Letterofhelp高考应用文写作指导之求助信,【文体概述】求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时，向别人请求帮助的一种书信。通常包括三部分内容：✓一、表明写信目的；请求帮助；✓二、要清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容；✓三、希望得到帮助，注意语气委婉真诚，并要向收信人表示感谢。,【常用语块】1、做某事有麻烦havetroubleindoingsth.2、给某人帮助dosb.afavor3、寻求帮助seekforhelp4、遇到一些问题encounteredanumberofproblems5、面临困难facedwithdifficulties6、忙于做某事sb.beengagedindoingsth.7、为某事做准备prepareforsomething8、集中精力concentrateon,【常用语块】9、学以致用studysth.inordertoapplyit10、让某人失望letsomeonedown11、克服恐惧overcomefears12、取得巨大的进步makegreatprogress13、渴望做某事beeagertodosth.14、提供一些有建设性的指导Providesomeconstructiveguidance15、因某事感激某人appreciatesomeoneforsomething,【套用句式】1.我写信想请您帮我一个忙。Iamwritingthislettertoaskyoutodomeafavorgivemeahand.2.我遇到三个困扰我的问题。首先，……。其次，……。最困扰我的是……Iamencounteringthreeproblemswhichtroublemealot..Tobeginwith,What'smore,Whattroublesomemostis….3.不幸的是，我觉得做某事很困难。Unfortunately,Ifind/feelitquitedifficulthardtodosth.,【套用句式】4.面对以上的问题，我渴望得到你的帮助。你能给予我一些关于……的建议吗？Facedwiththeaboveproblems,Iamanxioustogetyourhelp.Wouldyoupleaseoffermesomeadvice,on…?5.如果你能帮助我，我将感激不尽。Ireallyappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.6、我渴望得到您及时的帮助。Iameagertogetyourtimelyhelp.,【套用句式】7、如果你能尽早在你方便时确认参加，我将不胜感激。Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldconfirmyourparticipationatyourearliestconvenience.8、我们期待你的到来。Wearelookingforwardtoyourcoming.,【课堂练习】假定你是高一学生李华，你正在为期末考试紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下：1.作业多，没有时间运动。2.压力大，难以入睡。3.希望得到Kate的帮助。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。,【参考范文】DearKate,IamLiHua,asenior1student.Recently,Ihavebeenbusypreparingformymid-termexam,butunfortunately,Ifinditquitehardtoconcentrateonmystudy.So,Iamwritingtoturntoyouforhelp.Iamencounteringsomeproblemswhichtroublemealot.Firstofall,IhavetospendmuchtimeonmyhomeworkthatIcanhardlyspareanytimetotakeexercise.Inaddition,withthehighexpectationfromtheteachersandmyparents,Iamalwaysundergreatstress,whichmakesitdifficultformetofallasleepeverynight.Asaresult,Ican’tfocusonwhattheteachersaysinclass.Facedwiththeaboveproblems,Iamanxioustogetyourhelp.Couldyoupleaseoffermesomeadviceonhowtosolvethem?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Sincerelyyours,LiHua,【详解分析】【分析】本篇考查书信的写作，要求考生给外籍心理老师Kate写信向她寻求帮助。【详解】体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主结构：分总要求：1.写信的目的；2.所遇到的问题（作业多，没有时间运动；压力大，难以入睡）；3.希望得到Kate的帮助。,【详解分析】第二步：列提纲（重点词组）bebusydoingsth./befacedwith/turntosb.forhelp/dosb.afavor/spend…on…/fallsleep/takeexercise/focuson/concentrateon/adviceon第三步：连词成句IamLiHua,asenior1student.Ihavebeenengagedinpreparingformymid-termexam,butunfortunately,Ifinditquitehardtofocusonmystudy.Iamwritingtoturntoyou.Iamcomingacrosssomeproblemswhichtroublemealot.IhavetospendmuchtimeonmyhomeworkthatIcanhardlyspareanytimetotakeexerciseWiththehighexpectationfromtheteachersandmyparents,Iamalwaysundergreatstress,whichmakesitdifficultformetofallasleepeverynight.Ican’tfocusonwhattheteachersaysinclass.Facedwiththeaboveproblems,Iamdesperatelyinneedofyourhelp.Couldyoupleasegivemesomeadviceonhowtosolvethem?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.,【详解分析】第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…状语从句连词：because/if/though/although…定语从句连词：which/that/when/where…第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）【高级句型1】ThereasonwhyIamundergreatstressisthatmyteachersandparentsarealwaysexpectingtoomuchforme.我总是处于高压下的原因是老师和父母对我期待太多。why引导定语从句，that引导表语从句。【高级句型2】Becauseofspendingmuchtimeonmyhomework,hardlycanItakeexercise.因为花了很多时间完成家庭作业，我几乎不能锻炼。句中使用了hardly位于句首的部分倒装。,【课后练习】学以致用假定你是李华，当前你在英语学习方面遇到了一些问题。于是你向你校的外籍老师Tom写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下：1.本人简介：2.求助内容：3.希望得到Tom的帮助。注意：1.词数100左右：2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。,【参考范文】DearTom,I'mLiHua,aSenior3studentinyourschool.Currently,IamhavingtroublelearningEnglish.SoIamwritingtoaskyouforhelp.There‘rethreemainproblemsIamfacedwithnow.First,IfinditquitehardtomastertheEnglishgrammaticalrules，andputthemintouse.Furthermore,sonervousdoIfeelinfrontofmyclassmatesthatIcan’tsayawordinEnglish.Therefore,IsincerelyhopeyoucanoffermesomeadviceonhowtostudyEnglishgrammarandhowtoovercomemyfearofspeakingEnglish.Ihavetheconfidencethatwithyourhelp,IcanconquermyEnglish.Ireallyappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.Sincerelyyours,LiHua,谢谢观看！
