应用文写作（建议信、申请信与告知信）【范文解析】你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.你建议的线路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________写作思维模板Step1“五定”审题定体裁半开放式应用文(建议信)定话题建议旅游路线定人称第一、二人称为主定时态一般现在时定结构开头：建议的路线；主体：理由；结尾：祝愿Step2斟词酌句◆醒目词汇1.文明_________2.建议_________3.很好了解_________4.风景_________5.总之_________6.相信_________◆句式升级1.长江是世界第三大河流，中国第一大河流，中华民族的母亲河。惯用表达：YangtzeRiver,themotherriverofChinesecivilization,isthelongestriverinchinaandthethirdlongestriverintheworld.高级表达：(用主语从句和notonly...butalso...句型改写上面的句子)____________________________________________________14,2.我强烈建议你选这一条。从中你可以更好地了解中国和中国的历史。惯用表达：Istronglyadviseyoutochoosethisone.Fromit,youcanhaveabetterunderstandingofChinaandChinesehistory.高级表达：(用定语从句改写上面的句子)____________________________________________________Step3完美成篇：认真工整，誊写在卷DearJim,I’mpleasedtohearthatyouaregoingtoChinaforatrip.Inyourletter,youaskedformysuggestionsonhowtochooseabetteronefromthetworoutes“TriptotheYangtzeRiver”and“TriptoMountTai”,asforwhich,Ihavethefollowingopinions.WhatiswellknowntousisthatYangtzeRiverisnotonlythelongestriverinChinaandthethirdlongestriverintheworldbutalsothemotherriverofChinesecivilization.Therefore,Istronglyrecommendthatyouchoosethisone,fromwhichyoucanhaveabetterunderstandingofChinaandChinesehistory.Inaddition,thesceneryalongtheriverisamazing,whichcanmakeyouhaveanunforgettablemomentafteryourvisit.Thus,I’msureyouareeagertocomeheretomakeasecondtrip.Inconclusion,IamconvincedthatthetripalongtheYangtzeRiverisabetterchoice.WishyouwouldenjoyyourselfinChina.Yours,LiHua【答案】醒目词汇：1.civilization2.recommend3.haveabetterunderstandingof4.scenery5.inconclusion6.beconvincedthat句式升级：1.WhatiswellknowntousisthatYangtzeRiverisnotonlythelongestriverinChinaandthethirdlongestriverintheworldbutalsothemotherriverofChinesecivilization.14,2.Istronglyrecommendthatyouchoosethisone,fromwhichyoucanhaveabetterunderstandingofChinaandChinesehistory.【写作模板】•建议信模板与套用句式Dear_________,I’msorry/gladtohearthatyou_________(事由).Inyourletter,yousaidthat_________(问题信息).Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,_________because_________.Secondly,youshould_________,for_________.Thirdly,you’dbetter_________.Onlyinthiswaycanyou_________.What’smore,_________.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfultoyou.Bestwishes.Yourstruly,LiHua•申请信模板与套用句式DearSir/Madam,IamLiHua,anoutgoingboy_________.I’mwritingtoapplyforthepositionthatyouareadvertising.Foronething,I_________(优势一).Foranother,I_________(优势二).Myabilityto_________(优势三)isoutofquestion.IfI’mluckyenoughtohavetheopportunitytoworkinyour_________(对方单位),Iwould_________(表达决心).Lookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.Yourssincerely,LiHua•告知信模板与套用句式Dear_________,Gladthatyou’veheardofthegoodnewsaboutthecoming_________.I’mwritingtoinformyouofthedetails.Asscheduled,the_________(活动或项目)willtakeplaceat_________(地点)on_________(时间).Youareexpectedto_________(具体要求或期望).Besides,14,attentionsshouldbepaidto_________.Hopefullyyouwillbewellpreparedforitandenjoyyourself/haveagoodtime.Ifyouhaveanyfurtherquestions,pleasedon’thesitatetoaskme.Yourssincerely,LiHua【模拟演练】1假设你是高中生李华，欲给你在英国的朋友Peter提如何学习中文的建议。请根据下列提示，写一封建议信。信件包括以下要点：1.写信目的；2.给出建议（至少两条）；3.表示祝愿。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。