2013年高考第二轮复习英语陕西版专题升级训练二十一 短文改错1（2012·陕西宝鸡中学高考模拟训练）Thereisaparknearmyhouseinthattherewasahugebirdnest，thesizeofafootballfield.Thenestissotallasafourstorybuilding.Itallowedbirdsofallkindstolivewithmuchfreedomthanthetraditionalsmallbirdcage.Withinthenest，visitorcanseedifferentbirdswalkingorflyingfreeeverywherewithoutbeingafraidofpeople.Thereisalakeonthemiddleofthebirdnest，wherewildducksandwhiteswanscanswim，lookforfoodthrowndownbyvisitors.Beforeleavingthebirdnest，theycanattendabirdshow，inwhichsomebirdsaretrainedtospeak，sometoplaythebasketballandsometoridebikes.Ioftengotherewithmyfriendsbutnevergetboredoftheiramusingperformances.2OnedayItoldthatMrWang，ourmathteacher，wasill.Iwasworriedabouthimandwenttoseehimaftertheschool.WhenIenterhisroom，hestruggleduptowelcomeme.Ihelpedhimlaydownagain.MrWanglookedpale.Iaskedabouthistroubles.Hesaidhewashavingabadcold.Aftertakesomemedicinehewasgettingbetter.Heaskedmethatwelikedtheteacherwhotookplace.Whenheheardeverythingwasallright，Icouldseehewaspleasing.Finally，Itoldhimdon'ttoworryabouttheworkandhaveagoodrest.3WhenaskingwhatIwasgoingtobeinthefuture，Isaidmydreamwastobeadoctor.LiHong，oneofmyfriend，askedmewhy.ThenItoldhermystory.IwasveryweakoroftenfellillwhenIwasalittlechild.OnceIwasterribleillandgotahighfever.IwasincriticalconditionandIcoulddieoffatanypoint.Myparentssentmetothehospitalimmediately，therethedoctorsdidalltheycouldsaveme.FromthenonIdecidetobeadoctorwhenIgrowup.Itisknowntoall，it'snoteasytobeadoctor.ButI'llstudyhardandtrytomakemydreamintoreality.4Asweallknown，withtheimprovementofpeople'slivingstandards，carshavebecomeapopularmeansoftransport，bringgreatconveniencetoourlife.Besides，theyhavealsocausedsomeproblemssuchasairpollutionandtrafficjams.Whatcanwesolvetheseproblems？AsfarasI'mconcerned，ridingbicyclesareagoodsolution.Foronething，bicyclesdidn'tneedanypetrolandtheyareenergysaving.Foranother，bicyclesareenvironmentallyfriendlybecauseoftheywon'tgiveoffwastegases.Therefore，ridingbicyclesisagoodwayforwetoexerciseanditisofgreatbenefittoourhealth.Solet'staketheresponsibilitybuildupalowcarboncitybyridingbicycle.5DearTony，Thankyouforyourletter.Totellyouthetrue，I'vethoughtalotaboutwhetheryoushouldbuyalaptopcomputerhelpyouwithyourstudy.Inmyopinion，you'dbetternot.Foronereason，it'sveryeasyforyoutodevelopsomebadhabitonceyouhaveit，suchasplayingcomputergames，seemovies，whichwillbeawasteoftime.Forotherreason，buyingalaptopcomputerdon'tmeanyoucanstudywell.Ifyouwanttomakeaprogress，youneedtoputyourheartintoyourstudybutworkhard.Whetheryouhadacomputerornotisnotthemostimportant.Doyouagreetome？Lookingforwardtoyourreply!-8-\nYours，6Ouronlineschoolisveryhelpfulinmanyways.Firstofall，itmakesteachingandlearningeasyandmoreinteresting.Wecangetmoreinformationsandknowledgeinclass.Wecancommunicateotherstudentshomeandabroadbysendingandreceivemessageswhereverwe'dliketo.Anonlineschoolisopenalldaybothtothestudentsandtotheteachers，orwecangetthelatestinformationthroughtheInternetinanytime.Theonlineschoolisveryconvenienttousandotherpeoplewhosecanlearnathomeiftheyhaveacomputer.Theywillhelptoimproveourschoolmanagementandmeettheneedsofmodernsocietyaswell.7TodayIwanttotalkaboutmakefriendsonline.Shouldstudentsmakefriendsonline？