmoreandmoreconcentratedwithmoreandmoreChinese，mostofwhomarewhitecollars，teenagersandcollegestudentsenjoyingthe-4-\nbenefitsofgroupbuying.Andamongthemostfavorablebuyingcategoriesarerestaurant，movieandhotelbookingfortravelling.Throughgroupbuying，ononehand，customersgetalowerpricethannormal.Ontheotherhand，businessmenalsocutdownexpensesonmarketing.Thatisthereasonwhygroupbuyingwebsitesspringuplikemushroomsinrecentmonths.Whatisthemostattractiveingroupbuyingmustbetheunbelievablediscounts.Facingthediscounts，customersalwayscouldn'tresisttheimpulsetobuytheproducts，eventhoughtheydonotneedthem.【写作内容】1．以约30个词概括短文的要点。2．以约120个词写一篇关于“团购”的短文，至少包括以下的内容要点：（1）你对团购的看法并陈述理由。（2）谈谈你自己或他人的一次团购经历。（3）请你给团购者一些有用的建议。【写作要求】1．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，或其他论述方法，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语句连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文：Thepassageintroducestheconceptofgroupbuyinganditsorigins.GroupbuyingdevelopedrapidlyandbecamemoreandmorepopularinChina，resultingfromthediscountsgiven.Frommypointofview，theadvantagesofgroupbuyingareobvious.Foronething，bycooperatingwitheachotherwecanbuywhateverwewantwithoutgoingoutandgetthemostsatisfactorygoodsatthelowestprice.Foranother，manufacturerscansellgoodsonalargerscaleandreducemarketingexpenses.Lastweek，Isurfedawellknowngroupbuyingwebsitefortwofilmtickets.Withonly30yuan，Igottheticketsaswellastwobottlesofgreenteawhichsavedmesomuch.Itwasaveryniceexperience.Asforsuggestionsforgroupbuying，firstly，youshouldreadtheadvertisementsandthecommentsfromothercustomerscarefully.Secondly，buywithclearpurposenomatterhowcheapitis.Thirdly，itisbettertoshoponfamousandreliablewebsitestoavoidbeingcheatedbysomecheatingwebsites.-4-