词数：100-120左右。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearPeter,LearningyouhaveapassionforChineselearning,I’mwritingtoofferyousomepracticalsuggestionsonhowtopromoteyourproficiencyinChinese.Firstly,Chineseclassicalliteratureworksarehighlyrecommended,throughwhichyouwillundoubtedlyacquireaglimpseof/getadeeperinsightintoChinesetraditionsandcultures.Besides,TVprogramsandnewspaperconcerningChinaarealsoadvisable,helpingyouhaveabetterunderstandingofChina’strueimage.Lastly,engagingwithyourChinesefriendsalwaysservesthepurposetoenhanceyourfluencyinoralChinese.14,SincerelyhopemysuggestionsareworkabletoyouandIwishyoucouldmakegreatprogress.Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给在英国的朋友Peter提如何学习中文的建议。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.写信目的；2.给出建议（至少两条）；3.表示祝愿。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）offeryousomepracticalsuggestions;aglimpseof;haveabetterunderstandingof;toenhanceyourfluencyinoralChinese;makegreatprogress;haveapassionfor第三步：连词成句1.LearningyouhaveapassionforChineselearning,I’mwritingtoofferyousomepracticalsuggestionsonhowtopromoteyourproficiencyinChinese.2.Firstly,Chineseclassicalliteratureworksarehighlyrecommended,throughwhichyouwillundoubtedlyacquireaglimpseof/getadeeperinsightintoChinesetraditionsandcultures.3.Besides,TVprogramsandnewspaperconcerningChinaarealsoadvisable,helpingyouhaveabetterunderstandingofChina’strueimage.4.Lastly,engagingwithyourChinesefriendsalwaysservesthepurposetoenhanceyourfluencyinoralChinese.5.SincerelyhopemysuggestionsareworkabletoyouandIwishyoucouldmakegreatprogress.14,根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）表文章结构顺序：Firstly,Besides,Lastly连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【范文点评】[高分句型1]LearningyouhaveapassionforChineselearning,I’mwritingtoofferyousomepracticalsuggestionsonhowtopromoteyourproficiencyinChinese.（分词作状语）[高分句型2]Firstly,Chineseclassicalliteratureworksarehighlyrecommended,throughwhichyouwillundoubtedlyacquireaglimpseof/getadeeperinsightintoChinesetraditionsandcultures.（介词+关系代词引导的非限制性定语从句）[高分句型3]SincerelyhopemysuggestionsareworkabletoyouandIwishyoucouldmakegreatprogress.（and连接的并列句）2假定你是李华，新落成的外文书店为增加访客量现向市民征求建议，请给书店经理Mr.Bowie写一封建议信，内容包括：1.拥有宽敞的空间以提供良好的阅读体验；2.提供公益讲座（publiclecture）等服务；3.其他建议（至少一条）。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMr.Bowie,14,Iknowthatnew-builtForeignLanguageBookstoresarenowseekingadvicefromthepublictoincreasethenumberofvisitors.Asabookfan,Iwouldliketooffersomeadvice.First,thebookstoreshouldhaveenoughspacetoprovidegoodreadingexperienceforourreaders.Second,publiclecturesshouldbeincludedintheactivitiestoraisethereaders’interest.Third,thebookstorecandonatesomebookstothepoorstudentssoastoattractthemtothebookstore.Hopefully,thebookstorewillbetheonewherewecanenrichourknowledgeandrelax.Yours,LiHua【解析】本题考查的作文类型是建议信。题目要求假定你是李华，新落成的外文书店为增加访客量现向市民征求建议，请给书店经理Mr．Bowie写一封建议信，内容包括：1.拥有宽敞的空间以提供良好的阅读体验；2.提供公益讲座（publiclecture）等服务；3.其他建议（至少一条）。解析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时进行写作。要点已经给出，要求考生根据提纲自己发挥拓展，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。[高分句型1]Ithinkthatitisnecessarytooffergoodreadingexperiencetoourreaders,whichmakesthemcomfortable.我认为有必要为我们的读者提供良好的阅读体验，这会他们感到舒服。that引导的宾语从句和it作形式主语。