SomestudentsthinktheInternetcanhelpsthemmakemanygoodfriends.Whenchattingonline，theycanexpresstheirfeelingsandopinionsmorefreely.Others，therefore，thinkthatstudentsshouldnotmakefriendsonline.Theysaidmakingfriendsonlineiswasteoftime，andthatstudentsshouldspendtheirtimewithstudy.Besides，thereareevenstudentswhogetcheatonline.Itismyopinionwhetherstudentsshouldplacetheirstudy，healthandsafebeforeotherthings.Afterall，theycanfinditsomanyfriendsintheirdailylife.8Myparentsboughtmeacomputerlastmonth.Itisveryuse.Firstly，itwasgoodformystudy.IcangetalotofusefulinformationsfromtheInternet.Forexample，throughtheonlineEnglishclasses，Ihadimprovedmyreadingandlisteningskills.Itisreallygreathelp.Secondly，chattingonlinearesopopularthatIcangetintouchwithmyfriendseasily.Inadditionto，itmakesmylifecolourful.IcandoshoppingonlineandbuythatIlikewithoutgoout.Inaword，thecomputerhasbecomeherfriend.9Afterfailingintheexam，mylifegotsuchdarkthatIdidn'twanttostudyanymore.Ialwayshidmyselfinhisbedroomandcriedquietly.Inmyfamily，IfeltIamneverimportant.IwasnotallowedtowatchTV，usethecomputerorgooutunlesspermitted.What'smore，Ihadtostayinthestudyexceptwhenhavingmeals.Ialmostlostmyheart.Butoneevening，myfriendZhangWencamespecialtoseeme.Shetoldme，“Nothingisimpossible.Youshouldbelieveinyourself.”Encouragingbywhatshesaid，Iregainedconfidences，andmadeupmymindstudy.IhopedthatIcouldcatchuptoothers.10MynameisLiHui.Ilivedat26HuangpuRoad，Shanghai，China.I'mnowstudyinginaNo.21MiddleSchoolofShanghai.Incommonwithmuchteenageboys，Ilikeplayingfootballinmysparetime，andcollectstampsismyfavorite.However，I'mquiteinterestedincomputers.It'sthreeyearsafterIstartedtolearntouseacomputer.Asanoutgoingboy，I'mverygladtomakenewfriend.Ifanyonefeeljustthesame，pleasegettouchwithmebysendingusanemailatLiHui2011@gmail.com.11DearMike，YouaskedmeaboutthepresentsituationofthepublictransportationinChengduatthelastletter.HereI'mverygladtoshareanythingwithyou.Ourcitygovernmenthasbeentryingitsbesttoimprovethepublictransportationsince2010.Themeasureincludereducingbusfare，developingbikerentalsystemandconstructingfoursubways.Iamlucktobeoneofthecitizenswhohavebenefitedfromthebikerentalsystem.ItistotalfreeandhascoveredmosturbanareasinChengdu，whichIcaneasily-8-\nrentabikeandgotoanywhereIlikewithoutbeingcatchintrafficjams.Moreandmorepeopleareusingbikes，becauseridebikesnotonlysavesenergybutalsohelpsuskeepfit.Yours，LiHua12Inrecentyears，ithasbeenreportedthatsomekindlypeoplehelpedtheoldwhohavefallendowninthestreet.Fortunatelytheywereaccusedofknockingdowntheoldandhadtopayfortheirmedicaltreatments.Itisshamethatsuchthingsshouldhavehappened.Therefore，weshouldstillhelptheoldwhofalldown.Firstofall，ithasbeenatraditionalChinesevirtuetorespecttheoldorlovetheyoung.Besides，ifwedon'thelptheoldtoday，noonewillhelpuswhenwewillgetold.Moreimportantly，ifnoonehelpshim，theirliveswillbeatdanger.13Attention，please!About50studentsfromAmericawillgotoourschoolforavisitonOctober4th.Ourclassaskedtoorganizethereception.Wewillmeetattheschoolgateat8：40a．m.wearschooluniformsandgivethemthewarmwelcome.Theywillarriveat9：00a．m.，butthenwewillshowthemaroundtheschoolyard，thelabbuilding，theteachingbuildingandthestudentsdormitories.Therewillhaveafriendlybasketballgameovertheplaygroundat10：00.Theywillleaveforourschoolat11：00.WeshouldbepolitelytoourguestsandtalkwiththeminEnglish.That'sall.Thankyou!14IamsosorrytotellyouthatIwon'tbeunabletoattendthelectureonAmericanhistorytomorrowafternoon.MyuncleisreturningbackhomefromFrance，andIhadpromisedtomeethimattheairportat3：30tomorrowafternoon.IamverymuchinterestedinAmericasocietyandhistory.Iwonderifitispossibleforthetalktoberecording.Andifnot，couldIborrowthetape？Itwouldmeangreatdealtometolistentothetapeandmakeupforwhichiscoveredinthetalk.Iwouldappreciateitthoughyoucouldallowmeaskforleave.15Supposingtherearemuchmorepeopleintheworld，theremusthavemorefoodtofeedthepeople.Butfoodisaproblemintoday'sworld.Onethirdoftheworld'spopulationsisstarving，becausethereisnoenoughfood.Tenthousandpeoplediedofhungereverydayinsomepartsoftheworld.Butinotherspartsoftheworld，peoplebecomeillordiebecausetheyeattoomuchfood，andtheyaretoofatter.Somecountrieshavenofood，buttheothershavetoomuch，andtheythrowtheirfoodaway.Whatcantomorrow'sworldfeeditspeople？