高考作文满分练—求助信 <br /> 题型解读： <br />在求助信中应开门见山，直截了当地把你遇到的难题或者困惑告诉对方，并 <br />向对方求助。应注意：（1）向别人征求意见，态度一定要诚恳，语气委婉； <br />（2）把握时态：应用一般现在时表明目前自己存在的困难，用一般将来时 <br />描述自己得到帮助后的进步。 <br />写作思路 满分词汇 满分短语 满分句型 <br />Para.1: 点名身份+直 <br />接 说 明 写 信 的 求 助 <br />目的 <br />bother <br />trouble <br />v. <br />do sb. a favor <br />take the trouble to <br />do... <br />have trouble/difficulty <br />in doing… <br />have no choice but to <br />do… <br />turn to sb. for help <br />1.I am a middle school student and I'm <br />writing to tell you my problem which has <br />troubled me. <br />2. I'm writing to you to ask whether you could <br />do me a favor. <br />3. I'm wondering if you could take the trouble <br />to help me with… <br />4. I'm sorry to bother you, but I have some <br />difficulties here and I need your help. <br />5. I have some difficulty in doing…, which <br />bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to <br />turn to you for help. <br />Para.2: <br />说 明 自 己 存 在 的 困 <br />难、困惑并请求对方 <br />的帮助。言辞一定要 <br />礼貌得体 <br />confused <br />confusing <br />upset <br />worried <br />anxious <br />anxiety <br />fit in with with <br />others= ge on well <br />with others <br />be accustomed to <br />long to <br />lose heart <br />1. I seem not to be able to fit in well with <br />others here. <br />2. I don't feel quite accustomed to the life <br />here. <br />3. I long to learn English well but I don't <br />know how, which makes me upset. <br />4. I can't concentrate on my lessons these <br />days and I failed in the last exam which <br />worries me a lot. <br />5. I often feel left out in this school, and I <br />don't know how it has come about. <br />6. Faced with/Facing so many difficulties, I <br />have to turn to you for help <br />Para. 3 (客套话) <br />情 真 意 切 表 达 期 盼 <br />之情。 <br />timely <br />eager <br />grateful <br />appreciate <br />request <br />account <br />sb. would appreciate it <br />if… <br />take … into <br />consideration/account. <br /> <br />1. I'm eager to get your timely help. /I'm eager <br />for your timely help. <br />2. I will be very grateful if you could help <br />me ... <br />3. I'd appreciate if you could take my request <br />into consideration/ account. <br />4. I would be grateful if you could really <br />give/lend me a hand. <br /> 注意：作文的主体时态：一般现在时为主，一般将来时偶尔穿插。 <br /> 满分模板： <br /> Dear __________(写信对象), <br />My name is __________; I’m writing to ask whether you could do me a favour. <br />I have had much difficulty/trouble in ___________(交代自己面临的困难). Besides, <br />I’m very upset that ___________（提出令自己苦恼的问题）. What’s more, I don’t know <br />___________（进一步说明自己的困境） I’m wondering if you could be so kind as to <br />_________ so that ____________（再次请求对方的帮助）. <br />I’d appreciate it if you could lend me a hand. I’m looking forward to your early reply. <br />Yours sincerely, <br />Li Hua <br /> 优秀作文欣赏： <br />题目 1：（2016 全国卷 1）假如你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好...