[高分句型2]Onlyinthiswaymentionedabovethebookstorewillbetheplacewherewecanenrichourknowledgeandrelaxourselves.只有这样，书店才是我们丰富知识、放松身心的地方。部分倒装和where引导的定语从句。3假如你叫李华，今年暑假一家外企要招聘兼职英语翻译，你想申请这个职位。请你根据以下要点写一封英文申请信。要点如下：1.英语水平；2.工作经历；3.与人交往的能力；14,注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：申请applyfor申请书applicationDearSirorMadam,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearSirormadam,Iknowthatyourcompanyislookingforapart-timeEnglishtranslatorinthesummervacation.I’dliketoapplyforthejob.First,havinglearnedEnglishforsevenyearsorso,Iamabletoexpressmyselffreely.Second,mypreviousworkingexperienceasatranslatormakesmeconvincedthatIcanwellmanagethejobthistime.What’smore,asanoutgoingperson,Iamalwaysreadytomakefriendswithmanykindsofpeoplefromallwalksoflife.IameagerforthejobtobeofferedbyyourcompanyandIamsurethatIwillsatisfyallyourrequirements.ThanksforyourreadingmyapplicationandI’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.YoursLiHua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封申请信。首先，本文要求写一封申请信，因此时态应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主，人称应以第一人称为主；其次，要点主要包括介绍自己的英语水平、谈谈工作经历以及本人的交际能力，写作时应注意适当地拓展，尽量使用一些高级词汇和句式；最后，要注意语句的连贯。14,【范文点评】本文较好地完成了写作任务，段落清晰、要点全面、语言规范。此外文章亮点纷呈、可读性强，如：1.文中使用了一些高级词汇express，convinced，applyfor，allwalksoflife，satisfyallyourrequirements，lookforwardto，application等；2.文中使用了动词-ing形式作状语havinglearnedEnglishforsevenyearsorso，动词不定式短语作定语tobeofferedbyyourcompany等；3.文中使用了高级句式Iamsurethat等；4.文中恰到好处地使用了过渡词，使得文章语句迹贯，如first，second，what’smore等。4假如你是李华，南昌二中的一名学生，得知可向国际儿童基金会（Foundation）申请一个经费为2000元的扶贫项目（poverty-reliefprogram），帮助贫困地区的儿童。你感兴趣，准备申请。请根据以下要点写一篇文章。1）个人的基本情况和申请理由；2）你对申请项目的具体设想和项目经费的使用计划；3）你的愿望。联系方式：2016hope@ief.org注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结尾语已为你写好。DearSirorMadam,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearSirorMadam,MynameisLiHua,astudentcurrentlystudyingatNanchangNo.2MiddleSchool.Iamwritingtoapplyforthe2000yuan’sworthoffundaimedathelpingthose14,studentswhoarefinanciallydisadvantaged.Beingraisedinfamiliesthatdon’thavetoworryaboutputtingfoodonthetableneednotmeanignoringourlessfortunatepeers.Onthisaccount,wewouldappreciateitifyoucouldsponsorourpoverty-reliefendeavor.Thefollowingishowwewouldgoaboutusingthemoney.Wewouldspend1500yuanpurchasingsomestationeryfortheneedystudentsinapoverty-strickenarea.Theremainderofthefundwouldbeusedtoinviteamotivationalspeakerwhowastotalkabouthowtoliftoneselfoutofpovertybymakingrightacademicandprofessionaldecisions.Oureffortsmightmakeadifferenceinthelivesofsomeyoungpeople,butwhoknowswhatbutterflyeffectstheseyoungmindsmayhaveontomorrow'sworld?Wewouldbegratefulifyoucouldreplyatyourearliestconvenience.Youcouldcontactmeat2016hope@icf.org.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】该文体属于书信作文。首先明确的是一封申请信，所以在措辞时应该保持尊敬，谦和地语气，切记语气生硬，这时在商务交流时需切记的一点。其次囊括文本所要求的三个方面，但不代表不可以发挥自己的想法，总归来看文章还是有自己的发挥之处：经费的具体设想和使用方法，本方面需要考生能够结合实际情况给出具体的可行操作方案，考查学生的思辨能力和跨文化交际能力。在过渡时，用词能够衔接自然。最后要注明自己的联系方式已确保收到回信。【范文亮点】astudentcurrentlystudyingatNanchangNo.2MiddleSchool使用了同位语从句，studentswhoarefinanciallydisadvantaged.使用了定语从句等，这些都丰富了整篇的句式多样化；applyfor，Onthisaccount，makeadifference等使用了固定搭配短语。Wewouldspend1500yuanpurchasingsomestationeryfortheneedystudentsinapoverty-strickenarea.这里明确点出了基金的具体用途，避免了空话现象。