Theworldneedsproducemorefoodthanitdoesnow.-8-\n参考答案1答案：Thereisaparknearmyhouseinthereahugebirdnest，thesizeofafootballfield.Thenestistallasafourstorybuilding.Itbirdsofallkindstolivewithmuchfreedomthanthetraditionalsmallbirdcage.Withinthenest，canseedifferentbirdswalkingorflyingeverywherewithoutbeingafraidofpeople.Thereisalakethemiddleofthebirdnest，wherewildducksandwhiteswanscanswim，forfoodthrowndownbyvisitors.Beforeleavingthebirdnest，theycanattendabirdshow，inwhichsomebirdsaretrainedtospeak，sometoplayth\ebasketballandsometoridebikes.Ioftengotherewithmyfriendsbutnevergetboredoftheiramusingperformances.2答案：OnedayItoldthatMrWang，ourmathteacher，wasill.Iwasworriedabouthimandwenttoseehimafterth\eschool.WhenIhisroom，hestruggleduptowelcomeme.Ihelpedhimdownagain.MrWanglookedpale.Iaskedabouthis.Hesaidhewashavingabadcold.Aftersomemedicinehewasgettingbetter.Heaskedmewelikedtheteacherwhotookplace.Whenheheardeverythingwasallright，Icouldseehewas.Finally，Itoldhimtoworryabouttheworkandhaveagoodrest.3答案：WhenwhatIwasgoingtobeinthefuture，Isaidmydreamwastobeadoctor.LiHong，oneofmy，askedmewhy.ThenItoldhermystory.IwasveryweakoftenfellillwhenIwasalittlechild.OnceIwasillandgotahighfever.IwasincriticalconditionandIcoulddieof\fatanypoint.Myparentssentmetothehospitalimmediately，thedoctorsdidalltheycouldsaveme.FromthenonItobeadoctorwhenIgrowup.isknowntoall，it'snoteasytobeadoctor.ButI'llstudyhardandtrytomydreamintoreality.4答案：Asweall，withtheimprovementofpeople'slivingstandards，carshavebecomeapopularmeansoftransport，greatconveniencetoour-8-\nlife.，theyhavealsocausedsomeproblemssuchasairpollutionandtrafficjams.canwesolvetheseproblems？AsfarasI'mconcerned，ridingbicyclesagoodsolution.Foronething，bicyclesneedanypetrolandtheyareenergysaving.Foranother，bicyclesareenvironmentallyfriendlybecauseo\ftheywon'tgiveoffwastegases.Therefore，ridingbicyclesisagoodwayfortoexerciseanditisofgreatbenefittoourhealth.Solet'staketheresponsibilitybuildupalowcarboncitybyriding.5LiHua答案：DearTony，Thankyouforyourletter.Totellyouthe，I'vethoughtalotaboutwhetheryoushouldbuyalaptopcomputerhelpyouwithyourstudy.Inmyopinion，you'dbetternot.Foronereason，it'sveryeasyforyoutodevelopsomebadonceyouhaveit，suchasplayingcomputergames，movies，whichwillbeawasteoftime.Forreason，buyingalaptopcomputermeanyoucanstudywell.Ifyouwanttomake\aprogress，youneedtoputyourheartintoyourstudyworkhard.Whetheryouacomputerornotisnotthemostimportant.Doyouagreeme？Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours，LiHua6答案：Ouronlineschoolisveryhelpfulinmanyways.Firstofall，itmakesteachingandlearningandmoreinteresting.Wecangetmoreandknowledgeinclass.Wecancommunicateotherstudentshomeandabroadbysendingandmessageswe'dliketo.onlineschoolisopenalldaybothtothestudentsandtotheteachers，wecangetthelatestinformationthroughtheInternetanytime.Theonlineschoolisveryconvenienttousandotherpeoplecanlearnathomeiftheyhaveacomputer.willhelptoimproveourschoolmanagementandmeettheneedsofmodernsocietyaswell.7答案：TodayIwanttotalkaboutfriendsonline.Shouldstudentsmakefriendsonline？