5假定你是李华，由于新冠病毒（COVID-19）爆发，你校决定推迟开学，请你给回国度假的留学生Jack写封邮件，告知此事。内容包括：1.告知推迟开学；14,2.介绍疫情；3.开学日期另行通知。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearJack,Iamsosorrytoinformyouthatwe’llhavetopostponethestartofschoolthistermduetotheoutbreakofCOVID-19duringthiswintervacation.YoumusthaveknownthatCOVID-19isspreadingallovertheworld,andthatthesituationisverybad.Manypeoplehavebeeninfectedanddied.Itisgenerallyacceptedthatthebestwaytoavoidbeinginfectedisnottogatherandstayathome.Soinordertodefeatthisinfectiousdisease,we’vedecidedtodelaythestartofschool.Theschoolwillnotbeginuntiltheoutbreakisover.Thespecifictimewillbeannouncedlater.Yours,LiHua【解析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给留学生Jack写信，告知他因为疫情爆发学校推迟开学的决定，以及后续安排。并给他介绍疫情。体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主结构：总分总要求：1.告知推迟开学；2.介绍疫情；14,3.开学日期另行通知。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）informsb.ofsth./postpone/outbreak/dueto/spread/infect/avoiddoingsth./gather/decidetodosth./delaytodosth.第三步：连词成句1.IamsosorrytoinformyouthatduetotheoutbreakofCOVID-19duringthiswintervacationthestartofthistermhastobepostponed.2.YoumusthaveknownthatCOVID-19isspreadingallovertheworld,andthatthesituationisverybad.3.Unfortunately,manypeoplehavebeeninfectedanddied.4.Itisgenerallyacknowledgedthatthebestwaytoavoidbeinginfectedisnotgatheringbutstayingathome.5.Soinordertodefeatthisinfectiousdisease,we'vedecidedtodelaythestartofschool.6.Theschoolwillnotbeginuntiltheoutbreakisover.7.Thespecifictimewillbeannouncedonlinelater.第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…状语从句连词：because/if/though/although…定语从句连词：which/that/when/where…第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）【范文点评】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：Iamsosorrytoinformyouthatwe'llhavetopostponethestartofschoolthistermduetotheoutbreakofCOVID-19duringthiswintervacation.中that引导宾语从句；Itisgenerallyacceptedthatthebestwaytoavoidbeinginfectedisnottogatherandstayathome.中that引导主语从句。614,假定你是李华，为方便学生为偏远山区学校捐赠旧书、杂志等，校学生会决定设置旧书回收角。请你写一封信给生病休假的留学生Tom告知此事，内容包括：1.询问近况；2.告知返校后捐赠书籍；3.祝愿早日康复。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已为你写好。DearTom,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearTom,Howareyoudoingthesedays?Doyoufeelabitbetter?Imissyouverymuch.Ihavesomegoodnewstotellyou.Arecyclingcornerforoldbookswillbesetinourschoolnextweek.Ifstudentshaveoldbooks,newspapersandmagazinestheydon’twanttoread,theycandonatethemtoit.Allthecollectedbooksandmagazineswillbegivenawaytotheremotepoormountainschools.Remembertobringsomeoldbookswhenyoureturntoschool.Wecandoourparttohelpthosekidsinneed.Wishyougetwellsoon.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreturntoschool.Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文。14,第一步：明确要求。假定你是李华，为方便学生为偏远山区学校捐赠旧书、杂志等，校学生会决定设置旧书回收角。请你写一封信给生病休假的留学生Tom告知此事，内容包括：1.询问近况；2.告知返校后捐赠书籍；3.祝愿早日康复。第二步：列关键词。如：donate…to，giveaway，remembertodo，doone’sparttodo，inneed，lookforwardto等。三步：连词成句。根据列出的关键词造句，注意主谓一致，时态语态等语法。第四步：连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【范文点评】此范文表达流畅，语言优美，内容全面，符合题目要求。其中值得学习的句型有：定语从句和条件状语从句：Ifstudentshaveoldbooks,newspapersandmagazinestheydon’twanttoread,theycandonatethemtoit.时间状语从句：Remembertobringsomeoldbookswhenyoureturntoschool.14