SomestudentsthinktheInternetcanthemmakemanygoodfriends.Whenchattingonline，theycanexpresstheirfeelingsandopinionsmorefreely.Others，-8-\n，thinkthatstudentsshouldnotmakefriendsonline.Theymakingfriendsonlineiswasteoftime，andthatstudentsshouldspendtheirtimestudy.Besides，thereareevenstudentswhogetonline.Itismyopinionstudentsshouldplacetheirstudy，healthandbeforeotherthings.Afterall，theycanfindi\tsomanyfriendsintheirdailylife.8答案：Myparentsboughtmeacomputerlastmonth.Itisvery.Firstly，itgoodformystudy.IcangetalotofusefulfromtheInternet.Forexample，throughtheonlineEnglishclasses，Iimprovedmyreadingandlisteningskills.Itisreallygreathelp.Secondly，chattingonlinesopopularthatIcangetintouchwithmyfriendseasily.Inadditiont\o，itmakesmylifecolourful.IcandoshoppingonlineandbuyIlikewithoutout.Inaword，thecomputerhasbecomefriend.9答案：Afterfailingintheexam，mylifegotdarkthatIdidn'twanttostudyanymore.Ialwayshidmyselfinbedroomandcriedquietly.Inmyfamily，IfeltIneverimportant.IwasnotallowedtowatchTV，usethecomputerorgooutunlesspermitted.What's，Ihadtostayinthestudyexceptwhenhavingmeals.Ialmostlostm\yheart.Butoneevening，myfriendZhangWencametoseeme.Shetoldme，“Nothingisimpossible.Youshouldbelieveinyourself.”bywhatshesaid，Iregained，andmadeupmymindstudy.IhopedthatIcouldcatchupothers.10答案：MynameisLiHui.Iat26HuangpuRoad，Shanghai，China.I'mnowstudyingin\aNo.21MiddleSchoolofShanghai.Incommonwithteenageboys，Ilikeplayingfootballinmysparetime，andstampsismyfavorite.，I'mquiteinterestedincomputers.It'sthreeyearsIstartedtolearntouseacomputer.Asanoutgoingboy，I'mverygladtomakenew.Ifanyonejustthesame，pleasegettouchwithmebysendinganemailatLiHui2011@gmail.com.11答案：DearMike，-8-\nYouaskedmeaboutthepresentsituationofthepublictransportationinChengduthelastletter.HereI'mverygladtosharewithyou.Ourcitygovernmenthasbeentryingitsbesttoimprovethepublictransportationsince2010.Theincludereducingbusfare，developingbikerentalsystemandconstructingfoursubways.Iamtobeoneofthecitizenswhohavebenefitedfromthebikerentalsystem.ItisfreeandhascoveredmosturbanareasinChengdu，Icaneasilyrentabikeandgot\oanywhereIlikewithoutbeingintrafficjams.Moreandmorepeopleareusingbikes，becausebikesnotonlysavesenergybutalsohelpsuskeepfit.Yours，LiHua12答案：Inrecentyears，ithasbeenreportedthatsomepeoplehelpedtheoldwhofallendowninthestreet.theywereaccusedofknockingdowntheoldandhadtopayfortheirmedical.Itisshamethatsuchthingsshouldhavehappened.，weshouldstillhelptheoldwhofalldown.Firstofall，ithasbeenatraditionalChinesevirtuetorespecttheoldlovetheyoung.Besides，ifwedon'thelptheoldtoday，noonewillhelpuswhenwewi\llgetold.Moreimportantly，ifnoonehelps，theirliveswillbedanger.13答案：Attention，please!About50studentsfromAmericawilltoourschoolforavisitonOctober4th.Ourclassaskedtoorganizethereception.Wewillmeetattheschoolgateat8：40a．m.schooluniformsandgivethemwarmwelcome.Theywillarriveat9：00a．m.，thenwewillshowthemaroundtheschoolyard，thelabbuilding，theteachingbuildingandthedormitories.Therewillafriendlybasketballgametheplaygroundat10：00.Theywillleavefo\rourschoolat11：00.WeshouldbetoourguestsandtalkwiththeminEnglish.That'sall.Thankyou!14答案：IamsosorrytotellyouthatIwon'tbetoattendthelectureonAmerican-8-\nhistorytomorrowafternoon.Myuncleisreturningbac\khomefromFrance，andIpromisedtomeethimattheairportat3：30tomorrowafternoon.Iamverymuchinterestedinsocietyandhistory.Iwonderifitispossibleforthetalktobe.Andif，couldIborrowthetape？Itwouldmeangreatdealtometolistentothetapeandmakeupforiscoveredinthetalk.Iwouldappreciateityoucouldallowmeaskforleave.15答案：Supposingtherearemorepeopleintheworld，theremustmorefoodtofeedthepeople.Butfoodisaproblemintoday'sworld.Onethirdoftheworld'sisstarving，becausethereisenoughfood.Tenthousandpeopleofhungereverydayinsomepartsoftheworld.Butinpartsoftheworld，peoplebecomeillordiebecausetheyeattoomuchfood，andtheyaretoo.Somecountrieshavenofood，butth\eothershavetoomuch，andtheythrowtheirfoodaway.cantomorrow'sworldfeeditspeople？Theworldneedsproducemorefoodthanitdoesnow.-8-
